I have a feeling this is going to be a very long chapter, I can just FEEL IT!!! Hey I'm looking for a beta reader writer so if anyone would it would
hopefully be the end of my bad spelling and grammar.

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After diner George occupied himself with Thayet. Though he didn't listen to what she was saying instead he was watching her every move like a cat watching a mouse that had strayed into the pantry. He looked her up an down and every now and then he would grunt as if in agreement but he wasn't really listening.

He did enjoy the sound of her voice. It was much more feminine then Alana's, witch had become masculine after all the years of pretending to be a boy.

This was going well he thought but he wouldn't break it off to Alana. What if this didn't work out he would need someone.

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Thayet was talking to George, she could tell he wasn't listening but that didn't matter she could see he was interested in her by the way he was watching her. She knew of coarse that she would need to work on his dress sense. That was something that Alana knew nothing about and she would give him land and make him a lord. It was one thing to have some excitement but it was another for him not to be respectable. What would they think of her if she turned up to a ball with a man who owned no land and kept daggers in his shoe?

She should break it off with Jon tonight, when she was finished here. That would leave her time free to get George to fall for her.

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Jon who had been watching George and Thayet thought, well Cooper your not perfect after all.

It didn't bother him that Thayet was being unfaithful to him he didn't need her any more she was just dead wait on his shoulders now that he new Cooper was not so grate after all.

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Alana had given up. Every time she had tried to talk to George Thayet had cut in over her and George didn't even try to stop her. Now she knew for sure he didn't love her any more. She ran from the dining room to her bedchambers.

She flung herself on the bed when there was a soft knock on the door.

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Alana opened the door and Raoul stepped in. He looked at her face and knew something was wrong. Her face was tear streaked and her hair was dishevelled.

He stepped inside and sat her on the bed.

"What's wrong."

"Its George" she said softly. She didn't need to say any more. Raoul held her tightly.

She looked up at him; she stared in to his eyes and kissed him. Just then the door opened and Buri said Alana I ju. she stared and ran from the.

"Buri" Raoul called after her he looked at Alana and ran after Buri.

Alana called after him but he ignored her.

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Well it wasn't that long after all ah well. Ok I need 5 more reviews if you want me to write more I really want to keep going with this story I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!