Chap. 8 Defeated?
*Sob.* How could you do this to me? Days now and I've only gotten two reviews for my latest chapter! I probably shouldn't be complaining, some people never get reviews. I'm also very angry right now because my sort-of column was removed! The jerks! Why should it be banned just because it's not a fic? PEOPLE LIKED IT! I GOT SIX REVIEWS! If you agree with me please let me know, this is so cruel. Well anyway here's your chapter.
The girls had been walking down the road for about five minutes when Hiei rejoined them. He looked around, "Where's Kurama and that other girl?"
Botan explained the situation and they were on their way again.
~~~~~~~~ Meanwhile ~~~~~~~~
Yusuke blinked at his little screen, "I can't believe we just lost two of our toughest fighters because no one was smart enough to think to bring money when they ate."
Inuyasha shook his head sadly, "They're doomed."
Just then the Storyteller appeared, "Things are not going according to plan," it said obviously irritated. "They were only supposed to get the handsome fox demon in the human body, not this cold creature. And now he's stuck doing dishes. How am I supposed to get them to fall in love with that short little thing?" (A/N: I don't want loads of flames from those of you who want to marry Hiei out there so let me just make this clear, these are the Storytellers opinions not mine.)
"WHAT!" said Inuyasha and Yusuke at once.
"I told you I'm trying to make a story and nothing makes a story better than a love tangle. I was hoping they would all fall for Kurama and one would kill the other two just to get him." It ignored the two boiling boys behind it. "Oh well, maybe I can still work this out since it's obvious those two girls, Keiko and Kagome, seem to like you. I'll need to get rid of the demon and blue girl though."
"YOU'RE EVEN MORE NUTS THAN I THOUGHT!" yelled Yusuke. "You're sick manipulating people like that, and it's not going to work anyway. Hiei's a lot tougher than you think."
The Storyteller smiled, "We'll just have to see about that."
~~~~~~~ Meanwhile ~~~~~~~
The gang had gotten to a cave in the mountains where the Storyteller lived. They were about to go in when Hiei saw something sparkle above them on a near-by summit.
He turned to the girls, "You go on ahead I just want to check something out." Before they had a chance to argue (this was pretty much what Kurama had said) the fire demon jumped out of view. They steamed for a moment before heading in, they wanted to get to Inuyasha and Yusuke as soon as possible.
Hiei landed on the summit and looked around. Inside its cave the Storyteller said a spell and pulled on what looked like invisible threads.
Suddenly a huge rock landed on Hiei, pining him to the ground.
Yup that's where he's going to stay.
The great Hiei, defeated...
by a rock....
Yeah right.
Several seconds later seconds later what was left of the rock was raining down on some cows a few fields over.
Hiei shook some rubble from him and was about to leave when he saw what had been glittering. It was a strange looking mirror. His I eyes widened as he saw what was in it. It was Yukina, and she was being tortured! He knew this was most likely a trap but he couldn't afford to take that chance. He leaped off in the direction of the well Kagome had told him about.
Inside the cave Yusuke swore, Hiei had been the last defense the girls had. They'd get killed for sure now.
Behind him the Storyteller laughed, "You see, not even that fire demon could defeat me. I didn't even have to fight him. But don't worry I still have big plans for this story, and you will have a big part in them." Still laughing it reached into its robes, pulled out something and began to chant. Inuyasha looked at what it was holding and his eyes widened, it was the Shikon no Toma.
*Sob.* How could you do this to me? Days now and I've only gotten two reviews for my latest chapter! I probably shouldn't be complaining, some people never get reviews. I'm also very angry right now because my sort-of column was removed! The jerks! Why should it be banned just because it's not a fic? PEOPLE LIKED IT! I GOT SIX REVIEWS! If you agree with me please let me know, this is so cruel. Well anyway here's your chapter.
The girls had been walking down the road for about five minutes when Hiei rejoined them. He looked around, "Where's Kurama and that other girl?"
Botan explained the situation and they were on their way again.
~~~~~~~~ Meanwhile ~~~~~~~~
Yusuke blinked at his little screen, "I can't believe we just lost two of our toughest fighters because no one was smart enough to think to bring money when they ate."
Inuyasha shook his head sadly, "They're doomed."
Just then the Storyteller appeared, "Things are not going according to plan," it said obviously irritated. "They were only supposed to get the handsome fox demon in the human body, not this cold creature. And now he's stuck doing dishes. How am I supposed to get them to fall in love with that short little thing?" (A/N: I don't want loads of flames from those of you who want to marry Hiei out there so let me just make this clear, these are the Storytellers opinions not mine.)
"WHAT!" said Inuyasha and Yusuke at once.
"I told you I'm trying to make a story and nothing makes a story better than a love tangle. I was hoping they would all fall for Kurama and one would kill the other two just to get him." It ignored the two boiling boys behind it. "Oh well, maybe I can still work this out since it's obvious those two girls, Keiko and Kagome, seem to like you. I'll need to get rid of the demon and blue girl though."
"YOU'RE EVEN MORE NUTS THAN I THOUGHT!" yelled Yusuke. "You're sick manipulating people like that, and it's not going to work anyway. Hiei's a lot tougher than you think."
The Storyteller smiled, "We'll just have to see about that."
~~~~~~~ Meanwhile ~~~~~~~
The gang had gotten to a cave in the mountains where the Storyteller lived. They were about to go in when Hiei saw something sparkle above them on a near-by summit.
He turned to the girls, "You go on ahead I just want to check something out." Before they had a chance to argue (this was pretty much what Kurama had said) the fire demon jumped out of view. They steamed for a moment before heading in, they wanted to get to Inuyasha and Yusuke as soon as possible.
Hiei landed on the summit and looked around. Inside its cave the Storyteller said a spell and pulled on what looked like invisible threads.
Suddenly a huge rock landed on Hiei, pining him to the ground.
Yup that's where he's going to stay.
The great Hiei, defeated...
by a rock....
Yeah right.
Several seconds later seconds later what was left of the rock was raining down on some cows a few fields over.
Hiei shook some rubble from him and was about to leave when he saw what had been glittering. It was a strange looking mirror. His I eyes widened as he saw what was in it. It was Yukina, and she was being tortured! He knew this was most likely a trap but he couldn't afford to take that chance. He leaped off in the direction of the well Kagome had told him about.
Inside the cave Yusuke swore, Hiei had been the last defense the girls had. They'd get killed for sure now.
Behind him the Storyteller laughed, "You see, not even that fire demon could defeat me. I didn't even have to fight him. But don't worry I still have big plans for this story, and you will have a big part in them." Still laughing it reached into its robes, pulled out something and began to chant. Inuyasha looked at what it was holding and his eyes widened, it was the Shikon no Toma.
