Shout Outs: Everyone who reviewed gets S'mores!!! Mmmm, I love smores.
Okay, I I know that there are people out ther who want to be in my fanfic,
and that truly flatters me, but I only need profiles for guys now, AND I
need some girl and boy residents of the Mansion *that you shall learn about
in this chapter*. These people will be only one time appearances except
for three, and so will not be big parts, but for those of you who stil want
in here, this is your chance!!!! I need about 8 brooklyn guys still!!!
Dreamer: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you still like my fanfic. LOL.
SparkHiggins: I love smirks too, but I haven't found anyone who can do a smirk as well as Spot Conlon (Gabe Damon). I don't think anyone can. Race does have great facial expressions, and have you noticed the way he walks out of the distribution center when they're getting ready to strike? It's great!!! I absolutely love it!!! If I wasn't totally fallen for Spot, Race would definitley have my vote! Oh and thanks for the profile!!! You'll be in soon, I promise.
StupidChocolateGurl: Most of the time I don't view Spot like that either, but then normally his sister doesn't get dissed, and neither does he about as many times as she did to him in ONE day. Besides, I figured, and Spot knows, that Jaede needs a lesson taught to her. Glad your still enjoying it though.
Bulldogchik05: Okay, thanks for the review, even though you already read the story when you checked it for errors. And hope you like this next chapter! Thank-you sooooo much for checking my story before I post it, you are an awesome Beta Reader!!! Hey I've been reading your story, and I absolutely love it!!!
Artemis-chan: Glad you liked the chapter. This one gets into where Anya and Nicole went. I think you'll like it, although it has a defenite cliffhanger, and you'll end up screaming at the computer screen, "More More More!!!" lol. Go read.
Raven: Sorry I haven't put you in yet, but you will be in soon. Jaede is going to be getting into a lot more trouble before the end of this story, and I'm not exactly sure how it will end, but I do know that it will make every single one of you mad. Lol.
Race da Hottie: Yes Cynic tends to speak before she thinks, a lot of the time. Anywayz, continue reading and reviewing!!!
Arlene: Thank you so much for the big review, those are normally few and far between, but with the help of a few of you there are more than I'd hoped for. And Jaede she ain't forgiving, just understanding. She realizes that she deserves what she gets. Lol.
Eternal-Sugar-High: he he, I know what you mean by terrible memory, I've got one too, although not quite as bad as some peoples. He he.
Felicity: Yeah!!!! A boy character!!! I luv U!!! I like the name Falcon, maybe something like. Harts, or Mantis, or Bridge. Anywayz, Thank you sooooo much for sending him my way, you have my everlasting gratitude!!!
Chapter 6: The Hunter
Anya's POV
The Hunter; I remember my first meeting with him. He hasn't changed much, however where he is has changed. I first met him in 2004, he was a freak, and everyone, including myself, would make fun of him. We called him Lucifer, The Devil, Satan, Red Eyes, The Hunter, and other equally degrading names, and he never said a word. He really didn't have to. Just one look from his red eyes would shut you up, supposing that you didn't run off screaming first. I never told anyone about my meeting with him. I simply kept it to myself and hoped it had all been a nightmare, but seeing him here, in 1899, confirmed the reality of it all.
Jaede had gone off for a walk. That's what she does when she's angry, confused, or frustrated, and today she was all of those. Nicole and I didn't follow her, although we probably should have because then we wouldn't be in this mess. We were just sitting on the Lodging House steps, waiting for Jaede to come back, when he came. Nicole saw him first and pointed him out to me. I didn't recognize him until he looked at me and smiled his evil smile. I instantly stiffened. Then tried to get Nicole's attantion before The Hunter reached us, but now I realize that even if I had, I would never have been able to get away.
The minute he spoke we were hypnotized. If had asked us to kill ourselves by slitting our throats, we would have gladly obeyed. To this day, that voice haunts me. It was like a lion roaring, a kitten meowing, water rushing down a river, and the wind rustling through trees. It was commanding, but gentle and luring. He told us to come with him, that he would explain everything, and we belived him. We followed him, without question, to a mansion. It reminded me of a haunted house, perhaps that's what it really was, I don't know. The first thing that broke the hypnosis was the terrifying screams that came from inside the mansion. We, Nicole and I, fearfully turned, but we were entrapped inside the fenced yard. This was the first time that I'd heard The Hunter laugh, and it sent shivers down my spine. Little did I know that I was to experience that laugh many more times in the next few days.
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Sorry that it was a really short chapter, but it really didn't need anymore. If there had been more then it wouldn't have had the same dramatic ending. Since it was such a short chapter I'm planning on updating in just a few days so that it won't be such a big wait.
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Sweets Conlon: How come ya haven't reviewed? I expected you to come back and find out what I did with your character that would make you so happy. Anywayz, get back soon.
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Dreamer: Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you still like my fanfic. LOL.
SparkHiggins: I love smirks too, but I haven't found anyone who can do a smirk as well as Spot Conlon (Gabe Damon). I don't think anyone can. Race does have great facial expressions, and have you noticed the way he walks out of the distribution center when they're getting ready to strike? It's great!!! I absolutely love it!!! If I wasn't totally fallen for Spot, Race would definitley have my vote! Oh and thanks for the profile!!! You'll be in soon, I promise.
StupidChocolateGurl: Most of the time I don't view Spot like that either, but then normally his sister doesn't get dissed, and neither does he about as many times as she did to him in ONE day. Besides, I figured, and Spot knows, that Jaede needs a lesson taught to her. Glad your still enjoying it though.
Bulldogchik05: Okay, thanks for the review, even though you already read the story when you checked it for errors. And hope you like this next chapter! Thank-you sooooo much for checking my story before I post it, you are an awesome Beta Reader!!! Hey I've been reading your story, and I absolutely love it!!!
Artemis-chan: Glad you liked the chapter. This one gets into where Anya and Nicole went. I think you'll like it, although it has a defenite cliffhanger, and you'll end up screaming at the computer screen, "More More More!!!" lol. Go read.
Raven: Sorry I haven't put you in yet, but you will be in soon. Jaede is going to be getting into a lot more trouble before the end of this story, and I'm not exactly sure how it will end, but I do know that it will make every single one of you mad. Lol.
Race da Hottie: Yes Cynic tends to speak before she thinks, a lot of the time. Anywayz, continue reading and reviewing!!!
Arlene: Thank you so much for the big review, those are normally few and far between, but with the help of a few of you there are more than I'd hoped for. And Jaede she ain't forgiving, just understanding. She realizes that she deserves what she gets. Lol.
Eternal-Sugar-High: he he, I know what you mean by terrible memory, I've got one too, although not quite as bad as some peoples. He he.
Felicity: Yeah!!!! A boy character!!! I luv U!!! I like the name Falcon, maybe something like. Harts, or Mantis, or Bridge. Anywayz, Thank you sooooo much for sending him my way, you have my everlasting gratitude!!!
Chapter 6: The Hunter
Anya's POV
The Hunter; I remember my first meeting with him. He hasn't changed much, however where he is has changed. I first met him in 2004, he was a freak, and everyone, including myself, would make fun of him. We called him Lucifer, The Devil, Satan, Red Eyes, The Hunter, and other equally degrading names, and he never said a word. He really didn't have to. Just one look from his red eyes would shut you up, supposing that you didn't run off screaming first. I never told anyone about my meeting with him. I simply kept it to myself and hoped it had all been a nightmare, but seeing him here, in 1899, confirmed the reality of it all.
Jaede had gone off for a walk. That's what she does when she's angry, confused, or frustrated, and today she was all of those. Nicole and I didn't follow her, although we probably should have because then we wouldn't be in this mess. We were just sitting on the Lodging House steps, waiting for Jaede to come back, when he came. Nicole saw him first and pointed him out to me. I didn't recognize him until he looked at me and smiled his evil smile. I instantly stiffened. Then tried to get Nicole's attantion before The Hunter reached us, but now I realize that even if I had, I would never have been able to get away.
The minute he spoke we were hypnotized. If had asked us to kill ourselves by slitting our throats, we would have gladly obeyed. To this day, that voice haunts me. It was like a lion roaring, a kitten meowing, water rushing down a river, and the wind rustling through trees. It was commanding, but gentle and luring. He told us to come with him, that he would explain everything, and we belived him. We followed him, without question, to a mansion. It reminded me of a haunted house, perhaps that's what it really was, I don't know. The first thing that broke the hypnosis was the terrifying screams that came from inside the mansion. We, Nicole and I, fearfully turned, but we were entrapped inside the fenced yard. This was the first time that I'd heard The Hunter laugh, and it sent shivers down my spine. Little did I know that I was to experience that laugh many more times in the next few days.
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Sorry that it was a really short chapter, but it really didn't need anymore. If there had been more then it wouldn't have had the same dramatic ending. Since it was such a short chapter I'm planning on updating in just a few days so that it won't be such a big wait.
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Sweets Conlon: How come ya haven't reviewed? I expected you to come back and find out what I did with your character that would make you so happy. Anywayz, get back soon.
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