Hatred and Revenge
Thanks to all my wonderful reviewers:
Lady Elessar: Oh yeh, sooo much hotter!!! I think that is one of the reasons we all like torture...
Jo March: They are just my faves, beside that they have nothing done. Hehehe Thanks, I like being cruel. I use unfinished stories too, to drift off into sleep. My mind throws them out but I have no idea where they are coming from. Sometimes I am surprised what is coming out but it seems to be good.
:-): Thanks!!!
Luthien Tinuviel: Read and find out if it is Glorfindel, I don't say it. That is great, I love all addicted reviewers, and I love you all. It's just flowing out of my mind.
Alisha: Thanks! I'm trying to keep up the pace.
Cowgirl: I have no idea how much it will be, sorry. If you want to me to spoil something like that to you, write me an email because there are (I hope) many out there who read my story and don't want to know such a thing before it isn't mentioned in the story.
Enigma Jade: Thanks!!!
Goddess of Death: Thanks! Sometimes I'm exactly impressed like you what is spinning through my mind. Nope, they can have a break in the end. (I'm cruel I know)
Pippin-n-Legolas: You should by new popcorn because the story isn't finished yet... hehehe
Xy: Hei, freut mich, dass du mal wieder deinen Unterricht opfersch. Nö. Wollt ich dir eh mal vorschlage, da du wahrscheinlich schneller bisch wie Kaddy könnt sies dir am Mittwoch mal mitbringe, schonsch dauerts wirklich noch achtzehn Wochen bis du fertig bisch.
X Moonchik: Yes there is someone to help them but I don't say whom...
Vana Everyoung: I know that feeling... I hope you wake soon enough, to read my next chapter, it might be interesting...
Tenshiamanda: Here to your question...
Pure Luck: Thanks for loving it.
Goma-Ryu: Pain is the most filling part in that story...
Erin: I don't know how much more chapters it will have but I'm trying to write a lot more.
Luthien Tinuviel: Thanks for writing twice. Hey I can't do a thing about it. I write and write and suddenly it's a cliffy. Then I read through the chapter again and suddenly I notice that the whole story is a cliffy. But thanks!
Black Mirror aka Little Wing: I love it too. That is good... if you get hypnotised it's exactly what I wanted hehehe
Kawaiishinichan: Thanks! Here it goes...
Marshmallows: Your name is just great. *hides behind Gwann* I will send my bad elves here on you... I know it is... that's why I wrote it
Amberfire: Thanks! Bad... really bad...
Artemisa: Thank you, such a thing I like to hear.
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Part 19
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Legolas pressed his eyes together, he was aware of the fact, that his life would be sooner over than he wanted it to be. No sting fell, he was still alive. Something was happening around him, he could hear voices, unfamiliar but still in a beloved tongue. Someone heavy stumbled over him but Legolas didn't notice. He knew what all that meant and it would be soon over. Suddenly a thought crossed his mind. Where was Elladan, he hadn't seen him. Legolas opened his eyes searching through the darkness. Four blond haired elves were fighting against the orcs.
Legolas spotted Elladan lying motionless on the ground. Blood covered his front, spilling out of his neck. "No." Legolas still couldn't walk and started to creep forward. He dug his fingers in the ground and pulled his body with little help of his aching knees further.
Legolas forgot the small battle around him, only seeing his dead looking friend. It seemed to be an hour until he was beside Elladan. The world seemed to get slower, Legolas took one of Elladans hands in his. The cries around him were suddenly not audible. Only the fast beating of his heart and the small sobs escaping his mouth reached his ears. Legolas had not the strength anymore to hold his feelings back, he bent over Elladan and cried, buried his face in the curve of Elladans neck. A loud thunder filled the air and rain started to fall.
Legolas just lay there, naked and crying. He drove a hand over Elladans chest. There it was, a faint heartbeat. Legolas head shot up, ignoring the sharp pain such a movement caused. Tears of joy followed tears of pain. There was still hope for his friend.
Legolas didn't even notice when the battle was over. He twitched when he felled a hand on his shoulder, shortly followed by a long cloak that was wrapped around him. Legolas let himself drift into darkness. He knew that they were save and he didn't need his strength to stay awake, he needed it now to stay alive. "Mae govannen mellon nin. It seems we are arrived just in time." Legolas knew that voice very well but his mind betrayed him and he was unconscious before the fitting name came into his mind.
* * *
Another cry filled the air. It was louder than the first. Aragorn thought he would black out from the amount of pain. Toledang threw the stripe of skin near to the first. Aragorns stomach burned with pain and the sudden rain did nothing good. The elf squeezed the open wound, causing the human to hiss in great pain. "Have you ever seen how someone is eaten by orcs?" Aragorn didn't want to hear it and didn't want to know it. Toledang had neither nor in his mind. "I think you have never felt it." It was a simple statement. "Else you would be dead." Aragorn tore his eyes open, staring at the elf. Fear laid itself over his heart like a cold hand. "I don't like raw flesh but I'm sure watching is just the same fun." Toledang snipped with his fingers. A grinning orc came into Aragorns view, showing his rotted teeth.
Aragorn couldn't do anything. The orc gripped his free arm in his filthy hands and ripped the sleeve away. The creature sniffed at the upper arm, sinking his teeth into the soft flesh. Aragorn cried out but it was not over yet. The orc shut his mouth, biting a piece of flesh out. Aragorn screamed, hoping against hope that he would loose conscious. He didn't know how much more he could bear.
The orc wiped away the humans blood that ran down his chin, starting to chew. Orcs loved flesh even if they prefer elven.
* * *
A long scream filled the air. Glorfindel recognised the voice. It was Aragorn. He changed the direction, riding as fast as he could.
Glorfindel stopped his horse when he heard voices. There were orcs. It was one thing to risk his own life but to risk the life from his horse too was another. He landed quietly on the earth and sneaked behind one of the bushes to have a better look.
There were two elves among the orcs. Glorfindel recognised one of them but he didn't knew that the elf were still alive. They had fought together at the feet of Amon Amarth (Mount Doom) in the battle where Sauron lost the ring. Glorfindel was shocked, the first time in his life; he was shocked through his bones. There he was torturing Elrohir. Blind rage gripped him and before he knew what he did, he ran into their camp.
Glorfindel drew his two daggers and slashed around him into the heap of orcs. His enemy didn't know he was there and were more than a little surprised. The orcs were in excitement but they were no difficult task to do. Glorfindels long experience of fighting through battles helped him to kill them off like ants on the ground. But there were still the two elves.
Both Toledang and Sigilaeg were armoured and ready to fight, standing side by side and waiting until the blond elf turned around.
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These cliffies... I think they will hunt you until the story is finished.
Please r+r
Thanks to all my wonderful reviewers:
Lady Elessar: Oh yeh, sooo much hotter!!! I think that is one of the reasons we all like torture...
Jo March: They are just my faves, beside that they have nothing done. Hehehe Thanks, I like being cruel. I use unfinished stories too, to drift off into sleep. My mind throws them out but I have no idea where they are coming from. Sometimes I am surprised what is coming out but it seems to be good.
:-): Thanks!!!
Luthien Tinuviel: Read and find out if it is Glorfindel, I don't say it. That is great, I love all addicted reviewers, and I love you all. It's just flowing out of my mind.
Alisha: Thanks! I'm trying to keep up the pace.
Cowgirl: I have no idea how much it will be, sorry. If you want to me to spoil something like that to you, write me an email because there are (I hope) many out there who read my story and don't want to know such a thing before it isn't mentioned in the story.
Enigma Jade: Thanks!!!
Goddess of Death: Thanks! Sometimes I'm exactly impressed like you what is spinning through my mind. Nope, they can have a break in the end. (I'm cruel I know)
Pippin-n-Legolas: You should by new popcorn because the story isn't finished yet... hehehe
Xy: Hei, freut mich, dass du mal wieder deinen Unterricht opfersch. Nö. Wollt ich dir eh mal vorschlage, da du wahrscheinlich schneller bisch wie Kaddy könnt sies dir am Mittwoch mal mitbringe, schonsch dauerts wirklich noch achtzehn Wochen bis du fertig bisch.
X Moonchik: Yes there is someone to help them but I don't say whom...
Vana Everyoung: I know that feeling... I hope you wake soon enough, to read my next chapter, it might be interesting...
Tenshiamanda: Here to your question...
Pure Luck: Thanks for loving it.
Goma-Ryu: Pain is the most filling part in that story...
Erin: I don't know how much more chapters it will have but I'm trying to write a lot more.
Luthien Tinuviel: Thanks for writing twice. Hey I can't do a thing about it. I write and write and suddenly it's a cliffy. Then I read through the chapter again and suddenly I notice that the whole story is a cliffy. But thanks!
Black Mirror aka Little Wing: I love it too. That is good... if you get hypnotised it's exactly what I wanted hehehe
Kawaiishinichan: Thanks! Here it goes...
Marshmallows: Your name is just great. *hides behind Gwann* I will send my bad elves here on you... I know it is... that's why I wrote it
Amberfire: Thanks! Bad... really bad...
Artemisa: Thank you, such a thing I like to hear.
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Part 19
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Legolas pressed his eyes together, he was aware of the fact, that his life would be sooner over than he wanted it to be. No sting fell, he was still alive. Something was happening around him, he could hear voices, unfamiliar but still in a beloved tongue. Someone heavy stumbled over him but Legolas didn't notice. He knew what all that meant and it would be soon over. Suddenly a thought crossed his mind. Where was Elladan, he hadn't seen him. Legolas opened his eyes searching through the darkness. Four blond haired elves were fighting against the orcs.
Legolas spotted Elladan lying motionless on the ground. Blood covered his front, spilling out of his neck. "No." Legolas still couldn't walk and started to creep forward. He dug his fingers in the ground and pulled his body with little help of his aching knees further.
Legolas forgot the small battle around him, only seeing his dead looking friend. It seemed to be an hour until he was beside Elladan. The world seemed to get slower, Legolas took one of Elladans hands in his. The cries around him were suddenly not audible. Only the fast beating of his heart and the small sobs escaping his mouth reached his ears. Legolas had not the strength anymore to hold his feelings back, he bent over Elladan and cried, buried his face in the curve of Elladans neck. A loud thunder filled the air and rain started to fall.
Legolas just lay there, naked and crying. He drove a hand over Elladans chest. There it was, a faint heartbeat. Legolas head shot up, ignoring the sharp pain such a movement caused. Tears of joy followed tears of pain. There was still hope for his friend.
Legolas didn't even notice when the battle was over. He twitched when he felled a hand on his shoulder, shortly followed by a long cloak that was wrapped around him. Legolas let himself drift into darkness. He knew that they were save and he didn't need his strength to stay awake, he needed it now to stay alive. "Mae govannen mellon nin. It seems we are arrived just in time." Legolas knew that voice very well but his mind betrayed him and he was unconscious before the fitting name came into his mind.
* * *
Another cry filled the air. It was louder than the first. Aragorn thought he would black out from the amount of pain. Toledang threw the stripe of skin near to the first. Aragorns stomach burned with pain and the sudden rain did nothing good. The elf squeezed the open wound, causing the human to hiss in great pain. "Have you ever seen how someone is eaten by orcs?" Aragorn didn't want to hear it and didn't want to know it. Toledang had neither nor in his mind. "I think you have never felt it." It was a simple statement. "Else you would be dead." Aragorn tore his eyes open, staring at the elf. Fear laid itself over his heart like a cold hand. "I don't like raw flesh but I'm sure watching is just the same fun." Toledang snipped with his fingers. A grinning orc came into Aragorns view, showing his rotted teeth.
Aragorn couldn't do anything. The orc gripped his free arm in his filthy hands and ripped the sleeve away. The creature sniffed at the upper arm, sinking his teeth into the soft flesh. Aragorn cried out but it was not over yet. The orc shut his mouth, biting a piece of flesh out. Aragorn screamed, hoping against hope that he would loose conscious. He didn't know how much more he could bear.
The orc wiped away the humans blood that ran down his chin, starting to chew. Orcs loved flesh even if they prefer elven.
* * *
A long scream filled the air. Glorfindel recognised the voice. It was Aragorn. He changed the direction, riding as fast as he could.
Glorfindel stopped his horse when he heard voices. There were orcs. It was one thing to risk his own life but to risk the life from his horse too was another. He landed quietly on the earth and sneaked behind one of the bushes to have a better look.
There were two elves among the orcs. Glorfindel recognised one of them but he didn't knew that the elf were still alive. They had fought together at the feet of Amon Amarth (Mount Doom) in the battle where Sauron lost the ring. Glorfindel was shocked, the first time in his life; he was shocked through his bones. There he was torturing Elrohir. Blind rage gripped him and before he knew what he did, he ran into their camp.
Glorfindel drew his two daggers and slashed around him into the heap of orcs. His enemy didn't know he was there and were more than a little surprised. The orcs were in excitement but they were no difficult task to do. Glorfindels long experience of fighting through battles helped him to kill them off like ants on the ground. But there were still the two elves.
Both Toledang and Sigilaeg were armoured and ready to fight, standing side by side and waiting until the blond elf turned around.
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These cliffies... I think they will hunt you until the story is finished.
Please r+r
