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Chapter 14 _______ Fox continued to race through the assortment of halls he was presented...He HAD to find this spirit..he wasn't sure how he knew, but this one would help him...He could just TELL. He kept going, but he seemed to be going in circles. He eventually sat down, tired and annoyed.
"This is worse then the Gamwell maze!" He chatted with himself.."I can't seem to get anywhere!"
He looked around for something, anything that could help him distinguish from the rock walls...but there was nothing. Everything was made of the same brown rock....He looked at his furry paw, and balled it into a fist...He walked up to the wall, and punched it for all he was worth. He was satisfied as a cracking noise indicated the sizable dent he had made
"GREAT! Now I have something to go by..Every time I take a turn, Ill put a hole in the wall..."
He raced ahead, left, right, forward, right, everytime punching a small dent into the rock. If he found a junction with a dent, he would take the other way...Eventually, he had a long path with no dents. He ran down it, and ended up at a door! SUCCESS! He opened it, and went in...Standing there on the alter, was a red Krazoa spirit!
"Welcome, Fox...Do you think yourself worthy of my power?"
"Krazoa, I need your help..."
"Take my test..."
"I dont have time for tests! Help me, please!"
"Your fate is sealed, Fox....Meet it head on!"
Fox's vision flashed, now he was standing in the middle of a ring...On the opposite end, was a large black...Thing!Fox rushed it, but the thing stopped every attack...Then, it pulled out a chain, and through it around him! He couldn't move...He strained against the chains with al his might, but couldnt break them..Then, he looked down at them...And was amazed!
In every single gap between the links, he saw his own past..Then, he began to see bits of what he presumed were his future...He saw himself, alone...He was looking at a casket..Then, as if some horrible slide show, the loops zoomed in on the contents..There lied Krystal, his love..Dead.... "No....This is not my future! I CONTROL MY OWN FATE!" He roared at his staring adversary...."No one but me...I WILL save her, and nothing can stop me!"
New strength surged through his body, and he strained against the chains that kept him...Miraculously, they broke! The links fell to the floor, forming into a shining blade...Fox picked it up, and eyed his enemy. It stepped back, until it was teetering on the edge of the arena....Fox advanced on him. He winded slowly towards his opponent, raising the blade high above his head..He swung down with all his strength..but at the last moment, the thing CHANGED...It got much smaller..Grew blue fur..And its face changed to that of his beloved Krystal!!! Fox stopped dead, and just stared...The Krystal smiled, and knocked Fox across the room! It advanced on his prone form, and raised its fist in triumph..Now it was Wolf, grinning in triumph, now it was Andross, impossibly huge, wanting nothing more then to crush his hated enemy...now he was General Scales, snarling, and roaring his win...It raised its arm...At the last second, Fox jumped up, tripping the thing, and plunging his blade hard into its chest...The thing dissappeared, and he found himself facing the Krazoa.
"Good work, Fox...You have defeated your past, and broken the finality of your destiny...Now, my power becomes yours..."
The Krazoa flew into Fox, and absorbed into him..Became him..Suddenly, Fox felt a wickedly awesome power building inside him...He floated up, and transported back to the Warpstone, where Falco was waiting..
"Falco, I got what i came for..Now, Im going to save my Krystal!!!"
"Allright, Fox..h..Whats your plan? I'v got your back.."
"No need, my friend...I can handle this myself"
"What re you-"
Fox floated up, and flames leaped up his body, And he flew off..Into space...
Chapter 14 _______ Fox continued to race through the assortment of halls he was presented...He HAD to find this spirit..he wasn't sure how he knew, but this one would help him...He could just TELL. He kept going, but he seemed to be going in circles. He eventually sat down, tired and annoyed.
"This is worse then the Gamwell maze!" He chatted with himself.."I can't seem to get anywhere!"
He looked around for something, anything that could help him distinguish from the rock walls...but there was nothing. Everything was made of the same brown rock....He looked at his furry paw, and balled it into a fist...He walked up to the wall, and punched it for all he was worth. He was satisfied as a cracking noise indicated the sizable dent he had made
"GREAT! Now I have something to go by..Every time I take a turn, Ill put a hole in the wall..."
He raced ahead, left, right, forward, right, everytime punching a small dent into the rock. If he found a junction with a dent, he would take the other way...Eventually, he had a long path with no dents. He ran down it, and ended up at a door! SUCCESS! He opened it, and went in...Standing there on the alter, was a red Krazoa spirit!
"Welcome, Fox...Do you think yourself worthy of my power?"
"Krazoa, I need your help..."
"Take my test..."
"I dont have time for tests! Help me, please!"
"Your fate is sealed, Fox....Meet it head on!"
Fox's vision flashed, now he was standing in the middle of a ring...On the opposite end, was a large black...Thing!Fox rushed it, but the thing stopped every attack...Then, it pulled out a chain, and through it around him! He couldn't move...He strained against the chains with al his might, but couldnt break them..Then, he looked down at them...And was amazed!
In every single gap between the links, he saw his own past..Then, he began to see bits of what he presumed were his future...He saw himself, alone...He was looking at a casket..Then, as if some horrible slide show, the loops zoomed in on the contents..There lied Krystal, his love..Dead.... "No....This is not my future! I CONTROL MY OWN FATE!" He roared at his staring adversary...."No one but me...I WILL save her, and nothing can stop me!"
New strength surged through his body, and he strained against the chains that kept him...Miraculously, they broke! The links fell to the floor, forming into a shining blade...Fox picked it up, and eyed his enemy. It stepped back, until it was teetering on the edge of the arena....Fox advanced on him. He winded slowly towards his opponent, raising the blade high above his head..He swung down with all his strength..but at the last moment, the thing CHANGED...It got much smaller..Grew blue fur..And its face changed to that of his beloved Krystal!!! Fox stopped dead, and just stared...The Krystal smiled, and knocked Fox across the room! It advanced on his prone form, and raised its fist in triumph..Now it was Wolf, grinning in triumph, now it was Andross, impossibly huge, wanting nothing more then to crush his hated enemy...now he was General Scales, snarling, and roaring his win...It raised its arm...At the last second, Fox jumped up, tripping the thing, and plunging his blade hard into its chest...The thing dissappeared, and he found himself facing the Krazoa.
"Good work, Fox...You have defeated your past, and broken the finality of your destiny...Now, my power becomes yours..."
The Krazoa flew into Fox, and absorbed into him..Became him..Suddenly, Fox felt a wickedly awesome power building inside him...He floated up, and transported back to the Warpstone, where Falco was waiting..
"Falco, I got what i came for..Now, Im going to save my Krystal!!!"
"Allright, Fox..h..Whats your plan? I'v got your back.."
"No need, my friend...I can handle this myself"
"What re you-"
Fox floated up, and flames leaped up his body, And he flew off..Into space...
