Ch 2..
Again...Im no good at writing *sighs*..I need critique..or whatever!
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6:00 pm Garage Corn calls all the GG's together (that haven't been kidnapped) for an important meeting. "Ok, we got a super size problem. Seems that someone is out to take back the streets. And this ain't no joke. We gotta figure out something before this gets outta hand." Poison Jam skates in from Rokkaku -Dai Heights entrance. He looks stressed. His hair is tossled and his skates are'nt even put on properly. "Where is she!" He is frantically searching through the Garage looking for Gum. Love Shocker whispers to Boogie: "Gee he must really love her. Ive never seen a man this frantic to see Gum!". Corn skates over to Poison Jam. "Man, you gotta calm down. I swear shes in good hands, if you calm down we'll be able to figure out whats gonna happen!" Poison Jam sighs, rubs his head and skates over back to the group. Corn starts talking again. "Now, we gotta figure out who started this!" Rapid gets up. "It's Goddess! I swear! The wouldn't say she'd get revenge on us for no reason! Ive known her for a long time. She was practically another Rapid 99 to all of us!" Corn looks into Rapid's eyes. He sees she's not lying. He can feel it. "Rapid, do you know where we could find this girl?" Rapid smiles. "Come with me." She pulls up Corn and he follows her up to the 99th St. entrance.
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9:00 pm Future site of the Rokkaku Stadium- or should I say past? Doom Rider is skating around the track. He's loved being there ever since the Noise tanks persuaded them to Race there. Just as he's about do do a wallride he hears a loud bang coming from the entrance. It distracts him and he falls. "Oh man, whoever did that is gonna get it! Doom Riders NEVER FALL!" HE gets up and starts frantically skating to the front of the stadium. He looks all around for what made that noise. He sees a very pretty girl standing right by the doors. "Hello!" She says in her perkiest voice. Doom Rider is entranced by the girls beauty. When he regains composure the looks at the girl. "Did you make that noise??" The girl laughs! "Of course silly! I AM moving in here you know!" Doom Rider giver her a confused look. "Sorry darling, this is GG territory and I own this place." "Oh! well not anymore!" He girl laughs and runs away. She grabs another suitcase and slams it to the ground making another loud noise. Doom Rider thinks for a moment. " hey! I have a proposal. Ill have a game of death ball against you and whoever wins gets to live here..." The girl thinks to herself.."Um, well...I Guess....Uh....NO!". Doom Rider is now steamed. he goes charging at the girl. The girl laugs and just as he's about to ram into her, she pulls out a can of paint and sprays it at his face. he faints. Something was definetly wrong with this paint.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 11:00pm 99th St. Rapid 99 and corn. Rapid runs into a house right in the middle of Benton Tower. She takes a key out of her skate and opens the door. Shes rummaging through a box full of junk when she finds a raggedy old map. "Here." She points to a small black dot on the map. Corn looks confused? "Um..what are you trying to say...shes right here?" "Well, she always said that if she ever came back to Tokyo I could always find her here." Corn took the map and looked at the small dot. "This looks like its located on Hikage St. ready to go?". Rapid nodded her head and they skate out of the room.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 2:00 am Garage. Jazz and Clutch are lugging in two big bags. They look at eachother. They were happy to be back home in NY but they are just as happy to be back in Tokyo. Combo spots Jazz and Clutch and skate over to them. He grabs them both in his arms. "Aw man! Why did you guys gotta leave! It's so different without you's!" Jazz smiles but she knows their not here to chit chat. They're here to reclaim what is their own. They unpack into a room and go back outside. "So Combo, gimmie the 411 on what happened?" Combo explains everything to Clutch. His face turns sour. "Thats horrible! man, ima go pull a Yoyo and investigate on my own for a while. Keep an eye on Jazz." Clutch skates out to Shibuya.
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5:00am somewhere in Sky Dinosaurian. Gum slowly opens her eyes. They focus and she sees Cube tied up to a Dinosaur leg. She looks down. Shes also tightly bound up. She struggles to release herself but its impossible. She thinks she can burn the rope with her Rockets on her skates but she dosen't have them on. She faintly calls for Cube until she wakes up. "Huh? Ow my head. Man, Gum is that you? Where are we?" "I dunno Cube. Somewhere in Sky Dino. Do you remember what happened?". Cube thinks to herself. "Someone kidnapped us, ive never seen her around. She had a mohawk-" They hear a bunch of people skating ahead. Gum motions to Cube to play dead. They both close their eyes and droop their heads. "This is perfect. Look at them! Soon tokyo will be yours Goddess!" Gum and Cube recognize the voice. It must be the girl. "youhave done very well Groove, I will definetly reward you with your own part of town to tag all to yourself." "Aw Boss this is the best! You finally get the streets back!". Gum and Cube knew what was happening now.
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6:00 pm Garage Corn calls all the GG's together (that haven't been kidnapped) for an important meeting. "Ok, we got a super size problem. Seems that someone is out to take back the streets. And this ain't no joke. We gotta figure out something before this gets outta hand." Poison Jam skates in from Rokkaku -Dai Heights entrance. He looks stressed. His hair is tossled and his skates are'nt even put on properly. "Where is she!" He is frantically searching through the Garage looking for Gum. Love Shocker whispers to Boogie: "Gee he must really love her. Ive never seen a man this frantic to see Gum!". Corn skates over to Poison Jam. "Man, you gotta calm down. I swear shes in good hands, if you calm down we'll be able to figure out whats gonna happen!" Poison Jam sighs, rubs his head and skates over back to the group. Corn starts talking again. "Now, we gotta figure out who started this!" Rapid gets up. "It's Goddess! I swear! The wouldn't say she'd get revenge on us for no reason! Ive known her for a long time. She was practically another Rapid 99 to all of us!" Corn looks into Rapid's eyes. He sees she's not lying. He can feel it. "Rapid, do you know where we could find this girl?" Rapid smiles. "Come with me." She pulls up Corn and he follows her up to the 99th St. entrance.
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9:00 pm Future site of the Rokkaku Stadium- or should I say past? Doom Rider is skating around the track. He's loved being there ever since the Noise tanks persuaded them to Race there. Just as he's about do do a wallride he hears a loud bang coming from the entrance. It distracts him and he falls. "Oh man, whoever did that is gonna get it! Doom Riders NEVER FALL!" HE gets up and starts frantically skating to the front of the stadium. He looks all around for what made that noise. He sees a very pretty girl standing right by the doors. "Hello!" She says in her perkiest voice. Doom Rider is entranced by the girls beauty. When he regains composure the looks at the girl. "Did you make that noise??" The girl laughs! "Of course silly! I AM moving in here you know!" Doom Rider giver her a confused look. "Sorry darling, this is GG territory and I own this place." "Oh! well not anymore!" He girl laughs and runs away. She grabs another suitcase and slams it to the ground making another loud noise. Doom Rider thinks for a moment. " hey! I have a proposal. Ill have a game of death ball against you and whoever wins gets to live here..." The girl thinks to herself.."Um, well...I Guess....Uh....NO!". Doom Rider is now steamed. he goes charging at the girl. The girl laugs and just as he's about to ram into her, she pulls out a can of paint and sprays it at his face. he faints. Something was definetly wrong with this paint.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 11:00pm 99th St. Rapid 99 and corn. Rapid runs into a house right in the middle of Benton Tower. She takes a key out of her skate and opens the door. Shes rummaging through a box full of junk when she finds a raggedy old map. "Here." She points to a small black dot on the map. Corn looks confused? "Um..what are you trying to say...shes right here?" "Well, she always said that if she ever came back to Tokyo I could always find her here." Corn took the map and looked at the small dot. "This looks like its located on Hikage St. ready to go?". Rapid nodded her head and they skate out of the room.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * 2:00 am Garage. Jazz and Clutch are lugging in two big bags. They look at eachother. They were happy to be back home in NY but they are just as happy to be back in Tokyo. Combo spots Jazz and Clutch and skate over to them. He grabs them both in his arms. "Aw man! Why did you guys gotta leave! It's so different without you's!" Jazz smiles but she knows their not here to chit chat. They're here to reclaim what is their own. They unpack into a room and go back outside. "So Combo, gimmie the 411 on what happened?" Combo explains everything to Clutch. His face turns sour. "Thats horrible! man, ima go pull a Yoyo and investigate on my own for a while. Keep an eye on Jazz." Clutch skates out to Shibuya.
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5:00am somewhere in Sky Dinosaurian. Gum slowly opens her eyes. They focus and she sees Cube tied up to a Dinosaur leg. She looks down. Shes also tightly bound up. She struggles to release herself but its impossible. She thinks she can burn the rope with her Rockets on her skates but she dosen't have them on. She faintly calls for Cube until she wakes up. "Huh? Ow my head. Man, Gum is that you? Where are we?" "I dunno Cube. Somewhere in Sky Dino. Do you remember what happened?". Cube thinks to herself. "Someone kidnapped us, ive never seen her around. She had a mohawk-" They hear a bunch of people skating ahead. Gum motions to Cube to play dead. They both close their eyes and droop their heads. "This is perfect. Look at them! Soon tokyo will be yours Goddess!" Gum and Cube recognize the voice. It must be the girl. "youhave done very well Groove, I will definetly reward you with your own part of town to tag all to yourself." "Aw Boss this is the best! You finally get the streets back!". Gum and Cube knew what was happening now.
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