Hatred and Revenge
Thanks to the reviewers:
Aragorn Elessar: Thanks! Is it really that bad??? I think I will repost this story when I have finished it. I will spend my free time in writing it and not correcting it. I think most of you would like to see a new chapter and not an old one that is corrected. But thanks for saying that. My English is far from perfect but I hope it isn't that bad... I am glad that you like it.
Goma-Ryu: Thanks!!! I hope they have stopped hurting ;)
Anduin: Here is more...
Kayleigh_talitha: I have set the rating up, but there is a *includes torture* in my summery; you can see before you read my story that it contains torture.
FairyLady: Sorry and thanks!!! I'm sure everyone here has his own imagination about what could happen to Legolas... read further and you know it too.
IceCreamCone23: Thanks for liking it!!!
Jo March: Thanks! And good luck with your arm... The problem is, that I am only be able to correct what I find... so I have a problem. Like I said before, I will go through the whole story again when it is finished.
Xavier: Thanks! I'm trying.
Earendil - Baby: Thanks!!!!!!!!!
Imbefaniel: Thanks for mentioning it; I have just corrected it.
Pure Lick: Really... It isn't that sad in my eyes but *reaching you a tissue* I hope it wasn't too sad...
Pippin-n-Legolas: ok *lol lol lol lol lol lol...* Thanks for reviewing ever and ever again!!!!!
Tenshiamanda: *lol* but bring them back to life again.
Emerald Queen: I don't know but I don't think Thranduil will hear something about that before they are escaped because Legolas was expected to be in Rivendell and not coming home for a while.
X Moonchik: yes they are... I've just continued ;)
Aragorn-is-the-coolest: Thanks!!! Turn in which direction???
LadyIsabelle: Thanks!!! Me too... ;) but luckily I have the story lies in my hands, so I can do with it what I want... hehehe
LotR Fan: OmG, I hope not... it's hard to keep that pace up but on the other side I by myself can't wait too long for the next chapter.
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Part 12
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Glorfindel reached the dark forest of Mirkwood faster than he would have expected it. His horse, Asfaloth, noticed the elfs haste and ran faster. Glorfindel hoped that his friends were well. He had a bad feeling about it and the wind whispered in a worried voice. Glorfindels first destination was the place where the others should have met.
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Gwann-Agar flipped Legolas on his back. Even if he couldn't see the eyes from the blond elf, he could nevertheless see his fear in the way his body trembled. Gwann-Agar knelt over Legolas. He leaned his hands on the dislocated shoulders. Legolas squirmed underneath him with pain.
Legolas tried weakly to struggle against the dark elf but he caused only more pain to himself. He hoped to loose conscious again but Gwann-Agars next action brought him back to the reality.
Gwann-Agar drove one hand over the bare chest underneath biting into Legolas throat and shoulder. His left leg lay between Legolas. He kicked against the bar earning a soft scream from Legolas.
Aragorn didn't want to look at the picture before him. He wanted to do something to help his friend. Aragorn tested, how much place he had between the dagger and his throat. He leaned slightly forward. Dînnaeg reacted not immediately and that was enough to tell Aragorn how distracted he was from the scene before him. It was hard to think straight when you knew what would happen to your friend if you didn't stop it.
Legolas shuddered; he had never before felt so vulnerable. His whole body hurt and the way Gwann-Agar lay over him didn't make it better. Gwann-Agars hand was now more below than before. Legolas fought the urge to scream out his desperation. He whimpered when a blade cut along his thigh and hip, not only opening his trousers but his skin too.
Aragorn could see the distress his friend was in, on the lower half of his face. He couldn't hold himself back any longer. If he waited nay longer, it would be too late for his friend. When Gwann-Agar started to cut the trousers open, Aragorn lost his last doubt and lashed his elbow behind him. Dînnaeg tried to press the dagger in the humans throat but it was too late. Aragorn stood up. He wanted to aid his friend but he could only make one step before he felt hard on his hands and knees.
Dînnaeg had pulled the humans feet away, bringing him down.
Aragorn felt a stinging pain in his leg. The gag prevented him from screaming out, but he couldn't stifle a groan. He looked over his shoulder and to his left leg, where the dagger stuck in his flesh. "Bring him out, now!" Gwann-Agar didn't want anyone to disturb his plan.
Legolas heard rustling to his left. Suddenly a groan filled the room. That was definitely Aragorn. Gwann-Agar ordered someone to bring him out. His friend was the whole time at his side and he didn't even know it. Gwann- Agar reminded him at his unfinished business with a tug on the opened trousers.
Dînnaeg grabbed both feet of Aragorn and pulled him in the direction of the door. Aragorn wouldn't give in that easy. He gave his right foot a strong tug to loose it out of the grasp. Dînnaeg stumbled to the ground when a hard kick landed in his mid-section. Aragorn drew the dagger out of his leg, he almost screamed, and limped to Legolas.
Legolas was confused at the things going on around him. Fear filled him when he realised, that he was naked.
Gwann-Agar hauled the blond elf underneath him on his stomach.
Dînnaeg grabbed Aragorn on his throat, throwing him to the ground. He pressed the humans air way shut. Aragorn couldn't breathe; his vision became blurred. The hand that held the dagger loosened its grip. He couldn't black out. It would mean that Legolas would be at Gwann-Agars mercy. With his last strength, he balled his hand into a fist and hit Dînnaeg on the nose. The iron grip loosened. Aragorn sat up, coughing.
Aragorn stood up, almost falling on the ground again. Gann-Agar grabbed Legolas hip in both hands. Aragorn grabbed the dagger and threw himself at the dark elf.
Legolas knew what would happen next. He could nothing do than holding his breath and crying. His whole body stiffened, his muscles tightened. Gwann- Agar grabbed his hip. Legolas thought he would black out from the fear. Suddenly the grip loosened. He fell flat to the ground.
Aragorn stabbed the dagger in Gwann-Agars right shoulder, knocking him to the ground. The dark elf cried out.
Dînnaeg hauled the human down from Gwann-Agar to the ground. He hit Aragorn several times across the face. Gwann-Agar grabbed the handle and pulled the dagger with a firm tug out of his flesh. "You will pay for that human. I swear you will pay for that." Gwann-Agar was in a fury. He kicked Aragorn hard in the ribs.
Legolas couldn't see what they were doing. He could only guess. He wanted to help Aragorn but he couldn't move his arms and the pain throbbed through his legs, preventing him from moving them.
Aragorn hit and kicked around him, trying to get the other elves away from him. "Be still or you will make it only worse." Gwann-Agar kicked out at Aragorn again. This time Aragorn grabbed the foot and twisted it. Gwann- Agar had to fall down if he didn't want a broken or dislocated foot.
Aragorn turned around, rolling away from Dînnaeg. He jumped to his feet, hitting the elf in the side. Aragorn heard Legolas scream and twisted around. Something hard knocked him to the ground again, he almost blacked out again. The two elves were over him.
Legolas lay on his stomach. Suddenly the bar was pulled roughly out of his leg. He screamed and greeted the blackness that fell around him.
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I hope you enjoyed it; sorry that it took so loooong... lol
Please r+r Thanks!!!
Thanks to the reviewers:
Aragorn Elessar: Thanks! Is it really that bad??? I think I will repost this story when I have finished it. I will spend my free time in writing it and not correcting it. I think most of you would like to see a new chapter and not an old one that is corrected. But thanks for saying that. My English is far from perfect but I hope it isn't that bad... I am glad that you like it.
Goma-Ryu: Thanks!!! I hope they have stopped hurting ;)
Anduin: Here is more...
Kayleigh_talitha: I have set the rating up, but there is a *includes torture* in my summery; you can see before you read my story that it contains torture.
FairyLady: Sorry and thanks!!! I'm sure everyone here has his own imagination about what could happen to Legolas... read further and you know it too.
IceCreamCone23: Thanks for liking it!!!
Jo March: Thanks! And good luck with your arm... The problem is, that I am only be able to correct what I find... so I have a problem. Like I said before, I will go through the whole story again when it is finished.
Xavier: Thanks! I'm trying.
Earendil - Baby: Thanks!!!!!!!!!
Imbefaniel: Thanks for mentioning it; I have just corrected it.
Pure Lick: Really... It isn't that sad in my eyes but *reaching you a tissue* I hope it wasn't too sad...
Pippin-n-Legolas: ok *lol lol lol lol lol lol...* Thanks for reviewing ever and ever again!!!!!
Tenshiamanda: *lol* but bring them back to life again.
Emerald Queen: I don't know but I don't think Thranduil will hear something about that before they are escaped because Legolas was expected to be in Rivendell and not coming home for a while.
X Moonchik: yes they are... I've just continued ;)
Aragorn-is-the-coolest: Thanks!!! Turn in which direction???
LadyIsabelle: Thanks!!! Me too... ;) but luckily I have the story lies in my hands, so I can do with it what I want... hehehe
LotR Fan: OmG, I hope not... it's hard to keep that pace up but on the other side I by myself can't wait too long for the next chapter.
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Part 12
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Glorfindel reached the dark forest of Mirkwood faster than he would have expected it. His horse, Asfaloth, noticed the elfs haste and ran faster. Glorfindel hoped that his friends were well. He had a bad feeling about it and the wind whispered in a worried voice. Glorfindels first destination was the place where the others should have met.
* * *
Gwann-Agar flipped Legolas on his back. Even if he couldn't see the eyes from the blond elf, he could nevertheless see his fear in the way his body trembled. Gwann-Agar knelt over Legolas. He leaned his hands on the dislocated shoulders. Legolas squirmed underneath him with pain.
Legolas tried weakly to struggle against the dark elf but he caused only more pain to himself. He hoped to loose conscious again but Gwann-Agars next action brought him back to the reality.
Gwann-Agar drove one hand over the bare chest underneath biting into Legolas throat and shoulder. His left leg lay between Legolas. He kicked against the bar earning a soft scream from Legolas.
Aragorn didn't want to look at the picture before him. He wanted to do something to help his friend. Aragorn tested, how much place he had between the dagger and his throat. He leaned slightly forward. Dînnaeg reacted not immediately and that was enough to tell Aragorn how distracted he was from the scene before him. It was hard to think straight when you knew what would happen to your friend if you didn't stop it.
Legolas shuddered; he had never before felt so vulnerable. His whole body hurt and the way Gwann-Agar lay over him didn't make it better. Gwann-Agars hand was now more below than before. Legolas fought the urge to scream out his desperation. He whimpered when a blade cut along his thigh and hip, not only opening his trousers but his skin too.
Aragorn could see the distress his friend was in, on the lower half of his face. He couldn't hold himself back any longer. If he waited nay longer, it would be too late for his friend. When Gwann-Agar started to cut the trousers open, Aragorn lost his last doubt and lashed his elbow behind him. Dînnaeg tried to press the dagger in the humans throat but it was too late. Aragorn stood up. He wanted to aid his friend but he could only make one step before he felt hard on his hands and knees.
Dînnaeg had pulled the humans feet away, bringing him down.
Aragorn felt a stinging pain in his leg. The gag prevented him from screaming out, but he couldn't stifle a groan. He looked over his shoulder and to his left leg, where the dagger stuck in his flesh. "Bring him out, now!" Gwann-Agar didn't want anyone to disturb his plan.
Legolas heard rustling to his left. Suddenly a groan filled the room. That was definitely Aragorn. Gwann-Agar ordered someone to bring him out. His friend was the whole time at his side and he didn't even know it. Gwann- Agar reminded him at his unfinished business with a tug on the opened trousers.
Dînnaeg grabbed both feet of Aragorn and pulled him in the direction of the door. Aragorn wouldn't give in that easy. He gave his right foot a strong tug to loose it out of the grasp. Dînnaeg stumbled to the ground when a hard kick landed in his mid-section. Aragorn drew the dagger out of his leg, he almost screamed, and limped to Legolas.
Legolas was confused at the things going on around him. Fear filled him when he realised, that he was naked.
Gwann-Agar hauled the blond elf underneath him on his stomach.
Dînnaeg grabbed Aragorn on his throat, throwing him to the ground. He pressed the humans air way shut. Aragorn couldn't breathe; his vision became blurred. The hand that held the dagger loosened its grip. He couldn't black out. It would mean that Legolas would be at Gwann-Agars mercy. With his last strength, he balled his hand into a fist and hit Dînnaeg on the nose. The iron grip loosened. Aragorn sat up, coughing.
Aragorn stood up, almost falling on the ground again. Gann-Agar grabbed Legolas hip in both hands. Aragorn grabbed the dagger and threw himself at the dark elf.
Legolas knew what would happen next. He could nothing do than holding his breath and crying. His whole body stiffened, his muscles tightened. Gwann- Agar grabbed his hip. Legolas thought he would black out from the fear. Suddenly the grip loosened. He fell flat to the ground.
Aragorn stabbed the dagger in Gwann-Agars right shoulder, knocking him to the ground. The dark elf cried out.
Dînnaeg hauled the human down from Gwann-Agar to the ground. He hit Aragorn several times across the face. Gwann-Agar grabbed the handle and pulled the dagger with a firm tug out of his flesh. "You will pay for that human. I swear you will pay for that." Gwann-Agar was in a fury. He kicked Aragorn hard in the ribs.
Legolas couldn't see what they were doing. He could only guess. He wanted to help Aragorn but he couldn't move his arms and the pain throbbed through his legs, preventing him from moving them.
Aragorn hit and kicked around him, trying to get the other elves away from him. "Be still or you will make it only worse." Gwann-Agar kicked out at Aragorn again. This time Aragorn grabbed the foot and twisted it. Gwann- Agar had to fall down if he didn't want a broken or dislocated foot.
Aragorn turned around, rolling away from Dînnaeg. He jumped to his feet, hitting the elf in the side. Aragorn heard Legolas scream and twisted around. Something hard knocked him to the ground again, he almost blacked out again. The two elves were over him.
Legolas lay on his stomach. Suddenly the bar was pulled roughly out of his leg. He screamed and greeted the blackness that fell around him.
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I hope you enjoyed it; sorry that it took so loooong... lol
Please r+r Thanks!!!
