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A Second Chance: Chapter Four
Sabe hurried off to her quarters after another long days' work. Today had been especially hard because they had their first training session it two months. She had been a little out of practice and it had drained her of energy to get back to top performance. She was now nearly to her quarters when she heard Padme beckon here. "Sabe! Sabe wait please!" The Queen called. Sabe stopped and turned around immediately. "Yes your highness?" Sabe asked. "You will be at the meeting tomorrow morning correct?" Padme asked her. "Yes your highness, I will be present." Sabe said. She tried to hide her impatience. She wanted nothing more than to get to her quarters. "Are you alright handmaiden?" She asked her. "Oh, indeed, I'm fine your highness. I've just been a bit absent minded lately." Sabe said. Padme smiled. "And why is that, Sabe?" Padme said. Padme had dropped the title on purpose, Sabe knew, but she still expected a true answer. "I'm not entirely sure Padme. I've been distracted ever sense the invasion. I know it wasn't even a week ago, but something has upset me." It was a true answer, yet not complete. "Was it really the invasion that occupied your mind Sabe? Or was it what came with the invasion? You know of whom I speak." Padme said. She knew right then that she had been caught. There was little she could say to deny what had been said. "Your right your majesty. I will take care of it right away. I will be back at full tomorrow." Sabe said. "We've had this discussion before. I don't need you to be over it. If you like him go for it. I just think it's bad luck you chose a Jedi. That's not an easy one to pick up. I want you to be happy Sabe. You've been so loyal to me and I really want you to be happy. I know what's wrong. You are lonely and heart- broken. Go get yourself a man! You now have official leave or the right to do what you feel appropriate to get your man. Lure him here for all I care. That is now an order!" Padme said smiling and laughing. "But you need me for protection. My duty is to you and I need be present!" Sabe protested. "We can manage with out you for a while. I would feel so much better about having you here if you had someone. Then I wouldn't feel as though I'm stealing your life possibilities." Padme said. "You have done no such thing, I could leave this profession if I so chose to. And what about you? We all know you took some interest in that child, Anakin Skywalker. Why don't you go after him?" Sabe said. "Because I'm queen and I can't do such things like give up my post. And I don't have a thing for Anakin. He's nine years old." Padme said. "So, your fourteen." Sabe pushed on. "That doesn't matter. Now, please don't make this difficult. Get your guy, leave me from this." Padme said. Sabe smiled. "Very well, but what if he has no interest in me?" Sabe asked. "Then you will know and you won't have to dream of him any longer. You would then move on. Plus, I know you can hook him. You could get him." Padme said. "Then, I need away to get him here. How would one go about doing this?" Sabe wondered aloud. "Call them back for a mission to ensure peace and calm here, or something like that." Padme said. "I will call them myself. In the morning, I will tell you how everything went. For now, I will see you in the morning. Good night Sabe." Padme said. "Good night Padme." Sabe turned and could feel the grin spread across her face. She had a chance now; she might be able to get someone that may just be someone for her. But how was Padme planning on doing that? Padme said she would get him here, but how would she get herself in the picture and get him to notice her? She got to her quarters and shut the door. She lay down and as she started to fall asleep she was dreaming about how she would handle this. She had wonderful dreams that night, of possibilities of where she could go, what could happen to her life if everything she dreamed of could come true.
So, what did you think? If anyone comes up with a good idea on what Padme will do to get him here, or how Sabe will make an entrance, please tell me in a review. I could come up with something, but I don't have a must-do idea. If someone comes up with something please let me know. I hope the chapters are coming quick enough. I try really hard to keep going faster, but it's tough. I have a lot to do. If there is any questions, comments, or ideas please tell me. Glad that you are reading this. Thanks a lot!
Obiwanfan
A Second Chance: Chapter Four
Sabe hurried off to her quarters after another long days' work. Today had been especially hard because they had their first training session it two months. She had been a little out of practice and it had drained her of energy to get back to top performance. She was now nearly to her quarters when she heard Padme beckon here. "Sabe! Sabe wait please!" The Queen called. Sabe stopped and turned around immediately. "Yes your highness?" Sabe asked. "You will be at the meeting tomorrow morning correct?" Padme asked her. "Yes your highness, I will be present." Sabe said. She tried to hide her impatience. She wanted nothing more than to get to her quarters. "Are you alright handmaiden?" She asked her. "Oh, indeed, I'm fine your highness. I've just been a bit absent minded lately." Sabe said. Padme smiled. "And why is that, Sabe?" Padme said. Padme had dropped the title on purpose, Sabe knew, but she still expected a true answer. "I'm not entirely sure Padme. I've been distracted ever sense the invasion. I know it wasn't even a week ago, but something has upset me." It was a true answer, yet not complete. "Was it really the invasion that occupied your mind Sabe? Or was it what came with the invasion? You know of whom I speak." Padme said. She knew right then that she had been caught. There was little she could say to deny what had been said. "Your right your majesty. I will take care of it right away. I will be back at full tomorrow." Sabe said. "We've had this discussion before. I don't need you to be over it. If you like him go for it. I just think it's bad luck you chose a Jedi. That's not an easy one to pick up. I want you to be happy Sabe. You've been so loyal to me and I really want you to be happy. I know what's wrong. You are lonely and heart- broken. Go get yourself a man! You now have official leave or the right to do what you feel appropriate to get your man. Lure him here for all I care. That is now an order!" Padme said smiling and laughing. "But you need me for protection. My duty is to you and I need be present!" Sabe protested. "We can manage with out you for a while. I would feel so much better about having you here if you had someone. Then I wouldn't feel as though I'm stealing your life possibilities." Padme said. "You have done no such thing, I could leave this profession if I so chose to. And what about you? We all know you took some interest in that child, Anakin Skywalker. Why don't you go after him?" Sabe said. "Because I'm queen and I can't do such things like give up my post. And I don't have a thing for Anakin. He's nine years old." Padme said. "So, your fourteen." Sabe pushed on. "That doesn't matter. Now, please don't make this difficult. Get your guy, leave me from this." Padme said. Sabe smiled. "Very well, but what if he has no interest in me?" Sabe asked. "Then you will know and you won't have to dream of him any longer. You would then move on. Plus, I know you can hook him. You could get him." Padme said. "Then, I need away to get him here. How would one go about doing this?" Sabe wondered aloud. "Call them back for a mission to ensure peace and calm here, or something like that." Padme said. "I will call them myself. In the morning, I will tell you how everything went. For now, I will see you in the morning. Good night Sabe." Padme said. "Good night Padme." Sabe turned and could feel the grin spread across her face. She had a chance now; she might be able to get someone that may just be someone for her. But how was Padme planning on doing that? Padme said she would get him here, but how would she get herself in the picture and get him to notice her? She got to her quarters and shut the door. She lay down and as she started to fall asleep she was dreaming about how she would handle this. She had wonderful dreams that night, of possibilities of where she could go, what could happen to her life if everything she dreamed of could come true.
So, what did you think? If anyone comes up with a good idea on what Padme will do to get him here, or how Sabe will make an entrance, please tell me in a review. I could come up with something, but I don't have a must-do idea. If someone comes up with something please let me know. I hope the chapters are coming quick enough. I try really hard to keep going faster, but it's tough. I have a lot to do. If there is any questions, comments, or ideas please tell me. Glad that you are reading this. Thanks a lot!
Obiwanfan
