Author's Notes ~*~ Hey everyone thanks for reviewing and reading my fic it
means a lot to me. One last thing I want to announce! I've got a new story
in the making, but it's not CCS, it's for Inuyasha for those who also like
Inuyasha. But I won't be posting it up any time soon so I can concentrate
on this fic. But the moment I'm finished I'm sure I'll be a long ways
written with the Inuyasha fic, which I am very proud of so far, I just hope
it's just as good or better then this one.
Special thanks to: ~*~ hana no tenshi ~*~ crystal ~*~ luckyducky7too ~*~ Joe ~*~ Ryan ~*~ sWeEtAzNaNgEl ~*~ Pinklover-sama ~*~ blueangelbaby ~*~ Dark-Lighten-Shadow ~*~ d ~*~ Tomoyo-chan ~*~ lilcherryblossom ~*~ Danielle Ngo ~*~ kawaii mouse ~*~ Iris Half-Elven ~*~ kawaiicutie ~*~ SakurasBubbles
For everyone who reviewed ~*~ I CAN'T TELL YOU WHAT HAPPENED TO BOA JUST YET!!! IT'S A SURPRISE THAT MAKES ME EVEN SICK. Seriously, I'll probably give you clues to what's wrong with Boa. I wonder who gets it right first. Also, those of you who thought you were asking too much of me writing this fic longer and a sequel you guys are not asking too much. I honestly think it's flattering when you guys want both.
Kawaii mouse and Dark Lighten-Shadow ~*~ Thank you both for your reviews I thought they were so cute! (Binyaile: and I think Ghetto needs to go to the state hospital! Ghetto Princess: Hey!)
Crystal ~*~ If you're still reading this, I tried to review your fic at least a hundred times and it wouldn't let me. So until ff.net lets me review this is what I wanted to say about your fic in the first place. *Clears throat* It was beautiful, and I really love the way you wrote it And I want you to continue writing and I'll try reviewing again.
Danielle Ngo ~*~ It's ok, I understand ^_^.
Dark Lighten-Shadow ~*~ You and my friend Tina have to be the scariest reviewers I've ever known. Thank you so much for reviewing I actually enjoy the reviews that you send me.even when they're about attacking.me. uh. Thank you again!
SakurasBubbles ~*~ I understood what you were saying in your review and I like your idea! No.wait I don't like it, I LOVE it! Thanks for the review!
The winner of either make a sequel or make the story longer is..
Making the story longer! But for those who wanted a sequel, I will blend the sequel into this story so it will be much longer, but you won't know where the sequel begins so. Uh. Thank you everyone who reviewed, it means a lot to me.
Oh and for those who are wanting to know the count number of the votes it's 11 votes for make it longer and 5 votes for make a sequel.
Chapter 21
Boa had cried till what seemed like hours and now she finally went into a not so peaceful sleep in Cobra's arms. I felt sorry for her, even though I don't know what that demon thing done to her.
"What do you think happened to her?" I heard Tomoyo ask Eriol.
"I'm not sure, but it had to be something awful to get her to cry like that," Eriol whispered back.
I looked over at Cobra to see how he was fairing and it didn't look good. He just held her close to him with his head bent. He hadn't spoken a word since Boa had told him that she couldn't and wouldn't tell him what was wrong.
The vibe that I was getting from him was scaring the life out of me. Oh yeah, that's another thing I'm able to do now. I can feel vibes from people and can tell what they feel without even looking at them. Anyway, his vibe was dangerous and yet there was a hint of worry mixed up with it. I knew he was mad, that much was obvious, but I could tell that he was overly mad. When I say that I mean, he'll kill the first thing that moves or speaks to him.
Then I heard a door swing open and there stood Melin. Cobra laid boa gently down off of his lap and went after Melin like a crazy person. He was just about to tackle her when suddenly he stopped in mid air.
"I don't think so, Cobra," Melin told him shaking her head. Suddenly Cobra went flying in the air and crashed into a wall.
"How did she do that?" I asked in wonder.
I heard some clicking sounds coming near me and then I remembered Mberray being there. "She's no longer human," Mberray told me.
"What do you mean?" Syaoran asked.
"I mean that, they've turned her into a demon as well. The Melin you used to know is dead and from the looks of it, she's been dead for quite sometime," Mberray added.
"If the real Melin is dead, then why is she still after Syaoran?" Eriol asked, just as confused as everyone else.
"It's all for show or the demon inside of your friend's body has also taken up feelings for him as well. He is a rather decent looking boy after all," Mberray said.
"Shut you know it all chicken!" Melin cried. I glanced over to Melin who moved her hand through the air as if she was throwing something. Then at that same moment, Mberray when flying through the air!
"I've got her!" I heard Tomoyo cry. I don't if she caught her or not cause my attention was fully on the demon Melin.
"Well, look at what we have here." a deep voice sounded from behind Melin. Melin turned around and took a step away from the door with this evil grin planted on her face. My skin started to crawl from her grinning like that and my heart began tot race when I heard that voice. That voice sounded just like.
"You." I managed to get out. The Demon Kero stepped out of the shadows.
"My little cherry blossom. How are you feeling this fine afternoon?" he asked me in his deep voice.
"You got a lot of nerve asking me that question," I him. I felt Syaoran's grip tighten around my waist making it almost difficult to breath.
"Well, I'm so sorry to hear that, my sweet cherry blossom," the Demon Kero said.
"Will you stop calling me Cherry Blossom?" I asked annoyed. I can't stand it when they call me by my meaning.
"Of course not! I wouldn't want to give you to the Master spoiled now would I?" he asked stepping closer.
"Keep your distance demon!" Cobra shouted. His hand went to where his sword and daggers would have been but they came back empty handed. "Where are my weapons?" he demanded. Everyone looked at each other and started checking for our own weapons, only to find that they've disappeared. Which also lead to a lot of shouting in frustration.
"You don't need weapons where you're going," Melin told us smiling wickedly. I still finding it hard to believe that Melin betrayed us like she did. I mean sure she hated my guts but I never thought that she would.wait, I forgot. The real Melin died and a demon is using her corpse. How silly of me to forget.
"Princess, please be careful. It's dangerous to argue with a demon, believe me I should know!" I heard Mberray warn me. I didn't turn to look at her like I would have normally done. I felt that if I did, something bad would happen to me for letting my guard down.
"I'll be fine, thanks Mberray," I told her keeping my gaze on the demons before me.
"That damned chicken is starting to get on my nerves!" Melin sang in an angry tune.
"Then just ignore it! I might want to keep the chicken. Never know when they can become useful," the Demon Kero said walking toward me.
"Keep away from us," I heard Syaoran sneer while standing up, pulling me along with him.
"What are you going to do? Beat me with your puny hands and feet?" (I'm going to call Demon Kero DK from now on.) DK asked as he continued his walk toward us.
Syaoran pushed me behind him and held me in place with his right arm. "If I have to I will," he told DK. DK stopped where he was and blinked at Syaoran for a while before bursting out into laughter. Soon after Melin and a whole bunch of other demons that had slipped into the room unnoticed joined in on the laughing. "It's not funny." Syaoran said some what quietly.
"It is to them," I whispered into his ear. DK soon stopped laughing and proceeded to approach us.
"Give the Princess up boy or everyone in this room dies," DK threatened.
"Syaoran just-"
"NO! I already know what your gonna say and I won't agree with it, so just save your breath," Syaoran told me. He looked over his shoulder and almost instantly I became lost in his deep pools of amber.
"Syaoran." I began but my voice tightened and a big ball of air filled my throat. Deep down I knew what I was about to say and do would hurt Syaoran, but it would also hurt me to. Yet, it had to be done, otherwise everyone else dies because of me. I wrapped my arms around his waist and hugged him tight. "I love you so much," I told him in a loud whisper. "Please forgive me." Those were my final words before I kissed him one last time. Then before he knew it or could think about what I was going to do I broke away from him and speed walked over to DK.
"Sakura!" I heard Syaoran cry out. I could hear the anger and hurt in his voice that nearly broke my own heart. I turned around and looked at him one last time with tears in my eyes and mouthed the words 'I will love you forever.' Then I turned around and a horde of demons surrounded me.
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I don't remember much of anything that had happened after that. I knew I didn't fall asleep in any kind of way, yet I still had a hard time remembering what had happened that afternoon.
Anyway, I found myself in some kind of bedroom chamber and everything was pink! I love the color pink and all, but I think however decorated went way over board with it. The sent of cherry blossoms filled the air so thick that I nearly gagged. The demons around here really must want me to die from everything I like.
I walked around and came across a golden full-length mirror. I looked into it barely recognizing me. My hair looked like it had grown even longer and started to develop curls near the ends, my eyes were the same emerald color but there was a different kind of light in them that I didn't recognize. I looked somewhat taller than I remembered and I really grew up, which was really freaky cause I wasn't like this a month ago.
Then I noticed I wasn't wearing the torn up gown that Syaoran had gotten me. I was now wearing a pale pink dress with golden trim along the waist, writs, and the hem of my dress, which was as long as my hair. Where my bellybutton was a green gem shown brightly. I lifted up the bottom of my dress and noticed that I had pink slippers with a gold boarder.
I closed my eyes and walked away from the mirror. I didn't want to look at myself or at what I was wearing any longer. In a small way it sparked up fear to see myself the way I looked. I guess this is what I get for not looking at my reflection for about a month.
Tucking a loose strain of hair behind my ear I walked around this 'dungeon' of mine and the first thing that I noticed was there was no windows or doors. I felt a sense of panic start to run through my veins and clog most of my common sense. I began moving gigantic pictures and drapes that hung from the ceiling to floor searching for a crack or something that lead outside this room, but in the end I found nothing. I was captive and there was no sure way of escaping.
My legs gave out from underneath me and tears weld up within my eyes, but I didn't let them flow cause realization hit me. I gave up my life practically to save the lives of my friends and the only love I've ever known.Syaoran. He must hate me right now for doing what I did but at the moment it felt like the right thing to do if not the most sensible at that time.
Taking deep breathes I calmed what remained of my wrecked nerves and picked myself up. There was nothing I could do now but wait.wait for my destiny to take its final roll.
"How do you like the accommodations?" A male voice ask. I turned around shocked that there was anyone in the room with me, since I had looked in every place imaginable in the room.
He was a young man, older than the boys (Syaoran, Eriol, and Cobra) were. He had black hair and intense black eyes and amazingly everything about him felt familiar, but that's not what mattered at the moment. What mattered was who he was and why he had suddenly appeared out of thin air.
"How did you get in here?" I asked him. My eyes began roaming the place for anything that could be used as a fighting weapon.
"I was sent to-"
"I don't care about what you were sent here to do at the moment. How did you get in here? There's no way in and there's no way out so how did you get in here? Was you hiding in some place that I over looked?" I began pounding him with question on top of question. He just stood there and looked calm and his eyes seemed to have a spark of humor in them.
"Slow down, I'll answer your questions. I promise. When ever the Master wishes me to appear a certain place I appear, if the Master no longer wants me to be here he'll take me somewhere else. If the Master wishes me to no longer exist," he told me, a small smile began to spread across his face. That smile seemed so familiar to me.
"That's horrible." I heard my self-say.
"Actually, it's not as bad as you think may think it to be.that is if you do what the Master says."
"Who is this Master? Every demon.you're not a demon are you?" I had to interrupt my previous question to make sure that he wasn't one just in case that I might have offended him or something. When he shook his head no, I sighed a breath of relief and mentally thanked God. "OK, back to what I was going to ask before. Every demon is always talking about the Master. Who is he or what is he?"
"He is the ruler of all the demons and minions that are in this world today. He's like a god or something to that extent I guess." His voice began to trail off and I think that subject of the 'Master' was getting a bit touchy for him so I decided for a subject change.
"Well, lets not worry about that at the moment.Uh.What's your name?" Does he have a name? Do slaves of the demons get that privilege? Is having a name even a privilege? Too many questions Sakura slow your role.
"Touya."
"Touya?" I repeated mainly to myself.
And cut! Sorry folks I want to end the chapter here. Now I know you sweet people are getting tired of me stopping the chapters so short, even though you really haven't said anything about that.Anyway, chapter 22 will be five pages or more longer. And since the fic being longer and me mixing a sequel into it (although you won't notice it being a sequel part) I'm probably going to have more than 50 or 55 chapters, and that's if I'm lucky. I've never written a fic that long or as long as this one is now but hey, for you guys it's worth it. Your reviews are the reason I write.
~* Ghetto Princess
Special thanks to: ~*~ hana no tenshi ~*~ crystal ~*~ luckyducky7too ~*~ Joe ~*~ Ryan ~*~ sWeEtAzNaNgEl ~*~ Pinklover-sama ~*~ blueangelbaby ~*~ Dark-Lighten-Shadow ~*~ d ~*~ Tomoyo-chan ~*~ lilcherryblossom ~*~ Danielle Ngo ~*~ kawaii mouse ~*~ Iris Half-Elven ~*~ kawaiicutie ~*~ SakurasBubbles
For everyone who reviewed ~*~ I CAN'T TELL YOU WHAT HAPPENED TO BOA JUST YET!!! IT'S A SURPRISE THAT MAKES ME EVEN SICK. Seriously, I'll probably give you clues to what's wrong with Boa. I wonder who gets it right first. Also, those of you who thought you were asking too much of me writing this fic longer and a sequel you guys are not asking too much. I honestly think it's flattering when you guys want both.
Kawaii mouse and Dark Lighten-Shadow ~*~ Thank you both for your reviews I thought they were so cute! (Binyaile: and I think Ghetto needs to go to the state hospital! Ghetto Princess: Hey!)
Crystal ~*~ If you're still reading this, I tried to review your fic at least a hundred times and it wouldn't let me. So until ff.net lets me review this is what I wanted to say about your fic in the first place. *Clears throat* It was beautiful, and I really love the way you wrote it And I want you to continue writing and I'll try reviewing again.
Danielle Ngo ~*~ It's ok, I understand ^_^.
Dark Lighten-Shadow ~*~ You and my friend Tina have to be the scariest reviewers I've ever known. Thank you so much for reviewing I actually enjoy the reviews that you send me.even when they're about attacking.me. uh. Thank you again!
SakurasBubbles ~*~ I understood what you were saying in your review and I like your idea! No.wait I don't like it, I LOVE it! Thanks for the review!
The winner of either make a sequel or make the story longer is..
Making the story longer! But for those who wanted a sequel, I will blend the sequel into this story so it will be much longer, but you won't know where the sequel begins so. Uh. Thank you everyone who reviewed, it means a lot to me.
Oh and for those who are wanting to know the count number of the votes it's 11 votes for make it longer and 5 votes for make a sequel.
Chapter 21
Boa had cried till what seemed like hours and now she finally went into a not so peaceful sleep in Cobra's arms. I felt sorry for her, even though I don't know what that demon thing done to her.
"What do you think happened to her?" I heard Tomoyo ask Eriol.
"I'm not sure, but it had to be something awful to get her to cry like that," Eriol whispered back.
I looked over at Cobra to see how he was fairing and it didn't look good. He just held her close to him with his head bent. He hadn't spoken a word since Boa had told him that she couldn't and wouldn't tell him what was wrong.
The vibe that I was getting from him was scaring the life out of me. Oh yeah, that's another thing I'm able to do now. I can feel vibes from people and can tell what they feel without even looking at them. Anyway, his vibe was dangerous and yet there was a hint of worry mixed up with it. I knew he was mad, that much was obvious, but I could tell that he was overly mad. When I say that I mean, he'll kill the first thing that moves or speaks to him.
Then I heard a door swing open and there stood Melin. Cobra laid boa gently down off of his lap and went after Melin like a crazy person. He was just about to tackle her when suddenly he stopped in mid air.
"I don't think so, Cobra," Melin told him shaking her head. Suddenly Cobra went flying in the air and crashed into a wall.
"How did she do that?" I asked in wonder.
I heard some clicking sounds coming near me and then I remembered Mberray being there. "She's no longer human," Mberray told me.
"What do you mean?" Syaoran asked.
"I mean that, they've turned her into a demon as well. The Melin you used to know is dead and from the looks of it, she's been dead for quite sometime," Mberray added.
"If the real Melin is dead, then why is she still after Syaoran?" Eriol asked, just as confused as everyone else.
"It's all for show or the demon inside of your friend's body has also taken up feelings for him as well. He is a rather decent looking boy after all," Mberray said.
"Shut you know it all chicken!" Melin cried. I glanced over to Melin who moved her hand through the air as if she was throwing something. Then at that same moment, Mberray when flying through the air!
"I've got her!" I heard Tomoyo cry. I don't if she caught her or not cause my attention was fully on the demon Melin.
"Well, look at what we have here." a deep voice sounded from behind Melin. Melin turned around and took a step away from the door with this evil grin planted on her face. My skin started to crawl from her grinning like that and my heart began tot race when I heard that voice. That voice sounded just like.
"You." I managed to get out. The Demon Kero stepped out of the shadows.
"My little cherry blossom. How are you feeling this fine afternoon?" he asked me in his deep voice.
"You got a lot of nerve asking me that question," I him. I felt Syaoran's grip tighten around my waist making it almost difficult to breath.
"Well, I'm so sorry to hear that, my sweet cherry blossom," the Demon Kero said.
"Will you stop calling me Cherry Blossom?" I asked annoyed. I can't stand it when they call me by my meaning.
"Of course not! I wouldn't want to give you to the Master spoiled now would I?" he asked stepping closer.
"Keep your distance demon!" Cobra shouted. His hand went to where his sword and daggers would have been but they came back empty handed. "Where are my weapons?" he demanded. Everyone looked at each other and started checking for our own weapons, only to find that they've disappeared. Which also lead to a lot of shouting in frustration.
"You don't need weapons where you're going," Melin told us smiling wickedly. I still finding it hard to believe that Melin betrayed us like she did. I mean sure she hated my guts but I never thought that she would.wait, I forgot. The real Melin died and a demon is using her corpse. How silly of me to forget.
"Princess, please be careful. It's dangerous to argue with a demon, believe me I should know!" I heard Mberray warn me. I didn't turn to look at her like I would have normally done. I felt that if I did, something bad would happen to me for letting my guard down.
"I'll be fine, thanks Mberray," I told her keeping my gaze on the demons before me.
"That damned chicken is starting to get on my nerves!" Melin sang in an angry tune.
"Then just ignore it! I might want to keep the chicken. Never know when they can become useful," the Demon Kero said walking toward me.
"Keep away from us," I heard Syaoran sneer while standing up, pulling me along with him.
"What are you going to do? Beat me with your puny hands and feet?" (I'm going to call Demon Kero DK from now on.) DK asked as he continued his walk toward us.
Syaoran pushed me behind him and held me in place with his right arm. "If I have to I will," he told DK. DK stopped where he was and blinked at Syaoran for a while before bursting out into laughter. Soon after Melin and a whole bunch of other demons that had slipped into the room unnoticed joined in on the laughing. "It's not funny." Syaoran said some what quietly.
"It is to them," I whispered into his ear. DK soon stopped laughing and proceeded to approach us.
"Give the Princess up boy or everyone in this room dies," DK threatened.
"Syaoran just-"
"NO! I already know what your gonna say and I won't agree with it, so just save your breath," Syaoran told me. He looked over his shoulder and almost instantly I became lost in his deep pools of amber.
"Syaoran." I began but my voice tightened and a big ball of air filled my throat. Deep down I knew what I was about to say and do would hurt Syaoran, but it would also hurt me to. Yet, it had to be done, otherwise everyone else dies because of me. I wrapped my arms around his waist and hugged him tight. "I love you so much," I told him in a loud whisper. "Please forgive me." Those were my final words before I kissed him one last time. Then before he knew it or could think about what I was going to do I broke away from him and speed walked over to DK.
"Sakura!" I heard Syaoran cry out. I could hear the anger and hurt in his voice that nearly broke my own heart. I turned around and looked at him one last time with tears in my eyes and mouthed the words 'I will love you forever.' Then I turned around and a horde of demons surrounded me.
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I don't remember much of anything that had happened after that. I knew I didn't fall asleep in any kind of way, yet I still had a hard time remembering what had happened that afternoon.
Anyway, I found myself in some kind of bedroom chamber and everything was pink! I love the color pink and all, but I think however decorated went way over board with it. The sent of cherry blossoms filled the air so thick that I nearly gagged. The demons around here really must want me to die from everything I like.
I walked around and came across a golden full-length mirror. I looked into it barely recognizing me. My hair looked like it had grown even longer and started to develop curls near the ends, my eyes were the same emerald color but there was a different kind of light in them that I didn't recognize. I looked somewhat taller than I remembered and I really grew up, which was really freaky cause I wasn't like this a month ago.
Then I noticed I wasn't wearing the torn up gown that Syaoran had gotten me. I was now wearing a pale pink dress with golden trim along the waist, writs, and the hem of my dress, which was as long as my hair. Where my bellybutton was a green gem shown brightly. I lifted up the bottom of my dress and noticed that I had pink slippers with a gold boarder.
I closed my eyes and walked away from the mirror. I didn't want to look at myself or at what I was wearing any longer. In a small way it sparked up fear to see myself the way I looked. I guess this is what I get for not looking at my reflection for about a month.
Tucking a loose strain of hair behind my ear I walked around this 'dungeon' of mine and the first thing that I noticed was there was no windows or doors. I felt a sense of panic start to run through my veins and clog most of my common sense. I began moving gigantic pictures and drapes that hung from the ceiling to floor searching for a crack or something that lead outside this room, but in the end I found nothing. I was captive and there was no sure way of escaping.
My legs gave out from underneath me and tears weld up within my eyes, but I didn't let them flow cause realization hit me. I gave up my life practically to save the lives of my friends and the only love I've ever known.Syaoran. He must hate me right now for doing what I did but at the moment it felt like the right thing to do if not the most sensible at that time.
Taking deep breathes I calmed what remained of my wrecked nerves and picked myself up. There was nothing I could do now but wait.wait for my destiny to take its final roll.
"How do you like the accommodations?" A male voice ask. I turned around shocked that there was anyone in the room with me, since I had looked in every place imaginable in the room.
He was a young man, older than the boys (Syaoran, Eriol, and Cobra) were. He had black hair and intense black eyes and amazingly everything about him felt familiar, but that's not what mattered at the moment. What mattered was who he was and why he had suddenly appeared out of thin air.
"How did you get in here?" I asked him. My eyes began roaming the place for anything that could be used as a fighting weapon.
"I was sent to-"
"I don't care about what you were sent here to do at the moment. How did you get in here? There's no way in and there's no way out so how did you get in here? Was you hiding in some place that I over looked?" I began pounding him with question on top of question. He just stood there and looked calm and his eyes seemed to have a spark of humor in them.
"Slow down, I'll answer your questions. I promise. When ever the Master wishes me to appear a certain place I appear, if the Master no longer wants me to be here he'll take me somewhere else. If the Master wishes me to no longer exist," he told me, a small smile began to spread across his face. That smile seemed so familiar to me.
"That's horrible." I heard my self-say.
"Actually, it's not as bad as you think may think it to be.that is if you do what the Master says."
"Who is this Master? Every demon.you're not a demon are you?" I had to interrupt my previous question to make sure that he wasn't one just in case that I might have offended him or something. When he shook his head no, I sighed a breath of relief and mentally thanked God. "OK, back to what I was going to ask before. Every demon is always talking about the Master. Who is he or what is he?"
"He is the ruler of all the demons and minions that are in this world today. He's like a god or something to that extent I guess." His voice began to trail off and I think that subject of the 'Master' was getting a bit touchy for him so I decided for a subject change.
"Well, lets not worry about that at the moment.Uh.What's your name?" Does he have a name? Do slaves of the demons get that privilege? Is having a name even a privilege? Too many questions Sakura slow your role.
"Touya."
"Touya?" I repeated mainly to myself.
And cut! Sorry folks I want to end the chapter here. Now I know you sweet people are getting tired of me stopping the chapters so short, even though you really haven't said anything about that.Anyway, chapter 22 will be five pages or more longer. And since the fic being longer and me mixing a sequel into it (although you won't notice it being a sequel part) I'm probably going to have more than 50 or 55 chapters, and that's if I'm lucky. I've never written a fic that long or as long as this one is now but hey, for you guys it's worth it. Your reviews are the reason I write.
~* Ghetto Princess
