So my story has finished now but I thought I'd add this little poem I wrote. It basically just sums up the whole story in verse. Hope you like it.

Immortality

I have been around

Seen many years,

I have also cried

Countless tears,

Tears of anger,

Tears of sorrow,

And where I am

Pain seems to follow.

I have sat and watched

the world go round,

And as immortality holds me

I am bound,

To sit here

For eternity,

Though happy

I will never be.

I have fought in wars

Experienced death,

And I feel as though

there is nothing left

Inside of me

wanting to live

In a world

that has nothing to give.

I want to end

it all right now

Though deep inside

I do not know how

How to face

the world again

Until I have freed it

From all this pain.

I take me knife

I see the blood

Flowing painfully

If only it would.

It falls from my wrist

And onto my hand

It's only now

that I understand.

Understand

This world of pain

Yet I know

There are none to blame.

Forever is

a long long time

Especially when

You've died inside.

My blood falls

onto the floor.

I have lost lots

Yet there is still more

Immortal blood

freed from my vein

Yet I no longer

Feel the pain.

At long last

I can be free.

Free from this curse

inside of me.

No one can hurt me

Anymore,

As I lie here

Upon the floor.

I see the world

has turned to black.

And I know I will

Not come back.

I had no choice

I had to leave

So please my friends

do not grieve.

Our body-

it's our cage

It dies a little

each and every age

But you're not really

truly dead,

Until it's your soul

that died instead.

Did you like it? That's the end of Immortality now so please leave me one final review. Thank you to everyone who has reviewed so far. They have made me very happy.

Loadsa Luv LegyLuva xxx