Authors Note:
Ok! Many people got it right! I'm telling you. I don't think that I'll be able to keep up with the demand. Well here are the people who got it right! Everything in " " are what the person wrote!
Alex- "naked in a hot spring tryin to realx! :) Duh! ~.^"
.......... Well, he hasn't got any stories but he still gets credit. Keep with him though. He might get some stories up!
Crazyinulover- "Naked in a hot spring with a demon in front but she doesn't realize it O.~"
.......... Does have some stories. 3 of them. I do suggest that you read them!
Kaoru Himura- "hey!, really nice from you to put the chappi! thank you so much ! I was so bored Ia needed something good to read and that was when your fic came into scene.it's good to know that they are still alive, and well I think that he will find her in the hot spring ( after al it is rated R) and I don't only guess he will find her there , it will also be nice!
see ya!
Kaoru!"
.......... Well, she hasn't got any stories but she still gets credit.
Kurayami Ryuu- "Luv the fic! I would vote for the hot spring option, personally ;) My friend also sugjests adding the big demon option to that :)"
.......... She isn't a member but she still gets credit!
Sliver- "I think naked in a hot spring trying to relax. HAHA! Like your story."
.......... Isn't a member but she still gets credit!
Neko-Chan- "DUDE I WAS RIGHT! ok answer to the question:
he should find her in front of a huge demon and doesnt have her weapons! miroku will "risk" his life to save her. then she'll be like NO and he will fall to the ground once the big mean demon is dead. she will be like MIROKU! and run over to him. he will say "Sango. i need to tell you something." "yes miroku" "I.love.you" then he faints and she's all like NO b/c she thinks he is dead. but no worries he isnt just very bad injuries. when he comes to sango will be there and say "i love you too." THE END! jkjk ok the end of my review!. man this is a LONG review. well cant wait for the next chappie!"
.......... Well..., he's half right. Soooooo, he gets HALF credit! ^.~
Ok, enough of my babbling, ON WITH THE FIC!!!!
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Chapter 10: "My God! She's a goddess!" "Miroku, Help Me! "
Miroku walked through the forest, thinking of a way to tell Sango that he was sorry. "I know..., 'Sango, I'm sorry. I now know that you were under Naraku's control. Please? I love you! Please take me back?' Who the hell am I trying to kid. She's not going to take me back. Not after that big fuss." He walked to a clearing in the forest where he saw a hot spring; "I think that a hot bath will do me some good right now." He got undressed (Ohhhhhhhhh... sexy!) and leaned up against a bolder, letting out a sigh. Then he heard a female voice coming from the other side.
"Miroku, why? Why did you push me away? Then try to act like nothing happen? How could you do that? I love you, don't you love me?" It was Sango.
'My god! She's a goddess!' Miroku thought as he slid down from where he was. 'Ok Miroku! This is your big chance! So DON'T BLOW IT!!!' he screamed at himself.
"Oh no!" Sango started, "MIROKU, INU YASHA, SOMEONE HELP!!!!! 'Man, where could they be when I need one of them! They're always here when I don't!'
Miroku Looked and there was a demon that had Sango in his arms. The thing was trying to kiss her. "OH NO YOU DON'T! Not when I'm around to anything about it!"
"Miroku! Thank God! Now do you mind, KILL HIM AND GET ME DOWNFROM HERE!"
"Fine! Just stop yelling! Now for you, put my woman down and you won't get hurt!"
"Your woman! Ha! She's mine now! I think that she would make a good mate!"
"I DON'T WANT TO BE 'YOUR' MATE! I WANT TO HIS!" screamed Sango pointing to Miroku.
"'She wants to be mine!' Ok, now drop her!"
"Fine, I'll deal with you first. As for you," he said looking at Sango, "you stay here!" With that he knocked her out cold.
"SANGO!" Miroku screamed then he took off his prayer beads and sucked the demon it the wind tunnel. He ran over to sango, wrapped the outer of his rob around her, put the rest of his clothing on himself, picked her up and headed back to the village.
As he headed towards the village Sango begin to wake up, ' Where, where am I?' Miroku notices that she is now awake and he stops setting her on the ground.
"Are you Ok?" Miroku asks concerned.
"Yeah, I think so. But my head hurts a little."
"You stay here I'll be back," said Miroku running off into the forest but returning a short time later, "Ok I got some fire wood. You and me are going to stay here tonight. I don't really want you to move too much for a little while."
"Miroku, I'm fine, really!" Sango exclaimed. But Miroku wouldn't have it.
"No. You're staying here for tonight. I don't...," Miroku realized what he was about to say, "I don't want to lose you."
"I don't want to leave you. You've just hurt me so many times, feeling on those other girls and everything."
"You did the same thing. And with Inu yasha none the less."
"Look! I was under Naraku's...," she was not able to finish for Miroku had pressed his lips against hers. She was shocked for a moment then her eye's fluttered shut. When they parted they just looked into each other's eyes. "Miroku..."
"Shhhhhh!" Miroku had pulled her near, putting his arm around her. "Sango, my love. Those other girls mean nothing to me. If I lost you, I couldn't live. You're the air I breathe. You're the water I drink. You're my whole world, if I lost you, that world would shatter. Sango, I love you"
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OK! This one took a while. But it's up! * YEAH * ^_^ Ok, the question,
Will Miroku and Sango...
a) Have sex and Inu yasha and kagome catch them
b) The demon come back and tries to kill them
c) Inu yasha and Kagome get the next chapter
Ok give answers and ideas (if you want ^_^)
Ok! Many people got it right! I'm telling you. I don't think that I'll be able to keep up with the demand. Well here are the people who got it right! Everything in " " are what the person wrote!
Alex- "naked in a hot spring tryin to realx! :) Duh! ~.^"
.......... Well, he hasn't got any stories but he still gets credit. Keep with him though. He might get some stories up!
Crazyinulover- "Naked in a hot spring with a demon in front but she doesn't realize it O.~"
.......... Does have some stories. 3 of them. I do suggest that you read them!
Kaoru Himura- "hey!, really nice from you to put the chappi! thank you so much ! I was so bored Ia needed something good to read and that was when your fic came into scene.it's good to know that they are still alive, and well I think that he will find her in the hot spring ( after al it is rated R) and I don't only guess he will find her there , it will also be nice!
see ya!
Kaoru!"
.......... Well, she hasn't got any stories but she still gets credit.
Kurayami Ryuu- "Luv the fic! I would vote for the hot spring option, personally ;) My friend also sugjests adding the big demon option to that :)"
.......... She isn't a member but she still gets credit!
Sliver- "I think naked in a hot spring trying to relax. HAHA! Like your story."
.......... Isn't a member but she still gets credit!
Neko-Chan- "DUDE I WAS RIGHT! ok answer to the question:
he should find her in front of a huge demon and doesnt have her weapons! miroku will "risk" his life to save her. then she'll be like NO and he will fall to the ground once the big mean demon is dead. she will be like MIROKU! and run over to him. he will say "Sango. i need to tell you something." "yes miroku" "I.love.you" then he faints and she's all like NO b/c she thinks he is dead. but no worries he isnt just very bad injuries. when he comes to sango will be there and say "i love you too." THE END! jkjk ok the end of my review!. man this is a LONG review. well cant wait for the next chappie!"
.......... Well..., he's half right. Soooooo, he gets HALF credit! ^.~
Ok, enough of my babbling, ON WITH THE FIC!!!!
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Chapter 10: "My God! She's a goddess!" "Miroku, Help Me! "
Miroku walked through the forest, thinking of a way to tell Sango that he was sorry. "I know..., 'Sango, I'm sorry. I now know that you were under Naraku's control. Please? I love you! Please take me back?' Who the hell am I trying to kid. She's not going to take me back. Not after that big fuss." He walked to a clearing in the forest where he saw a hot spring; "I think that a hot bath will do me some good right now." He got undressed (Ohhhhhhhhh... sexy!) and leaned up against a bolder, letting out a sigh. Then he heard a female voice coming from the other side.
"Miroku, why? Why did you push me away? Then try to act like nothing happen? How could you do that? I love you, don't you love me?" It was Sango.
'My god! She's a goddess!' Miroku thought as he slid down from where he was. 'Ok Miroku! This is your big chance! So DON'T BLOW IT!!!' he screamed at himself.
"Oh no!" Sango started, "MIROKU, INU YASHA, SOMEONE HELP!!!!! 'Man, where could they be when I need one of them! They're always here when I don't!'
Miroku Looked and there was a demon that had Sango in his arms. The thing was trying to kiss her. "OH NO YOU DON'T! Not when I'm around to anything about it!"
"Miroku! Thank God! Now do you mind, KILL HIM AND GET ME DOWNFROM HERE!"
"Fine! Just stop yelling! Now for you, put my woman down and you won't get hurt!"
"Your woman! Ha! She's mine now! I think that she would make a good mate!"
"I DON'T WANT TO BE 'YOUR' MATE! I WANT TO HIS!" screamed Sango pointing to Miroku.
"'She wants to be mine!' Ok, now drop her!"
"Fine, I'll deal with you first. As for you," he said looking at Sango, "you stay here!" With that he knocked her out cold.
"SANGO!" Miroku screamed then he took off his prayer beads and sucked the demon it the wind tunnel. He ran over to sango, wrapped the outer of his rob around her, put the rest of his clothing on himself, picked her up and headed back to the village.
As he headed towards the village Sango begin to wake up, ' Where, where am I?' Miroku notices that she is now awake and he stops setting her on the ground.
"Are you Ok?" Miroku asks concerned.
"Yeah, I think so. But my head hurts a little."
"You stay here I'll be back," said Miroku running off into the forest but returning a short time later, "Ok I got some fire wood. You and me are going to stay here tonight. I don't really want you to move too much for a little while."
"Miroku, I'm fine, really!" Sango exclaimed. But Miroku wouldn't have it.
"No. You're staying here for tonight. I don't...," Miroku realized what he was about to say, "I don't want to lose you."
"I don't want to leave you. You've just hurt me so many times, feeling on those other girls and everything."
"You did the same thing. And with Inu yasha none the less."
"Look! I was under Naraku's...," she was not able to finish for Miroku had pressed his lips against hers. She was shocked for a moment then her eye's fluttered shut. When they parted they just looked into each other's eyes. "Miroku..."
"Shhhhhh!" Miroku had pulled her near, putting his arm around her. "Sango, my love. Those other girls mean nothing to me. If I lost you, I couldn't live. You're the air I breathe. You're the water I drink. You're my whole world, if I lost you, that world would shatter. Sango, I love you"
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OK! This one took a while. But it's up! * YEAH * ^_^ Ok, the question,
Will Miroku and Sango...
a) Have sex and Inu yasha and kagome catch them
b) The demon come back and tries to kill them
c) Inu yasha and Kagome get the next chapter
Ok give answers and ideas (if you want ^_^)
