Title: Unknowingly Drawn Home
By: messymissy
(For other information, go to part 1.)
Note: Hi! Thanks for being so patient with me! Sorry I haven't updated sooner! School has kept me busy for a while, but now I'm more free to write! Another thing that delayed this update was that I discovered that the disk that I saved my fics on was broken and I lost everything that I had for this part! I hope you don't hate me for not updating for about three weeks! Well here's another part! I hope everyone likes it!
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Emi cried for a long time in the arms of the people that care about her. Almost everyone that had come to hug her had now moved away and was now just watching her remorsefully. Those who did stay with her were Alec, Jace, Joshua, Syl, Greg, Zane, Brin, Xwell, and Krit. They all stayed with Emi and were grieving with her over the loss of Max. Each of the adults took their turns in trying to comfort the little girl as she cried and she was passed around about them. Comforting words and sympathy were passed from those about Emi to her with much feeling, care, and tears. Even the adults were now in tears for they were no longer able to hold back their pain.
Most everyone in TC felt pain for the loss of Max especially those that have known her the best and the longest like those that were considered as her brothers and sisters. Others had known her for a few years at the most, but they all came to know her well and had grown to care about her for what and who she was. They had learned that underneath the defiant, bossy, up-front, high-attitude, and temperamental person that Max really is on the outside, she really is a kind, caring, trustworthy, strong, and dependable person on the inside. Not many people had known these things about her in the past up until the time in which Max had found her way to Seattle, made good friends, and her past caught up to her.
Max's relationship with the people of Terminal City hadn't always been like how it was recently, but through the changes of time, things have changed from what they were then to what they are now.
When trangenics first came free from Manticore years ago, everything was hectic and full of confusion, hate, and doubt. Their adjustments to living outside the walls of Manticore were rocky with all of the new concepts of free wills, but as time wore on, the wrongs that Manticore had put upon the transgenics had come to rest and all of the transgenics soon came to realized that even though they were different than the ordinaries, they weren't all that different from them than they had first thought. They are living beings, have emotions, and they are capable in doing all that the ordinaries do, but with some special, unique qualities. The transgenics have learned that even within themselves they have human sides as well. They're just not cold, uncaring soldiers that do what they are told. They feel things, they hurt, and they love. There's a saying that everyone's special in their own way, but if this is true, why do the ordinaries hate the transgenics so much? They're just like everyone else inside and are special in their own ways.
Max had tried to help everyone adjust to the change from Manticore to the real world and that had not been an easy ride for either her or the transgenics of TC, but with the help of many that had already loosened up to the real world and her family, Max was able to help the people of Terminal City find their human self. She and all of the others that understood more about being outside the walls of Manticore didn't force or drill anything into anyone, they just lived their lives as they did and showed others how life really is different than how Manticore had made it sound and look like. Many people didn't like Max much at first, but after some time, people started to see for who she truly was and she was able to worm her way into everyone's hearts and they in turn had a spot in hers.
It's not surprising that everyone that knew about Max's death were miserable. They had just lost a person that had been dear to them.
At this moment Emi had now quieted down and she sat still clutching at Brin with her head laid on her shoulder. Emi had cried so much that she no longer had any tears left to cry. She just sat with a her a pained look on her face with her eyes closed sniffling and burying her face into the crook of Brin's neck.
Brin was trying her best to comfort Emi as she herself tried to calm down. She was rubbing Emi's back, trying to soothe her.
Zane just stared at the heartbroken little girl and everyone else. He knew what he had to do.
He had to tell Jondy and Nicole.
Zane slowly got up from where he was sitting and left the building.
Before he was even five steps out of the door, Alec caught up to him and said gravely, "I'll come with you. Zack might be awake."
Zane just nodded and the two men headed for Terminal City's infirmary.
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How did this go? Sorry for making this so short for such a long wait! I actually planned to put Jondy in this part, but I got sidetracked! She's definitely in the next part though!!!
Just a warning, I won't be writing much in July because I'm going to be away from the computers that I can write this fic on for about three weeks.
TIGER: What other story? I am going to try to finish all of my fics. Don't worry. Zack's reaction will be in a few parts. I don't have much planned for that yet though. I know that the kids are kind of too smart, but it's a fic! *shrugs* I'm probably going to write about how everyone got together in the sequel that I might do to this story! Don't worry about you spelling. I understand you. Thanks for reading!!!!!
STEPH: Jondy's going to be in the next part for sure. I wanted to put her in this part, but I ended up writing it otherwise!!!!
BRYNNYMISSY: Yeah, I should make this story go faster, but it seems like it's not going to anytime soon! I probably lost a bunch of readers for being slow. *sighs*
SEROTONIN: Thanks for the compliment! My story went off the track that I wanted to go again!!! This part was probably weird huh? I just hope that it did bore you or anyone else!!!! Thanks for your comments!!!! You're not going to want to be in Alec's shoes even more soon!!!!!!!! He has to tell Zack!!!!!!!!!!!!
By: messymissy
(For other information, go to part 1.)
Note: Hi! Thanks for being so patient with me! Sorry I haven't updated sooner! School has kept me busy for a while, but now I'm more free to write! Another thing that delayed this update was that I discovered that the disk that I saved my fics on was broken and I lost everything that I had for this part! I hope you don't hate me for not updating for about three weeks! Well here's another part! I hope everyone likes it!
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Emi cried for a long time in the arms of the people that care about her. Almost everyone that had come to hug her had now moved away and was now just watching her remorsefully. Those who did stay with her were Alec, Jace, Joshua, Syl, Greg, Zane, Brin, Xwell, and Krit. They all stayed with Emi and were grieving with her over the loss of Max. Each of the adults took their turns in trying to comfort the little girl as she cried and she was passed around about them. Comforting words and sympathy were passed from those about Emi to her with much feeling, care, and tears. Even the adults were now in tears for they were no longer able to hold back their pain.
Most everyone in TC felt pain for the loss of Max especially those that have known her the best and the longest like those that were considered as her brothers and sisters. Others had known her for a few years at the most, but they all came to know her well and had grown to care about her for what and who she was. They had learned that underneath the defiant, bossy, up-front, high-attitude, and temperamental person that Max really is on the outside, she really is a kind, caring, trustworthy, strong, and dependable person on the inside. Not many people had known these things about her in the past up until the time in which Max had found her way to Seattle, made good friends, and her past caught up to her.
Max's relationship with the people of Terminal City hadn't always been like how it was recently, but through the changes of time, things have changed from what they were then to what they are now.
When trangenics first came free from Manticore years ago, everything was hectic and full of confusion, hate, and doubt. Their adjustments to living outside the walls of Manticore were rocky with all of the new concepts of free wills, but as time wore on, the wrongs that Manticore had put upon the transgenics had come to rest and all of the transgenics soon came to realized that even though they were different than the ordinaries, they weren't all that different from them than they had first thought. They are living beings, have emotions, and they are capable in doing all that the ordinaries do, but with some special, unique qualities. The transgenics have learned that even within themselves they have human sides as well. They're just not cold, uncaring soldiers that do what they are told. They feel things, they hurt, and they love. There's a saying that everyone's special in their own way, but if this is true, why do the ordinaries hate the transgenics so much? They're just like everyone else inside and are special in their own ways.
Max had tried to help everyone adjust to the change from Manticore to the real world and that had not been an easy ride for either her or the transgenics of TC, but with the help of many that had already loosened up to the real world and her family, Max was able to help the people of Terminal City find their human self. She and all of the others that understood more about being outside the walls of Manticore didn't force or drill anything into anyone, they just lived their lives as they did and showed others how life really is different than how Manticore had made it sound and look like. Many people didn't like Max much at first, but after some time, people started to see for who she truly was and she was able to worm her way into everyone's hearts and they in turn had a spot in hers.
It's not surprising that everyone that knew about Max's death were miserable. They had just lost a person that had been dear to them.
At this moment Emi had now quieted down and she sat still clutching at Brin with her head laid on her shoulder. Emi had cried so much that she no longer had any tears left to cry. She just sat with a her a pained look on her face with her eyes closed sniffling and burying her face into the crook of Brin's neck.
Brin was trying her best to comfort Emi as she herself tried to calm down. She was rubbing Emi's back, trying to soothe her.
Zane just stared at the heartbroken little girl and everyone else. He knew what he had to do.
He had to tell Jondy and Nicole.
Zane slowly got up from where he was sitting and left the building.
Before he was even five steps out of the door, Alec caught up to him and said gravely, "I'll come with you. Zack might be awake."
Zane just nodded and the two men headed for Terminal City's infirmary.
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How did this go? Sorry for making this so short for such a long wait! I actually planned to put Jondy in this part, but I got sidetracked! She's definitely in the next part though!!!
Just a warning, I won't be writing much in July because I'm going to be away from the computers that I can write this fic on for about three weeks.
TIGER: What other story? I am going to try to finish all of my fics. Don't worry. Zack's reaction will be in a few parts. I don't have much planned for that yet though. I know that the kids are kind of too smart, but it's a fic! *shrugs* I'm probably going to write about how everyone got together in the sequel that I might do to this story! Don't worry about you spelling. I understand you. Thanks for reading!!!!!
STEPH: Jondy's going to be in the next part for sure. I wanted to put her in this part, but I ended up writing it otherwise!!!!
BRYNNYMISSY: Yeah, I should make this story go faster, but it seems like it's not going to anytime soon! I probably lost a bunch of readers for being slow. *sighs*
SEROTONIN: Thanks for the compliment! My story went off the track that I wanted to go again!!! This part was probably weird huh? I just hope that it did bore you or anyone else!!!! Thanks for your comments!!!! You're not going to want to be in Alec's shoes even more soon!!!!!!!! He has to tell Zack!!!!!!!!!!!!
