Yes, I have read your reviews and now I will take your complaint into
account.This chapter will be a turning point in the story, therefore making
it go slower now.How?Wait and see.Oh and Kenta, if yer wondering, is Long's
son.(I'll write a fic about it soon so you won't be confudged).So here it
is...Chapter 4..DICKHEAD DADDY!
-Darkness Angel.
What has Phoenix done!?!?
(Chapter 4)
With a confused "Oh.", Shenlong and Danielle were informed of the latest abnormal accident.Sooryu and Izzy began to run towards the lab yelling.With a startled clatter of equipment the intruder ran off.Izzy ran up to Uriko shouting "Grass-head stole the ray gun!!!!"
Cronos' eyes widened.. "Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Needless to say Cronos passed out.Mizuryu picked her boyfriend up and carried him into their bedroom.Max spotted an opportunity and ran out of the mansion like lightning.
"Maxi come baaaack!"Miaka yelled! "Bakuryu our grandson's done a runner!"
'oh, this isn't my day at all, is it...'Phoenix thought as she watched Bakuryu run after his Grandson. '......why me?'
Hiroshi,or hiro as he liked to be called, noticed his girlfriend's distress and he walked up to her.He hugged her lovingly. "Honey, it's not your fault that any of this happened."Phoenix kissed him, she smiled at him and then walked off, "It may take some time, but I'll get that ray gun rebuilt and then it's going on the scrap-heap!" She began to pace around the room trying to remember the schematics.
Kenta stood out on the bridge looking at the fish, flitting through the water as his mind was filled with upset.This was his mother's 15th anniversary and it seemed that today was filled with upset after upset.Long joined him on the bridge.He put his arm around his tiger cub and handed him a small package. "Happy birthday son."Long's voice trailed off, "Fifteen years now.." Kenta cuddled into his father's tall, muscular form and sighed, "Thank you for this small gift, but the best gift of all was finding you." "I know, but still, I wanted you to have a present, your mother would kill me if she knew that I didn't give you a present,.,that is, if she was still alive." Kenta tore open the small package carefully trying not to damage the contents.Inside was a small photograph album. Long smiled, "I got the others to help, there's loads of pictures that have parts of your past in it." Kenta flipped through the pages until he came to the last one.There was a picture of a beautiful girl with long black hair and purple eyes.
"Wh- who's this dad?"Kenta said looking at the picture carefully.Long sighed and replied, "Her name was Jasmine, she was your mother."
Kenta looked at the picture again, "How did it happen?"
Long looked up to the sky and sighed sadly.he began the story of how Jasmine died. "It was a calm night, although a typhoon was supposed to hit the next day. We lived in a small wooden shack with the bare essentials. It was an explosive mix from the start, I was a zoanthrope, she was a human, but so far it had been peaceful. You were born in the light of a few candles scattered around the room, she and I doted over you for a couple of hours before one of the neighbours came to the door telling me that Tylon goons were headed my way. I Told your mother but she said I was to bring you to the safe haven and that she'd hold them off. I did as she instructed, but when I arrived home, I found her dead and naked, on the bedroom floor.Without warning, they jumped on me and I was hauled off to The mother company, where there I was retrained and until seven years later was forced to be a murderer for Van Tylon."
As long told his son about his mother, Busuzima sat in a dark, stinky lab, the one from the first story of this series, brooding over his ray gun. He was infuriated at his daughter's modifications." Why that little brat! My beautiful ray gun is destroyed, but never fear, I the fantabulous Busuzima will fix you and then, BECOME A GOD!!!!Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahha ahhaahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahhahahha!"He panted for a while before sighing happily, "That felt good!"
Hans sauntered in with an attractive young 16 year old with cyan hair apart from silver streaks down two sides along his tanned face some how enhancing his feaures.
"Hello Busuzima."He said in his husky voice, His Green eyes bore through the scientist, "Would you like me to help you in any way?"
"My my, Prince Maximillian here to help li'l ol' me!"Busuzima cooed. "This should turn out rather interesting indeed!"
-End of chapter 4!
So what do you think?Max becoming a bad guy!Busuzima being permitted into my universe again!Heehee.I wonder how the heroes will take to this news? Max:As long as I am not make fuck either of those two weirdos I'm okay with this plotline. Busuzima:Heh, we're not paedophiles! Max:I may still be three years old, but I'm not an idiot!I've heard my grandparents and the other grown-ups talking about you! Busuzima:So what?What can you do to me cutie? Darkness:Hijime, if you touch that child, I will ban you from sex for the rest of your existance..and don't think I don't have that power.. Busuzima and Hans:Daaarrrrn! Max:Thank you!!! Darkness:Well, I can stop those two from harming you but don't be too sure about your parents..Well to the readers hope you enjoyed that twist and Keep on reading!Oh and don't forget to drop in a review.otherwise I might just get Busuzima to give you a private lap dance...ciao!
What has Phoenix done!?!?
(Chapter 4)
With a confused "Oh.", Shenlong and Danielle were informed of the latest abnormal accident.Sooryu and Izzy began to run towards the lab yelling.With a startled clatter of equipment the intruder ran off.Izzy ran up to Uriko shouting "Grass-head stole the ray gun!!!!"
Cronos' eyes widened.. "Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Needless to say Cronos passed out.Mizuryu picked her boyfriend up and carried him into their bedroom.Max spotted an opportunity and ran out of the mansion like lightning.
"Maxi come baaaack!"Miaka yelled! "Bakuryu our grandson's done a runner!"
'oh, this isn't my day at all, is it...'Phoenix thought as she watched Bakuryu run after his Grandson. '......why me?'
Hiroshi,or hiro as he liked to be called, noticed his girlfriend's distress and he walked up to her.He hugged her lovingly. "Honey, it's not your fault that any of this happened."Phoenix kissed him, she smiled at him and then walked off, "It may take some time, but I'll get that ray gun rebuilt and then it's going on the scrap-heap!" She began to pace around the room trying to remember the schematics.
Kenta stood out on the bridge looking at the fish, flitting through the water as his mind was filled with upset.This was his mother's 15th anniversary and it seemed that today was filled with upset after upset.Long joined him on the bridge.He put his arm around his tiger cub and handed him a small package. "Happy birthday son."Long's voice trailed off, "Fifteen years now.." Kenta cuddled into his father's tall, muscular form and sighed, "Thank you for this small gift, but the best gift of all was finding you." "I know, but still, I wanted you to have a present, your mother would kill me if she knew that I didn't give you a present,.,that is, if she was still alive." Kenta tore open the small package carefully trying not to damage the contents.Inside was a small photograph album. Long smiled, "I got the others to help, there's loads of pictures that have parts of your past in it." Kenta flipped through the pages until he came to the last one.There was a picture of a beautiful girl with long black hair and purple eyes.
"Wh- who's this dad?"Kenta said looking at the picture carefully.Long sighed and replied, "Her name was Jasmine, she was your mother."
Kenta looked at the picture again, "How did it happen?"
Long looked up to the sky and sighed sadly.he began the story of how Jasmine died. "It was a calm night, although a typhoon was supposed to hit the next day. We lived in a small wooden shack with the bare essentials. It was an explosive mix from the start, I was a zoanthrope, she was a human, but so far it had been peaceful. You were born in the light of a few candles scattered around the room, she and I doted over you for a couple of hours before one of the neighbours came to the door telling me that Tylon goons were headed my way. I Told your mother but she said I was to bring you to the safe haven and that she'd hold them off. I did as she instructed, but when I arrived home, I found her dead and naked, on the bedroom floor.Without warning, they jumped on me and I was hauled off to The mother company, where there I was retrained and until seven years later was forced to be a murderer for Van Tylon."
As long told his son about his mother, Busuzima sat in a dark, stinky lab, the one from the first story of this series, brooding over his ray gun. He was infuriated at his daughter's modifications." Why that little brat! My beautiful ray gun is destroyed, but never fear, I the fantabulous Busuzima will fix you and then, BECOME A GOD!!!!Mwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahha ahhaahhahahahahahahhahahahahahahhahhahahha!"He panted for a while before sighing happily, "That felt good!"
Hans sauntered in with an attractive young 16 year old with cyan hair apart from silver streaks down two sides along his tanned face some how enhancing his feaures.
"Hello Busuzima."He said in his husky voice, His Green eyes bore through the scientist, "Would you like me to help you in any way?"
"My my, Prince Maximillian here to help li'l ol' me!"Busuzima cooed. "This should turn out rather interesting indeed!"
-End of chapter 4!
So what do you think?Max becoming a bad guy!Busuzima being permitted into my universe again!Heehee.I wonder how the heroes will take to this news? Max:As long as I am not make fuck either of those two weirdos I'm okay with this plotline. Busuzima:Heh, we're not paedophiles! Max:I may still be three years old, but I'm not an idiot!I've heard my grandparents and the other grown-ups talking about you! Busuzima:So what?What can you do to me cutie? Darkness:Hijime, if you touch that child, I will ban you from sex for the rest of your existance..and don't think I don't have that power.. Busuzima and Hans:Daaarrrrn! Max:Thank you!!! Darkness:Well, I can stop those two from harming you but don't be too sure about your parents..Well to the readers hope you enjoyed that twist and Keep on reading!Oh and don't forget to drop in a review.otherwise I might just get Busuzima to give you a private lap dance...ciao!
