Glacier Ham 2
By Caroline, a.k.a. puppyeyes
Hamtaro by Someone, but not me!
Bijou kissed Hamtaro as he set off to the bank, where he worked in Hamtropolis. "Goodbye, honey. See you soon!" he called as he ran out the door. Bijou closed the door and served breakfast for the twins, Daisy and Susan. Daisy looked just like Bijou. She had snow-white fur, and tied beautiful silk flowers, attached to elastic bands in her hair. Today, she was wearing pink carnations, for Valentine's Day. Susan took after Hamtaro. She was orange and cream colored, with pink bows on her ears. The kids finished breakfast and finished getting ready for school. They got on the bus, and Bijou packed her bag with Piano Easy Books, pencils, staff paper, pens, and some loose sheet music. Oh, and a pack of gum. She locked up the house and started her car, which Hamtaro had made, based on a model from the boy-scout pine derby. Bijou pulled out of the driveway and started to drive to Hamtropolis Conservatory, where she taught piano lessons. At two-thirty, the bus pulled up at an intersection. Daisy, Susan, and, Pashmina and Dexter's son, Gregory. They went into the building and started to do homework. Bijou, who was on her break, noticed them, and beckoned them to come in. At the bank, Hamtaro was not having such a pleasant time, unless you call being tied up in the Executive's Bathroom, hanging over the sink, with all of your blood rushing into your head pleasant.
That's all for Chapter One. If you review, answer these questions: Did I actually write a reasonable-length chapter, or are they still too short? Based on the quality of my writing, how old would you assume that I am? Suggestions? Flames? Other comments/questions that you feel like asking, related to me or Hamtaro.
Bijou kissed Hamtaro as he set off to the bank, where he worked in Hamtropolis. "Goodbye, honey. See you soon!" he called as he ran out the door. Bijou closed the door and served breakfast for the twins, Daisy and Susan. Daisy looked just like Bijou. She had snow-white fur, and tied beautiful silk flowers, attached to elastic bands in her hair. Today, she was wearing pink carnations, for Valentine's Day. Susan took after Hamtaro. She was orange and cream colored, with pink bows on her ears. The kids finished breakfast and finished getting ready for school. They got on the bus, and Bijou packed her bag with Piano Easy Books, pencils, staff paper, pens, and some loose sheet music. Oh, and a pack of gum. She locked up the house and started her car, which Hamtaro had made, based on a model from the boy-scout pine derby. Bijou pulled out of the driveway and started to drive to Hamtropolis Conservatory, where she taught piano lessons. At two-thirty, the bus pulled up at an intersection. Daisy, Susan, and, Pashmina and Dexter's son, Gregory. They went into the building and started to do homework. Bijou, who was on her break, noticed them, and beckoned them to come in. At the bank, Hamtaro was not having such a pleasant time, unless you call being tied up in the Executive's Bathroom, hanging over the sink, with all of your blood rushing into your head pleasant.
That's all for Chapter One. If you review, answer these questions: Did I actually write a reasonable-length chapter, or are they still too short? Based on the quality of my writing, how old would you assume that I am? Suggestions? Flames? Other comments/questions that you feel like asking, related to me or Hamtaro.
