DISCLAIMER: ....*ahem!* I do not own Kingdom Hearts for Kingdom Hearts is property of Squaresoft and Disney, including all the characters involved. : | ...I want to say Riku is mine...but..well, he's not sadly, he belongs to some fancy person at Disney or Squaresoft. Can I...borrow him?
I was very happy to read the reviews for this fanfic, I must admit that I was kind of worried at first since my Grammar isn't that great or some angry anti-Yaoi or anti-Disney peoples would run in and throw digital vegetables at me but again, I was very pleased to see that some people are actually enjoying this fanfic ^_^; Thank you.
..hmm. I got balanced results on my mini poll for whether this story should turn into a lemon or not. MAYBE, I should make it a lime instead since I'm afraid that Fanfiction.net will nag me for righting something..uh..hardcore? O_O; *hides*
Err..one more thing, I haven't played very far past the part where Sora beats Riku in the game so I'm not precisely sure what happens next, I'm pretty well making things up as I go along now. I wanna do a lot of describing in this chapter too so things may be a little uneventful at first...but things will get exciting, I hope. - Next Chapter will include some romance scenes, I basically just wrote this to make the story "flow" a bit more. As always, please R/R. ^_^; - Bottom line is: Next Chapter will have a lot more action just like the first, this is like an extended prologue.
-_-; Sorry Sorry. Also, I uploaded this in a hurry so please excuse any missing words you may come across. Finally, I reccomend you read this at -1 the Default size, it makes the text look neater and easier to read.
(O_o; When I was uploading this to fanfiction.net something odd happened with my paragraphs so they may look a little..poorly done. It will not happen again in my next chapters, I promise. Again, sorry.)
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"Riku"
"...its alright..I forgive you.."
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The interior of Hollow Bastion seemed to go on forever, corridors whirled whilst mind-nabbing puzzles taunted its victims. Hours past while Sora and his companions collected various trinkets and other items that would prove to be somewhat useful in their upcoming battle, knowing a great dark force would be awaiting them soon enough.
"ABWAHAHAHAH!!" Donald quacked, waving his scepter at the last Heartless creature, a bolt of electricity materializing out of thin air before striking the dark servant. Sora breathed heavily, watching a shimmering cyan heart float into the ceiling from the fading corpse of the creature.
"Garwsh, seems like their not gonna stop anytime soon" Goofy looked around anxiously, his shield raised up in front of his head.
"We're...almost...there..." Sora's mind was still stuck on Riku when he thought it should have been on Kairi, she had to be around somewhere. Donald peered at Sora as he started to walk down another corridor.
"Whaaadaayaaa waitin' for?! - Lets go!!" The mage glared stonily at Sora, waving his hand towards him. The boy snapped out of thought and nodded quickly, following the dog and the duck.
In a matter of minutes, they came across a door, a heart was deeply engraved into the dusty stone surface as if larger pieces of stone were to be slid into the gap to form it. Donald frowned and hurled a fireball at it causing nothing but the dust to rise and cause the trio to sneeze and hack.
"*cough cough* Well...that...didn't work..*cough cough*" Sora wheezed, waving some soot out of his face. Donald sighed "Another puzzel".
(I did delibratley spell Puzzle wrong.)
Sora groaned, he didn't want to go searching around for any more puzzle pieces ,defeat any more Heartless or waste any more resources on senseless battles, but he turned away anyways, beginning to head back down another corridor. His mind wandered back to Riku once more, he was injured and was waiting for him back at the entrance, the thought alone made Sora's heart twist with guilt but he'd be happy when his original friends would be all together again.
"Oii...wait just a minute!" Goofy's face curled into a grin, Sora and Donald stopped and turned to Goofy who pulled out a handful of stone pieces. "Heh Heh Heh Heeehhh!!" Goofy laughed googily.
Donald and Sora exchanged dumbfounded glances, who out of all people would have thought?.
The group sorted the pieces of stone until they found pieces that could easily slide into the door. They were bathed in a dark, almost slimy light as the door swung open. Hesistantly Sora went first, the room they entered was shrouded in nausiating darkness which made the trio feel sick to their stomaches but they pressed on.
They were almost there, Sora sensed it.
"Ohhhhwww!! - I feel qweezy..." Donald complained, waddling next to Sora as they set deeper into the room. Sora could just see an arch at the end of the hallway and a faint glitter of light. "Thats...it!!" Sora pointed to the light, battling his fatique as he began to run for the light.
"Woah, wait up there Sora" Goofy warned, starting to chase Sora with Donald closed behind.
A handful of Heartless rose from the ground to block Sora's way but these alone wouldn't stop him. With a shimmer of sparkles he summoned the Keyblade to his clenched fist and slashed upwards at a cluster of the smaller weaker childish Heartless, like the others they simple faded back into the ground, their stolens hearts floated harmlessly into the air.
Goofy extended his shield forward, smashing his entire body another group of Heartless whilst Donald hurled fireballs and summoned thunderbolts, Sora continued to cut through his obsticles with ease, his rage, his desire to save Kairi fueled him, not only Kairi but perhaps more, his desire to return to Riku. He brushed his confusion away, dealing the final blow to the final Heartless, scrambling up a set of stairs to the glittering light.
A dark feminine laugh was heard as Sora reached the top.
"My child...you are too late..." The voice belonged to Maleificient who smiled tauntingly from the other side of the light. On the floor before him was the lifeless body of Kairi, the glittering light that he saw was in fact Kairi's heart.
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O_o; Okay. I know nothing between Riku and Sora happened in this Chapter but I wanted to get the story rolling a bit more first before I do anything obvious, in the next Chapter I promise to write some..err..romantic scenes? ^_^;
Reviews fuel me to keep writing, just like Riku fueled Sora to fight on so please keep them coming.
- - - feels stupid because the Disclaimer was almost as big as the Chapter itself and that most of it was critizing the paragraphs and the grammar.
^_^; Nasty habit. Won't happen next time, as I said - this was kinda rushed.
I was very happy to read the reviews for this fanfic, I must admit that I was kind of worried at first since my Grammar isn't that great or some angry anti-Yaoi or anti-Disney peoples would run in and throw digital vegetables at me but again, I was very pleased to see that some people are actually enjoying this fanfic ^_^; Thank you.
..hmm. I got balanced results on my mini poll for whether this story should turn into a lemon or not. MAYBE, I should make it a lime instead since I'm afraid that Fanfiction.net will nag me for righting something..uh..hardcore? O_O; *hides*
Err..one more thing, I haven't played very far past the part where Sora beats Riku in the game so I'm not precisely sure what happens next, I'm pretty well making things up as I go along now. I wanna do a lot of describing in this chapter too so things may be a little uneventful at first...but things will get exciting, I hope. - Next Chapter will include some romance scenes, I basically just wrote this to make the story "flow" a bit more. As always, please R/R. ^_^; - Bottom line is: Next Chapter will have a lot more action just like the first, this is like an extended prologue.
-_-; Sorry Sorry. Also, I uploaded this in a hurry so please excuse any missing words you may come across. Finally, I reccomend you read this at -1 the Default size, it makes the text look neater and easier to read.
(O_o; When I was uploading this to fanfiction.net something odd happened with my paragraphs so they may look a little..poorly done. It will not happen again in my next chapters, I promise. Again, sorry.)
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"Riku"
"...its alright..I forgive you.."
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The interior of Hollow Bastion seemed to go on forever, corridors whirled whilst mind-nabbing puzzles taunted its victims. Hours past while Sora and his companions collected various trinkets and other items that would prove to be somewhat useful in their upcoming battle, knowing a great dark force would be awaiting them soon enough.
"ABWAHAHAHAH!!" Donald quacked, waving his scepter at the last Heartless creature, a bolt of electricity materializing out of thin air before striking the dark servant. Sora breathed heavily, watching a shimmering cyan heart float into the ceiling from the fading corpse of the creature.
"Garwsh, seems like their not gonna stop anytime soon" Goofy looked around anxiously, his shield raised up in front of his head.
"We're...almost...there..." Sora's mind was still stuck on Riku when he thought it should have been on Kairi, she had to be around somewhere. Donald peered at Sora as he started to walk down another corridor.
"Whaaadaayaaa waitin' for?! - Lets go!!" The mage glared stonily at Sora, waving his hand towards him. The boy snapped out of thought and nodded quickly, following the dog and the duck.
In a matter of minutes, they came across a door, a heart was deeply engraved into the dusty stone surface as if larger pieces of stone were to be slid into the gap to form it. Donald frowned and hurled a fireball at it causing nothing but the dust to rise and cause the trio to sneeze and hack.
"*cough cough* Well...that...didn't work..*cough cough*" Sora wheezed, waving some soot out of his face. Donald sighed "Another puzzel".
(I did delibratley spell Puzzle wrong.)
Sora groaned, he didn't want to go searching around for any more puzzle pieces ,defeat any more Heartless or waste any more resources on senseless battles, but he turned away anyways, beginning to head back down another corridor. His mind wandered back to Riku once more, he was injured and was waiting for him back at the entrance, the thought alone made Sora's heart twist with guilt but he'd be happy when his original friends would be all together again.
"Oii...wait just a minute!" Goofy's face curled into a grin, Sora and Donald stopped and turned to Goofy who pulled out a handful of stone pieces. "Heh Heh Heh Heeehhh!!" Goofy laughed googily.
Donald and Sora exchanged dumbfounded glances, who out of all people would have thought?.
The group sorted the pieces of stone until they found pieces that could easily slide into the door. They were bathed in a dark, almost slimy light as the door swung open. Hesistantly Sora went first, the room they entered was shrouded in nausiating darkness which made the trio feel sick to their stomaches but they pressed on.
They were almost there, Sora sensed it.
"Ohhhhwww!! - I feel qweezy..." Donald complained, waddling next to Sora as they set deeper into the room. Sora could just see an arch at the end of the hallway and a faint glitter of light. "Thats...it!!" Sora pointed to the light, battling his fatique as he began to run for the light.
"Woah, wait up there Sora" Goofy warned, starting to chase Sora with Donald closed behind.
A handful of Heartless rose from the ground to block Sora's way but these alone wouldn't stop him. With a shimmer of sparkles he summoned the Keyblade to his clenched fist and slashed upwards at a cluster of the smaller weaker childish Heartless, like the others they simple faded back into the ground, their stolens hearts floated harmlessly into the air.
Goofy extended his shield forward, smashing his entire body another group of Heartless whilst Donald hurled fireballs and summoned thunderbolts, Sora continued to cut through his obsticles with ease, his rage, his desire to save Kairi fueled him, not only Kairi but perhaps more, his desire to return to Riku. He brushed his confusion away, dealing the final blow to the final Heartless, scrambling up a set of stairs to the glittering light.
A dark feminine laugh was heard as Sora reached the top.
"My child...you are too late..." The voice belonged to Maleificient who smiled tauntingly from the other side of the light. On the floor before him was the lifeless body of Kairi, the glittering light that he saw was in fact Kairi's heart.
-------------END - Chapter 02 ------------------
O_o; Okay. I know nothing between Riku and Sora happened in this Chapter but I wanted to get the story rolling a bit more first before I do anything obvious, in the next Chapter I promise to write some..err..romantic scenes? ^_^;
Reviews fuel me to keep writing, just like Riku fueled Sora to fight on so please keep them coming.
- - - feels stupid because the Disclaimer was almost as big as the Chapter itself and that most of it was critizing the paragraphs and the grammar.
^_^; Nasty habit. Won't happen next time, as I said - this was kinda rushed.
