Ok this is my first fan fic so give me so cut me a little slack. If you
like it, Great! review me, but if you don't then tell me what I need to
change and I'll actually take it into consideration. Though just know that
we cover a lot of information in this chapter. Hope you find it
interesting.
Chapter 1: The lone warrior
A single saiyan space pod cut quickly and quietly through the empty blackness of space, occasionally shifting position to resist the effects of the star's gravitational pull. It's outer exterior showed signs of wear and its hull was battered to the point where it was surprising that it stayed together.
In side the capsule was one saiyan warrior. His shortly cropped dark black hair (which is very normal with saiyans) stuck in strange places as if he hadn't showered in a very long time. His body was heavily muscled and looked as though it wanted to burst from sitting in the capsule for so long.
His name was Rowol. It wasn't a common name among saiyans, but that normally didn't matter. Saiyans don't care what your name is as long as you can fight, and fight well. Though for Rowol could indeed fight well, he was the top of his training class aboard the saiyan star fleet he was born on.
Rowol closed his eyes. The star fleet had been completely destroyed about a week ago. He shuddered just to think about it.
Saiyan star fleets were sent on long missions that a normal five-man squad wouldn't take. The star fleets would go maybe one hundred to two hundred light-years farther than a normal man squad.
Rowol's fleet had been going for a star system called the Tetrahami system. Though about halfway to the star system they had received the awful news that planet Vegittasi had been betrayed and destroyed by Freiza. The destruction of their home planet had turned their lives around. They now traded instead of stole and would even sometimes, negotiate instead of fight star battles.
When they were attacked they had been flying to land on a planet called Camenari the captain and his counselors were hoping to trade for some supplies with the people there.
But, they were the descendants of a people that the saiyans had nearly destroyed when they were under the direction of Freiza. When they had arrived at the planet a giant fleet of battle ships came around the back of the planet. It had taken only minutes for the entire fleet to be destroyed.
After the decimation of half their fleet all the saiyans remaining had taken capsules and had tried to escape. They were all destroyed except one. Yes Rowol had been very very lucky. Or was it fate? He could only sit and wonder.
But, he had no time to wonder, he was on his own. He very young by saiyan standards, his mid to late teens, though the saiyans never usually took count. Age wasn't important. If you got to old to fight then you weren't useful for missions and would usually stay in a housing development. He hadn't even been born when the planet was destroyed but about fifteen years afterward.
He though about what planet Vegittasi had been like. His mom had always said.....
"Mom! Mom, what am I going to do? How am I going to live with out you? What will I do?" He thought desperately, interrupting his thoughts of his home world, as if trying to call out for a response. He was one of the few saiyans whose mother was a true mother to him.
He remembered vividly how he had, watched the way her pod had been destroyed. Just blown to bits as if he were shooting a rock with a ki blast. He hadn't cried, for saiyans DONT cry, but he had mourned quietly for days.
He opened his eyes. As much as he wanted to he was not going to take the time to mourn. He had work to do. He opened his computer console, and began running scans of planets that he could stop on. He was young, and couldn't live in space alone for long. He would stop a while; rest and resupply maybe even fix up his ship.
The computer bleeped softly. A short list in alphabetical order came up, and Rowol scanned it quickly. He decided that he should go through the whole list in order. That meant that the first planet he would visit would be a planet called, Agremona. So he set coordinates into his computer for the planet, the ship shifted position and Rowol increased the engine speed.
He settled back, the journey would probably take about five to six days so he got comfortable to sleep for most of the trip. He looked at the name of the planet one last time and, went to sleep quickly before the computer had completely shut down.......................
Ok we got through a lot of information. Sorry if it was little confusing. Chapter 2 will definitely be up by Thursday at the most. Review me if you like it! thx.
Chapter 1: The lone warrior
A single saiyan space pod cut quickly and quietly through the empty blackness of space, occasionally shifting position to resist the effects of the star's gravitational pull. It's outer exterior showed signs of wear and its hull was battered to the point where it was surprising that it stayed together.
In side the capsule was one saiyan warrior. His shortly cropped dark black hair (which is very normal with saiyans) stuck in strange places as if he hadn't showered in a very long time. His body was heavily muscled and looked as though it wanted to burst from sitting in the capsule for so long.
His name was Rowol. It wasn't a common name among saiyans, but that normally didn't matter. Saiyans don't care what your name is as long as you can fight, and fight well. Though for Rowol could indeed fight well, he was the top of his training class aboard the saiyan star fleet he was born on.
Rowol closed his eyes. The star fleet had been completely destroyed about a week ago. He shuddered just to think about it.
Saiyan star fleets were sent on long missions that a normal five-man squad wouldn't take. The star fleets would go maybe one hundred to two hundred light-years farther than a normal man squad.
Rowol's fleet had been going for a star system called the Tetrahami system. Though about halfway to the star system they had received the awful news that planet Vegittasi had been betrayed and destroyed by Freiza. The destruction of their home planet had turned their lives around. They now traded instead of stole and would even sometimes, negotiate instead of fight star battles.
When they were attacked they had been flying to land on a planet called Camenari the captain and his counselors were hoping to trade for some supplies with the people there.
But, they were the descendants of a people that the saiyans had nearly destroyed when they were under the direction of Freiza. When they had arrived at the planet a giant fleet of battle ships came around the back of the planet. It had taken only minutes for the entire fleet to be destroyed.
After the decimation of half their fleet all the saiyans remaining had taken capsules and had tried to escape. They were all destroyed except one. Yes Rowol had been very very lucky. Or was it fate? He could only sit and wonder.
But, he had no time to wonder, he was on his own. He very young by saiyan standards, his mid to late teens, though the saiyans never usually took count. Age wasn't important. If you got to old to fight then you weren't useful for missions and would usually stay in a housing development. He hadn't even been born when the planet was destroyed but about fifteen years afterward.
He though about what planet Vegittasi had been like. His mom had always said.....
"Mom! Mom, what am I going to do? How am I going to live with out you? What will I do?" He thought desperately, interrupting his thoughts of his home world, as if trying to call out for a response. He was one of the few saiyans whose mother was a true mother to him.
He remembered vividly how he had, watched the way her pod had been destroyed. Just blown to bits as if he were shooting a rock with a ki blast. He hadn't cried, for saiyans DONT cry, but he had mourned quietly for days.
He opened his eyes. As much as he wanted to he was not going to take the time to mourn. He had work to do. He opened his computer console, and began running scans of planets that he could stop on. He was young, and couldn't live in space alone for long. He would stop a while; rest and resupply maybe even fix up his ship.
The computer bleeped softly. A short list in alphabetical order came up, and Rowol scanned it quickly. He decided that he should go through the whole list in order. That meant that the first planet he would visit would be a planet called, Agremona. So he set coordinates into his computer for the planet, the ship shifted position and Rowol increased the engine speed.
He settled back, the journey would probably take about five to six days so he got comfortable to sleep for most of the trip. He looked at the name of the planet one last time and, went to sleep quickly before the computer had completely shut down.......................
Ok we got through a lot of information. Sorry if it was little confusing. Chapter 2 will definitely be up by Thursday at the most. Review me if you like it! thx.
