AUTHOR'S NOTES:
I want to personally thank remysgame for telling me about my errors in this story. I've managed to screw up more than once, by resurrecting the dead and giving Gabriela a new name. I called her Terri in some of the later chapters. Anyway I've reread this story, and I've corrected all the mistakes that I made. Hopefully it's a lot clearer and understandable. I'm just glad that remysgame had my back on that one. It didn't even dawn on me to reread the thing before posting new stories. It's a mistake that I won't be repeating any time soon. Thanks a bunch.
I want to personally thank remysgame for telling me about my errors in this story. I've managed to screw up more than once, by resurrecting the dead and giving Gabriela a new name. I called her Terri in some of the later chapters. Anyway I've reread this story, and I've corrected all the mistakes that I made. Hopefully it's a lot clearer and understandable. I'm just glad that remysgame had my back on that one. It didn't even dawn on me to reread the thing before posting new stories. It's a mistake that I won't be repeating any time soon. Thanks a bunch.
