Yes, yes, I haven't updated this for such a long long time. Gomen Nasai!!!!! I've been co-writing a story about a character in this story and another. It'll be up once I convince my partner to type it up and post it. It's getting really bad though, I haven't worked on this story long enough to forget what chapter I'm on… 11 right? I'm going to try to end the story with this chapter so I won't get comfoosed even more. Whatever, my response to your review:
Tikiru: Haha, write more soon… Took me a whole month to start again. Gomen… Yes, we were very drunk when we were chatting. Haha… lets do it again soon!!! LoL!
[+]LinDa[+]TraN[+]: yep, Jamie and Kina were close before he asked her out… It should have been awkward cuz of that, but Kina is weird and Jamie is cheesy (maybe it's his name…) he was going to get powers, until a little someone from school said she wanted to be in the story to kill someone… This is where all the humor comes in… It'll be very hard….
Yuko: Hiy TWIN!!! I am writing a side story, except its not really side, it's more like afterwards…. Too late now… your episodes will end with the last chapter just because this chapter is the last chapter, no matter how long (or short) I have to make it. I'm ending the story now!!!
Dragon Princess Yuki: You get to kill him in this chapter… (sry bout the spoiler ppl, but don't blame me, I'm responding. Blame the one who brought it up)
Suko: YEAH!! You finally got on the internet!!! Good going!! But you won't really see this, maybe some one will tell you… whatever, this is kind of pointless…
How sad, I got so little reviews this time…. O well…. Time to start the sad, happy, funky, confusing ending.
Chapter Eleven:
This is the end of the story, Kina will be able to live her life, something will happen to Naijou and Takeshi will be free to find Chi.
Naijou grabbed Karikoshu by the wrist and teleported to the park on Earth. His eyes glowed blood red as he scanned the park for his half brother. Kari sat on the ground by his side, still looking like a scared cat in her black dress. She looked nervously up at him and saw fury on his face,
"TAKESHI!!!! SHOW YOURSELF!!!" The grown demon flared his arms wildly. "WHO'S THE COWARD NOW? HUH?"
Calmly, Takeshi appeared a yard away from his half brother. "Stop yelling. I can hear you clearly. The girl obviously doesn't need to hear more of your voice."
"Imbecile. Look at the girl, and tell me what you see in her eyes." Naijou glared at Takeshi waiting for him to respond. Kari shook, oblivious to what was happening to her.
"Idiot. I know what happened to her, and I know what's going to happen. To you and her." The young demon turned into a black mist and the mist was swept away by a small breeze.
The odd couple was left in the park alone, until they heard someone running toward them again. They turned their gaze to see Jamie running toward Naijou with a samurai's sword. Jamie said something under his breath, "I slay you now demon."
Suddenly, a young girl, about 5'2" stepped our of a purple mist and Jamie was pushed over by the rampaging female. She looked a bit short to the three standing off in the park. She had semi-long hair tied back in a low ponytail, and she wore purple glasses, which behind them was a childishly evil smirk. She held in her hands a seemingly large mallet and continued to charge directly at Naijou.
"outta my way! Naijou, you dumb ol' perverted demon!!! Prepare to die by my wooden mallet of DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMM!" As she lifted the mallet to begin her swing, lightning crashed and wolves howled. The small girl swung the mallet back then forward toward Naijou. Kari lunged out of the way with her youthful agility. Naijou, on the other hand, was struck dumbly out of shock. She whacked him square in the face and he flew to the ground with a thud and a grunt.
"Who the hell are you? And what was that for?" Naijou stared at the girl with an annoyed tone. He stood up staggeredly to regenerate his power from the blow. He made a fist then pointed two fingers (pointer and pinky) at the girl. Green bolts, crackled around his fingers and began to form a small ball of energy.
Once again, the girl slammed Naijou with her mallet. He flew back into the air. Landing on his feet, with his ball of energy in tacked by his right hand; he thrust out his left hand to gain control of the mallet. He hurled into the air and shot his ball of energy at it. The mallet exploded in a blast of green and black.
The little girl was furious; her head grew three sizes to yell at the demon, "YOU BIG FAT POOPOO HEAD! THAT WAS MY FAVORITE WEAPON!! ARGH!! YOU'LL PAY FOR THIS OLD MAN!!" She shrunk back to her normal size and charged toward Naijou.
She began punching him furiously in the stomach at the speed of light, screaming frantically as she went along. Naijou tried to retort her demeaning comment but was unable to get anything out because of her amazing strength. Finally she ended this single assault with a godlike uppercut. Again Naijou went flying through the sky, this time to land flat on his back.
The girl quickly ran over to Jamie, in his state of daze, while she had time to prep another attack before Naijou could regenerate. She reached for his sword and took it from his limp hands recklessly still screaming, "Gimme that!"
She ran to the majorly injured Naijou and thrust the sword into his chest. Then she retracted the sword brutally and again stabbed him. Continually she stabbed and slashed the demon, over and over until she could find no other place in his chest to puncture. She dropped the sword carelessly and clapped her hands together. She then kicked the demon into the sky, once again to see him fall like a large voodoo doll. "Well that was easy…and fun… Mwahahahaha!" She began to do a little victory dance jumping up and down, "Oh yeah! Victory for meee!!! Ahaha! You cheesy dumb dead demon! I WIN I WIN I WIN!! Laterz old pepoes!" She ran off and slowly disappeared into another breeze of purple.
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Takeshi, who was standing in a dark alley awaiting the death of Naijou felt a burden leave his spirit. "Yes! I am finally free of the stupid demon. I can live on my own now!!" He walked down the street of a city to find a place to eat decent food.
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Kina once again gained control of her own body and ran to Jamie with open arms. Jamie caught her lovingly and held her tight. "I missed you so much! I love you Kina, I love you." He kissed her on the forehead as he still held her tightly.
"Jamie, thank you. Thank you so much! I love you too, and I'll never leave you as long as our love lasts." The two of them stood in the park, as the sun rose into the sky. Rini and Eric came running toward them.
"Kina!!" Rini screamed to her friend urgently. "Kina your okay!"
"Good goin' Jamie. You got your girl back" Eric and Rini stood facing them. Rini leaning against Eric, who had his arm around her. Saya, who had arrived with Rini and Eric, fluttered up to Kina's ear.
"There is something you must now." Kina let go of Jamie and followed Saya to the mushroom. Saya sat herself on the mushroom and told Kina of the destiny that had been fulfilled. "Naijou has been killed for your sake, and for the sake of another. You have revived the spirit of the Mistress before you and freed a young boy to live his life freely. The crystal you possess has been transferred to the Mistress and your mission has been completed. You may live the rest of your life as a normal girl." Saya disappeared into the light of the sun and Kina was left standing by the mushroom.
Jamie came up behind her and hugged her waist. "Come on, you've been through a lot, let's go home now." She sighed and began to tell Jamie about what happened and what Saya had just said. The four friends walked side by side by side by side to the entrance of the park.
THE END!!! Haha just kidding. It's not really the end, it's the end of the story. My next story (co-written) is about Takeshi's later life. It won't be posted by me, it will be posted by my partner, Tikiru!! Sorry if the ending came abruptly or whatever, sorry to those of you (if any) who liked Naijou.
Gomen, it's so short… But that's how I write… So your probably wondering about a lot of stuff.
Who is the girl who killed Naijou?
Her name is Yuki (a reader, who wasn't pleased with Naijou) She felt he was a very cheesy, and perverted demon, as she said in the story. She asked if she could kill him, so I agreed to put her part in, somewhat because I needed someone to die, I need some humor, and I didn't really like Naijou either. So instead of having a long paragraph of explanation, I'll give her script.
Yuki: Konnichiwa!! Minna-san!!! ^o^ Slaying demons is so fun! I'm a very brutal girl, and don't call me short because I'm not. Demons are freakin meant to be demonic!! Not perverted and cheesy!!! I knew Jamie wasn't gonna get the job done, so I did it for him!! YEAH!!! And my wooden mallet of DOOM… (*lightning crashes and wolves howl*) I've got a ton of them… I just wanted another excuse to torture him, even though I didn't need one.
Jamie: So why did you have to take my sword?
Yuki: I needed a weapon! DaH!!!! **whacks Jamie on the head**
