*burp* and Krystal lover: I think your the same person...But anyway, Maybe
Ill take this wanton insulting from someone with their OWN fictions, but
not from some random yokel. The way I see it, you have three choices...
1:Elaborate on what made it bad, so I can fix it. That's what reviewing is
FOR.
2: Write your own...If its better then mine, Ill take your crap
3: Scram
Gold ninetails:...Well, I feel like a jerk...Um...I was sorta in a bad mood that day...sowwy...
Zoids-111: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy it...
RayD: Uh, ok...Weird, my whatsit didn't tell me you updated....Ill check it out...
_____________ Chapter 18
Krystal slowly woke up, as Fox fought for control of himself. She found herself in his arms, her injury healed, and Fox's temporarily discarded eyes staring at her blankly. She slowly lifted her paw up, brushing his face, trying to wake him from whatever held him captive...As she pondered the trouble that may have caused this strange absence, he suddenly came awake, darting out and grabbing her paw. He squeezed it tight, and pulled her into a tight kiss, closing his eyes and pushing his face into her. With this pent up need out of the way, he helped her up, and explained what was going on...
"Krystal.." he stammered out, sounding strangely distant.... "This is going to sound crazy, but please listen...To save you, I got help...From a Krazoa, but he's..." Here, he shuddered slightly "Hes evil...Hes pure evil...And I think you can help...He took over my body...He doesn't know I took control back yet, but I don't know when he'll notice, and take over again...You have to find a way to get it out!"
Krystal looked at him, confused "But...How?"
He shook his paws frantically "It doesn't MATTER how...Please, do something! Hurry! He's...Coming...Back" He seemed to fade out, being slowly replaced by the bad spirit inside him...
He moved into a very low mock bow, coming up with a wolfish smile on his face "I am sorry your little visit had to be cut off on such short notice, but I couldn't allow him to say anymore..."
Krystal backed away slowly, picking up the big gun Wolf had discarded "I don't know who you are...But if you don't give me back my Fox, I'll..." She slowly raised the it, ready to shoot, but "Fox" only laughed
"Oh be serious...I know that even if that pitiful toy COULD hurt me...You don't have the guts to shoot your big, handsome Fox" With that, he raised his hands in an exaggerated swooning motion, before throwing them down and laughing harshly. He took a slow step toward her.
As she watched the menace walk forward, hidden within its pilfered costume, the flesh and bone of her love...She found that she really could not do it...Her lip quivered as she tried to pull the trigger, but every time she saw that familiar face, it seemed to distort into a mask of horror, and she imagined herself all alone....She shook her head, clearing out the terrible sight, and found herself looking directly into the invaders eyes. She took a quick step backwards, and held her weapon directly to his head, breathing fast and ragged as she mustered herself for what she was going to do...But then she realized something...She really COULD help Fox, but she had to do something that she didn't like anymore then the thought of shooting...She threw down the blaster and looked at "Fox" with a mischievous twinkle in her eye...
"I like your forwardness...Fox was nice, but he was such a wimp about our relationship..." She said slyly "He wouldn't make a move if his life depended on it..."
"Fox" Smiled to himself, while on the inside, he gloated at Fox's gasp of horror at the sudden betrayal. He thought to himself -Well, this day has turned out well...Now I just have to go forward and take my final prize- He took one last step forward, smirking.
"I am glad you came to your senses..." He said "Of course, I could have had you, whether you wanted me or not, but its so much more fun this way"
He pushed her into the wall, and she threw her arms up around his neck. He grabbed her right leg, and pulled it up, putting it over his shoulder. He brought his muzzle forward, and pressed it to hers...Now was the time to put her plan in motion. She fiercely returned the kiss, though it tasted like poison...She had to keep him like this for as long as possible...He tried twice to pull away and have some real fun, but both times, she re-initiated the long kiss. This was fun and all, but he was getting impatient...He tore away roughly, but she all but tackled him, biting onto his muzzle for all she was worth. During this ordeal, she had been slowly teasing him out of his place in Fox's soul, but now the time for tugging was over...She would have to rip the vile thing out of him in one sudden yank...Fox, still stuck in his own mind, smiled as he realized what she was doing
Grav's soul was in shock as he found out all too late about her special ability...Channeling spirits through her own body. She had only recently realized that she could pull him out of his host this way, and he was amazed by her ferocity in doing so. She had pretty much stapled them together to finish the process. He felt himself being slowly sucked out, pulled into this vixen. Luckily, he still had control, and smiled to himself as he raised his stolen paw to strike her down...What he did not realize was that though he had control, his will power was severely jarred from Fox's mind. He could no longer keep Fox's overwhelming soul at bay, and it burst loose.
"Grav, it ends here!" Fox called out boldly
Grav shook his head "If I can't have this body...I will destroy your soul before you can recover it!" He roared and rushed his enemy...
Grav attacked quickly, knocking Fox between the eyes. Fox rocked back on his heels with the force of the blow, but recovered quickly, turning the backwards force to his advantage. He let himself fall back in a feint, but quickly pushed forward, swiping his leg into the back of Grav's knee. The evil spirit crumpled to the floor, but when Fox jumped up to deliver the final blow, he found him back up and still fine. Grav laughed at Fox's pitiful attempt to defeat him. He didn't give up...He rushed forward, knocking Grav down again, and kicking for all he was worth. Grav simply got up, floating away again, but this time when Fox rushed to attack, he brought out his own hand, spilling a wave of energy into him. The wave stopped Fox in his tracks, and he grunted as a tremendous pain flared into his chest. Despite the pain, he smiled, noticing Grav's substance slightly less consistent...He was fading...Slowly, but surely, he was fading...
"Perhaps you have forgotten, Fox, that I am not only an invincible spirit, but a powerful warrior!"
Fox faced the spirit, still grinning "And what you have forgotten, you piece of shit, is that this whole fight was a diversion"
Grav started, looking around wildly. The vixens attempts to remove him just now came back to mind, but before he could do anything, he felt a flaring pain...He looked down at his chest in horror, seeing his very essence dissipate and flow away, into Krystal's waiting mouth...It was no matter, he thought frantically, he would simply take control of the vixen, pretend to be her for a while, and then transfer himself from her to him again...What he didn't expect was that Krystal had amazing will power, and could keep him at bay for a long, long time..He screamed to himself as he was transported to who knows what...
-Great- Krystal thought to herself -Just great...The spirit's in my mouth, but..NOW what?!- She looked around frantically, seeing no place safe enough to dispose of the being...But then she remembered...She had to let it loose in a Krazoa statue...But..She didn't know how long she could keep the thing inside her...She didn't even know where she could find a statue...She would need Fox..He had more experience with the Krazoa, so she rushed to him, shaking him mercilessly in an attempt to wake him...She smiled widely as Fox groaned, coming to life in her arms again.
"Krystal?" He said slowly, still half-conscious "Are you all right?"
She said nothing, but gestured frantically at her mouth. Fox understood, thankfully, and picked her up, running her to the Wolfens hanger...He looked around for a craft, but it was no use..They had stolen all but one on their last "visit", and that one had a gaping hole in the windshield where he himself had crashed through....He threw up his hands in frustration...He had no way to get Krystal to Dinosaur Planet. That is, he didn't, until he heard some static on the ruined craft's radio...That must mean that some other ship was in speaking range...He hopped into the seat, and jammed on the radio buttons, trying to get something to work...He was rewarded by less static, and finally, a familiar voice...
"Hello? Hey, anyone there? This is Falco Lombardi, identify yourself"
"Falco?! ALL RIGHT! Hey, I saved Krystal, but we've got some unfinished business on Dino Planet...We're on the Wolfen..Could you pick us up?"
"Ugh, all right...I'm on the way, pal...But..Why can't you just use one of the Wolfens ships?"
"I uh..There was only one left, and I kinda broke it..."
"Broke it?! How do you BREAK a starship while its still in the hanger?!"
"It's a long story, now get your tail feathers over here! Step on it!"
"Allright, allright...Sheesh.Im coming already..."
Fox closed the com link, jumping out of the seat, going to hold Krystal's paw...And hope for the best....
Gold ninetails:...Well, I feel like a jerk...Um...I was sorta in a bad mood that day...sowwy...
Zoids-111: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoy it...
RayD: Uh, ok...Weird, my whatsit didn't tell me you updated....Ill check it out...
_____________ Chapter 18
Krystal slowly woke up, as Fox fought for control of himself. She found herself in his arms, her injury healed, and Fox's temporarily discarded eyes staring at her blankly. She slowly lifted her paw up, brushing his face, trying to wake him from whatever held him captive...As she pondered the trouble that may have caused this strange absence, he suddenly came awake, darting out and grabbing her paw. He squeezed it tight, and pulled her into a tight kiss, closing his eyes and pushing his face into her. With this pent up need out of the way, he helped her up, and explained what was going on...
"Krystal.." he stammered out, sounding strangely distant.... "This is going to sound crazy, but please listen...To save you, I got help...From a Krazoa, but he's..." Here, he shuddered slightly "Hes evil...Hes pure evil...And I think you can help...He took over my body...He doesn't know I took control back yet, but I don't know when he'll notice, and take over again...You have to find a way to get it out!"
Krystal looked at him, confused "But...How?"
He shook his paws frantically "It doesn't MATTER how...Please, do something! Hurry! He's...Coming...Back" He seemed to fade out, being slowly replaced by the bad spirit inside him...
He moved into a very low mock bow, coming up with a wolfish smile on his face "I am sorry your little visit had to be cut off on such short notice, but I couldn't allow him to say anymore..."
Krystal backed away slowly, picking up the big gun Wolf had discarded "I don't know who you are...But if you don't give me back my Fox, I'll..." She slowly raised the it, ready to shoot, but "Fox" only laughed
"Oh be serious...I know that even if that pitiful toy COULD hurt me...You don't have the guts to shoot your big, handsome Fox" With that, he raised his hands in an exaggerated swooning motion, before throwing them down and laughing harshly. He took a slow step toward her.
As she watched the menace walk forward, hidden within its pilfered costume, the flesh and bone of her love...She found that she really could not do it...Her lip quivered as she tried to pull the trigger, but every time she saw that familiar face, it seemed to distort into a mask of horror, and she imagined herself all alone....She shook her head, clearing out the terrible sight, and found herself looking directly into the invaders eyes. She took a quick step backwards, and held her weapon directly to his head, breathing fast and ragged as she mustered herself for what she was going to do...But then she realized something...She really COULD help Fox, but she had to do something that she didn't like anymore then the thought of shooting...She threw down the blaster and looked at "Fox" with a mischievous twinkle in her eye...
"I like your forwardness...Fox was nice, but he was such a wimp about our relationship..." She said slyly "He wouldn't make a move if his life depended on it..."
"Fox" Smiled to himself, while on the inside, he gloated at Fox's gasp of horror at the sudden betrayal. He thought to himself -Well, this day has turned out well...Now I just have to go forward and take my final prize- He took one last step forward, smirking.
"I am glad you came to your senses..." He said "Of course, I could have had you, whether you wanted me or not, but its so much more fun this way"
He pushed her into the wall, and she threw her arms up around his neck. He grabbed her right leg, and pulled it up, putting it over his shoulder. He brought his muzzle forward, and pressed it to hers...Now was the time to put her plan in motion. She fiercely returned the kiss, though it tasted like poison...She had to keep him like this for as long as possible...He tried twice to pull away and have some real fun, but both times, she re-initiated the long kiss. This was fun and all, but he was getting impatient...He tore away roughly, but she all but tackled him, biting onto his muzzle for all she was worth. During this ordeal, she had been slowly teasing him out of his place in Fox's soul, but now the time for tugging was over...She would have to rip the vile thing out of him in one sudden yank...Fox, still stuck in his own mind, smiled as he realized what she was doing
Grav's soul was in shock as he found out all too late about her special ability...Channeling spirits through her own body. She had only recently realized that she could pull him out of his host this way, and he was amazed by her ferocity in doing so. She had pretty much stapled them together to finish the process. He felt himself being slowly sucked out, pulled into this vixen. Luckily, he still had control, and smiled to himself as he raised his stolen paw to strike her down...What he did not realize was that though he had control, his will power was severely jarred from Fox's mind. He could no longer keep Fox's overwhelming soul at bay, and it burst loose.
"Grav, it ends here!" Fox called out boldly
Grav shook his head "If I can't have this body...I will destroy your soul before you can recover it!" He roared and rushed his enemy...
Grav attacked quickly, knocking Fox between the eyes. Fox rocked back on his heels with the force of the blow, but recovered quickly, turning the backwards force to his advantage. He let himself fall back in a feint, but quickly pushed forward, swiping his leg into the back of Grav's knee. The evil spirit crumpled to the floor, but when Fox jumped up to deliver the final blow, he found him back up and still fine. Grav laughed at Fox's pitiful attempt to defeat him. He didn't give up...He rushed forward, knocking Grav down again, and kicking for all he was worth. Grav simply got up, floating away again, but this time when Fox rushed to attack, he brought out his own hand, spilling a wave of energy into him. The wave stopped Fox in his tracks, and he grunted as a tremendous pain flared into his chest. Despite the pain, he smiled, noticing Grav's substance slightly less consistent...He was fading...Slowly, but surely, he was fading...
"Perhaps you have forgotten, Fox, that I am not only an invincible spirit, but a powerful warrior!"
Fox faced the spirit, still grinning "And what you have forgotten, you piece of shit, is that this whole fight was a diversion"
Grav started, looking around wildly. The vixens attempts to remove him just now came back to mind, but before he could do anything, he felt a flaring pain...He looked down at his chest in horror, seeing his very essence dissipate and flow away, into Krystal's waiting mouth...It was no matter, he thought frantically, he would simply take control of the vixen, pretend to be her for a while, and then transfer himself from her to him again...What he didn't expect was that Krystal had amazing will power, and could keep him at bay for a long, long time..He screamed to himself as he was transported to who knows what...
-Great- Krystal thought to herself -Just great...The spirit's in my mouth, but..NOW what?!- She looked around frantically, seeing no place safe enough to dispose of the being...But then she remembered...She had to let it loose in a Krazoa statue...But..She didn't know how long she could keep the thing inside her...She didn't even know where she could find a statue...She would need Fox..He had more experience with the Krazoa, so she rushed to him, shaking him mercilessly in an attempt to wake him...She smiled widely as Fox groaned, coming to life in her arms again.
"Krystal?" He said slowly, still half-conscious "Are you all right?"
She said nothing, but gestured frantically at her mouth. Fox understood, thankfully, and picked her up, running her to the Wolfens hanger...He looked around for a craft, but it was no use..They had stolen all but one on their last "visit", and that one had a gaping hole in the windshield where he himself had crashed through....He threw up his hands in frustration...He had no way to get Krystal to Dinosaur Planet. That is, he didn't, until he heard some static on the ruined craft's radio...That must mean that some other ship was in speaking range...He hopped into the seat, and jammed on the radio buttons, trying to get something to work...He was rewarded by less static, and finally, a familiar voice...
"Hello? Hey, anyone there? This is Falco Lombardi, identify yourself"
"Falco?! ALL RIGHT! Hey, I saved Krystal, but we've got some unfinished business on Dino Planet...We're on the Wolfen..Could you pick us up?"
"Ugh, all right...I'm on the way, pal...But..Why can't you just use one of the Wolfens ships?"
"I uh..There was only one left, and I kinda broke it..."
"Broke it?! How do you BREAK a starship while its still in the hanger?!"
"It's a long story, now get your tail feathers over here! Step on it!"
"Allright, allright...Sheesh.Im coming already..."
Fox closed the com link, jumping out of the seat, going to hold Krystal's paw...And hope for the best....
