Small author's note.
Well.it's happened. I finally got my first flame. I was wondering when that would happen. Anyway.thank you 'writer from rivendell' for your comments. I wish to address a few of them.
Firstly- turquoise just means blue-green. I have a teacher with blue green contacts and black hair, and she looks pretty, so she was kinda my inspiration for Miriel.
Secondly- I did not explicitly state that Miriel's father killed her mother and brother, though I admit I did make it sound like he did. There's actually something else to that particular part of her past that might come in later when she gets closer to Legolas.
Third- a mistake on my part. I did not read "The Hobbit" closely enough. I apologize for writing about Thranduil's castle as one above ground when it is actually in a huge underground cave. If I have the time, I will rectify this mistake.
Fourth- I was under the impression that a Mary-Sue was a story where a girl from earth falls into Middle Earth, maybe joins the fellowship and falls in love with one of the lead male characters. Therefore, since you said my story was a Mary-Sue, even though Miriel was born in Middle-Earth, I would like some clarification from other writers if possible on this matter. Thanks.
I think that's about all. The next chapter will be up soon. Oh and thanks a million MoNkeY BaBi for your title suggestions. I'll definitely consider them. Meanwhile others are also welcome and much appreciated.
Signing off, Ninewalkers
Well.it's happened. I finally got my first flame. I was wondering when that would happen. Anyway.thank you 'writer from rivendell' for your comments. I wish to address a few of them.
Firstly- turquoise just means blue-green. I have a teacher with blue green contacts and black hair, and she looks pretty, so she was kinda my inspiration for Miriel.
Secondly- I did not explicitly state that Miriel's father killed her mother and brother, though I admit I did make it sound like he did. There's actually something else to that particular part of her past that might come in later when she gets closer to Legolas.
Third- a mistake on my part. I did not read "The Hobbit" closely enough. I apologize for writing about Thranduil's castle as one above ground when it is actually in a huge underground cave. If I have the time, I will rectify this mistake.
Fourth- I was under the impression that a Mary-Sue was a story where a girl from earth falls into Middle Earth, maybe joins the fellowship and falls in love with one of the lead male characters. Therefore, since you said my story was a Mary-Sue, even though Miriel was born in Middle-Earth, I would like some clarification from other writers if possible on this matter. Thanks.
I think that's about all. The next chapter will be up soon. Oh and thanks a million MoNkeY BaBi for your title suggestions. I'll definitely consider them. Meanwhile others are also welcome and much appreciated.
Signing off, Ninewalkers
