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HEY EVERYONE, I'm BACK!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry it took me literally FOREVER to get back up. I have had a total writers block, but it is gone and I'm back and better than ever! A BIG WELCOME BACK TO FREEDOM_ANGEL! And I wanna thank all my fans and reviewers for being patient!
NOW YOU MUST READ THIS AS WELL- there is a character in this chapter named Telios, I am not going to tell you his little description b/c you'll hear it in the story. But if you have seen the movie The Scorpion King, he looks like (is) the evil guy, the swordsmen in the movie, and in this chapter he is as good as he was in the movie with a sword. For those of you who have NO CLUE what I am talking about and you want to know who he looks like and how he acts like in the movie, the scorpion king, email me personally and ask, at ateensdiva_marie@yahoo.com and I will be more than happy to explain to you who he is and send you a picture of what he looks like. So basically he is the same as in the movie only he is in the future and not all Egyptian like( Enjoy!
Logan pulled Max up to her feet, allowing her to cry on him as she stroked her hair. "Max, it's going to be ok, but right now we have to get you out of here." Logan replied. Max didn't say anything and just allowed him to led her down the street and away from the building.
Max sat crying on the couch of Cindy's apartment. Joshua felt ad and sad for Max, thinking he was the one that causes this to happen. Joshua sat down next to Max and held up a plate. Max looked at it, it had one cookie on it, and in gel icing it had 'I'm sorry Max.' Max looked up at Joshua who had flour all in his hair and on his face. She saw the guilt and the sadness in his eyes and this mad her smile, seeing her friend covered all in flour. She giggled a little and took the cookie. "It's not your fault Joshua. It was mine." She assured him as she broke the cookie in half. Joshua smiled widely as did Max. "Hey Joshua! Come in her doggie dog, your 2 batch is done!" Cindy shouted from the kitchen. Joshua grinned at her, kissed her on the forehead and walked into the kitchen. Max popped a piece of the cookie into her mouth, which was still nice and warm, as Logan walked in and took a seat beside her.
"Max, I just want you to know I am really sorry and really ashamed that I allowed my jealousy turn me against you." Logan replied. Max shook her heads yes. "It's fine." She said not looking at him then put another piece into her mouth. Logan looked at her and leaned a little closer. "Is it?" She asked. Max shook her head yes. "Max, we're going to get him back, I promise. I will not rest until I find a cure for him ok?" Logan reassured, telling she was worried sick about Alec. "Don't do that, just let me know fast once you found something." She replied after she chewed her cookie up. "Max we're all here for you, ok?" Logan asked as he placed her hand on her knee. Max then looked at him, into his eyes. He looked back, waiting for something to happen. "I'm going for a ride." She replied then got up and popped the remains of her cookie into her mouth. "K" he said softly as she walked out the door.
Max must have drove by that same building about 10 times. She just couldn't get things clear to her. Her tears were gone but the pain still remained, and as painful as ever. The roars of her engines filled the quiet streets, as no one was on them. It was chilly out and the wind cut her like a knife at times, sending a chill through her body. Suddenly something solid and hard knocked her in the face, and knocking her completely off her bike. Max hardly hit the ground and rolled a little until she came to a stop. She heard her motorcycle as well hit the ground because of the loss of balance. She could feel blood oozing out of a cut on her forehead and taste some of it because of cutting her lip.
In pain, she turned around to see what she hit, or what hit her. A figure eerily walked out of the darkness, Max peered at him, trying to see who he was, once she did she gasped loudly. "Telios." She said breathlessly. Telios grinned evilly as he looked down at her. Telios was the Manticore trainer. He showed NO mercy when he fought, not only to transgenics but also to anyone who dared to fight him. Ben swore to her that he would fight and beat the living hell out of his own mother if she challenged him to fight. Max was convinced that he had to be the best fighter, in kickboxing, martial arts, and with sword of any solid know to mankind. She never saw anyone move as fast, as accurate, hit and kick as hard as he does. Back at Manticore, once a week she was forced to fight him, every transgenic was. They were lined up in a solider manner and each transgenic fought him. And he never lost once. Not to them not to anyone.
Each week she dreaded it. She would always get it badly as did everyone else. He wouldn't stop, once he started planting moves on you, he wouldn't stop until he felt like it, not even if you broke a bone. She feared him and she had ever right to fear him, even Alec did. "Long time no see huh 452?" He asked with a hint of his British accent showing. Max scrambled to her feet, he fists near her chest and her hair getting in her face. One thing she learned by frightening him at Manticore, don't let him get you down to the ground, because if he did, chances are you couldn't get back up. Max's lips were apart slightly and he teeth together, half in aggression, half in fear, he feet shoulder length apart and her eyebrows in an angry/aggressive state. She watched Telios raise his fists, seeing no fear in him.
Max's legs then began to shake as did her arms and she got that gut feeling like when your about ready to go up and make a speech or do a play on stage. Chills ran down her spin and cold sweat took over her palms body. She tried to make her shaking stop, but she couldn't. Max inhaled short shallow breaths and her eyes watched him prepared. "Ready to go down like old ties?" He asked getting closer to her. "Bring it on." Max replied but not as confident as normal. Telios lunged at her; Max then took a step and held up her arm to block his punch she THOUGHT he was going to give. But to her amazement Telios had fipped over her head and was behind her, Max realized this AFTER his arms wrapped around her throat. She cursed herself for not seeing that move, as she gripped his arm. Aggregated she slammed her elbow deep into his side. He barely winced.
Telios laughed knowing the poor girl was using all the strength to get free. "Bad move honey." He said then Telios went to his knees, sending Max backwards, as in kind of like a backbend on he was a hold of her. Max heard her back crack and shut her eyes tight in pain. Telios ginned then kicked her feet out from underneath of her, sending her back smashing to the ground. Telios then got up and kicked her in the side. Max, failing to feel her body, desperately tried to jump up but every time Telios would kick and punch her back down. Telios then grabbed her leg and threw her into a wall of a building. Max took the advantage and scrambled to her feet; unable to stand being the pain was so unbearable. She saw Telios fist coming straight at her and instantly blocked it by putting her arm in front of her face. But Telios then kicked her in the stomach, making her, instinctively, hunch over in pain. Telios rolled over Max's back to the other side of her, spun around and kicked her in the face.
Max made a noise but came back with a punch, which Telios, of course, blocked. Telios kicked her in the face that caused her to stagger back and do a back somersault, but she ended up on her toes, her hand on the ground, helping her keep her balance. Telios was instantly there and kicked her in the face again, sending her back into the wall. Max's back was leaning up against it and she sat on her butt, her head to the side as she looked up at him threw her strands of hair. "Here, I'll give you a chance." He replied taking out the gun and taking out all the bullets except for one, and then he threw it down at Max's feet.
Max looked at it then up at him again, flashbacks haunting her. Max forced herself to stand up and to his amazement she kicked the gun out of her way. "Oh, big Miss Tough chick huh? Well now it's gonna hurt." He warned. Then hit the ground, whipping his legs to hers, hopping to knock her feet out form underneath her. But Max jumped up and did a front hand spring over him, so she landed behind him. Once her feet hit the ground she jumped again, doing a back handspring back to the original place she was standing, for if she didn't move his other leg would have collided with hers, bringing her down. Max lunged her foot down, hopping to drive it down onto his chest considering he was flat on his back. Telios gripped her ankle though before it made contact with his body.
Max clenched her teeth together and made a frustrating noise as she tried to drive her foot on to him. Telios kicked the leg that was keeping her up and she fell back onto the cement. A noise of pain and anger ness escaping her lips. Telios jumped up, grabbing a pipe, on his way. He flipped it a couple of times and the ran at her with it. Max grabbed her pipe, took her legs, placed them on his abdomen and flipped him over her head, causing him to hit the ground and to let go of the pipe. Max threw it aside and got up, as did he. Max sent her fist hurling towards him, but unfortunately Telios caught it and twisted it behind her back. He then rammed her chest side first into a wall. Max was getting mad, he backed up and was going to it again but this time Max walked up the wall and flipped over Telios head so that she was behind him. Telios, knowing she would do that, spun around and kicked her in the chest, sending her to the concrete. She was tired, her muscles ached and burned, and she was in unthinkable pain. Telios however was barely even tired.
"Give it up 452, you can't beat me, you never can and you never will." Telios replied. "I don't have to follow you training technique, were not in Manticore anymore you can't tell me how to fight!" she screamed at him. Telios laughed. "Your cracking aren't you?" Telios replied. Max looked helplessly at the ground. Telios then ran towards her getting ready to kick her unconscious until suddenly Max's head flipped up and she sent the butt of a pipe right where it counts on a guy. She had, had her hand on it, waiting for him to get within reach, and he did. She saw him hunch over in pain. "Like I said, at Manticore we weren't allowed to hit there because it was as you called it, 'easy winning'. I don't care because it's still winning and I can get away. The beauty in the difference between a male and female." Max replied.
Max stood up, as he hunched over still. "Give my courtesy to Ames." She replied then punched him hard in the face, which sent him thundering to the ground. Max then ran to her bike, and was off.
HEY EVERYONE, I'm BACK!!!!!!!!!!!! Sorry it took me literally FOREVER to get back up. I have had a total writers block, but it is gone and I'm back and better than ever! A BIG WELCOME BACK TO FREEDOM_ANGEL! And I wanna thank all my fans and reviewers for being patient!
NOW YOU MUST READ THIS AS WELL- there is a character in this chapter named Telios, I am not going to tell you his little description b/c you'll hear it in the story. But if you have seen the movie The Scorpion King, he looks like (is) the evil guy, the swordsmen in the movie, and in this chapter he is as good as he was in the movie with a sword. For those of you who have NO CLUE what I am talking about and you want to know who he looks like and how he acts like in the movie, the scorpion king, email me personally and ask, at ateensdiva_marie@yahoo.com and I will be more than happy to explain to you who he is and send you a picture of what he looks like. So basically he is the same as in the movie only he is in the future and not all Egyptian like( Enjoy!
Logan pulled Max up to her feet, allowing her to cry on him as she stroked her hair. "Max, it's going to be ok, but right now we have to get you out of here." Logan replied. Max didn't say anything and just allowed him to led her down the street and away from the building.
Max sat crying on the couch of Cindy's apartment. Joshua felt ad and sad for Max, thinking he was the one that causes this to happen. Joshua sat down next to Max and held up a plate. Max looked at it, it had one cookie on it, and in gel icing it had 'I'm sorry Max.' Max looked up at Joshua who had flour all in his hair and on his face. She saw the guilt and the sadness in his eyes and this mad her smile, seeing her friend covered all in flour. She giggled a little and took the cookie. "It's not your fault Joshua. It was mine." She assured him as she broke the cookie in half. Joshua smiled widely as did Max. "Hey Joshua! Come in her doggie dog, your 2 batch is done!" Cindy shouted from the kitchen. Joshua grinned at her, kissed her on the forehead and walked into the kitchen. Max popped a piece of the cookie into her mouth, which was still nice and warm, as Logan walked in and took a seat beside her.
"Max, I just want you to know I am really sorry and really ashamed that I allowed my jealousy turn me against you." Logan replied. Max shook her heads yes. "It's fine." She said not looking at him then put another piece into her mouth. Logan looked at her and leaned a little closer. "Is it?" She asked. Max shook her head yes. "Max, we're going to get him back, I promise. I will not rest until I find a cure for him ok?" Logan reassured, telling she was worried sick about Alec. "Don't do that, just let me know fast once you found something." She replied after she chewed her cookie up. "Max we're all here for you, ok?" Logan asked as he placed her hand on her knee. Max then looked at him, into his eyes. He looked back, waiting for something to happen. "I'm going for a ride." She replied then got up and popped the remains of her cookie into her mouth. "K" he said softly as she walked out the door.
Max must have drove by that same building about 10 times. She just couldn't get things clear to her. Her tears were gone but the pain still remained, and as painful as ever. The roars of her engines filled the quiet streets, as no one was on them. It was chilly out and the wind cut her like a knife at times, sending a chill through her body. Suddenly something solid and hard knocked her in the face, and knocking her completely off her bike. Max hardly hit the ground and rolled a little until she came to a stop. She heard her motorcycle as well hit the ground because of the loss of balance. She could feel blood oozing out of a cut on her forehead and taste some of it because of cutting her lip.
In pain, she turned around to see what she hit, or what hit her. A figure eerily walked out of the darkness, Max peered at him, trying to see who he was, once she did she gasped loudly. "Telios." She said breathlessly. Telios grinned evilly as he looked down at her. Telios was the Manticore trainer. He showed NO mercy when he fought, not only to transgenics but also to anyone who dared to fight him. Ben swore to her that he would fight and beat the living hell out of his own mother if she challenged him to fight. Max was convinced that he had to be the best fighter, in kickboxing, martial arts, and with sword of any solid know to mankind. She never saw anyone move as fast, as accurate, hit and kick as hard as he does. Back at Manticore, once a week she was forced to fight him, every transgenic was. They were lined up in a solider manner and each transgenic fought him. And he never lost once. Not to them not to anyone.
Each week she dreaded it. She would always get it badly as did everyone else. He wouldn't stop, once he started planting moves on you, he wouldn't stop until he felt like it, not even if you broke a bone. She feared him and she had ever right to fear him, even Alec did. "Long time no see huh 452?" He asked with a hint of his British accent showing. Max scrambled to her feet, he fists near her chest and her hair getting in her face. One thing she learned by frightening him at Manticore, don't let him get you down to the ground, because if he did, chances are you couldn't get back up. Max's lips were apart slightly and he teeth together, half in aggression, half in fear, he feet shoulder length apart and her eyebrows in an angry/aggressive state. She watched Telios raise his fists, seeing no fear in him.
Max's legs then began to shake as did her arms and she got that gut feeling like when your about ready to go up and make a speech or do a play on stage. Chills ran down her spin and cold sweat took over her palms body. She tried to make her shaking stop, but she couldn't. Max inhaled short shallow breaths and her eyes watched him prepared. "Ready to go down like old ties?" He asked getting closer to her. "Bring it on." Max replied but not as confident as normal. Telios lunged at her; Max then took a step and held up her arm to block his punch she THOUGHT he was going to give. But to her amazement Telios had fipped over her head and was behind her, Max realized this AFTER his arms wrapped around her throat. She cursed herself for not seeing that move, as she gripped his arm. Aggregated she slammed her elbow deep into his side. He barely winced.
Telios laughed knowing the poor girl was using all the strength to get free. "Bad move honey." He said then Telios went to his knees, sending Max backwards, as in kind of like a backbend on he was a hold of her. Max heard her back crack and shut her eyes tight in pain. Telios ginned then kicked her feet out from underneath of her, sending her back smashing to the ground. Telios then got up and kicked her in the side. Max, failing to feel her body, desperately tried to jump up but every time Telios would kick and punch her back down. Telios then grabbed her leg and threw her into a wall of a building. Max took the advantage and scrambled to her feet; unable to stand being the pain was so unbearable. She saw Telios fist coming straight at her and instantly blocked it by putting her arm in front of her face. But Telios then kicked her in the stomach, making her, instinctively, hunch over in pain. Telios rolled over Max's back to the other side of her, spun around and kicked her in the face.
Max made a noise but came back with a punch, which Telios, of course, blocked. Telios kicked her in the face that caused her to stagger back and do a back somersault, but she ended up on her toes, her hand on the ground, helping her keep her balance. Telios was instantly there and kicked her in the face again, sending her back into the wall. Max's back was leaning up against it and she sat on her butt, her head to the side as she looked up at him threw her strands of hair. "Here, I'll give you a chance." He replied taking out the gun and taking out all the bullets except for one, and then he threw it down at Max's feet.
Max looked at it then up at him again, flashbacks haunting her. Max forced herself to stand up and to his amazement she kicked the gun out of her way. "Oh, big Miss Tough chick huh? Well now it's gonna hurt." He warned. Then hit the ground, whipping his legs to hers, hopping to knock her feet out form underneath her. But Max jumped up and did a front hand spring over him, so she landed behind him. Once her feet hit the ground she jumped again, doing a back handspring back to the original place she was standing, for if she didn't move his other leg would have collided with hers, bringing her down. Max lunged her foot down, hopping to drive it down onto his chest considering he was flat on his back. Telios gripped her ankle though before it made contact with his body.
Max clenched her teeth together and made a frustrating noise as she tried to drive her foot on to him. Telios kicked the leg that was keeping her up and she fell back onto the cement. A noise of pain and anger ness escaping her lips. Telios jumped up, grabbing a pipe, on his way. He flipped it a couple of times and the ran at her with it. Max grabbed her pipe, took her legs, placed them on his abdomen and flipped him over her head, causing him to hit the ground and to let go of the pipe. Max threw it aside and got up, as did he. Max sent her fist hurling towards him, but unfortunately Telios caught it and twisted it behind her back. He then rammed her chest side first into a wall. Max was getting mad, he backed up and was going to it again but this time Max walked up the wall and flipped over Telios head so that she was behind him. Telios, knowing she would do that, spun around and kicked her in the chest, sending her to the concrete. She was tired, her muscles ached and burned, and she was in unthinkable pain. Telios however was barely even tired.
"Give it up 452, you can't beat me, you never can and you never will." Telios replied. "I don't have to follow you training technique, were not in Manticore anymore you can't tell me how to fight!" she screamed at him. Telios laughed. "Your cracking aren't you?" Telios replied. Max looked helplessly at the ground. Telios then ran towards her getting ready to kick her unconscious until suddenly Max's head flipped up and she sent the butt of a pipe right where it counts on a guy. She had, had her hand on it, waiting for him to get within reach, and he did. She saw him hunch over in pain. "Like I said, at Manticore we weren't allowed to hit there because it was as you called it, 'easy winning'. I don't care because it's still winning and I can get away. The beauty in the difference between a male and female." Max replied.
Max stood up, as he hunched over still. "Give my courtesy to Ames." She replied then punched him hard in the face, which sent him thundering to the ground. Max then ran to her bike, and was off.
