DISCLAIMER: ...ok. Chapter 02 absolutely sucked. As I stated many many times, I kinda rushed everything in regards to Chapter 02. My Paragraphs were off, I missed many words in various spots, I even misspelt some things. I apologize.
Kingdom Hearts does not belong to me, nor do any of the characters FROM Kingdom Hearts (ie Squaresoft, Disney, Tarzan ((eck.)) ).
As promised, I'm going to include some nice "juicy" (O_o;) scenes in this Chapter to make up for my disastrous Chapter 02.
Please forgive me!! _
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"I'll be back soon Riku..."
"Please wait for me..."
"...Riku...!"
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"My child...you are too late.." Maleificient's gaze on Sora was almost enough to hypnotize him, she was sleek in a robe made of shadows, her skin its usual sickly green, her skin matched the color of the orb on the staff that she carried.
"W-Wha...what do you mean its too late...Who are you!?" Sora demanded, he was already in his battle stance, ready to strike her if he had to, his eyes slid off the witch to Kairi's motionless body. He didn't feel sorrow but he felt anger. "Who I am does not concern you, though you are the wielder of the Keyblade..." Her grin widened as she stepped forward.
The witch extended an arm a few inches above Kairi to where her scarlet red heart levitated. The once healthy glow of Kairi's heart darkened before it eventually shrunk to the size no bigger than a coin.
Sora stepped forward, he swing the Keyblade upwards in an aggressive motion. "What are you doing?!!" Sora's eyes burnt with anger.
"Simply taking what I need..." The remains of Kairi's heart floated down to Maleificient's palm, somehow integrating with her fingertips into nothingness. She let out a soft croon, turning away from Sora, taking a few steps forward and somehow melding with the shadows. She was gone.
"Kairi..." Sora looked down at her body. But then he remembered Riku.
"I've done all I can..." Aerith sighed softly. The White Mage had cast numerous healing spells on Kairi's heartless body but had no luck.
Sora was silent, he wondered why he wasn't so concerned. This wasn't the first time Kairi had been sick, this felt no different to him. "I'll keep an eye on her, why don't you go get some rest?" Aerith spoke in a comforting and calming tone.
"Thanks Aerith..." Sora smiled at her, stepping out of the hut and on to the wharf where the three boats w ere kept. The night was nothing but sheer beauty: The sky was clear and the moon coated the beach in a soft blue tone, the water shimmered as it lapped endlessly against the sand, catching the reflection of the crystal white moon. He walked to the edge of the wharf, sighing softly as he gazed off into distance into nothingness.
"Hey..." footsteps were heard behind him.
Sora glanced slightly at the owner of the voice, it was Riku, probably back to his original old self. Sora sighed softly, taking a seat on the edge, tossing his legs over the end of the wharf. "Hey Riku..." Sora's tone was unconvincing and filled with depression. Riku walked over beside him, turning his head slightly to one side, closing his eyes slowly. "Listen Sora...about what I said back there...at Hollow Bastion..and..what I did..".
Sora looked up at Riku, quirking an eyebrow whilst tilting his head to one side. "Yeah, what about it?". Riku twitched uneasily, sitting beside Sora, extending his arms behind him before leaning back on them and staring up at the clear night sky. Sora blinked, awaiting Riku's response though he too began to show sounds of anxiety, his finger tapped impatiently yet silently against the soft wood of the dock. "I...um..just wanted you to know that.." He broke off, turning his head away quickly.
"Hmm..?" Sora edged closer to Riku, peering at him, anxious how Riku would finish his statement.
"I...I'm sorry.." Riku gulped, he glanced at Sora from the corner of his eye before suddenly feeling Sora's gloved hand touch his cheek. "Hey, no harm done, I'm sure Aerith will find a way to help Kairi" Sora beamed at him, a little unsure himself of what he was doing but he felt compelled. Riku's heart sank. He knew Kairi's fate.
"Y-Yeah...maybe she will.." Riku smiled with false hope. Kairi's heart had been stolen by Maleificient, nearly consumed by the Heartless but she saved it, a blessing or a curse?, Riku wasn't sure. It was part of her plan, his cooperation for his friend's well-being but she had thieved Kairi's heart when Riku had broken his allegiance by not destroying the wielder of the Keyblade, Sora.
Sora's hand eventually slid down his cheek down next to Riku's outstretched arm, the younger boy sighed softly, looking down at the water which was still lapping against the beach like it most probably would for eternity.
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...argh. Okay, so no kiss in this chapter either but they'll be on in the next one, I solemnly swear to you. Your reviews have actually motivated me to keep trying on this one. Its probably a bad idea to write at 12:49am in the morning. My best work is what you saw at Chapter 01 which was on a Saturday night around 2am, I consider this my "peak" of writing skill, I'm sure everyone has these. A time of day where you can write better than others. So thats probably my lame excuse for my lack of fluency during Chapter 02, even though I believe Chapter 03 was much better.
_; Please keep reviewing with suggestions or comments, they are greatly appreciated and help me keep writing. Kiss next Chapter, remember - I swore this time ^_^!.
...also..please write Flames if you have any...but be nice..again..
Kingdom Hearts does not belong to me, nor do any of the characters FROM Kingdom Hearts (ie Squaresoft, Disney, Tarzan ((eck.)) ).
As promised, I'm going to include some nice "juicy" (O_o;) scenes in this Chapter to make up for my disastrous Chapter 02.
Please forgive me!! _
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
"I'll be back soon Riku..."
"Please wait for me..."
"...Riku...!"
- - - - - - - - CHAPTER 03 - - - - - - - - -
"My child...you are too late.." Maleificient's gaze on Sora was almost enough to hypnotize him, she was sleek in a robe made of shadows, her skin its usual sickly green, her skin matched the color of the orb on the staff that she carried.
"W-Wha...what do you mean its too late...Who are you!?" Sora demanded, he was already in his battle stance, ready to strike her if he had to, his eyes slid off the witch to Kairi's motionless body. He didn't feel sorrow but he felt anger. "Who I am does not concern you, though you are the wielder of the Keyblade..." Her grin widened as she stepped forward.
The witch extended an arm a few inches above Kairi to where her scarlet red heart levitated. The once healthy glow of Kairi's heart darkened before it eventually shrunk to the size no bigger than a coin.
Sora stepped forward, he swing the Keyblade upwards in an aggressive motion. "What are you doing?!!" Sora's eyes burnt with anger.
"Simply taking what I need..." The remains of Kairi's heart floated down to Maleificient's palm, somehow integrating with her fingertips into nothingness. She let out a soft croon, turning away from Sora, taking a few steps forward and somehow melding with the shadows. She was gone.
"Kairi..." Sora looked down at her body. But then he remembered Riku.
"I've done all I can..." Aerith sighed softly. The White Mage had cast numerous healing spells on Kairi's heartless body but had no luck.
Sora was silent, he wondered why he wasn't so concerned. This wasn't the first time Kairi had been sick, this felt no different to him. "I'll keep an eye on her, why don't you go get some rest?" Aerith spoke in a comforting and calming tone.
"Thanks Aerith..." Sora smiled at her, stepping out of the hut and on to the wharf where the three boats w ere kept. The night was nothing but sheer beauty: The sky was clear and the moon coated the beach in a soft blue tone, the water shimmered as it lapped endlessly against the sand, catching the reflection of the crystal white moon. He walked to the edge of the wharf, sighing softly as he gazed off into distance into nothingness.
"Hey..." footsteps were heard behind him.
Sora glanced slightly at the owner of the voice, it was Riku, probably back to his original old self. Sora sighed softly, taking a seat on the edge, tossing his legs over the end of the wharf. "Hey Riku..." Sora's tone was unconvincing and filled with depression. Riku walked over beside him, turning his head slightly to one side, closing his eyes slowly. "Listen Sora...about what I said back there...at Hollow Bastion..and..what I did..".
Sora looked up at Riku, quirking an eyebrow whilst tilting his head to one side. "Yeah, what about it?". Riku twitched uneasily, sitting beside Sora, extending his arms behind him before leaning back on them and staring up at the clear night sky. Sora blinked, awaiting Riku's response though he too began to show sounds of anxiety, his finger tapped impatiently yet silently against the soft wood of the dock. "I...um..just wanted you to know that.." He broke off, turning his head away quickly.
"Hmm..?" Sora edged closer to Riku, peering at him, anxious how Riku would finish his statement.
"I...I'm sorry.." Riku gulped, he glanced at Sora from the corner of his eye before suddenly feeling Sora's gloved hand touch his cheek. "Hey, no harm done, I'm sure Aerith will find a way to help Kairi" Sora beamed at him, a little unsure himself of what he was doing but he felt compelled. Riku's heart sank. He knew Kairi's fate.
"Y-Yeah...maybe she will.." Riku smiled with false hope. Kairi's heart had been stolen by Maleificient, nearly consumed by the Heartless but she saved it, a blessing or a curse?, Riku wasn't sure. It was part of her plan, his cooperation for his friend's well-being but she had thieved Kairi's heart when Riku had broken his allegiance by not destroying the wielder of the Keyblade, Sora.
Sora's hand eventually slid down his cheek down next to Riku's outstretched arm, the younger boy sighed softly, looking down at the water which was still lapping against the beach like it most probably would for eternity.
- - - - - - END - CHAPTER 03 - - - - -
...argh. Okay, so no kiss in this chapter either but they'll be on in the next one, I solemnly swear to you. Your reviews have actually motivated me to keep trying on this one. Its probably a bad idea to write at 12:49am in the morning. My best work is what you saw at Chapter 01 which was on a Saturday night around 2am, I consider this my "peak" of writing skill, I'm sure everyone has these. A time of day where you can write better than others. So thats probably my lame excuse for my lack of fluency during Chapter 02, even though I believe Chapter 03 was much better.
_; Please keep reviewing with suggestions or comments, they are greatly appreciated and help me keep writing. Kiss next Chapter, remember - I swore this time ^_^!.
...also..please write Flames if you have any...but be nice..again..
