Posted: 4/9/03
HELLO! I AM BACK! Too bad for all of you who like peace and quiet.
OMG! I HAVE TO TELL YOU WHAT HAPPENED THE OTHER DAY AT SCHOOL! Ok, I'm in math drawing an OC (original character I made up) I made up. There's this guy from my English class who also sits next to me in math.
Anyways, so I'm drawing, and he asks me, "Hey, hyperchica (well, he said my real name, but there's no way I'm telling you my name!), that's pretty good." Did I neglect to mention he's a major BISHI! Anyways. So, I say, "Thanks, bishi (I really didn't say bishi, I said his name, but I'm not telling you what his name is either.)"
Anyway, he continues: "Yeah, it's really life like. It definitely looks starved. Almost dead. I like the way you drew her. She almost looks alien, as her identity is so erased."
Ok. Here's the problem: I was trying to draw a MALE, good-looking, young, buff wolf-demon. I found out later, he had mistaken my drawing for an English project we had to do. For the project, we had to draw a holocaust survivor. And he mistook my drawing for the holocaust drawing!
Geez. I need to learn how to draw better.
ANYWAYS! I must find my cartoon bishi! I need another one-and-only-love-of- my-life-for-ever-and-ever-at-least-for-a-week. If I do not find one, I will go INSANE!!!!
Not that I'm sane right now or anything.
Hm . . . I am leafing through my Big Book Of Anime Bishi. (do they have one of those? If so. . . I WANT ONE!!!!) This one's listed by show.
Hm . . . I've made it to the C's . . . COWBOY BEBOP!! OOH! I KNOW THAT ONE!!! Hm . . . who to kidnap? SPIKE!!! READY YOU'RE NOT, SO HERE I COME!
*Hyperchica hops into her magical starship NACHO and teleports to the Bebop.
Ed: Hi stranger-person! I am Edward Wung Hau Pepelu Tivrusky the fourth! Why you here?
Hyperchica: HI ed-person! I here to borrow spike-person!
Ed: OK! SPIKE-PERSON! YOU HAVE A VISITOR!
Spike: This better be good, Ed. I was sleeping!
**Ed and hyperchica start dragging Spike to the NACHO**
Spike: WHAT THE HECK!
Ed: Spike-person need a vacation! Ed see you soon!
Hyperchica: Thanks for the help, Ed!
Spike: Who are you?
Hyperchica : your worst nightmare - - I mean, most perfect dream!
**crickets**
ANYWAYS!
REVIEWER RESPONSES!!!!
****darkpride**** : ah yes. You can have Vegeta. I'm done with him. Oh, but you do have some competition. **cough**anime haiku**cough**OOOH! THAT IS THE BEST SONG EVER! Besides the song that goes, "This is the song that never eeeeeeeeends. Yes it goes one and one my frieeeeeeeeeends. Some people staaarted singing it, not knowing what it was, and they'll continue singing it forever just because this is the song that never eeeeeeeeends. Yes it goes one and one my frieeeeeeeeeends. Some people staaarted singing it, not knowing what it was, and they'll continue singing it forever just because" **all the reviewers** SHUT UP!! **hyperchica** fine. I will.
****Asher Tye**** : Um, the reason Shippo did not care the Kagome was taking a bath in the Miroku episode is because he was really, really, little. He's now seventeen. It's a **bit** different. Also, um . . . I think you're probably right that foxes have a better sense of smell than hearing, but . . . um . . . Shippo's a demon so he has SUPER SENSES!!! Anyways. Sorry you thought it was so short. If I made them any longer you all would have to wait a long time for chappys. And you don't want that, do you?
****Nightswift**** : LOL! Yeah. I have been told I am the most hyperactive person some people have ever met. O, and guess what? I may actually **GASP** have a boyfriend come my birthday. Except for the fact that I don't like the guy anymore . . . yeah. Just call me heartbreaker hyperchica, heeheehee! Not that you care. :) anyways, I'm glad you liked the part where Shippo walked in on Rin. I really didn't copy your idea! I actually never have seen that idea . . . kewl! Our brains must think alike! Actually, I based that off of one of my friends who is fearless EXCEPT when it comes to, get this, FISH! Anyways, I didn't wanna use fish, so I put in bees, since I am deathly afraid of bees. Which is really bad, since a hive of them just moved into my attic. ANYWAYS! Then I remembered the bee- like things that poison Miroku's wind tunnel, and I didn't want people to think that Rin was afraid of those, so I decided on spiders, since at the point I was writing that part, my Hamtaro-addicted sister was in the other room screaming that there was a spider and someone needed to KILLITKILLITKILLIT GET IT AWAY from her. That's where the spider came from. The rice thing . . . um . . . Rin was laughing so hard at the incident that her appetite went away. And also, the spider scared away her appetite Also, about Rin wearing Shippo's clothes . . . I'm afraid I can't do that. Her kimono has a purpose it has yet to fulfill in this ficcy! I will not elaborate tho! HAHAHAHAHAHA I am evil!!!! And sleeping next to each other for warmth . . . That is classified information!!! **looks around and whispers discreetly** where did you find that out? Are you psychic? Did fairy_tail tell you? :)
****anime haiku**** : stealing Vegeta, huh? I think you have competition . . . talk to darkpride about it, lol! OOH! I like the insane bunny! Awesome! Lemme try it!
(\ /) (o.0)
OOH! Is it ok? I hope so!
****Kikyou-sama**** : hey, no prob! I love your ficcy! Geez. I am really lucky. All of the people whose ficcys I absolutely ADORE are reviewing my ficcy! I feel so privileged. . . I checked, and they don't have Ramna 1/2 at my blockbuster. WAHHH!!! This stinks . . . oh well. Thank you for your help anyway!
****ArtanisAE**** : Iron reaver, huh? Hmm. That makes sense. Now if I could only figure out what a reaver is . . . BTW, I hope my scary friend hoshi-sama didn't scare you too much. If he did, I will "borrow" Sango's ungodly sized boomerang (WHICH I WANT!!! Will someone get me that for my birthday?) and bang him over the head. Hey, nails can only do so much! And plus, he's immune to scratching now. Even when I draw blood, if doesn't faze him. Hoshi's the best! Unless he's being bad . . . then he's still the best, but temporarily not on my good list. :) Anyways!
****SakuraAngel2001****: YEAH! MORE CHAPPYS ON YOUR STORY!!! HOORAY!!! Thanks for thinking my story is cute! :) I'm so glad you like it! Hove you read past chappy 2? Just wondering!
****Bana the Random****: Hmm . . . with a screen name like that, you'll fit in here just fine! Thank you for taking the time to review my "cute" story.
AND NOW, WITHOUT FURTHER BLABBERING ON MY PART, I would like to introduce you to the fic. :)
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Chapter 14
Carniceria (Slaughter)
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3~~~~~Where we are starting from~~~~~3
Shippo suddenly sniffed the air. His face suddenly turned very grave.
Rin noticed the change. "What's wrong?" she said, peering up at Shippo with a worried face.
He continued staring forward and his expression did not change. He only uttered on single word.
"Blood."
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3~~~~~And now we continue~~~~~3
Rin felt herself take a sharp breath. In a very shuddery voice she asked, "Where Shippo?"
Shippo's expression still did not change as he replied.
"That way," he said, and he scooped her up onto his back. He bounded off towards the direction of the stench of newly shed blood.
Rin hung on to Shippo as though her life depended on it.
'Death. More death. Must everywhere I go be cursed with death?' Rin wondered.
Shippo still paid no attention. He was too wrapped up in the smells he could detect. He didn't want to alarm Rin, but he sensed a familiar scent that stood apart from the horrible stink of death. One of a certain demon both of them knew all too well.
It didn't take Shippo that long to get to the source of all the gore. Rin felt as though she would throw up at the sight of the town.
It was a complete mess. There were no habitable houses left standing. The dirt itself seemed to be in flames. There were children crying for their parents, many of who would never return. Their tearstained faces were covered in ash and soot. Even Rin could smell death on the air. All in all, it looked as though the small village had been submerged into the depths of hell.
Rin got over her queasiness, and decided to jump into action. "Shippo! Quickly! Put me down!"
Shippo reluctantly let her down off him back. The second her feet touched the ground, she ran off into the flames.
"Rin! What in the name of nachos are you doing!" yelled Shippo after her. However, if Rin heard him, she did not respond. He dashed in after her.
He saw her kneeling over two young children, who could be no older than six at the most, consoling them and telling them it would be okay. Shippo saw two people, a woman and a man, lying lifeless near the kids. He assumed these people were their parents. Suddenly, without a word to Shippo, Rin picked the two children and ran through the flames again.
"Rin! Dang it! Come back here!" Shippo yelled again, racing after her. He found her running through the depths of the flames towards what she thought would be ground. Shippo picked Rin up again, careful not to drop the kids, and jumped to safe ground.
He put the three down, then addressed Rin.
"If you're going to go on a suicide mission, wait for back up at least!"
Rin smiled, then turned to the kids. "Do you two promise you will stay here?"
"Uh-huh," the little girl replied, and her brother nodded the same.
Rin turned to Shippo, who picked her up again. They ran back into the fire.
Rin and Shippo conducted many rescue missions, altogether saving 17 children, 7 women, and 3 men.
Rin and Shippo were just about to give up their search when they heard a cry from somewhere inside a smoldering hut.
"There!" Rin yelled. Shippo quickly bounded over in the direction of the sound.
When they got there, they found a little male child, who Rin estimated to be about three, standing in the doorway. At the sight of the two, the child ran back into the house screaming. Rin started in after him, but Shippo stopped her.
"It's too dangerous. I'll go," he told her. She nodded her consent, and he was off like a flash into the house.
Rin then heard another cry from a nearby area. This one sounded like a young woman, possibly no older than Rin herself. Rin hurried over to where she thought she heard the voice come from. She had no sooner reached there when she hear a maniacal laugh.
"Haha, you fell straight into my trap, you pathetic girl!"
Rin pivoted to look at the source of the voice. She gasped when she found out it was no other than . . .
Urissa.
"You," spat Rin.
"Yes, me. Prepare to die now, daughter of the scum of the earth!" yelled Urissa. She swooped down and slashed Rin's stomach with her tail, injecting a very week poison in it.
Urissa laughed again, then disappeared into the flames.
It was just after that that Shippo walked in, carrying the little boy.
"Rin, I found - oh my gosh . . ." Shippo saw the deep gash bleeding profusely from Rin's abdomen. He quickly scooped her up along with the boy and brought them to safety.
After setting the boy down. He lay Rin down on the grass. He took off his shirt and made it into a sort of a bandage for her stomach. He then addressed the villagers.
"Excuse me, kind townspeople, but I must take her to my friend right away. I have seen enough death for one day, as I am sure all of you have. However, if I may ask, who or what did this."
A young girl was the first to speak up. "She had a tail. It was a bad tail. It make mommy and daddy fall down and not come up no more."
Another boy added to what she said, "She had claws and ears like you, sept her ears were like a bears."
Shippo muttered to himself, "Urissa."
He then addressed the people, "Rin and I will come back to visit you sometime, but for now, I have to make sure she'll be alive long enough to visit. I hope you understand."
The townspeople all nodded their heads. All that is, except for the little boy Shippo had saved from the house.
The boy ran up to Shippo and pulled on his pant leg. "Mister, you're gonna come back right? Please come back, mister. Mujaki will miss you if you don't."
Shippo felt his heart tear in two for these young children. They would grow up like him and Rin : without parents; without a family.
"Mujaki, I promise we will come back. Don't worry," Shippo said in a soothing voice.
Shippo said his farewells to all the villagers and bounded off, carrying Rin bridal style again, her pack slung over his shoulder.
As he headed off, he whispered to her.
"Don't worry Rin. Kaede will take care of you. I'm sure of it. You will be fine."
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OH NO!
Still, how cute! Ok. I'm calm now!
I think this chappy is one of the heaviest ones I've ever written. Ok, I'll just let you get on and review.
Spike is hiding, so I must go seek him out before the next chappy!
I need **4** reviews before the next chappy!
HELLO! I AM BACK! Too bad for all of you who like peace and quiet.
OMG! I HAVE TO TELL YOU WHAT HAPPENED THE OTHER DAY AT SCHOOL! Ok, I'm in math drawing an OC (original character I made up) I made up. There's this guy from my English class who also sits next to me in math.
Anyways, so I'm drawing, and he asks me, "Hey, hyperchica (well, he said my real name, but there's no way I'm telling you my name!), that's pretty good." Did I neglect to mention he's a major BISHI! Anyways. So, I say, "Thanks, bishi (I really didn't say bishi, I said his name, but I'm not telling you what his name is either.)"
Anyway, he continues: "Yeah, it's really life like. It definitely looks starved. Almost dead. I like the way you drew her. She almost looks alien, as her identity is so erased."
Ok. Here's the problem: I was trying to draw a MALE, good-looking, young, buff wolf-demon. I found out later, he had mistaken my drawing for an English project we had to do. For the project, we had to draw a holocaust survivor. And he mistook my drawing for the holocaust drawing!
Geez. I need to learn how to draw better.
ANYWAYS! I must find my cartoon bishi! I need another one-and-only-love-of- my-life-for-ever-and-ever-at-least-for-a-week. If I do not find one, I will go INSANE!!!!
Not that I'm sane right now or anything.
Hm . . . I am leafing through my Big Book Of Anime Bishi. (do they have one of those? If so. . . I WANT ONE!!!!) This one's listed by show.
Hm . . . I've made it to the C's . . . COWBOY BEBOP!! OOH! I KNOW THAT ONE!!! Hm . . . who to kidnap? SPIKE!!! READY YOU'RE NOT, SO HERE I COME!
*Hyperchica hops into her magical starship NACHO and teleports to the Bebop.
Ed: Hi stranger-person! I am Edward Wung Hau Pepelu Tivrusky the fourth! Why you here?
Hyperchica: HI ed-person! I here to borrow spike-person!
Ed: OK! SPIKE-PERSON! YOU HAVE A VISITOR!
Spike: This better be good, Ed. I was sleeping!
**Ed and hyperchica start dragging Spike to the NACHO**
Spike: WHAT THE HECK!
Ed: Spike-person need a vacation! Ed see you soon!
Hyperchica: Thanks for the help, Ed!
Spike: Who are you?
Hyperchica : your worst nightmare - - I mean, most perfect dream!
**crickets**
ANYWAYS!
REVIEWER RESPONSES!!!!
****darkpride**** : ah yes. You can have Vegeta. I'm done with him. Oh, but you do have some competition. **cough**anime haiku**cough**OOOH! THAT IS THE BEST SONG EVER! Besides the song that goes, "This is the song that never eeeeeeeeends. Yes it goes one and one my frieeeeeeeeeends. Some people staaarted singing it, not knowing what it was, and they'll continue singing it forever just because this is the song that never eeeeeeeeends. Yes it goes one and one my frieeeeeeeeeends. Some people staaarted singing it, not knowing what it was, and they'll continue singing it forever just because" **all the reviewers** SHUT UP!! **hyperchica** fine. I will.
****Asher Tye**** : Um, the reason Shippo did not care the Kagome was taking a bath in the Miroku episode is because he was really, really, little. He's now seventeen. It's a **bit** different. Also, um . . . I think you're probably right that foxes have a better sense of smell than hearing, but . . . um . . . Shippo's a demon so he has SUPER SENSES!!! Anyways. Sorry you thought it was so short. If I made them any longer you all would have to wait a long time for chappys. And you don't want that, do you?
****Nightswift**** : LOL! Yeah. I have been told I am the most hyperactive person some people have ever met. O, and guess what? I may actually **GASP** have a boyfriend come my birthday. Except for the fact that I don't like the guy anymore . . . yeah. Just call me heartbreaker hyperchica, heeheehee! Not that you care. :) anyways, I'm glad you liked the part where Shippo walked in on Rin. I really didn't copy your idea! I actually never have seen that idea . . . kewl! Our brains must think alike! Actually, I based that off of one of my friends who is fearless EXCEPT when it comes to, get this, FISH! Anyways, I didn't wanna use fish, so I put in bees, since I am deathly afraid of bees. Which is really bad, since a hive of them just moved into my attic. ANYWAYS! Then I remembered the bee- like things that poison Miroku's wind tunnel, and I didn't want people to think that Rin was afraid of those, so I decided on spiders, since at the point I was writing that part, my Hamtaro-addicted sister was in the other room screaming that there was a spider and someone needed to KILLITKILLITKILLIT GET IT AWAY from her. That's where the spider came from. The rice thing . . . um . . . Rin was laughing so hard at the incident that her appetite went away. And also, the spider scared away her appetite Also, about Rin wearing Shippo's clothes . . . I'm afraid I can't do that. Her kimono has a purpose it has yet to fulfill in this ficcy! I will not elaborate tho! HAHAHAHAHAHA I am evil!!!! And sleeping next to each other for warmth . . . That is classified information!!! **looks around and whispers discreetly** where did you find that out? Are you psychic? Did fairy_tail tell you? :)
****anime haiku**** : stealing Vegeta, huh? I think you have competition . . . talk to darkpride about it, lol! OOH! I like the insane bunny! Awesome! Lemme try it!
(\ /) (o.0)
OOH! Is it ok? I hope so!
****Kikyou-sama**** : hey, no prob! I love your ficcy! Geez. I am really lucky. All of the people whose ficcys I absolutely ADORE are reviewing my ficcy! I feel so privileged. . . I checked, and they don't have Ramna 1/2 at my blockbuster. WAHHH!!! This stinks . . . oh well. Thank you for your help anyway!
****ArtanisAE**** : Iron reaver, huh? Hmm. That makes sense. Now if I could only figure out what a reaver is . . . BTW, I hope my scary friend hoshi-sama didn't scare you too much. If he did, I will "borrow" Sango's ungodly sized boomerang (WHICH I WANT!!! Will someone get me that for my birthday?) and bang him over the head. Hey, nails can only do so much! And plus, he's immune to scratching now. Even when I draw blood, if doesn't faze him. Hoshi's the best! Unless he's being bad . . . then he's still the best, but temporarily not on my good list. :) Anyways!
****SakuraAngel2001****: YEAH! MORE CHAPPYS ON YOUR STORY!!! HOORAY!!! Thanks for thinking my story is cute! :) I'm so glad you like it! Hove you read past chappy 2? Just wondering!
****Bana the Random****: Hmm . . . with a screen name like that, you'll fit in here just fine! Thank you for taking the time to review my "cute" story.
AND NOW, WITHOUT FURTHER BLABBERING ON MY PART, I would like to introduce you to the fic. :)
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
Chapter 14
Carniceria (Slaughter)
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
3~~~~~Where we are starting from~~~~~3
Shippo suddenly sniffed the air. His face suddenly turned very grave.
Rin noticed the change. "What's wrong?" she said, peering up at Shippo with a worried face.
He continued staring forward and his expression did not change. He only uttered on single word.
"Blood."
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
3~~~~~And now we continue~~~~~3
Rin felt herself take a sharp breath. In a very shuddery voice she asked, "Where Shippo?"
Shippo's expression still did not change as he replied.
"That way," he said, and he scooped her up onto his back. He bounded off towards the direction of the stench of newly shed blood.
Rin hung on to Shippo as though her life depended on it.
'Death. More death. Must everywhere I go be cursed with death?' Rin wondered.
Shippo still paid no attention. He was too wrapped up in the smells he could detect. He didn't want to alarm Rin, but he sensed a familiar scent that stood apart from the horrible stink of death. One of a certain demon both of them knew all too well.
It didn't take Shippo that long to get to the source of all the gore. Rin felt as though she would throw up at the sight of the town.
It was a complete mess. There were no habitable houses left standing. The dirt itself seemed to be in flames. There were children crying for their parents, many of who would never return. Their tearstained faces were covered in ash and soot. Even Rin could smell death on the air. All in all, it looked as though the small village had been submerged into the depths of hell.
Rin got over her queasiness, and decided to jump into action. "Shippo! Quickly! Put me down!"
Shippo reluctantly let her down off him back. The second her feet touched the ground, she ran off into the flames.
"Rin! What in the name of nachos are you doing!" yelled Shippo after her. However, if Rin heard him, she did not respond. He dashed in after her.
He saw her kneeling over two young children, who could be no older than six at the most, consoling them and telling them it would be okay. Shippo saw two people, a woman and a man, lying lifeless near the kids. He assumed these people were their parents. Suddenly, without a word to Shippo, Rin picked the two children and ran through the flames again.
"Rin! Dang it! Come back here!" Shippo yelled again, racing after her. He found her running through the depths of the flames towards what she thought would be ground. Shippo picked Rin up again, careful not to drop the kids, and jumped to safe ground.
He put the three down, then addressed Rin.
"If you're going to go on a suicide mission, wait for back up at least!"
Rin smiled, then turned to the kids. "Do you two promise you will stay here?"
"Uh-huh," the little girl replied, and her brother nodded the same.
Rin turned to Shippo, who picked her up again. They ran back into the fire.
Rin and Shippo conducted many rescue missions, altogether saving 17 children, 7 women, and 3 men.
Rin and Shippo were just about to give up their search when they heard a cry from somewhere inside a smoldering hut.
"There!" Rin yelled. Shippo quickly bounded over in the direction of the sound.
When they got there, they found a little male child, who Rin estimated to be about three, standing in the doorway. At the sight of the two, the child ran back into the house screaming. Rin started in after him, but Shippo stopped her.
"It's too dangerous. I'll go," he told her. She nodded her consent, and he was off like a flash into the house.
Rin then heard another cry from a nearby area. This one sounded like a young woman, possibly no older than Rin herself. Rin hurried over to where she thought she heard the voice come from. She had no sooner reached there when she hear a maniacal laugh.
"Haha, you fell straight into my trap, you pathetic girl!"
Rin pivoted to look at the source of the voice. She gasped when she found out it was no other than . . .
Urissa.
"You," spat Rin.
"Yes, me. Prepare to die now, daughter of the scum of the earth!" yelled Urissa. She swooped down and slashed Rin's stomach with her tail, injecting a very week poison in it.
Urissa laughed again, then disappeared into the flames.
It was just after that that Shippo walked in, carrying the little boy.
"Rin, I found - oh my gosh . . ." Shippo saw the deep gash bleeding profusely from Rin's abdomen. He quickly scooped her up along with the boy and brought them to safety.
After setting the boy down. He lay Rin down on the grass. He took off his shirt and made it into a sort of a bandage for her stomach. He then addressed the villagers.
"Excuse me, kind townspeople, but I must take her to my friend right away. I have seen enough death for one day, as I am sure all of you have. However, if I may ask, who or what did this."
A young girl was the first to speak up. "She had a tail. It was a bad tail. It make mommy and daddy fall down and not come up no more."
Another boy added to what she said, "She had claws and ears like you, sept her ears were like a bears."
Shippo muttered to himself, "Urissa."
He then addressed the people, "Rin and I will come back to visit you sometime, but for now, I have to make sure she'll be alive long enough to visit. I hope you understand."
The townspeople all nodded their heads. All that is, except for the little boy Shippo had saved from the house.
The boy ran up to Shippo and pulled on his pant leg. "Mister, you're gonna come back right? Please come back, mister. Mujaki will miss you if you don't."
Shippo felt his heart tear in two for these young children. They would grow up like him and Rin : without parents; without a family.
"Mujaki, I promise we will come back. Don't worry," Shippo said in a soothing voice.
Shippo said his farewells to all the villagers and bounded off, carrying Rin bridal style again, her pack slung over his shoulder.
As he headed off, he whispered to her.
"Don't worry Rin. Kaede will take care of you. I'm sure of it. You will be fine."
3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3~~~~~3
OH NO!
Still, how cute! Ok. I'm calm now!
I think this chappy is one of the heaviest ones I've ever written. Ok, I'll just let you get on and review.
Spike is hiding, so I must go seek him out before the next chappy!
I need **4** reviews before the next chappy!
