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Princess Epona: Thank you for your kind review *small bowing motion* And cool..Im a favorite author :D Im honered.... Grammer King: Bite me. I dont really care if you give it a second chance, cause 2 people like it, and only 1 person doesnt.
Disclaimer: I dont own pretty much anything in this story...If I did, I would be a millionaire...Yes, I KNOW that I probably spelled "Millionaire" Wrong...
Chapter 4 The Arwings landed in the usual place, but unusally, there werent any Thorntail...There was, however one very familiar Earth Walker
Tricky: Hey, Fox, Im glad you came! Whose your friend?
Krystal:Tricky! Wow, youv grown up, havnt you?
Tricky: Yeah...
Fox: Well, you know Krystal, and the bird is Falco.
Falco: I dont like being called a bird...But I'll let it slide....
Tricky:Anyway, Fox, look what i found! *runs off* He came back with a back pack, and pulled out a package
Tricky:It had your name on it, so I didnt open it...
Fox: It had my name on it?! Hmm.... It says "Fox McCloud', allright...
Fox opens it to find..A Sword?!?!
Fox: Whoa.....VERY nice.....Well, SOMEONE knew that I needed a weapon...weird...
Falco: Well, I still need one...
Tricky: Falco, right? Well, The Shopkeeper has a secret room in the back of the store, and its full of al sorts of weird stuff...Your BOUND to find SOMETHING....
Falco: Thanks, kid...*walks toward Shop*
Fox: Hm...Well, I guess we should wait here....Tricky, what happened?
Tricky: I dont know....I just woke up and everything was gone...
Fox: Weird...
Tricky: I bet it was those Sharpclaw! They burn me up! *blows fire all over the place*
Fox: WHOA*yanks Krystal back*
Tricky: Sorry, Fox....But, whoever did this is going to have to answer to me!
Krystal: I feel sorry for the person who did this, then!
Fox: Yeah!
Falco comes back....
Falco: Well, Tricky was right....I had to knock out the guy to get this, though...Kept asking for scarabs...Anyway, look at this
Falco pulls out big...THING
Krystal: What is that?!?
Fox: Some sort of glaive....
The thing was big...It had four ax-like blades, balanced perfectly around a stout wooden pole.
Falco: *evil grin* I could do some serious damage with this...
Krystal: look like you'll get your chance...
8 Sharpclaw grunts ran into the clearing...
Tricky: CHARGE!
And charge he did...RIGHT into an unsuspecting Sharpclaw, knocking the wind out of him, then he threw him over his shoulder
Fox was busy with his own....He swung his sword, neatly dicing two Sharpclaw into kibble.
Falco threw one up into the air, and jumped up,flapped his wings to get above it, and smashed it down into the ground...
Krystal used a Superquake, knocking 3 down, and motioning for Tricky to flame them
Falco same down on another, pounding him into the ground, and doing a golf- like smack to the head
Fox bullcharged one, and cut it in half before it even hit the ground
Tricky jumped on the last one, and knocked it around with his horns
Fox: Dont finish that one, Tricky...We could interrogate it!
Tricky: Allright, Fox...Who are you working for?
Sharpclaw: Scales....
Fox:That's expected...Now, where is he?
Sharpclaw: Can't tell you..he punish!
Tricky beats him around with his horns some more: Talk!
Sharpclaw:NO!
Tricky: Ok, then...You asked for it! *rears back his head*
Sharpclaw: OCEAN TEMPLE! OCEAN TEMPLE!
Tricky: I thought that would work...What do we do with him, Fox?
Fox: Hmm...Lock him in the Arwings cargo chamber...
Tricky: Aww...I dont want the Sharpclaw stinking up my riding spot!
Fox: Dont worry, I'll put an air-freshener in it...
Tricky: Ok...*Knocks out the Sharpclaw*
Falco: Good job...
Falco picks up the Sharpclaw, and locks him in the cargo bay
Fox: To Ocean Force Temple...
They walk off toward Cape Claw ______________
Well, that one was action packed, now wasnt it? Well, review, if you dont mind...Except Grammer King...your not helpful...Your just mean....
Princess Epona: Thank you for your kind review *small bowing motion* And cool..Im a favorite author :D Im honered.... Grammer King: Bite me. I dont really care if you give it a second chance, cause 2 people like it, and only 1 person doesnt.
Disclaimer: I dont own pretty much anything in this story...If I did, I would be a millionaire...Yes, I KNOW that I probably spelled "Millionaire" Wrong...
Chapter 4 The Arwings landed in the usual place, but unusally, there werent any Thorntail...There was, however one very familiar Earth Walker
Tricky: Hey, Fox, Im glad you came! Whose your friend?
Krystal:Tricky! Wow, youv grown up, havnt you?
Tricky: Yeah...
Fox: Well, you know Krystal, and the bird is Falco.
Falco: I dont like being called a bird...But I'll let it slide....
Tricky:Anyway, Fox, look what i found! *runs off* He came back with a back pack, and pulled out a package
Tricky:It had your name on it, so I didnt open it...
Fox: It had my name on it?! Hmm.... It says "Fox McCloud', allright...
Fox opens it to find..A Sword?!?!
Fox: Whoa.....VERY nice.....Well, SOMEONE knew that I needed a weapon...weird...
Falco: Well, I still need one...
Tricky: Falco, right? Well, The Shopkeeper has a secret room in the back of the store, and its full of al sorts of weird stuff...Your BOUND to find SOMETHING....
Falco: Thanks, kid...*walks toward Shop*
Fox: Hm...Well, I guess we should wait here....Tricky, what happened?
Tricky: I dont know....I just woke up and everything was gone...
Fox: Weird...
Tricky: I bet it was those Sharpclaw! They burn me up! *blows fire all over the place*
Fox: WHOA*yanks Krystal back*
Tricky: Sorry, Fox....But, whoever did this is going to have to answer to me!
Krystal: I feel sorry for the person who did this, then!
Fox: Yeah!
Falco comes back....
Falco: Well, Tricky was right....I had to knock out the guy to get this, though...Kept asking for scarabs...Anyway, look at this
Falco pulls out big...THING
Krystal: What is that?!?
Fox: Some sort of glaive....
The thing was big...It had four ax-like blades, balanced perfectly around a stout wooden pole.
Falco: *evil grin* I could do some serious damage with this...
Krystal: look like you'll get your chance...
8 Sharpclaw grunts ran into the clearing...
Tricky: CHARGE!
And charge he did...RIGHT into an unsuspecting Sharpclaw, knocking the wind out of him, then he threw him over his shoulder
Fox was busy with his own....He swung his sword, neatly dicing two Sharpclaw into kibble.
Falco threw one up into the air, and jumped up,flapped his wings to get above it, and smashed it down into the ground...
Krystal used a Superquake, knocking 3 down, and motioning for Tricky to flame them
Falco same down on another, pounding him into the ground, and doing a golf- like smack to the head
Fox bullcharged one, and cut it in half before it even hit the ground
Tricky jumped on the last one, and knocked it around with his horns
Fox: Dont finish that one, Tricky...We could interrogate it!
Tricky: Allright, Fox...Who are you working for?
Sharpclaw: Scales....
Fox:That's expected...Now, where is he?
Sharpclaw: Can't tell you..he punish!
Tricky beats him around with his horns some more: Talk!
Sharpclaw:NO!
Tricky: Ok, then...You asked for it! *rears back his head*
Sharpclaw: OCEAN TEMPLE! OCEAN TEMPLE!
Tricky: I thought that would work...What do we do with him, Fox?
Fox: Hmm...Lock him in the Arwings cargo chamber...
Tricky: Aww...I dont want the Sharpclaw stinking up my riding spot!
Fox: Dont worry, I'll put an air-freshener in it...
Tricky: Ok...*Knocks out the Sharpclaw*
Falco: Good job...
Falco picks up the Sharpclaw, and locks him in the cargo bay
Fox: To Ocean Force Temple...
They walk off toward Cape Claw ______________
Well, that one was action packed, now wasnt it? Well, review, if you dont mind...Except Grammer King...your not helpful...Your just mean....
