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Chapter 5 The party arrived at Ocean Force Point Temple

Fox: Ok, were here...now what?

Falco: We bust in, of course..

Falco runs at the temple...Only to bounce off of a forcefeild...He bangs on it for all hes worth, but its no good...

Fox: Hmm... *dials up Slippy on the comunicator* Slippy, any ideas?

Slippy: Ill send down something....Hold on... a box beams in out of nowhere

Fox opens the box to find...A Scrambler!

Fox throws the Scrambler at the forcefeild, and it disperses

Tricky: Cool!

They enter the temple....And Scales meets them at the entrance!!!

General Scales: Ted'k olod kho uk! Kxaj aj uj vuh uj ei we, Fox! (Dont even try it! This is as far as you go, Fox!)

Falco: Heh. Fossilhead forgot english!

General Scales: Nxuk? Nxuk ei ju? (What? What you say?)

Falco: Enough talk...Lets take thi thing out and collect our pay!

Falco ran at Scales, and jumped. Scales swung, but missed by a mile, and was kicked in the back of the head twice. Falco landed behind him, and quickly spins around, knocking Scales on his face...He only laughed and got up!

Scales: HAHA! Ei suddek xij'k mo! (HAHA! You cant hurt me!)

Scales rushed at Falco, who couldnt get out of the way, and picked him up by the throat!

Scales: De-edo sud tovouk General Scales! (No-one can defeat General Scales!)

A staff came out of Scales abdomen...Followed in short order by a blade and a pair of horns...

Fox, Krystal and Tricky: No zijk tat! (We just did!)

Scales: HA Ha...ha...*cough cough* De...DE! Andross juat A seict dek ro tojkhet!(No..NO! Andross said I could not be destroyed!)

Fox: Andross? Oh great....

the floor started rumbling...

Falco: Hold on guys, this isnt over yet!

Fox ahakes his head: It never is...

Andross came from the floor, and pointed at Fox with a big, sharp claw

Andross: Fox, you cannot win this time! I wont let you into that blasted Arwing!

Scales: Ei caot ke mo! Tuo!(You lied to me! Die!)

Fox enough time to run out and jump into his Arwing...

Fox: Ok, Andross is going DOWN!

Falco: I'm with you!

Together, they started shooting at Andross' hands, which quickly gave out under the viscious barrage. Andross tried to eat them, and they shot a bomb each down his throat, and fired like hell at his brain...Andross didnt last long..General Scales didn't last at all.

Andross: AUGH! *explodes*

Fox:...Didnt that seem kinda easy to you?

Falco: Yeah...Well, lets look for the Dinos....

Krystal: Im picking up a signal...Its coming from Krazoa Palace....Just like last time....

Fox: Ok, Ill pick you and Tricky up, and we'll go see

Fox did so, and they arrived at Krazoa Palace ____________

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