Fennec: Well, that's 3 good 2 bad. Damn.. Anyway, Its not childish, It just seems childish because all you write is lemons..I GUESS I could try a lemon..hmm. Anyway, I DIDN'T put it under humour, and whats wrong with tails?They'r there for a reason, you know.I admit, it probably wasn't for romantic purposes, but.Ah, screw it.

Princess Epona: Don't worry so much.I can take care of myself. _____________________

Look, im going to TRY the novel format.but I better not get any reviews complaining about grammer snd stuff! _____________________

Fox and the others arrived at Krazoa Palace, and immediately noticed something weird "Weird" Fox said "Theyr just.standing there." "What kind of kidnapping is this? Theres no guards, no cameras, no NOTHING!" Falco yelled, and stormed off exasperated "Whered you guys go?" Tricky asked A Thorntail piped up "We just woke up here." "*sigh* Lets go home.." Fox said "Theres nothing left to do.You guys can get back allright, cant you?" "Yeah, theres a transport around here SOMEWHERE." Said a Thorntail, and started looking around Fox jumped back in his Arwing, Krystal right behind, and they took off for the Great Fox. "Krystal, didn't you find that odd?" Asked Fox "Yeah.The dinosaurs WERENT kidnapped, Andross was a push-over, and Scales didn't know english. Maybe we could ask your General Pepper about it?" "Id rather not." "What would you rather do?" ".. I dunno..."

Krystal looked at him " I have a rough idea.." Fox turned red and gulped loudly "What?"

"I think you want to ask me to go out for dinner with you." "Yeah."

"I think you want to take a long walk with me afterwards" "Mhm." "I think you would rather not let Falco or the others know..."

"True, true." Falcos voice rang through the small cockpit"Well then turn your intercom off, Fox!" "AUGH!," Fox replied "I forgot.. Hey, why do I feel like Iv forgotten something ELSE?" "FOX! Theres still a Sharpclaw in the cargo hanger!" Krystal exclaimed "Don't worry, calm down.we'll just jettison him into space." They arrived back at the Great Fox, and opened the Cargo Hatch.to find..NOTHING.The Sharpclaw was gone! "What the." Said Fox "Well, he couldn't have escaped.."Said Falco, and wiped his feather on the door "Theres still dust on it from Dinosaur Planet.and besides, There wasn't enough time for it to." "That's weird.You don't suppose Tricky ate it, do you?" He meant it as a joke, but everyone else stirred uncomfortably " Oh, come on.I was joking! I travelled with Tricky for a long time, and he had plenty of chances to eat Sharpclaw.He never took them, so.Ah, never mind.Lets all turn in" "Except you, of course.So, when are you gonna sneak out of your room?" Said Falco "sigh.." "Ill just pretend nothing happened, then." Falco walked off. "Shall we go, then?" Fox asked, holding out his arm "It would be my pleasure." Krystal accepted the arm, and they hoppen into the Arwing and flew off. _______________

There..Is THAT better? BTW, the next chapter is going to be about the date..It will have NO relavance WHATSOEVER to the story.. So only read it if you came here for the romance.