We open the curtain and step in. Obviously I was the cleaner one of
the two. I look over at Rikku's side littered with a wrinkly, dirty bed,
tiny shorts and used-up glow necklaces from the club. Then I look over at
my side with a neat bed, clothes nicely folded up in the corner, and a
small bookshelf of books. There is a maroon curtain that separates Rikku
and my part of the house.
I go and sit on the bed with my back against the headboard. He sits
down at the end of the bed. I try to start the conversation,
"So...um...where were you?..."
He looks around the room, taking in every conceivable fact he can
gather. He quietly starts to speak, "After I left you, I went to a
heavenly place. It was tranquil and perfect...Then I could hear the
words...I could hear you. The feeling then became greater and I desired
you so much. I could feel your loneliness and despair and your love for
me. I then heard your chanting. The chanting was pulling at me and I was
starting to slowly fade. Next thing I knew, I was in the water. I came
up for air and I saw you. Your countenances were so angelic in the setting
sun; I knew it wasn't a dream."
I just stare at him with an unspeakable awe. His love was greater
then I had thought. I crawl down the bed to him. I embrace him, knocking
the air out of his lungs. I start to rock in his arms and cry. I just
nonchalantly whisper, "I love you....I love you" in his ear through my
sobs.
I eventually stop crying and he lies down on the bed. I lie down
next to him and rest my head on his chest. He strokes my soft, chestnut
hair and I fall asleep in his arms.
Author's Note: Hey I hope you like the story so far. As a lot of other people who create fan fiction, I would love to be a professional writer when I grow up-preferably a fantasy writer (who writes their own stories). Please tell me what I need to improve on and some pointers or suggestions. Thanks a bushel! :) ~Melissa~
Author's Note: Hey I hope you like the story so far. As a lot of other people who create fan fiction, I would love to be a professional writer when I grow up-preferably a fantasy writer (who writes their own stories). Please tell me what I need to improve on and some pointers or suggestions. Thanks a bushel! :) ~Melissa~
