Okay, here is my next chapter. Please review it! I'm begging you. This chapter won't be that long because I'm tired and I got to get to sleep soon.
---My Story--- -Chapter 10- Moonflow, Pretty!

We had walked and walked. I was exhausted. We soon reached a beautiful pond. "Oh! Pretty!" I exclaimed as I placed my hand in the water and twirled it around. "C'mon!" Tidus shouted in my ear as he tried to slap me. So as we walked I thought of a way to get him back. I stepped a little ahead of him and stuck out my foot. He hadn't seen my action, so of course he tripped and he fell face down into to.shoopuff poo!? Eww! We all laughed at him.

We soon rode a shoopuff.

On the shoopuff.

We were practically silent during the peaceful ride. Only Wakka, Tidus, and Yuna had a conversation. Lulu and the others pitched in a little to their conversation. "*sigh*." I looked over the railing of the blue shoopuff. Suddenly the shoopuff seemed to be shocked over something, and it knocked Yuna off. Tidus, Wakka, and I followed after her. "Danielle!" Leon and Martyna cried out.

***Battle Begins***

"Yuna!" Tidus called as he dove into the water. There was an Al Bhed machine called Extractor, which of course was powered by machine. First Tidus casted haste on me. I attacked twice and then Wakka attacked. Now it was the Extractor's turn. It readied its depth charges. It attacked critical. "Haha!" snorted Tidus as he casted haste on himself. Then he casted haste on Wakka. We all attacked again. Then it used depth charges, hurting us badly. I used a hi-potion on Tidus, then myself. Wakka and Tidus attacked it and killed it. Yuna was finally free.

***Battle Ends***

We continued and soon reached land. We bought some items and new weapons. I bought some guns for myself. Seifer and Leon bought new swords. Martyna got a new whip. Anyway, moving on.

A dirt road lead us the way. "Hey look! Someone is...dead?" the girl had gotten up and.undresses?! "Thought I was done for back there." Said the young woman. It was Rikku! Me and Tidus were so happy to see her. Once we had a talk we went to GuadoSalam.
Okay, please review! I really want to write more but I Got to get to bed. It's 1:00 on the Dot. Okay, see you guys!

^_^

Danielle