Chap. 10 Engaging Fight Scene
Hello again. I told you I'd get another chapter up quick. I'm in a mad rush to finish this so I'll have either longer chapters or more soon. Anyway I'm still looking for more theme songs so give me them! Other than that here's the fic:
Inuyasha and Yusuke snarled a bit in a demon-like way and leapt at the girls while the Storyteller laughed.
"Snap out of it Yusuke," yelled Keiko, "think about what you're doing!"
"Don't bother," said the Storyteller, "he may be able to hear you but there's nothing he can do about it. Their bodies have been completely separated from their minds."
There was then a very detailed fight scene which I don't really have the energy to tell you about. All you need to know is that there were many close calls where they saved themselves in the nick of time. At one point Keiko was cornered at a wall with Yusuke coming up slowly and Kagome was at the top of a cliff that was the top of the wall backing away from Inuyasha. He suddenly lunged and Kagome dodged causing him to fall through the air and land head-first on Yusuke, knocking him out.
Inuyasha started to get up but Kagome yelled, "Sit boy!" with such menace he crashed into Yusuke's head again. I'm sure we all know how hard that head is, no living creature is going to crash into it twice in a row and not get knocked out. Dog-boy was definitely down for the count.
Kagome climbed slowly down while Keiko stood looking stunned. When she was down they both turned and started walking toward the Storyteller.
"There's no where left for you to run Storyteller," said Kagome, "Change them back and give us the Shikon shards now!"
The Storyteller didn't know what to do. Where had its wonderful story gone so horribly wrong? It just couldn't let it end like this. There would have to be another chapter!
"Stay back you wretched humans!" it cried, "I'll make this cavern shake so badly no one will be able to identify your poor beaten cadavers!"
The girls instinctively stepped back nervously. The Storyteller raised its arms dramatically intending to make the ceiling fall on them. Just as it was about to recite the spell it felt a sharp whack on the back of its head and tumbled into unconsciousness.
"That's quite enough of that," said a voice. The girls looked up from the Storyteller to see behind it was Botan throwing her oar over her shoulder proudly. "I just spent an eternity trying to find my way through these tunnels, I'm not about to let you seal them all up again."
"Thanks Botan," said Keiko, "we would have been done for."
Kagome reached into the Storyteller's pocket and pulled out the jewel shards, "It looks like there're all here," she said.
behind them there was a slight groaning as Inuyasha got up shortly followed by Yusuke. "What did we miss?" they asked.
"I bet you two have a pair of killer headaches," said Keiko with a giggle.
"That's a bit of an understatement," said Yusuke, "you're forgetting this big oaf landed on all of me not just my head." (A/N: Nothing dirty here you perverts.)
They tied up the Storyteller and dragged it with them as they proceeded out of the caves and on their way home. As soon as they got out they ran into Hiei.
"Where did you go?!" yelled Kagome. "We could have been killed!"
"Something important came up that has nothing to do with you," he said coldly. "Be grateful I came back at all." The mirror had, of course, shown a false image. Yukina had been fine and he had hurried back.
Kagome would have pursued further but she could tell it would get her nowhere.
The next day they came to the inn where they had left Sango, Kurama and Kirara. Keiko was about to go in and ask about them when they came out looking rather ragged.
"So....many .... dishes," panted Sango.
"I'll never look at dirt the same way again," said Kurama looking dazed.
Kirara of course couldn't say anything but if she could she would have said, "No way we ate that much."
They were all glad to see Inuyasha and Yusuke had been rescued and that the others were still in one piece. It's likely they would have wanted to know what had happened if they hadn't fallen into a dead faint just then.
When everyone had rested they finally reached the well again. They all said good-bye to Inuyasha and Sango with Kagome promising to soon return with Shippo and Miroku. With that they were off once again through the space- time continuum and safely in Kagome's back yard.
Keiko rushed inside to use the phone, desperately trying to think of an excuse for her mother. Luckily it turn out she didn't have to. Kagome's mom, suspecting what had happened, had called Keiko's house and said she was having such a great time with Kagome she was wondering if she could stay a few days. Fortunately her parents agreed and were to busy to call and check on her. So Keiko was in the clear.
Kurama, on the other hand wasn't so lucky. He had to give some complicated excuse about a field trip he'd forgotten to mention and was still grounded for a month. (Sentenced to doing the dishes too, the poor thing.)
As for the Storyteller, Botan brought it and Hiei with her to help explain to Koenma what had happened. They arrived to find him questioning/ threatening Miroku and Shippo about where his spirit detectives had gone. (Since they had popped up where Hiei and Kurama had last been.) Imagine how surprised he was when they walked through the door.
After quick explanations Koenma and Hiei took the Storyteller to be locked up (it spent six months in jail telling stories until it was eaten by one very annoyed in-mate) and Botan took a very relieved Miroku and Shippo back to earth where they went through the well to their own time and place.
A few days later Keiko and Kagome met up walking home from school again and started talking about their adventure.
"All things considered," said Keiko, "I think in the end the Storyteller made a pretty story don't you think?"
"Yeah," said Kagome, "for once we got to be the ones doing the saving instead of those big, strong macho guys."
They both laughed for a bit and then they were quit.
"Hey Kagome," said Keiko, "do you think there should be a sequel to that story?"
"I don't know," said Kagome. "Do you?"
And there it is: the end of several months of hard work. I hope you liked it. It's true that at the beginning I thought there would be more chapters to come but I managed to get it all in in the end. I also know I kind of leave hanging. Will there b a sequel? I don't know. That depends on demand and if I get a new inspiration. If I do I'll let you know. Anyway in about a month look for a new story from me that has nothing to do with this one but I'm sure will be very funny. In the meantime thank you for reading my fic. See you (hopefully) soon!
Hello again. I told you I'd get another chapter up quick. I'm in a mad rush to finish this so I'll have either longer chapters or more soon. Anyway I'm still looking for more theme songs so give me them! Other than that here's the fic:
Inuyasha and Yusuke snarled a bit in a demon-like way and leapt at the girls while the Storyteller laughed.
"Snap out of it Yusuke," yelled Keiko, "think about what you're doing!"
"Don't bother," said the Storyteller, "he may be able to hear you but there's nothing he can do about it. Their bodies have been completely separated from their minds."
There was then a very detailed fight scene which I don't really have the energy to tell you about. All you need to know is that there were many close calls where they saved themselves in the nick of time. At one point Keiko was cornered at a wall with Yusuke coming up slowly and Kagome was at the top of a cliff that was the top of the wall backing away from Inuyasha. He suddenly lunged and Kagome dodged causing him to fall through the air and land head-first on Yusuke, knocking him out.
Inuyasha started to get up but Kagome yelled, "Sit boy!" with such menace he crashed into Yusuke's head again. I'm sure we all know how hard that head is, no living creature is going to crash into it twice in a row and not get knocked out. Dog-boy was definitely down for the count.
Kagome climbed slowly down while Keiko stood looking stunned. When she was down they both turned and started walking toward the Storyteller.
"There's no where left for you to run Storyteller," said Kagome, "Change them back and give us the Shikon shards now!"
The Storyteller didn't know what to do. Where had its wonderful story gone so horribly wrong? It just couldn't let it end like this. There would have to be another chapter!
"Stay back you wretched humans!" it cried, "I'll make this cavern shake so badly no one will be able to identify your poor beaten cadavers!"
The girls instinctively stepped back nervously. The Storyteller raised its arms dramatically intending to make the ceiling fall on them. Just as it was about to recite the spell it felt a sharp whack on the back of its head and tumbled into unconsciousness.
"That's quite enough of that," said a voice. The girls looked up from the Storyteller to see behind it was Botan throwing her oar over her shoulder proudly. "I just spent an eternity trying to find my way through these tunnels, I'm not about to let you seal them all up again."
"Thanks Botan," said Keiko, "we would have been done for."
Kagome reached into the Storyteller's pocket and pulled out the jewel shards, "It looks like there're all here," she said.
behind them there was a slight groaning as Inuyasha got up shortly followed by Yusuke. "What did we miss?" they asked.
"I bet you two have a pair of killer headaches," said Keiko with a giggle.
"That's a bit of an understatement," said Yusuke, "you're forgetting this big oaf landed on all of me not just my head." (A/N: Nothing dirty here you perverts.)
They tied up the Storyteller and dragged it with them as they proceeded out of the caves and on their way home. As soon as they got out they ran into Hiei.
"Where did you go?!" yelled Kagome. "We could have been killed!"
"Something important came up that has nothing to do with you," he said coldly. "Be grateful I came back at all." The mirror had, of course, shown a false image. Yukina had been fine and he had hurried back.
Kagome would have pursued further but she could tell it would get her nowhere.
The next day they came to the inn where they had left Sango, Kurama and Kirara. Keiko was about to go in and ask about them when they came out looking rather ragged.
"So....many .... dishes," panted Sango.
"I'll never look at dirt the same way again," said Kurama looking dazed.
Kirara of course couldn't say anything but if she could she would have said, "No way we ate that much."
They were all glad to see Inuyasha and Yusuke had been rescued and that the others were still in one piece. It's likely they would have wanted to know what had happened if they hadn't fallen into a dead faint just then.
When everyone had rested they finally reached the well again. They all said good-bye to Inuyasha and Sango with Kagome promising to soon return with Shippo and Miroku. With that they were off once again through the space- time continuum and safely in Kagome's back yard.
Keiko rushed inside to use the phone, desperately trying to think of an excuse for her mother. Luckily it turn out she didn't have to. Kagome's mom, suspecting what had happened, had called Keiko's house and said she was having such a great time with Kagome she was wondering if she could stay a few days. Fortunately her parents agreed and were to busy to call and check on her. So Keiko was in the clear.
Kurama, on the other hand wasn't so lucky. He had to give some complicated excuse about a field trip he'd forgotten to mention and was still grounded for a month. (Sentenced to doing the dishes too, the poor thing.)
As for the Storyteller, Botan brought it and Hiei with her to help explain to Koenma what had happened. They arrived to find him questioning/ threatening Miroku and Shippo about where his spirit detectives had gone. (Since they had popped up where Hiei and Kurama had last been.) Imagine how surprised he was when they walked through the door.
After quick explanations Koenma and Hiei took the Storyteller to be locked up (it spent six months in jail telling stories until it was eaten by one very annoyed in-mate) and Botan took a very relieved Miroku and Shippo back to earth where they went through the well to their own time and place.
A few days later Keiko and Kagome met up walking home from school again and started talking about their adventure.
"All things considered," said Keiko, "I think in the end the Storyteller made a pretty story don't you think?"
"Yeah," said Kagome, "for once we got to be the ones doing the saving instead of those big, strong macho guys."
They both laughed for a bit and then they were quit.
"Hey Kagome," said Keiko, "do you think there should be a sequel to that story?"
"I don't know," said Kagome. "Do you?"
And there it is: the end of several months of hard work. I hope you liked it. It's true that at the beginning I thought there would be more chapters to come but I managed to get it all in in the end. I also know I kind of leave hanging. Will there b a sequel? I don't know. That depends on demand and if I get a new inspiration. If I do I'll let you know. Anyway in about a month look for a new story from me that has nothing to do with this one but I'm sure will be very funny. In the meantime thank you for reading my fic. See you (hopefully) soon!
