Disclamer: I do not own any of the characters ( But I would like to.. Maybe
someone could give me one of them as a present????? :)))))) )
AN: Please note that English is a foreign language to me!!! The story also didn't got beta read as of yet, since I DO NOT have beta reader. Anybody willing please say so.
AN2: Though I have written in German (the language I'm used to speak) and English I never wrote a Harry Potter FF.
Hidden Secrets
Prologue
Severus Snape stood in the circle of men. All dressed in black robes with masks in front of their faces. Their were waiting for their master. The only thing he knew was that he had to make an announcement. But unbeknownst to the others he feared for his live. He wasn't loyal to his master and he did not want to think what the Dark Lord would do with him, when he was found out. Suddenly there were steps to be heard. Their master was coming. Severus kneeled down as the other Death Eater did. While he was still loyal he did that to show is respect, to show that Voldemort was his master, but now it was only to hide the fact that he changed the sides. The man in front of them looked in the round and stayed on every face for a few seconds. His eyes stayed a little bit longer on Severus face, which made him even more sure that he was to announce that he found out who the spy under them was. When Voldemort finished his inspection he started to say: "My Followers, I have good news. My spy got the Secret Keeper of the Potters. Now we will be able to finish them off. They had a fair chance to join our side, but they refused and they are too powerful to be left alive." Severus could not believe what he heard. True he did not like James Potter, but that did not change the fact that he was his brother. Not many knew that of course. Nobody would think anything like that, since they were as different as brother could be. James Potter was sorted into Gryffindor, the most popular student in the year and not to forget the Quidditch star. While he himself got into Slytherin, always was the victim to most of the pranks the Marauders did. Not to forget that both fell in love with the same girl. And of course this time James Potter was the lucky one again. But after he went to Dumbledore to confess about everything he did he was forced to talk with him. It led to an agreement. He could remember that they planned to make Black their Secret Keeper, but he somehow could not believe that he would be on the Dark Side. While Voldemort explained his plan to kill the Potters, Severus listened carefully. At the same time his mind worked overtime. He had to somehow warn them. But when Voldemort wanted him to come along he would not have the time. He prayed that his presence was not necessary. But luckily the Dark Lord planned to attack them alone. After all they thought that they were save. Severus hoped that the meeting would not continue for long. The sooner it would be over the sooner he could warn them.
TBC
Please review... I want to know if I should continue the story.. Also the following chapters will be a little bit longer I hope ( I just couldn't write the Prologue any longer.. )
AN: Please note that English is a foreign language to me!!! The story also didn't got beta read as of yet, since I DO NOT have beta reader. Anybody willing please say so.
AN2: Though I have written in German (the language I'm used to speak) and English I never wrote a Harry Potter FF.
Hidden Secrets
Prologue
Severus Snape stood in the circle of men. All dressed in black robes with masks in front of their faces. Their were waiting for their master. The only thing he knew was that he had to make an announcement. But unbeknownst to the others he feared for his live. He wasn't loyal to his master and he did not want to think what the Dark Lord would do with him, when he was found out. Suddenly there were steps to be heard. Their master was coming. Severus kneeled down as the other Death Eater did. While he was still loyal he did that to show is respect, to show that Voldemort was his master, but now it was only to hide the fact that he changed the sides. The man in front of them looked in the round and stayed on every face for a few seconds. His eyes stayed a little bit longer on Severus face, which made him even more sure that he was to announce that he found out who the spy under them was. When Voldemort finished his inspection he started to say: "My Followers, I have good news. My spy got the Secret Keeper of the Potters. Now we will be able to finish them off. They had a fair chance to join our side, but they refused and they are too powerful to be left alive." Severus could not believe what he heard. True he did not like James Potter, but that did not change the fact that he was his brother. Not many knew that of course. Nobody would think anything like that, since they were as different as brother could be. James Potter was sorted into Gryffindor, the most popular student in the year and not to forget the Quidditch star. While he himself got into Slytherin, always was the victim to most of the pranks the Marauders did. Not to forget that both fell in love with the same girl. And of course this time James Potter was the lucky one again. But after he went to Dumbledore to confess about everything he did he was forced to talk with him. It led to an agreement. He could remember that they planned to make Black their Secret Keeper, but he somehow could not believe that he would be on the Dark Side. While Voldemort explained his plan to kill the Potters, Severus listened carefully. At the same time his mind worked overtime. He had to somehow warn them. But when Voldemort wanted him to come along he would not have the time. He prayed that his presence was not necessary. But luckily the Dark Lord planned to attack them alone. After all they thought that they were save. Severus hoped that the meeting would not continue for long. The sooner it would be over the sooner he could warn them.
TBC
Please review... I want to know if I should continue the story.. Also the following chapters will be a little bit longer I hope ( I just couldn't write the Prologue any longer.. )
