So my story has finished now but I thought I'd add this little poem I wrote. It basically just sums up the whole story in verse. Hope you like it.
Immortality
I have been around
Seen many years,
I have also cried
Countless tears,
Tears of anger,
Tears of sorrow,
And where I am
Pain seems to follow.
I have sat and watched
the world go round,
And as immortality holds me
I am bound,
To sit here
For eternity,
Though happy
I will never be.
I have fought in wars
Experienced death,
And I feel as though
there is nothing left
Inside of me
wanting to live
In a world
that has nothing to give.
I want to end
it all right now
Though deep inside
I do not know how
How to face
the world again
Until I have freed it
From all this pain.
I take me knife
I see the blood
Flowing painfully
If only it would.
It falls from my wrist
And onto my hand
It's only now
that I understand.
Understand
This world of pain
Yet I know
There are none to blame.
Forever is
a long long time
Especially when
You've died inside.
My blood falls
onto the floor.
I have lost lots
Yet there is still more
Immortal blood
freed from my vein
Yet I no longer
Feel the pain.
At long last
I can be free.
Free from this curse
inside of me.
No one can hurt me
Anymore,
As I lie here
Upon the floor.
I see the world
has turned to black.
And I know I will
Not come back.
I had no choice
I had to leave
So please my friends
do not grieve.
Our body-
it's our cage
It dies a little
each and every age
But you're not really
truly dead,
Until it's your soul
that died instead.
Did you like it? That's the end of Immortality now so please leave me one final review. Thank you to everyone who has reviewed so far. They have made me very happy.
Loadsa Luv LegyLuva xxx
