Chapter Twelve
Karna
A/N: Hello everybody! Well I still don't know what I should do for the next chapter, but I do know what is going to happen in this one. Okay, now I don't want to sound rude so plez forgive me if u are offended.
Ishmael: Thank you for your review. However I feel that you just a little over reacting about my story. First thing do you even know the background of my fanfic? Cuz, if you don't then I do not see how u would care bout my grammar. Second, I somehow did not think that being an author on Fanfiction.net, was meant to be professional. Last time I checked, the site was a place where young writers could go and express themselves. And plenty of writers give in their thoughts as they are typing their stories. I think its fine. Of course when I am writing a story for school I will take the proper measures. Also, I don't mean to brag, I am in the gifted and Talented program at my school. I got in there for my La skills. But we're kids, we can type however we want to. Now about the grammar, if you are talking bout the u's in colour, favourite etc. I'll have you know, I am a STRONG, PROUD CANADIAN ALL THE WAY!!!!! If you are offended plez notify me and I will willingly apologize. Thank you.
Thank you for your time to those who had to read through that, but actually it gives me something to ask you, do you think my grammar's bad? Okay, stupid question, here is the question. Is it okay to use bad grammar in a fanfic like u, plez, pples etc. It can be a poll of something, tell me when you review.
It was two weeks after Daine and Numair had told their parents that they were engaged. Daine wanted to go into the city to look at the goods of the businesses.
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"That will cost two cooper nobles' the salesmen said. Daine was buying this small gold pendant, in the shape of an eagle. Daine dished out her two cooper nobles and listened the afternoon bell rang. She had told Numair that she would be back home before dinner. She took a few side streets as short cuts. As she rounded a corner, she heard a small voice say "Gee miss, you look like you could use a drink of water"
Daine turned around. There, sitting on a small wooden box, was a small little girl. She had the most bluest eyes, even bluer eyes than Jon. She had what looked like brown hair, but in was black with dirt, lice infested and matted. She looked no more then five. All she was wearing was a potato sack.
"Yes I would like a drink of water, how much?" Daine asked, that was probably why she was asking, for money.
"Oh no ma'am, it costs nothing"
"I insist"
" Half a nickel noble"
"Deal!"
Daine expected a bucket of water and a glass, but they didn't come. Instead, the girl closed her eyes and scrunched up her small face. Suddenly an empty glass appeared, then like an invisible person was pouring it, water fill the glass. Daine was astonished. She paid the girl and took a taste. It was the coldest, sweetest water Daine had ever tasted.
"Do your parents know you can do this" Daine asked.
"No, ma'am, they died in a fire accidentally caused by me. I can create water, fire, a summer breeze and rich soil"
Daine was shocked. Numair, she knew would defiantly find this scrawny little girl interesting.
"Would you like to come home with me? I could give you a hot bath, and new clothes" Daine asked.
"Yes please ma'am I would love to but you would have to promise me something," She said.
"And what is that?" Daine asked.
"You can't mistreat me, like beat me or hurt me"
"I promise. What's your name?"
"Karna"
Karna. It meant flower (I am making this up). Her parents had chosen well.
"So what's your name?" Karna asked.
"Veralidaine Sarrasri," Daine answered. "But everyone calls me Daine, or by my betrothed, Numair Salmalin, Magelet"
"Numair Salmalin, the mage?" the girl asked. Thank the gods, this little girl wasn't stupid, Daine thought.
"Come on lets go home" Daine said as Karna slipped her little hand into Daine's and the headed towards the castle.
"Numair I'm home!" Daine called as She and Karna walked into the room.
"Oh good! Master Lindhall came by to. drop." Numair began but didn't finish.
"Who's this young lady" Numair said as he leaned down so that he was at eye level with her.
"My name is Karna. Daine said I could live with her."
"Did she now?" Numair said. "I think I need to go talk to."
"Karna show him what you can do" Daine said quickly. She knew this would have happened so she was prepared.
Karna did exactly as Daine saw her do. Numair was shocked.
"I have heard about this before. it is when wild magic is mutated because of the Gift. very rare of course. I presume you would like to learn how to use it." Numair asked.
"Yes I would sir" Karna replied meekly.
"Would you like to be adopted"
"Yes I would sir!"
"By us"
Karna flew her arms around Numair's neck and hugged him tight. Daine laughed and hugged the other two.
Soon, they were a pile of laughing people. Daine kissed Numair quickly, and then lead Karna to a hot bath.
Well what you think? Cute eh? Don't forget to tell me what you think about what should happen next and the poll! And of course review!!
Karna
A/N: Hello everybody! Well I still don't know what I should do for the next chapter, but I do know what is going to happen in this one. Okay, now I don't want to sound rude so plez forgive me if u are offended.
Ishmael: Thank you for your review. However I feel that you just a little over reacting about my story. First thing do you even know the background of my fanfic? Cuz, if you don't then I do not see how u would care bout my grammar. Second, I somehow did not think that being an author on Fanfiction.net, was meant to be professional. Last time I checked, the site was a place where young writers could go and express themselves. And plenty of writers give in their thoughts as they are typing their stories. I think its fine. Of course when I am writing a story for school I will take the proper measures. Also, I don't mean to brag, I am in the gifted and Talented program at my school. I got in there for my La skills. But we're kids, we can type however we want to. Now about the grammar, if you are talking bout the u's in colour, favourite etc. I'll have you know, I am a STRONG, PROUD CANADIAN ALL THE WAY!!!!! If you are offended plez notify me and I will willingly apologize. Thank you.
Thank you for your time to those who had to read through that, but actually it gives me something to ask you, do you think my grammar's bad? Okay, stupid question, here is the question. Is it okay to use bad grammar in a fanfic like u, plez, pples etc. It can be a poll of something, tell me when you review.
It was two weeks after Daine and Numair had told their parents that they were engaged. Daine wanted to go into the city to look at the goods of the businesses.
****
"That will cost two cooper nobles' the salesmen said. Daine was buying this small gold pendant, in the shape of an eagle. Daine dished out her two cooper nobles and listened the afternoon bell rang. She had told Numair that she would be back home before dinner. She took a few side streets as short cuts. As she rounded a corner, she heard a small voice say "Gee miss, you look like you could use a drink of water"
Daine turned around. There, sitting on a small wooden box, was a small little girl. She had the most bluest eyes, even bluer eyes than Jon. She had what looked like brown hair, but in was black with dirt, lice infested and matted. She looked no more then five. All she was wearing was a potato sack.
"Yes I would like a drink of water, how much?" Daine asked, that was probably why she was asking, for money.
"Oh no ma'am, it costs nothing"
"I insist"
" Half a nickel noble"
"Deal!"
Daine expected a bucket of water and a glass, but they didn't come. Instead, the girl closed her eyes and scrunched up her small face. Suddenly an empty glass appeared, then like an invisible person was pouring it, water fill the glass. Daine was astonished. She paid the girl and took a taste. It was the coldest, sweetest water Daine had ever tasted.
"Do your parents know you can do this" Daine asked.
"No, ma'am, they died in a fire accidentally caused by me. I can create water, fire, a summer breeze and rich soil"
Daine was shocked. Numair, she knew would defiantly find this scrawny little girl interesting.
"Would you like to come home with me? I could give you a hot bath, and new clothes" Daine asked.
"Yes please ma'am I would love to but you would have to promise me something," She said.
"And what is that?" Daine asked.
"You can't mistreat me, like beat me or hurt me"
"I promise. What's your name?"
"Karna"
Karna. It meant flower (I am making this up). Her parents had chosen well.
"So what's your name?" Karna asked.
"Veralidaine Sarrasri," Daine answered. "But everyone calls me Daine, or by my betrothed, Numair Salmalin, Magelet"
"Numair Salmalin, the mage?" the girl asked. Thank the gods, this little girl wasn't stupid, Daine thought.
"Come on lets go home" Daine said as Karna slipped her little hand into Daine's and the headed towards the castle.
"Numair I'm home!" Daine called as She and Karna walked into the room.
"Oh good! Master Lindhall came by to. drop." Numair began but didn't finish.
"Who's this young lady" Numair said as he leaned down so that he was at eye level with her.
"My name is Karna. Daine said I could live with her."
"Did she now?" Numair said. "I think I need to go talk to."
"Karna show him what you can do" Daine said quickly. She knew this would have happened so she was prepared.
Karna did exactly as Daine saw her do. Numair was shocked.
"I have heard about this before. it is when wild magic is mutated because of the Gift. very rare of course. I presume you would like to learn how to use it." Numair asked.
"Yes I would sir" Karna replied meekly.
"Would you like to be adopted"
"Yes I would sir!"
"By us"
Karna flew her arms around Numair's neck and hugged him tight. Daine laughed and hugged the other two.
Soon, they were a pile of laughing people. Daine kissed Numair quickly, and then lead Karna to a hot bath.
Well what you think? Cute eh? Don't forget to tell me what you think about what should happen next and the poll! And of course review!!
