The car stopped at the lake. I turned towards Clarice and asked, 'Now,
tell me what is going on. Whose Paul?'
She turned to look at me, yet said nothing. That was when she turned towards the door, 'I can't breath, I have to get out of here.' She opened the door and stepped out and away from me. Walking towards the lake she looked up at the stars above. I was remembered of a line I wrote to her in a letter once 'some of our stars are the same'. That couldn't be truer than tonight.
I knew there was something wrong, yet I couldn't push her. I resent myself for that now, maybe if I had I could have taken her away before it was too late, but I should not dwell on the past as I have always been told.
I continued to look at her, staring in awe at her beauty. She truly is my goddess and I can do nothing but look and worship her in every way possible. After a few seconds of thinking I noticed that something was wrong. She was looking up at the stars still but something was wrong.
I got out of the car and started to walk towards her. I could hear her breathing heavily, almost gasping for air as though it was hard to come by. 'Clarice,' I asked, 'Clarice, are you alright?' Just as I finished speaking she collapsed.
I ran towards her, 'Clarice! Clarice, say something!!' As I drew closer I saw that she was unconscious. There were beads of sweat on her forehead. 'Oh my god! Clarice!' I lifted her up in my arms; I couldn't wake her no matter what. I started for the car and strapped her into the front seat. I had to get her somewhere so that I could find out what was wrong with her.
I drove onto the road again and started for the nearest hospital. We reached there in about 20 minutes, 20 minutes too long if you ask me. I took her out of the car and headed for ER. I walked to the desk and the helpful receptionist asked me what she could do for me! Wasn't it obvious!! I told her that I had found this woman unconscious and that she needed medical treatment right away, and that was when they took her from me.
The receptionist asked me if I was any relation to her and I found myself saying, 'No, I was out walking and found her unconscious.' I still don't understand why I did that, if I had stayed maybe we would have had more time together. Yet the only thought I had through my brain at that time was.Paul. Who was this man that had my Clarice so besotted with him? Who is the man that took what was mine away from me. I then asked the receptionist whether she would pass my well wishes to the patient and walked out of ER into the pouring rain outside, without looking back.
A/N why is it that when you write on Microsoft Word it always looks longer than it is?? lol. This has been v.long in the coming, I think about a year since I updated :S sorry to those people that wanted more, forgive me?? Thanx 4 the reviews, even though they were so long ago, they are the things that made me start writing this again. Plz give me feedback on this and tell me whether it really woz worth me starting it up again, cheers :D luv ya'll, ling -x-
She turned to look at me, yet said nothing. That was when she turned towards the door, 'I can't breath, I have to get out of here.' She opened the door and stepped out and away from me. Walking towards the lake she looked up at the stars above. I was remembered of a line I wrote to her in a letter once 'some of our stars are the same'. That couldn't be truer than tonight.
I knew there was something wrong, yet I couldn't push her. I resent myself for that now, maybe if I had I could have taken her away before it was too late, but I should not dwell on the past as I have always been told.
I continued to look at her, staring in awe at her beauty. She truly is my goddess and I can do nothing but look and worship her in every way possible. After a few seconds of thinking I noticed that something was wrong. She was looking up at the stars still but something was wrong.
I got out of the car and started to walk towards her. I could hear her breathing heavily, almost gasping for air as though it was hard to come by. 'Clarice,' I asked, 'Clarice, are you alright?' Just as I finished speaking she collapsed.
I ran towards her, 'Clarice! Clarice, say something!!' As I drew closer I saw that she was unconscious. There were beads of sweat on her forehead. 'Oh my god! Clarice!' I lifted her up in my arms; I couldn't wake her no matter what. I started for the car and strapped her into the front seat. I had to get her somewhere so that I could find out what was wrong with her.
I drove onto the road again and started for the nearest hospital. We reached there in about 20 minutes, 20 minutes too long if you ask me. I took her out of the car and headed for ER. I walked to the desk and the helpful receptionist asked me what she could do for me! Wasn't it obvious!! I told her that I had found this woman unconscious and that she needed medical treatment right away, and that was when they took her from me.
The receptionist asked me if I was any relation to her and I found myself saying, 'No, I was out walking and found her unconscious.' I still don't understand why I did that, if I had stayed maybe we would have had more time together. Yet the only thought I had through my brain at that time was.Paul. Who was this man that had my Clarice so besotted with him? Who is the man that took what was mine away from me. I then asked the receptionist whether she would pass my well wishes to the patient and walked out of ER into the pouring rain outside, without looking back.
A/N why is it that when you write on Microsoft Word it always looks longer than it is?? lol. This has been v.long in the coming, I think about a year since I updated :S sorry to those people that wanted more, forgive me?? Thanx 4 the reviews, even though they were so long ago, they are the things that made me start writing this again. Plz give me feedback on this and tell me whether it really woz worth me starting it up again, cheers :D luv ya'll, ling -x-
