NOTE: I wish that I owned Love Hina, but I don't. yet.
Love Hina Fanfic
Chapter 1-Early Morning Mix-Ups
As the sunlight sifted through the blinds into the cluttered room, it landed on the woman sleeping with her head in one hand and a pencil in the other, her light brown hair shining in the morning light.
A gentle tapping sounded on her door. "Naru, you in there? It's me, Keitaro." The resident landlord, Keitaro Urashima, said as he cautiously opened the door, not wanting to come in while his fellow student was changing. He saw her sitting at the kotatsu and believed her to be studying, but as he walked over, he heard a soft snore. 'She must have tried to pull another all-nighter. I'll tell the others to leave her be for a while.' He thought as he took the cover off of her kotatsu and slid it over her shoulders. Before he turned to leave, he bent over and gave her a soft kiss on the forehead. "Sweet dreams."
"Mmmnnn. Keitaro. dummy." She stirred in her sleep, "spending all your money on me."
'Whew, she's just dreaming. She really is cute, especially like this.' He thought, looking at her a few more seconds. 'Well. Better go before she wakes up. Don't want to meet her iron fist again.' He turned to leave, and with a cautiousness and careful step not common for him, he made his way towards the door.
Now, Keitaro Urashima is generally a very clumsy person with the worst sense in timing, but as if the hand of God was over him, he made his way to the door with the stealth of a ninja. He got ten feet from the door when the hand was removed. Mutsumi, with the agility of a boulder crashing down a hill, tripped on a watermelon going to her friend's room, and decimated her door.
Naru woke with a start and realized that there was something different about her room. She peered around her room, trying to find the change. Her gaze passed over a speechless Urashima, a Mutsumi dragging herself to her feet, and a cover on her back. 'That's odd, I didn't fall asleep with a blanket on, did I?' she thought, completely passing her fellow ronins off. After a minute of thought, "Keitaro? Mutsumi? What are you two doing here?"
"Oh, hi Narusegawa." Mutsumi began brightly just as the landlord sprinted for the hole that connected Naru's room and his. The two girls watched in amazement as he dove through the air, pushed the board out of the way, and fell through the hole. The two thuds that ensued told them that he must have missed his desk.
"What was that all about?" she yawned as she stood up to greet her friend. The dark haired girl just shrugged her shoulders. "Oh well. Anyway, why are you in here?"
"I thought that you would be up and wanted to know if you wished to have an early morning study session. I'm sorry if I have disturbed you. When did you go to sleep?"
"Sometime before dawn, I think. YYAAWWNN. How 'bout you. Did you sleep well?"
"Oh yes, like a log. Especially after what happened last night."
Now fully awake, "That's right, I heard you two down there. What were you doing so late at night?"
"Kei-Kun and I were screwing until about midnight when I went home. It was amazing. So long, so hard." She slightly blushed.
"Kei. Keitaro.Keitaro and you." her temple throbbed noticeably. "KEITARO!!"
*Now, just to clear a few things up. The night before, Keitaro and Mutsumi were up building her a shelve for her books. THIS IS NOT A HENTAI STORY. Mutsumi just said what she meant, just in a wrong fashion.
End Chapter 1
So, what did you think? This is my first time writing a fanfic, so please tell me your thoughts on how to make it better. It is going to get better down the road, trust me.
Love Hina Fanfic
Chapter 1-Early Morning Mix-Ups
As the sunlight sifted through the blinds into the cluttered room, it landed on the woman sleeping with her head in one hand and a pencil in the other, her light brown hair shining in the morning light.
A gentle tapping sounded on her door. "Naru, you in there? It's me, Keitaro." The resident landlord, Keitaro Urashima, said as he cautiously opened the door, not wanting to come in while his fellow student was changing. He saw her sitting at the kotatsu and believed her to be studying, but as he walked over, he heard a soft snore. 'She must have tried to pull another all-nighter. I'll tell the others to leave her be for a while.' He thought as he took the cover off of her kotatsu and slid it over her shoulders. Before he turned to leave, he bent over and gave her a soft kiss on the forehead. "Sweet dreams."
"Mmmnnn. Keitaro. dummy." She stirred in her sleep, "spending all your money on me."
'Whew, she's just dreaming. She really is cute, especially like this.' He thought, looking at her a few more seconds. 'Well. Better go before she wakes up. Don't want to meet her iron fist again.' He turned to leave, and with a cautiousness and careful step not common for him, he made his way towards the door.
Now, Keitaro Urashima is generally a very clumsy person with the worst sense in timing, but as if the hand of God was over him, he made his way to the door with the stealth of a ninja. He got ten feet from the door when the hand was removed. Mutsumi, with the agility of a boulder crashing down a hill, tripped on a watermelon going to her friend's room, and decimated her door.
Naru woke with a start and realized that there was something different about her room. She peered around her room, trying to find the change. Her gaze passed over a speechless Urashima, a Mutsumi dragging herself to her feet, and a cover on her back. 'That's odd, I didn't fall asleep with a blanket on, did I?' she thought, completely passing her fellow ronins off. After a minute of thought, "Keitaro? Mutsumi? What are you two doing here?"
"Oh, hi Narusegawa." Mutsumi began brightly just as the landlord sprinted for the hole that connected Naru's room and his. The two girls watched in amazement as he dove through the air, pushed the board out of the way, and fell through the hole. The two thuds that ensued told them that he must have missed his desk.
"What was that all about?" she yawned as she stood up to greet her friend. The dark haired girl just shrugged her shoulders. "Oh well. Anyway, why are you in here?"
"I thought that you would be up and wanted to know if you wished to have an early morning study session. I'm sorry if I have disturbed you. When did you go to sleep?"
"Sometime before dawn, I think. YYAAWWNN. How 'bout you. Did you sleep well?"
"Oh yes, like a log. Especially after what happened last night."
Now fully awake, "That's right, I heard you two down there. What were you doing so late at night?"
"Kei-Kun and I were screwing until about midnight when I went home. It was amazing. So long, so hard." She slightly blushed.
"Kei. Keitaro.Keitaro and you." her temple throbbed noticeably. "KEITARO!!"
*Now, just to clear a few things up. The night before, Keitaro and Mutsumi were up building her a shelve for her books. THIS IS NOT A HENTAI STORY. Mutsumi just said what she meant, just in a wrong fashion.
End Chapter 1
So, what did you think? This is my first time writing a fanfic, so please tell me your thoughts on how to make it better. It is going to get better down the road, trust me.
