Hatred and Revenge
I've looked over the whole story because of faults in language. I'm sure there are still many in it but I hope that there aren't this much at all. If there is something wrong now because of uploading all chapters, please write me. Thanks!
Thanks to the reviewers:
Imbefaniel: No not yet... sorry, but I wanted to update it.
Pippin-n-Legolas: Yes they are.
X Moonchik: Thanks!!! Here it goes...
Goddess of Death: Gwann would interrogatory rise his left eyebrow, at the *horrible* place...
Amberfire: Thanks for the bad mind... whom shouldn't I kill off??? The good elves or the bad elves? I know that there are faults but I think I'm getting better... even if it's only slowly...
Aragorn-is-the-coolest: Thanks! But you make it sound like it's over... it's not, I swear... hehehe...
Erin: No problem! Wow, you review my story before you go to school... thanks!!!
Pure Luck: Thanks!!!
Tenshiamanda: Yes right at the start.
Goma-Ryu: Yep, but no longer because here it is...
Xy: Danke für deine review... ische echt net, dass du deinen wahnsinnig interessanten Informatik Unterricht für mich opfersch... Ich hoffe du kommsch bald dazu die anderen Kapitel au noch zu lese.
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Part 15
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Glorfindel stopped on his track. Many footprints of orcs came together with the elves. It didn't please him. He mounted his horse and rode the trail along. It was morning and the heavy prints were clearly visible.
* * *
Elladan felt his sweat rolling down on his back. Even if Legolas were light, after so many hours and with an aching shoulder, everything would be heavy. Elladan threw a worried glance at his friend. Legolas had his eyes closed and murmured quite words. Elladans worry grew. The wound on Legolas back healed to slow and that his eyes were closed was a sign of pain and weakness. Added to this Elladans thirst and hunger grew and the steady pace he ran through the wood didn't make it better let alone the weight in his arms.
It passed another long and laborious hour before Elladan finally collapsed to his knees. He panted hard and set Legolas carefully on the ground. Elladan didn't know how far it was until they reached the great river but only the thought on the fresh and clear water let his mouth go dry. He let himself falling to the ground, trying to forget his needs and to rest his aching body.
Elladan woke with a start when he heard Legolas crying out. His first thought was that they were discovered but when he looked at his troubled friend he saw that dreams were hunting him. Legolas was curled up, his face full of distress.
"Legolas!" Elladan laid a hand on the other elfs shoulder. "Legolas?" Elladans reflexes caught Legolas right hand before it could connect with his face. Legolas opened his eyes at the sudden contact on his wrist. Panic was in his eyes, caused from the nightmares, which hunted him day and night. "It's alright mellon nin." To hear his native tongue was a great comfort for Legolas and he let himself relax. "Hannon le!" (Thank you) Legolas throat felt like sand. Every time he swallowed, it burned like fire. Shivers of cold passed through his body, caused from the fever. Elladan embraced him tightly. Legolas took the body heat that was offered to him gratefully, returning the embrace weakly.
Elladan didn't know how much longer his friend could make it but for the moment it was enough just to hold him and to know that he was still alive. An idea came into his mind. He could cross the Anduin and make it to Lorien. It would be nearer than Rivendell and the elves patrolled in wide circles, almost leaving the woods. If he had luck he would meet one of them. New hope rose in his heart but it was still a long way till he reached the river and he had no idea how he should cross it.
* * *
Elrohir and Aragorn had slept during the rest of the night. When the sun rose they started to go further but exhaustion forbid them to run. "I hope they are okay." Aragorns foot sent him a burning pain through his body and he needed a short moment to collect his words. "I think they will be right. Probable they are in Rivendell before we arrive there." - "I don't know but I have a really bad feeling about that. My heart would be lighter if they were with us."
Aragorn couldn't speak and walk at the same time in his condition. He halted Elrohir and turned him around. Looking his elven brother in the eyes, he tried to sent comfort and calmness to him. "Is that a feeling or a premonition?" Aragorn knew that elves were most of the time right when it was about feelings. His worry grew. "I can't say that. There are too many feelings in my heart to sort out if it is a premonition or not but I fear not only about Legolas but also do I fear about my brother. After we found out, that we are not on their track my heart grew heavy. We don't even know if they are recaptured."
Silence lay in the air between them. Aragorn was the first who spoke. "We could go back but if they are on a save way and we search for nothing, it could be our life which would be lost then. I'm sure our father had sent someone for us. We should go further and send help our friends need and not someone who is barely able to defend himself." Elrohirs heart screamed to turn around and search his friend and brother but his mind knew that Aragorn was right.
* * *
Toledang ran into the great throne room. "What...?" He lost his speech at the sight before him. Gwann-Agar sat on the foot of the throne, holding his dead brothers hand. His cheeks covered with tears he never cried before.
Slowly the dark haired elf raised his head and looked to Toledang, who staid frozen at the entrance. "Find them! Find them and kill them, slowly. Bring their dead bodies to me. Go! Now!" He sent one last stabbing look at Toledang before his head sunk down again.
Toledang walked backwards into the corridor before he spun around and started to run.
* * *
Elladan laid Legolas against a tree and went deeper into the forest, searching food. He went only so far that he could still see Legolas. The only things he found were berries. The berries were small and red. Elladan tasted one. The berry was sweet and without any poison. He gathered as much as he could find and walked back to where his friend lay.
Legolas barely noticed when Elladan left him and when he came back. He could hear that Elladan said something but he couldn't sort out words. Something small and round was shoved in his mouth. He started weakly to chew on it. Its sweet taste covered his tongue. Legolas tried to swallow it but he coughed violent when his dry and sore throat resisted against it. Elladan laid a calming hand on his back, speaking soft words.
Elladan could barely hide his worry. If Legolas couldn't swallow something small like that, it wouldn't take long until he couldn't drink because of his sore throat and that would be his death. Elladan ate a few berries and wrapped the rest in a piece of cloth, ripped out of his trousers. May be he couldn't eat now but later and then he would need every berry he could find.
Elladan didn't waste time and ran with Legolas on his arms further, despite his weakness. He had still hope and that was enough to carry on.
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Please r+r
I've looked over the whole story because of faults in language. I'm sure there are still many in it but I hope that there aren't this much at all. If there is something wrong now because of uploading all chapters, please write me. Thanks!
Thanks to the reviewers:
Imbefaniel: No not yet... sorry, but I wanted to update it.
Pippin-n-Legolas: Yes they are.
X Moonchik: Thanks!!! Here it goes...
Goddess of Death: Gwann would interrogatory rise his left eyebrow, at the *horrible* place...
Amberfire: Thanks for the bad mind... whom shouldn't I kill off??? The good elves or the bad elves? I know that there are faults but I think I'm getting better... even if it's only slowly...
Aragorn-is-the-coolest: Thanks! But you make it sound like it's over... it's not, I swear... hehehe...
Erin: No problem! Wow, you review my story before you go to school... thanks!!!
Pure Luck: Thanks!!!
Tenshiamanda: Yes right at the start.
Goma-Ryu: Yep, but no longer because here it is...
Xy: Danke für deine review... ische echt net, dass du deinen wahnsinnig interessanten Informatik Unterricht für mich opfersch... Ich hoffe du kommsch bald dazu die anderen Kapitel au noch zu lese.
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Part 15
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Glorfindel stopped on his track. Many footprints of orcs came together with the elves. It didn't please him. He mounted his horse and rode the trail along. It was morning and the heavy prints were clearly visible.
* * *
Elladan felt his sweat rolling down on his back. Even if Legolas were light, after so many hours and with an aching shoulder, everything would be heavy. Elladan threw a worried glance at his friend. Legolas had his eyes closed and murmured quite words. Elladans worry grew. The wound on Legolas back healed to slow and that his eyes were closed was a sign of pain and weakness. Added to this Elladans thirst and hunger grew and the steady pace he ran through the wood didn't make it better let alone the weight in his arms.
It passed another long and laborious hour before Elladan finally collapsed to his knees. He panted hard and set Legolas carefully on the ground. Elladan didn't know how far it was until they reached the great river but only the thought on the fresh and clear water let his mouth go dry. He let himself falling to the ground, trying to forget his needs and to rest his aching body.
Elladan woke with a start when he heard Legolas crying out. His first thought was that they were discovered but when he looked at his troubled friend he saw that dreams were hunting him. Legolas was curled up, his face full of distress.
"Legolas!" Elladan laid a hand on the other elfs shoulder. "Legolas?" Elladans reflexes caught Legolas right hand before it could connect with his face. Legolas opened his eyes at the sudden contact on his wrist. Panic was in his eyes, caused from the nightmares, which hunted him day and night. "It's alright mellon nin." To hear his native tongue was a great comfort for Legolas and he let himself relax. "Hannon le!" (Thank you) Legolas throat felt like sand. Every time he swallowed, it burned like fire. Shivers of cold passed through his body, caused from the fever. Elladan embraced him tightly. Legolas took the body heat that was offered to him gratefully, returning the embrace weakly.
Elladan didn't know how much longer his friend could make it but for the moment it was enough just to hold him and to know that he was still alive. An idea came into his mind. He could cross the Anduin and make it to Lorien. It would be nearer than Rivendell and the elves patrolled in wide circles, almost leaving the woods. If he had luck he would meet one of them. New hope rose in his heart but it was still a long way till he reached the river and he had no idea how he should cross it.
* * *
Elrohir and Aragorn had slept during the rest of the night. When the sun rose they started to go further but exhaustion forbid them to run. "I hope they are okay." Aragorns foot sent him a burning pain through his body and he needed a short moment to collect his words. "I think they will be right. Probable they are in Rivendell before we arrive there." - "I don't know but I have a really bad feeling about that. My heart would be lighter if they were with us."
Aragorn couldn't speak and walk at the same time in his condition. He halted Elrohir and turned him around. Looking his elven brother in the eyes, he tried to sent comfort and calmness to him. "Is that a feeling or a premonition?" Aragorn knew that elves were most of the time right when it was about feelings. His worry grew. "I can't say that. There are too many feelings in my heart to sort out if it is a premonition or not but I fear not only about Legolas but also do I fear about my brother. After we found out, that we are not on their track my heart grew heavy. We don't even know if they are recaptured."
Silence lay in the air between them. Aragorn was the first who spoke. "We could go back but if they are on a save way and we search for nothing, it could be our life which would be lost then. I'm sure our father had sent someone for us. We should go further and send help our friends need and not someone who is barely able to defend himself." Elrohirs heart screamed to turn around and search his friend and brother but his mind knew that Aragorn was right.
* * *
Toledang ran into the great throne room. "What...?" He lost his speech at the sight before him. Gwann-Agar sat on the foot of the throne, holding his dead brothers hand. His cheeks covered with tears he never cried before.
Slowly the dark haired elf raised his head and looked to Toledang, who staid frozen at the entrance. "Find them! Find them and kill them, slowly. Bring their dead bodies to me. Go! Now!" He sent one last stabbing look at Toledang before his head sunk down again.
Toledang walked backwards into the corridor before he spun around and started to run.
* * *
Elladan laid Legolas against a tree and went deeper into the forest, searching food. He went only so far that he could still see Legolas. The only things he found were berries. The berries were small and red. Elladan tasted one. The berry was sweet and without any poison. He gathered as much as he could find and walked back to where his friend lay.
Legolas barely noticed when Elladan left him and when he came back. He could hear that Elladan said something but he couldn't sort out words. Something small and round was shoved in his mouth. He started weakly to chew on it. Its sweet taste covered his tongue. Legolas tried to swallow it but he coughed violent when his dry and sore throat resisted against it. Elladan laid a calming hand on his back, speaking soft words.
Elladan could barely hide his worry. If Legolas couldn't swallow something small like that, it wouldn't take long until he couldn't drink because of his sore throat and that would be his death. Elladan ate a few berries and wrapped the rest in a piece of cloth, ripped out of his trousers. May be he couldn't eat now but later and then he would need every berry he could find.
Elladan didn't waste time and ran with Legolas on his arms further, despite his weakness. He had still hope and that was enough to carry on.
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