Lizzie woke up the next morning and looked at her watch; it was 4:30 am. Lizzie hated to get up in the morning, but she decides it was best if she got up and got dressed and got ready for the day. She went to the bathroom and was trying to get her hair to stay up in a perfect bun. But her hair was too long to do that.

"Need any help Lizzie" a voice from behind her said

"Sure Ashley thanks"

"Lizzie, you know that this place is not very bad"

"Well to tell you the truth I like it better hair then I did back home"

"Why would you say that, why would you like this place better then your home"

"Well Ashley, lets just say that my home is not the very best place to live if you were me"

"Lizzie, why would say that that is were you and your parent live together"

"Well not me Ashley, I have no parents"

"Lizzie why are you saying you have no parents"

"Well, the day before I left my parents told me that I was adopted when I a few days old. I was really mad at them for not telling me sooner and then I had to leave on of the best person in my life, my best friend, who I loved very much. Yes I did say love and I didn't even get to tell him I loved him before I left"

"Lizzie, I would like you."

Lizzie was dead quiet she was on the ground crying her eyes out

"Lizzie what is wrong"

"I miss my best friend he was the only person I could trust"

Ashley sat down next to Lizzie. With in a few minutes(SP sorry guys I don't have spell check) Major White walked in and found Lizzie

"Private McGuire, Private Sit why ain't you all outside with the rest of the cadets"

"Major white I was helping Private McGuire, out and she was telling me why she was here and then she started to cry. I am so sorry I should not have asked"

"Private Sit it is ok you were only trying to help out a friend here'

"Major White, I am sorry for what every I have done" Lizzie Said

"Private McGuire, look I don't know why you are here and I am not going to ask why ether but for ever reason I know that you will be alright."

"I am so sorry I know it was wrong and I will take any punishment you give me"

"Private Sit will you go out with the rest of our squad and tell then that they have break fest at 0630m hours and then after that at 0700 hours they have American History"

"Ma'am yes ma'am"

"Private McGuire now would you like to tell me why you think you should have a punishment"

"Major White, I am late to the squad meeting and I also made another cadet late because of me"

"Private, there is a story of why I am here too, you might think that I am so cool and the best person around here"

"Major White everyone thinks you are the best Major and that they would like to have you as there squad leader"

"Private, I was not always the best person that there is I was a person who broke the rules didn't do what my parents told me to do. I was a person who wanted to do thing on her own make it on her own do thing for her just her not her family."

"But you changed didn't you"

"Yes and that is why I am here I am here to help Cadets who fell like that they HAVE to be here because of something there friends did or a person who doesn't what to be here but has too, Private which on of these are you"

"Well my so-call-parents sent be here after they told me when I was a young baby they adopted me and it toke them about 14 years to tell me"

"Did they tell you why they adopted you?"

"Yes Ma'am they did it was because my mother was not allowed to have kids but then she had my brother"

"Private, at least they adopted you, it not like your birth mother wanted you"

"Ma'am you know something you are right why should I hate them they gave me a chance as living a normal life, I still hate them though it took them 14 years to tell me"

"At least they told you it took your parents a long time to tell you because they might have thought of you has there own kid"

"Ma'am thank you for helping me but I think I need to go eat some break fest"

"Private I think you are right and if you ever need to talk I am here for you"

"Thank you ma'am" Lizzie stood up and saluted her and walked to the mess hall

(Hey I fixed my mistakes hope you like better)