A/n: ok, I will try to make the chapters longer, but as I am a very slow
typist, the new chapters may take a lot longer. Now, because today is a
snow day in PA, (YAY!) there will be a lot of updates, and since this is
my favorite story, this will be updated first.
To u reviewers.
miss pebbles, I don't want to sound mean but, ever heard of fate? Mayb they were just meant to b together, that's y I wrote this story, its all fate. Another thing, thank you for correcting me; as I am only a 13 year old, I wouldn't no that about graduate school. I wasnt thinking about the cat. another thing, I also wouldn't no about the economy class thing. Thank you for being honest.
Starbelly: I wil try to make the chapters longer, and thanx for supporting my story! And also, look for updates in a screen name mix-up, as I should be updating it soon!
All the anonymous reviews: thank you so much, I happy you like it!
Hasapi: thanx for reviewing my story, and yes, she does still love him, she just doesn't realize it yet.
Kels: lol! No skool! Sweetness!
Coffeechick: I'm glad you like it, and I will have a few plot twists ( I just don't know what they are yet!)
To lazy to sign in: thanks for reviewing!
Alex s: please review again, and I hope your happy with the description, we'll hear more about pat in this chap.
Nikki: I'm glad you like the story and hopefully you'll keep liking it!
Staygold: I'll continue as long as u guys want me too!
And last but not least pooh bear: I love j/r fics too!
On to the story!
**
"Wow, look at the size of that hotel!" Rory looked up at the large skyscraper hotel that they were staying in, and took it all in. It was a huge glass building that had just been put in on the outskirts of San Francisco. They were staying there for 1 night; hopefully the jet lag would be gone by then.
"Well, it probably looks even better on the inside, let's go!" Rory nodded, dumb-founded by the sheer size, and walked in the glass doors. Inside, there was a huge pot of flowers under a huge glass chandelier, couches for the waiting people, elevators, a store or too, and tons of people walking around, some working, some were guests.
"I'll just go check us in, do you want to come?"
Rory nodded, and followed him to the desks. "Hello sir, madam. How may I help you?"
While Patrick gave them their names, Rory still looked around the whole building from where she was standing of course. As she searched the faces of the people, looking for recognizable faces. Wait a minute, that man. He looked so familiar.Jess?
"Pat, I'll meet you. um over by the elevators." By the time he turned around she had disappeared into the crowd. 'I think I saw him, over here? I can't be sure, there are just so many people. Besides, so what does it matter if he is here? If he is here that is.' She thought. A nagging voice in the back of her head said, 'You know you love him.' Rory thought a countering thought, 'No, I love Patrick.' The nagging voice insisted, 'That sounds familiar, didn't you think that when you were with Dean?'
Rory ran to the elevators, shaking that thought out of her head. That couldn't be true! She loved Patrick, only Patrick, and she would never see Jess ever again, she was sure of that.
Patrick ran to the elevators, exclaiming, "Great! We have our key, and Lane and Dave are in the next room!" Rory plastered a smile over her face, and followed him into the elevator. "Now, we're on floor 14."
**
"This room, it's. huge! Huger than huge, gigantic?" After she had entered the room, she mentally pushed everything to the back of her mind, as she didn't want to ruin the moment, and because she was amazed by the size of the room. "I want this bed!" She ran over and jumped up on the bed she had pointed to, smiled and exclaimed, "Feather blankets! Gosh, this place must be a 5 star hotel or something!"
Smiling, Patrick went over to is bed, and then saw a door on the opposite wall. "See that door? That connects us to Lane and Dave's room. Do you want to go knock? I think they're here." Rory nodded eagerly as she had not seen her friend in months. She went over, knocked on the door and waited for a reply.
"Oh my gosh! Rory, I haven't seen you in so long!" Lane went over and hugged her, and Rory was ecstatic to see her again. Dave went over and shook Patrick's hand awkwardly, since they had never really met, only heard about their girlfriends.
"I would be Patrick and I presume you are Dave?"
"That would be me." Patrick and Dave looked desperately at their girlfriends, and Rory and Lane broke from their hug. They began giggling over the size of the room, and Dave and Patrick just rolled their eyes.
"Patrick, I have a feeling we will end up being good friends by the time this cruise is done...
Patrick smiled, and after taking a second glance at Rory and Lane, replied, "I have a feeling that's going to be the only way to stay sane."
**
Jess picked up his bags from the conveyor belt and sighed. Though he was on a trip, after Sarah had left him, his life had been, well in shambles. He hadn't seen Luke or his best friend Dave in weeks, and well, he was tired of being lonely. He wished he could die, but he wasn't going to commit suicide, at least not yet. If all went well this week, he would consider his life again. Jess was just so depressed, and there wasn't anything anyone could do about it.
Once he got to his hotel, which was huge, but not like the ones at New York, Jess checked in. On his way to the elevator, something, an instinct, told him to look over at the check in area. There she was, Rory Gilmore. Smart, perfect Rory Gilmore, the girl he was in love with though when he was with Sarah he denied it, but now, now there was nothing in his way. She looked over in his direction and spotted him then told the guy that she- wait, she had a boyfriend? Life wasn't going to be worth living. He ran to the elevators before she could come any, and ruin his life anymore.
Once in his room, Jess thought about everything that had happened. Maybe he would give life one more shot, but then, that was the end.
A/n: I know Jess is really depressed, but don't worry, he'll get better! IF YOU LIKED OR DISLIKED THIS CHATPTER ( I don't care) PLEASE TELL ME YOUR THOUGHTS BY REVIEWING! I'm shooting for 25, but should dream on. lol! Jk! You guys will come through
To u reviewers.
miss pebbles, I don't want to sound mean but, ever heard of fate? Mayb they were just meant to b together, that's y I wrote this story, its all fate. Another thing, thank you for correcting me; as I am only a 13 year old, I wouldn't no that about graduate school. I wasnt thinking about the cat. another thing, I also wouldn't no about the economy class thing. Thank you for being honest.
Starbelly: I wil try to make the chapters longer, and thanx for supporting my story! And also, look for updates in a screen name mix-up, as I should be updating it soon!
All the anonymous reviews: thank you so much, I happy you like it!
Hasapi: thanx for reviewing my story, and yes, she does still love him, she just doesn't realize it yet.
Kels: lol! No skool! Sweetness!
Coffeechick: I'm glad you like it, and I will have a few plot twists ( I just don't know what they are yet!)
To lazy to sign in: thanks for reviewing!
Alex s: please review again, and I hope your happy with the description, we'll hear more about pat in this chap.
Nikki: I'm glad you like the story and hopefully you'll keep liking it!
Staygold: I'll continue as long as u guys want me too!
And last but not least pooh bear: I love j/r fics too!
On to the story!
**
"Wow, look at the size of that hotel!" Rory looked up at the large skyscraper hotel that they were staying in, and took it all in. It was a huge glass building that had just been put in on the outskirts of San Francisco. They were staying there for 1 night; hopefully the jet lag would be gone by then.
"Well, it probably looks even better on the inside, let's go!" Rory nodded, dumb-founded by the sheer size, and walked in the glass doors. Inside, there was a huge pot of flowers under a huge glass chandelier, couches for the waiting people, elevators, a store or too, and tons of people walking around, some working, some were guests.
"I'll just go check us in, do you want to come?"
Rory nodded, and followed him to the desks. "Hello sir, madam. How may I help you?"
While Patrick gave them their names, Rory still looked around the whole building from where she was standing of course. As she searched the faces of the people, looking for recognizable faces. Wait a minute, that man. He looked so familiar.Jess?
"Pat, I'll meet you. um over by the elevators." By the time he turned around she had disappeared into the crowd. 'I think I saw him, over here? I can't be sure, there are just so many people. Besides, so what does it matter if he is here? If he is here that is.' She thought. A nagging voice in the back of her head said, 'You know you love him.' Rory thought a countering thought, 'No, I love Patrick.' The nagging voice insisted, 'That sounds familiar, didn't you think that when you were with Dean?'
Rory ran to the elevators, shaking that thought out of her head. That couldn't be true! She loved Patrick, only Patrick, and she would never see Jess ever again, she was sure of that.
Patrick ran to the elevators, exclaiming, "Great! We have our key, and Lane and Dave are in the next room!" Rory plastered a smile over her face, and followed him into the elevator. "Now, we're on floor 14."
**
"This room, it's. huge! Huger than huge, gigantic?" After she had entered the room, she mentally pushed everything to the back of her mind, as she didn't want to ruin the moment, and because she was amazed by the size of the room. "I want this bed!" She ran over and jumped up on the bed she had pointed to, smiled and exclaimed, "Feather blankets! Gosh, this place must be a 5 star hotel or something!"
Smiling, Patrick went over to is bed, and then saw a door on the opposite wall. "See that door? That connects us to Lane and Dave's room. Do you want to go knock? I think they're here." Rory nodded eagerly as she had not seen her friend in months. She went over, knocked on the door and waited for a reply.
"Oh my gosh! Rory, I haven't seen you in so long!" Lane went over and hugged her, and Rory was ecstatic to see her again. Dave went over and shook Patrick's hand awkwardly, since they had never really met, only heard about their girlfriends.
"I would be Patrick and I presume you are Dave?"
"That would be me." Patrick and Dave looked desperately at their girlfriends, and Rory and Lane broke from their hug. They began giggling over the size of the room, and Dave and Patrick just rolled their eyes.
"Patrick, I have a feeling we will end up being good friends by the time this cruise is done...
Patrick smiled, and after taking a second glance at Rory and Lane, replied, "I have a feeling that's going to be the only way to stay sane."
**
Jess picked up his bags from the conveyor belt and sighed. Though he was on a trip, after Sarah had left him, his life had been, well in shambles. He hadn't seen Luke or his best friend Dave in weeks, and well, he was tired of being lonely. He wished he could die, but he wasn't going to commit suicide, at least not yet. If all went well this week, he would consider his life again. Jess was just so depressed, and there wasn't anything anyone could do about it.
Once he got to his hotel, which was huge, but not like the ones at New York, Jess checked in. On his way to the elevator, something, an instinct, told him to look over at the check in area. There she was, Rory Gilmore. Smart, perfect Rory Gilmore, the girl he was in love with though when he was with Sarah he denied it, but now, now there was nothing in his way. She looked over in his direction and spotted him then told the guy that she- wait, she had a boyfriend? Life wasn't going to be worth living. He ran to the elevators before she could come any, and ruin his life anymore.
Once in his room, Jess thought about everything that had happened. Maybe he would give life one more shot, but then, that was the end.
A/n: I know Jess is really depressed, but don't worry, he'll get better! IF YOU LIKED OR DISLIKED THIS CHATPTER ( I don't care) PLEASE TELL ME YOUR THOUGHTS BY REVIEWING! I'm shooting for 25, but should dream on. lol! Jk! You guys will come through
