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Crasher: Ur..Ill try *worried face* Zanzibar: Like I said before, Ill try to slow down.In fact, Im going to re- write the past chapters and add more detail.. (Quetsion: When you said "If youll try a date scene again" Did you mean you WANTED me to do one, or just-in-case?) ___________

OK! Two reviews in a row with the same beef.I go to fast, so Ill slow it down.Even though Im not sure how Im supposed to.Lets see, where were we?

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Chapter 9 Fox and Krystal woke up at noon. They just stared at each other for about half an hour before Fox broke the silence with a cough and walked out.Not really noticing or caring that it was HIS room..And went through his usual routine, get some food, head to the bridge.. His thought pattern went something like this.. "Get food, go to the Bridge, get food..Krystal.Go to the bridge, get.Krystal?. Go to the..Krystal?.Get Krystal, go to the Krystal" Fox did an about-face, and started heading towards his room again, reasoning that if his mind wandered, why couldn't he? He walked in the door, and Krystal was still there, so he walked up to her and said "Hello.ur.again."

"H-hello, Fox.." Fox stared hard at the ground Krystal stared hard at Fox Falco was confused about the whole mess "Hey, why so gloomy?" he said cheefully "Go away.We're having a private moment here.." Fox snarled "Well, then you should close the door!" Falco stormed off haughtily, mumbling about something. Fox closed the door "well, here we are again.Alone.In my room.Staring at each other.." "Yes.We are."

"..Im uh.Sorry about diving on you like that.I REALLY should have asked first, or something.." "Um..Its allright.I kind of expected it." Suddenly, the air tasted better and everything was brighter for Fox.. "Well, ok then..Shall we go have breakfast?" "Ok, Ill be out in a minute.I have to change." "Well, you should go to your room then.THAT'S where your clothes are.." "Oh right.Almost forgot" Krystal walked daintily out of the room, and Fox collapsed on his bed "Life is so complicated..Well, better shower and change myself.." Fox had a quick shower, changed into some new clothes, and walked towards the gally. He walked slowly, looking around, and whistleing a tune he couldn't quite remember.Everything was fantastic! "Fox, are you on drugs?" Falcos voice stung deep into Fox's ears "Grr...NO!" "Touchy.I think maybe that vixen is having and effect on you.."

"She has a name, you know."

"Yeah, some sort of jewel." "KRYSTAL!"

"Right, Krystal, well, Ill leave you alone with your mental issues."

Falco waked off..He didn't show it, but having Fox growl at him was an experience he didn't care to repeat..He decided to be a little more careful, and try not to notice the growing void between them..Maybe that would make it go away? "Why is everyone thinking so hard today?" Slippy's course, froggy voice rang into Falco's ear like a drill

"Don't sneak up on me like that! And what do you mean "Why is everyone thinking so hard"?"

"Well, Krystal is wandering the corridor around her room, and she has the same zoned-out expression as you do.."

"Oh yeah, her.Maybe I should ask HER why Fox is being so touchy?"

"Might work.."

"Thanks, Slippy, Im going to try that."

"No problem, see ya, Falco." Falco walked off towards Krystals room.And got hopelessly lost. he hadn't been on the Great Fox for about 6-7 years, and finding a new room was not easy. Luckily, even though he didn't know where he was, he found Krystal, who indeed had a lost, thinking expression on her face

"Hey, pretty lady, whats a nice girl like you doing in a floating tub like this?"

"I'm not in the mood, Falco."

" Sheesh, no ones in the mood for Falco today.Fox is snubbing me, and now a cheeky young girl I just met."

"Im sorry, Falco, I didn't mean to be rude.What is the matter?"

"Well, Fox is being REALLY weird lately.He won't talk to me, and he doesn't take jokes anymore. You know why? You seem pretty close to him, so I thought I'd ask."

"Well, Im pretty sure I have something to do with it, but I don't know the specifics..You HAVE noticed that he's-"

"Yeah, yeah, head-over-heels in love, gag gag, cry cry.Now, Why should that make him mad at me?"

"Well, you havnt exactly been supportive."

"Supportive? I can be supportive! NO problem! Im going to go be as supportive as I can!" Falco marched off with big ideas about letting Fox know he was.. Well, actually he didn't know exactly HOW he was going to support, but for the love of lasers, he was going to try!

".Why do I get the feeling he missed the point?" Krystal said "Now, what was I thinking about?.Oh well, I suppose I should just go get breakfast." Krystal walked towards the gally. Ironically, Fox and Krystal were walking the right corridors and the right speed to neatly meet up with each other just in front of Fox's room.. __________________

Well, was that better? I hope so, because if I go any slower, and going to go backwards..Anyway, no more updates until I fix the other chapters to be slower.