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Omoikane: Well, thanks..Im very glad you enjoyed it:)..and sorry bout the lime, I needed a vent...but thats more then you need to know ^_^() well, enough people like this story that Iv got a veritable fan club:-p

Crasher: Well your in luck..This is the last REAL chapter....but you know, your review is kinda erratic..You say its going to fast, while at the same time its going nowhere...Maybe Im not to fast at all and your just slow? _____________________________________________

This is it,people...The last chapter...If I get the sudden urge, i might write one last date later...But not now, since I have a lot of things I have to do...Feel free to Email me any questions you have about the plot at Grandpikachao@aol.com..Or if you dont have Email for some reason, just post a review asking said question, and Ill answer it ASAP...Then, Ill make my next fic, which, since I dont have ANY sort of real focus, will be completely unrealated to this one (its not even a Starfox fic O_O) _____________________________________________

Falco landed in the Wolfens hanger, wordlessly, he opens the cargo bay..Krystal and Fox get inside, and he takes off again. He flies back to Dinosaur Planet, dropping them directly to the Warpstone, which smiles greatly.

"Good ta see you again, Fox...Did ya save the lass?"

"Warpstone, I should beat you MORE senseless...Why didn't you TELL me the spirit was evil?!"

The Warpstone looked shocked and kinda sad..."Well uh..I dinna KNOW it was..My deepest apologies.." It said meekly

Fox closed his eyes, rubbing his temples with his fingers, and sighed "Sorry, old friend, I'm under a bit of stress right now...Could you take us to the shrine? We need to put the thing back before it kills us both..."

"Kills ya?! Im on it!"

The Warpstone picked them both up, and transported them to the maze Fox had run before...Krystal's eyes widened, and she sighed hopelessly..Inside her, Grav was smiling...It would take them ages to navigate the maze..And by then, he would have taken control of the girl... Fox looked reassuringly at Krystal.

"Dont worry, I have a short cut" Fox smiled wickedly, then pulled out a BIG gun "I grabbed this baby right before we departed...Shall we go?"

The gun charged, and he blew the wall out. He ran forward, blowing every wall that got in his way to hell. Krystal followed along in his wake, shaking her head slightly and smiling...Finally, they made their way to the room where Grav had been imprisoned, Fox tossing the gun aside as he pushed the door open. Krystal dashed forward, and kneeled on the altar. She felt a familiar pain as she forced the raging spirit from her body, inprisoning it in the stone altar again...She got up, and smiled weakly at Fox, who was grinning wildly back. She ran, pounced at him, and was deftly caught and spun around by the now laughing Fox. The spirals slowed down until they both collapsed in a dizzy heap on the stone floor. Fox rolled over on top of her, and lowered himself down for a quick kiss on the forehead. He smiled again

"It's over..They've all been beaten..." Here he got up.. "Scales, Andross, even Wolf...They're all gone...There is no one left to stand in the way of our happily ever after..." He boomed out, his face growing heavy with love. He picked her up, and turned to leave...Something caught the corner of his eye...He put Krystal down and turned, drawing his sword...He couln't believe what he saw...

Overflowing from the cracks in the alter...Was a red energy..It flowed, turning into a puddle on the floor. He sighed with relief, but even as he finished that, the energy rose up in a thick column, cascading down again to reveal a gigantic stone creature...

"FOOOOOOX!" it boomed out in a beastly version of Grav's voice "It's not over until I say it is!" The gigantic creature charged, its long arms reaching out, and enveloping Fox completely with one massive paw. It picked him up, raising him up to its face...Fox looked frantically to where he had left Krystal , and found to his horror that she too had been swept up in the gigantic paw..He had one idea. He wormed his way to his belt, and activated the small red gizmo on it...Now he would have to stall.

"Well..." he said, feigning total hopelessness "I guess this is it...But please, leave Krystal out of this!" Krystal was nearing hysterics..She was yelling,and pounding at Gravs rocky paws(?) with her small fists.

"Don't worry, Fox..You can die peacefully knowing I won't kill the girl until your dead..but before that, i think you deserve to know what all this was..."

Fox couldn't believe his luck...This guy obviously had an ego problem..He was going to tell a long story about SOMETHING...Then he would just see how long he could stay alive...

"Everything that has happened to you since you first left Dinosaur planet has been my doing...The fake missions here, the Wolf Team attacking you, the vixen's kidnapping...Everything was beautifully orchestrated by yours truly!"

"But how? Your powers..They were sealed here, in this shrine"

(Those with questions about the plot should listen carefully to this next bit...its important)

"Do you really think any force as powerful as me could be confined for the millenia that passed after my entrapment? During the eons, I have slowly but surely wormed my power out of this accursed cell..I had enough power let out to at least watch the planet. I was waiting for someone like you, Fox...Someone who would go to any extremes to protect something...The something was Krystal. I knew from the moment I saw you stare at her that you would fall in love with her, and she would be instrumental in ridding me of my prison...And so I watched, all the while my power grew. I as about to give up hope, when a new window of opportunity fell from the sky! You, Fox..You had everything I needed to regain my place as ruler of this pitiful planet, and every other planet we Krazoa created. So I made plans immediatly...I had grown quite powerful by then, so I struggled with new strength to free more, and more, and MORE of my power. I had enough when you first came upon the foolish girl, trapped in a crystal...But I had to wait...and wait...I was beggining to wonder if you would ever finish your mission! Afterwards, I mustered my power for the long and tricky plan I had concocted...I sent a message to your leader..Pepper. I used a minor disguise magick, looking like the Earthwalker King...I sent a message of distress. Then, I had to bring back Scales and Andross...It was hard. I didn't have enough pwer left for a complete revival...I could merely make shades. Barely inteligant..But they fit my needs. Then, I sent a message to the Starwolf Team, this time masquerading as Scales....I promised a great revenge on you, Fox...My original plan was for them to capture Krystal right after you got back to the Great Fox...But the fools couldn't accomplish it...On the first run, the one called Pigma got cold feet..So, I mustered my power again...Then I preformed a spell that nearly drained everything...I reversed time. I couldn't do a full reversal, not of the entire universe..So I just hit the three key points, the Wolfen, Pepper, and Dinosaur Planet..But alas, on the second time, Falco stayed back at your ship for some reason...He took a little joy ride instead of going with you...They weren't going to risk fighting him, and turned back..I was desperate. AT this point, I tapped into my very life energy to reverse time again...Once again, you messed things up..You all stayed back. I was too weak to warn the Starwolf team...They assumed that you were all on Dinosaur Planet, and attacked the Great Fox...Instead of capturing only Krystal, and maybe Falco..They got all three of you..And nearly killed you. Luckily, one half of the Starwolf team was killed by Falco..This brought Wolf over the edge, drove him insane..And bold. He assaulted the Great Fox while you were sleeping...He took Krystal. It didn't work like I planned, but I guess it all turned out ok in the end..You came to me for my power..."

(GAWD im sorry I typed such a long dialoug....This part is basically for the people who are loking at the plot and going.."huh...What the hell is going on?!?")

"but Grav..If you were so drained of power..Why did I feel so much stronger, and how did you recover so quickly and take over my body?

"You fool...I didn't give you any power at all...That power came from YOU. It was allready there...I just unlocked it. And when I did..I feasted."

"So if this is MY power...Whats stopping me from using it NOW?"

"You dont know how." Grav sighed almost sadly now "If you only knew how strong you could get, if only you could unlock your real power..You might have to travel to other dimensions to learn to use it properly...If you weren't about to die, I might refer you to a world I once created called Hyrule..It yeilded a great swordsmen named Link who could use magic very well...But I think I'll just kill you instead"

"Theres just one thing you dont know about me..."

"And whats that?" Grav said, sounding slightly worried

"I just sent out a distress signal..While you were braggin about your stupid plan, like some bad movie villian, every ship in the quadrent is being called to help me...And I have a lot of friends, Grav...You should try having friends some time!"

Then all hell broke loose...4 ships burst in through the wall of the shrine... "Hey, Fox, are you getting in trouble without me again? You KNOW I hate that! Give the word, and I blast away.." Falcos voice rang on an intercom

"Hey old friend...I couldn't help but notice your in a tight spot..." Fox recognised that voice..It as Bill Grey, an old friend..Fox was greeted byt he third ship, another blast from the past..

"Hey Fox..A little birdy told me you might need me...So I hightailed it here"..Fox knew that voice...It was Katt...

"Who are you calling little?" Falcos voice came out again...

Then, for at least the hundreth time today..Fox was surprised "...Your Fox, right?" came a shaky, yet familiar voice...Wolf...What in the hell was WOLF doing here?!

Bill explained.."I found this moron floating around in space...He seems to have amnesia..That and more bumps on his head then i can count. I couldnt just let him die, he doesn't even know who he IS..."

Grav shook his head, smiling sinisterly.."This is all very touching...but...Dont you remember that I still have your women? Would you really risk her getting hurt just to kill me?"

"And dont you KNOW that Krystal escaped a long time ago?"

"WHAT!?!" Grav opened his hand to check...He found Krystal in his hand, and luaghed mockingly "You fool! Shes still right here, in my hand!"

Fox burst out laughing "Not anymore! FIRE!"

Grav looked in shock as Krystal seemed to dissapear from his hand...He looked down to see her falling to the ground, landing with grace and running away quickly..but that was the least of his worries. Four very powerful laser batteries were locked on and firing before he could do anything...Grav screamed in anguish as he was blown apart. He was gone...But..So was Fox...He managed to avoid the shots from the ships, but then he fell to the hard floor, and was buried in rubble...Krystal watched in shock...The four ships landed, their pilots stepping out slowly..Falco was smiling jovialy, while Katt and Bill were on the verge of tears. Krystal looked up and saw Falco's smile widen into a laugh...She smacked him right across the beak, tears running like rivers down her face.

"How can you laugh at a time like this! He's gone! Theres no way he could have survived that! You IDIOT, why did you fire?!"

Falco rubbed his beak where she had hit him, then grabbed her by the shoulder..His laugh was gone, replaced by a dead serious look "Your right..Fox McCloud..Is dead. But..." he turned her around to face the rubble...One pebble fell off the pile..then another..Now the entire pile was rattling, adn Falco was laughing "Bafomdadas are a wonderful thing, aren't they?"

Bill scratched his head "Bafom-what?"

Falco laughed even hardier at this.."It doesnt matter...Now, are you going to just stand there, or are you going to help me dig Fox out of his premature burial site?" witht aht he walked forward, and started tossing rocks aside. Eventually, he moved one, and found one big eye looking back at him.

"Hey, pal, nice to almost see you"

"Very funny, Falco, now get me out of here! The Bafomdads getting scared, and my arms are getting ripped up..." The little creature had used its magic up already, but it was still with Fox, since it couldn't get away..It was scratching frantically all over, trying to escape...

Hope and relief surged through Krystal. She too started to laugh, moving forward quickly to help Faco with the rocks. Bill and Katt were soon caught up in the infectious merth, and Wolf, looking confused, started to half-heartedly chuckle...Soon, they had managed to clear out the rocks, and Fox stoood before them, battered and bruised, but very much alive...He smiled strongly, putting his paw up in a victory sign. Then his smile wavered, and he nearly fell over, moving one foot to a more stable position...And for the last five seconds of his consiousness, before he passed out and fell backwards, he was smothered with affection by the very relieved Krystal. Falco leered suggestively at Katt, who playfully pushed him away, before giving him a slight peck on the beak and walking back to her ship...

Wolf had long since gone off to find himself (If your wondering about why i did that...Uh...Frankly, its cause wolves are one of my favorite animals:-p) so Bill helped Falco move Fox to the cargo bay of the Arwing, and they flew back to the Great Fox for a victory celebration...Krystal stayed happily in the Cargo bay with Fox, though there was a second seat in the cockpit...She held his head in her lap...Halfway there, he stirred, waking up suddenly and clasping her paw firmly in his. He gave it an affectionate squeeze, and reached the other paw up slowly to rub her face. She closed her eyes and leaned into his rough paw. He smiled and spoke...

"So..Are you ready for the "Happily ever after" yet?"

"Iv never been more ready for anything..."

"Well...I cant keep my vixen waiting..."

He got up, and pulled her into yet another long, deep kiss. This wasn't they're last kiss...Not by a long shot...Nor was this they're last adventure, or Fox's last dangerous moment...But this is where this narration ends... Let's leave these two alone for some quality time...

~Fin~ Farewell...