Posted on : 3/17/03
Hello! Hyperchica here! Just thought I'd start off by telling you guys something--I don't start to write my next chapter until I have 5 reviews on the last one normally. Why, you ask? Cuz usually I ask for ya'll to vote on who my one-and-only-love-of-my-life-for-ever-and-ever-at-least-for-a- week should be for the next chapter.
It's not cuz I'm evil, I just wanna have a full consensus of what ya'll think. Or if you don't care at all. Or if you think I should get a real b/f and stop torturing the poor cartoon characters, you can tell me that too. That will never happen tho. I have too much fun being single!
I could get a real b/f if I wanted to, but I don't. I flirt too much to have a b/f. I guess the flirting goes along with being hyper.
For Example: Ya know how, if you've got "pet names" for guys, you supposedly like them? Well, lemme see . . . I have pet names for . . . **trying to think of nicknames she's got for her guys friends** lemme see, of the top of my head, there's Houshi-sama, Shippo-chan, Cantaloupe, Artichoke, the Oblivious one, Jaken, Fluffy, Cathyduck, Strawberry, "Lil Bro", Seat Stealer, TSK(aka Tall Skinny Kid) . . . ok, some of those are for the same people, so altogether there's . . . 6 guys! And how many of those people do I have a crush on? ZIP! ZERO! NADA! NONE! (Contrary to popular belief on nickname number 4. **COUGH**buttercup**COUGH**)
ANYWAYS!! But you didn't come to hear about my non-existent-by-choice love life. You came here to hear about . . . ME AND KOGA!!! Well, fear not, faithful readers! He shall be in this story! And me too! But not as me . . . but as my other alter ego, ADENA!!!!! HEEHEEHEEHEEHEE ok . . . so you didn't come to hear about that either.
OOH!!!!! GUESS WHAT!!!! I'M GETTING EPISODES 1-26 OF TRIGUN!!!!! ON DVD!!!! AND IT ONLY COST ME 47.98!!! AND IT'S NORMALLY 120-ODD DOLLARS!!!! I AM ********SOOOOOOOOOO*********** EXCITED!!!!!! I GOT THEM FROM THIS SITE WHERE EVERYTHING IS LIKE 70-MILLION TIMES CHEAPER THAN NORMAL! INSTANT MESSAGE ME IF YOU WANT THE SITE!!!! CUZ I AM SOOOOOOOOO GLAD I FOUND IT!!!!
Oh that reminds me (I have no idea why that reminded me, but oh well): darkpride, do you have AIM? Cuz I gotta talk to you, k? Otherwise, I'll have to go by email.
Also: to Asher Tye- You want to know if Urissa is going to come back? You'll just have to wait and see **grins evily**
To silver destiny: Tank ooz! (translation: thank you!) or Gomen, if ya wanna go all Japanese on me. Not that there's anything wronf with being Japanese. ANWAYS!! But thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you think my story is kewl! YEAH!!!!
To reviewers in general: for my one-and-only-blah-blah-blah, I cannot use Miroku of one of my guy-friends would get the wrong idea. Sry bout that! The same thing goes for: fluffy, Shippo, and Jaken (altho for the last who would ever suggest them anyway!)
Anyways (again!) Where was I? Oh yes. You guys probably want me to stop my rant and start the fic. Fine. Be that way. I hope you have fun reading my fic. Oh wait, I actually do! Heehee! Have fun!!!
ZE FICCY HAZ ARRIVED
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Chapter 11
Una Pelea y Un Arbol (An Argument and a Tree)
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
3~~~~~Where we are starting from~~~~~3
Just then, Rin leaned in and kissed Shippo once more, this time, with more than a simple peck. Her lips were slightly parted, and she kissed him deeply. Shippo was surprised at first, but then relaxed and started to kiss her back.
As the sun set behind them, the two innocent teenagers were in their own world, where nothing bad could ever happen to them. 3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
3~~~~~And now we continue~~~~~3
Shippo and Rin broke their kiss when they started to run out of breath. They quickly moved apart, embarrassed by their confessions of feelings.
They felt extremely awkward after that, yet somewhat relieved too. At least both of them had gotten their feelings out.
However, the awkwardness overpowered any relief they might have felt, and they did not speak to each other for a while after that.
When someone did finally break the silence, it was Rin.
"Umm . . . do you have any idea where we are?" she asked Shippo.
Shippo looked around. For the first time, he realized he had absolutely no idea of their location. They were far from any landmarks he ever had seen.
"No. I don't. Do you?" he asked her in reply.
Rin shook her head. "Not a clue."
"She musta taken us pretty far, huh?" he commented.
"No duh, genius," she said. Rin was feeling tired and grumpy because of the long trek to their current location, and as a result, was more frustrated than she would normally be with her new companion, "Captain Obvious", who had sprung from her old companion "Shippo".
"Well you don't have to be mean about it!" he snapped back.
Well, there went all that emotional bonding. Down the drain, so they say.
Rin and Shippo didn't speak to each other after that for quite a while. However, this time, it was not out of awkwardness, but rather out of frustration with the other.
The sky began to darken, and, even though they were not talking to each other, both knew they had to make some type of collaborative effort if they were ever gonna set up camp. However, both were too stubborn to admit it, and just stood there, backs to each other, until the stars and moon came out, and it started to get cold out.
Finally, Shippo spoke.
"Ok. Whether we're talking to each other or not, it's dark. I'm tired. We gotta set up some type of camp for the night," he told her.
"Yeah. But where? I ask you, since you're OBVIOUSLY the brains of this operation," said Rin sarcastically.
"Dang it, Rin! Can't you just act mature for five second and listen! The longer we spend out here, the longer I'm awake, and the longer I have to talk to you!"
"Well! I had nooooo idea you felt that way! That changes EVERYTHING! Since my voice is so HORRIBLE to listen to, why don't you just leave!" Rin snapped.
"BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO!" yelled Shippo.
His cry echoed across the empty meadow, which had been silent except for the arguing of the two teenage travelers. Both Shippo and Rin felt guilty. It was as if they had broken the peace in some type of sacred temple.
"There's a forest over that way," Rin whispered. "We can go over there. I'm sure there'll be somewhere we can stop."
"Let's go," replied Shippo in an equally hushed voice.
Rin began to walk in the direction of the forest. Shippo started walking besides her.
After three or four minutes, they still seemed no closer to the forest as they had been before. Shippo could see Rin's eyes start to droop.
"Are you getting tired?" he asked her, genuinely concerned.
"No! I'm fine. . . still as awake as I was this morning . . . couldn't . . . have . . . more . . . energy . . ." Rin's eyes drooped some more as her walking pace slowed and she began to yawn.
Rin suddenly just sat down. "Here's a good sleeping place. I like it here," she said, as she started to lay down on the dewy grass.
"Don't be silly!" chided Shippo. "You'll get sick or something! And then Sesshomaru would kill me! Or wait. . . what was that name you used to call him? Fluffy, was it?"
Rin smiled and she curled up to go to sleep, her eyes already closed. Shippo saw that she wasn't going to go anywhere by her own devices. The poor exhausted girl was asleep already!
He sighed, then picked her up, careful to grab her bag also, which, miraculously, had stayed with them the entire time. He then bounded off to the forest, with the sleeping Rin slung over his shoulder.
He entered the forest and searched around for a proper place to sleep that wasn't already inhabited by some other forest creature. It was very cold out, and even Shippo was beginning to get the shivers. He had to find a place for them to stay quickly, and preferably a place that wasn't out in the open.
He finally found a large tree growing close to the middle of the forest, with a small convenient clearing in front of it. He looked closer at the tree, and saw that it had a very large burn-scar on it.
(Author's note- for those of you who do not know what a burn scar is, it is something that you find on Giant sequoia or Redwood trees. Large fires that pass through the forest make them, but, because the trees are so large, they only get a "burn scar" on them instead of being totally burnt down. I believe that a burn scar is actually the newer layers of bark being burned off. If it happens multiple times, you can end up with a small, cave-like burn scar area that indents into the tree. If any of you have seen a picture of (or actually seen) one of those redwood trees you can drive and/or walk though, burn scars made those passages. That is the type of burn scar that Shippo found in the tree. Ok, enough with the biology lesson.)
He peered into the burn-scar. It seemed big enough for then to stay the night, and Shippo crawled in.
When he did crawl in, he discovered he had vastly misjudged the space. It had enough depth that Shippo could sit with his legs stretched out, but barely any width. The tree only had room for one occupant to fit comfortably, and there was no way Rin could sit next to him, no matter how much he tried to squeeze her in.
Sighing, Shippo crawled out of the burn-scar. He then gently picked up Rin and set her in the tree. She moved a bit and Shippo thought for a second she was awakening. However, she went right back to sleep.
Shippo, satisfied that she would be safe, jumped up to one of the lower limbs of the tree and settled in. He was cold up there by himself, but by traveling with his adopted family by watching the mistakes made by Miroku and Inuyashahe had learned that it was always good to be gentlemanly. Moreover, he had learner that it was safer for him if Rin did not wake up to find herself on his lap.
Huddling close, he tried to go to sleep, and eventually, the sandman got to him. He fell asleep listening to the quiet sounds of the forest.
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3 AI!!! KAWAII!!!! (translation: kawaii is Japanese for CUTE!!!) Anyways, I'm tired, so I'll make this author's note short. Read, review, and vote for my new OAOLOMLFEAEALFAW (I'm gonna abbreviate it now. Takes too long otherwise.)
Also, I have a new policy that I need to inform ya'll of. From now on, I have decided that I am not gonna post the next chapter I write until I get a nuber of reviews equal to the number of pages I write per chaper, k? For example, this chapter was 5 pages when I typed it on Microsoft word, so I want 5 reviews. Make sense?
OMG, this is so ironic! I PROMISED myself I'd NEVER do the withhold for reviews thingy. Oh well. I guess I am a greedy capitalist pig now. :) Don't ask. A dentist taught it to me. :) heeheeheeheehee---- um nvm.
Read and review!
Also, those of you who haven't checked it out yet, look at otaku eimi's story! The url is
http:// www.fictionpress.net/ read.php?storyid=1245079
TAKE OUT THE SPACES OF THE URL!!! THEY ARE BETWEEN "; and "www." AND ".net/" and "read.php" If you don't, the url will not work!!!
SO LOOK AT IT!!
Title of next chapter-- "Una Cambiado de Ropa y Un Intrusion
Anyways. Read and review!
Posted: 3/17
Just to tell you guys, it may be a while until I write more chapters. School is getting very overwhelming. Well, not really, but my mom thinks so, and she wants me to focus all my attention on schoolwork, which means no ficcy writing for me! But don't worry, I will be back sooner or later! And then you can read Chapter 11!!!!!
Well, until next time, adios!
From:
The amazing, incredible, supercute, indescribable, uncomparable, ultraadorable, on-a-permanent-sugar-high HYPERCHICA!!!!
Hello! Hyperchica here! Just thought I'd start off by telling you guys something--I don't start to write my next chapter until I have 5 reviews on the last one normally. Why, you ask? Cuz usually I ask for ya'll to vote on who my one-and-only-love-of-my-life-for-ever-and-ever-at-least-for-a- week should be for the next chapter.
It's not cuz I'm evil, I just wanna have a full consensus of what ya'll think. Or if you don't care at all. Or if you think I should get a real b/f and stop torturing the poor cartoon characters, you can tell me that too. That will never happen tho. I have too much fun being single!
I could get a real b/f if I wanted to, but I don't. I flirt too much to have a b/f. I guess the flirting goes along with being hyper.
For Example: Ya know how, if you've got "pet names" for guys, you supposedly like them? Well, lemme see . . . I have pet names for . . . **trying to think of nicknames she's got for her guys friends** lemme see, of the top of my head, there's Houshi-sama, Shippo-chan, Cantaloupe, Artichoke, the Oblivious one, Jaken, Fluffy, Cathyduck, Strawberry, "Lil Bro", Seat Stealer, TSK(aka Tall Skinny Kid) . . . ok, some of those are for the same people, so altogether there's . . . 6 guys! And how many of those people do I have a crush on? ZIP! ZERO! NADA! NONE! (Contrary to popular belief on nickname number 4. **COUGH**buttercup**COUGH**)
ANYWAYS!! But you didn't come to hear about my non-existent-by-choice love life. You came here to hear about . . . ME AND KOGA!!! Well, fear not, faithful readers! He shall be in this story! And me too! But not as me . . . but as my other alter ego, ADENA!!!!! HEEHEEHEEHEEHEE ok . . . so you didn't come to hear about that either.
OOH!!!!! GUESS WHAT!!!! I'M GETTING EPISODES 1-26 OF TRIGUN!!!!! ON DVD!!!! AND IT ONLY COST ME 47.98!!! AND IT'S NORMALLY 120-ODD DOLLARS!!!! I AM ********SOOOOOOOOOO*********** EXCITED!!!!!! I GOT THEM FROM THIS SITE WHERE EVERYTHING IS LIKE 70-MILLION TIMES CHEAPER THAN NORMAL! INSTANT MESSAGE ME IF YOU WANT THE SITE!!!! CUZ I AM SOOOOOOOOO GLAD I FOUND IT!!!!
Oh that reminds me (I have no idea why that reminded me, but oh well): darkpride, do you have AIM? Cuz I gotta talk to you, k? Otherwise, I'll have to go by email.
Also: to Asher Tye- You want to know if Urissa is going to come back? You'll just have to wait and see **grins evily**
To silver destiny: Tank ooz! (translation: thank you!) or Gomen, if ya wanna go all Japanese on me. Not that there's anything wronf with being Japanese. ANWAYS!! But thank you for the compliment! I'm glad you think my story is kewl! YEAH!!!!
To reviewers in general: for my one-and-only-blah-blah-blah, I cannot use Miroku of one of my guy-friends would get the wrong idea. Sry bout that! The same thing goes for: fluffy, Shippo, and Jaken (altho for the last who would ever suggest them anyway!)
Anyways (again!) Where was I? Oh yes. You guys probably want me to stop my rant and start the fic. Fine. Be that way. I hope you have fun reading my fic. Oh wait, I actually do! Heehee! Have fun!!!
ZE FICCY HAZ ARRIVED
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
Chapter 11
Una Pelea y Un Arbol (An Argument and a Tree)
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
3~~~~~Where we are starting from~~~~~3
Just then, Rin leaned in and kissed Shippo once more, this time, with more than a simple peck. Her lips were slightly parted, and she kissed him deeply. Shippo was surprised at first, but then relaxed and started to kiss her back.
As the sun set behind them, the two innocent teenagers were in their own world, where nothing bad could ever happen to them. 3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
3~~~~~And now we continue~~~~~3
Shippo and Rin broke their kiss when they started to run out of breath. They quickly moved apart, embarrassed by their confessions of feelings.
They felt extremely awkward after that, yet somewhat relieved too. At least both of them had gotten their feelings out.
However, the awkwardness overpowered any relief they might have felt, and they did not speak to each other for a while after that.
When someone did finally break the silence, it was Rin.
"Umm . . . do you have any idea where we are?" she asked Shippo.
Shippo looked around. For the first time, he realized he had absolutely no idea of their location. They were far from any landmarks he ever had seen.
"No. I don't. Do you?" he asked her in reply.
Rin shook her head. "Not a clue."
"She musta taken us pretty far, huh?" he commented.
"No duh, genius," she said. Rin was feeling tired and grumpy because of the long trek to their current location, and as a result, was more frustrated than she would normally be with her new companion, "Captain Obvious", who had sprung from her old companion "Shippo".
"Well you don't have to be mean about it!" he snapped back.
Well, there went all that emotional bonding. Down the drain, so they say.
Rin and Shippo didn't speak to each other after that for quite a while. However, this time, it was not out of awkwardness, but rather out of frustration with the other.
The sky began to darken, and, even though they were not talking to each other, both knew they had to make some type of collaborative effort if they were ever gonna set up camp. However, both were too stubborn to admit it, and just stood there, backs to each other, until the stars and moon came out, and it started to get cold out.
Finally, Shippo spoke.
"Ok. Whether we're talking to each other or not, it's dark. I'm tired. We gotta set up some type of camp for the night," he told her.
"Yeah. But where? I ask you, since you're OBVIOUSLY the brains of this operation," said Rin sarcastically.
"Dang it, Rin! Can't you just act mature for five second and listen! The longer we spend out here, the longer I'm awake, and the longer I have to talk to you!"
"Well! I had nooooo idea you felt that way! That changes EVERYTHING! Since my voice is so HORRIBLE to listen to, why don't you just leave!" Rin snapped.
"BECAUSE I DON'T WANT TO!" yelled Shippo.
His cry echoed across the empty meadow, which had been silent except for the arguing of the two teenage travelers. Both Shippo and Rin felt guilty. It was as if they had broken the peace in some type of sacred temple.
"There's a forest over that way," Rin whispered. "We can go over there. I'm sure there'll be somewhere we can stop."
"Let's go," replied Shippo in an equally hushed voice.
Rin began to walk in the direction of the forest. Shippo started walking besides her.
After three or four minutes, they still seemed no closer to the forest as they had been before. Shippo could see Rin's eyes start to droop.
"Are you getting tired?" he asked her, genuinely concerned.
"No! I'm fine. . . still as awake as I was this morning . . . couldn't . . . have . . . more . . . energy . . ." Rin's eyes drooped some more as her walking pace slowed and she began to yawn.
Rin suddenly just sat down. "Here's a good sleeping place. I like it here," she said, as she started to lay down on the dewy grass.
"Don't be silly!" chided Shippo. "You'll get sick or something! And then Sesshomaru would kill me! Or wait. . . what was that name you used to call him? Fluffy, was it?"
Rin smiled and she curled up to go to sleep, her eyes already closed. Shippo saw that she wasn't going to go anywhere by her own devices. The poor exhausted girl was asleep already!
He sighed, then picked her up, careful to grab her bag also, which, miraculously, had stayed with them the entire time. He then bounded off to the forest, with the sleeping Rin slung over his shoulder.
He entered the forest and searched around for a proper place to sleep that wasn't already inhabited by some other forest creature. It was very cold out, and even Shippo was beginning to get the shivers. He had to find a place for them to stay quickly, and preferably a place that wasn't out in the open.
He finally found a large tree growing close to the middle of the forest, with a small convenient clearing in front of it. He looked closer at the tree, and saw that it had a very large burn-scar on it.
(Author's note- for those of you who do not know what a burn scar is, it is something that you find on Giant sequoia or Redwood trees. Large fires that pass through the forest make them, but, because the trees are so large, they only get a "burn scar" on them instead of being totally burnt down. I believe that a burn scar is actually the newer layers of bark being burned off. If it happens multiple times, you can end up with a small, cave-like burn scar area that indents into the tree. If any of you have seen a picture of (or actually seen) one of those redwood trees you can drive and/or walk though, burn scars made those passages. That is the type of burn scar that Shippo found in the tree. Ok, enough with the biology lesson.)
He peered into the burn-scar. It seemed big enough for then to stay the night, and Shippo crawled in.
When he did crawl in, he discovered he had vastly misjudged the space. It had enough depth that Shippo could sit with his legs stretched out, but barely any width. The tree only had room for one occupant to fit comfortably, and there was no way Rin could sit next to him, no matter how much he tried to squeeze her in.
Sighing, Shippo crawled out of the burn-scar. He then gently picked up Rin and set her in the tree. She moved a bit and Shippo thought for a second she was awakening. However, she went right back to sleep.
Shippo, satisfied that she would be safe, jumped up to one of the lower limbs of the tree and settled in. He was cold up there by himself, but by traveling with his adopted family by watching the mistakes made by Miroku and Inuyashahe had learned that it was always good to be gentlemanly. Moreover, he had learner that it was safer for him if Rin did not wake up to find herself on his lap.
Huddling close, he tried to go to sleep, and eventually, the sandman got to him. He fell asleep listening to the quiet sounds of the forest.
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3 AI!!! KAWAII!!!! (translation: kawaii is Japanese for CUTE!!!) Anyways, I'm tired, so I'll make this author's note short. Read, review, and vote for my new OAOLOMLFEAEALFAW (I'm gonna abbreviate it now. Takes too long otherwise.)
Also, I have a new policy that I need to inform ya'll of. From now on, I have decided that I am not gonna post the next chapter I write until I get a nuber of reviews equal to the number of pages I write per chaper, k? For example, this chapter was 5 pages when I typed it on Microsoft word, so I want 5 reviews. Make sense?
OMG, this is so ironic! I PROMISED myself I'd NEVER do the withhold for reviews thingy. Oh well. I guess I am a greedy capitalist pig now. :) Don't ask. A dentist taught it to me. :) heeheeheeheehee---- um nvm.
Read and review!
Also, those of you who haven't checked it out yet, look at otaku eimi's story! The url is
http:// www.fictionpress.net/ read.php?storyid=1245079
TAKE OUT THE SPACES OF THE URL!!! THEY ARE BETWEEN "; and "www." AND ".net/" and "read.php" If you don't, the url will not work!!!
SO LOOK AT IT!!
Title of next chapter-- "Una Cambiado de Ropa y Un Intrusion
Anyways. Read and review!
Posted: 3/17
Just to tell you guys, it may be a while until I write more chapters. School is getting very overwhelming. Well, not really, but my mom thinks so, and she wants me to focus all my attention on schoolwork, which means no ficcy writing for me! But don't worry, I will be back sooner or later! And then you can read Chapter 11!!!!!
Well, until next time, adios!
From:
The amazing, incredible, supercute, indescribable, uncomparable, ultraadorable, on-a-permanent-sugar-high HYPERCHICA!!!!
