A/N: Another fast update. Thanks for the new reviews! (Even if there were only three new ones. ARGH WHY MUST PEOPLE HATE ME?!?!?!)
Oh well it was enough encouragment to continue. And since this is the fifth chapter I'll put up a thanks at the end of the chapter for my own sheer enjoyment. lol. And maybe yours too. I just love it when people thank me in their stories. For some odd reason. (Ya Ayumi especially! Yers was the best!)
But this story isn't finished yet lol I just elt like thanking people today. I'm odd.
Anyway, this chapter is pretty important in dealing where the story is going.
Oh, and if you haven't heard the song "Damaged" by "Plummet", YOU MUST LISTEN TO IT.
Oh, and since I haven't said this for awhile (and since she may have forgotten), this story is for "Midori Natari Himura". If you've read the A/N of the first chapter, you know why.
Well now you may read...*motions toward the story*
Chapter 5
The wind picked up and the echos grew louder. All six of us stood.
As we stared out into nothing, soon the wind crashed into the ground,
and there were five groups of white light in front of us. In no particular shape
either. They were just...there.
Kenshin growled. "You're past, aren't you? I remember you talking to me in my dreams."
The middle white shape made a gesture that we distinguished as a nod.
"Yes we are. And now that you know what your past was...you're future shall
be almost the same."
It was like someone took the world, inverted the colors, and froze it. Because that's certainly what everyone else felt like. We all stared, and my heart felt like a coat of ice has just oozed over it.
Finally I got the courage to speak. "You mean that question I asked to Kenshin last night...the one about living over again with our feelings already realized..."
They all responded as if one being. "It's completely true. You're a very smart girl."
Now it was Sanosuke's turn to speak up. "And what about Yahiko? Why isn't he here?"
They all laughed. "Yahiko. Yes, his soul was too stubborn. We couldn't have gotten him here again if all the powers in the universe were combined!"
I sighed.
"But everything else is the same," they responded.
Megumi wasn't going to take this. "You mean we're going to sit around and let you take over us?!?!"
"That WAS our plan."
Sano growled and balled his fist into his hand. "Well RE-THINK IT!"
They made another gesture that was extremely similar to shaking their heads...they were telling us no. No to our own lives! Now THIS was beginning to piss me off.
"No, let ME SAY NO!" I yelled out while joining my arm with Kenshin's.
"He left me long ago, I won't let him leave me again!"
Kenshin blinked and nodded. "She's right! We won't agree with you!"
Misao began to growl at them and starting shouting protests.
Even Aoshi was beginning to argue.
Obviously they were getting fed up with us and made this incredibly horrifying wail that shut us all up.
Little red slits appeared near the top of their shapes. We had also made them angry.
Their echoing voices turned angry as they said, "Fine. Don't obey us. But now you must run from us. And we WILL catch up with you!"
And they disappeared, their words leaving a chill on my spine.
A/N: Yeah yeah, sorry for the shortness but I can't write anymore right now. I'm tired and I think I should leave you in suspense. And in anger because of short chapter-ness.
Well, I think I'd like to remind you to REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!!!
(Since you seem to keep forgetting that....)
And gomen for my terrible attitude, but I'm tired and crabby and listening to a depressing song. (NOT "Damaged" though.) Well here's where I get cheerful! It's thank-you time!
~lizzie=My you are enthusiastic! Thanks for being my first reviewer and for sticking with this story! Hopefully you'll do so until the end.
~Midori Natari Himura=ARIGATOU for reviewing! *smiles* And you've KEPT reviewing too! I'm sure you've gotten many dedications before, but thanks for reading this. I hope you're actually enjoying it.
~omochi=Thanks for reviewing the first chapter. I haven't seen any more from you for awhile but thanks anyway.
~lil azn mystikal girl=I'm glad you liked this story! I hope I'm doing good enough for you're entertainment! And keep writing yer own stories!
~amakasu toko=heheh. I really liked your review. I'm hoping for more someday. I like enthusiastic ones can you tell?
~JML (may I call you that?)=At first I didn't think you liked this story...but you're review for chapter four was encouraging! (Hey it led me to writing this incredibly short...thing. Dunno if you can call it a chapter.)
~animeluverthatiam=I improved in length on the fourth chapter! But not this one. This could be called a "story rotation block thing". Iira? That sounded dumb. ^^;; Well glad you're enjoying it I hope you keep doing so!
~DiaBLo=Is that a good "promising" or a bad "promising"? I'm hoping it's good because you told me to "Keep writing!" too....ah well ARIGATOU!
~Microphone="When I was a teenage hose!" HONESTLY, how do you come up with that?! It's hilarious! Anyway, thank you SOOOO much for your reviews! They are incredibly original (that they are lol), and fun to read. Keep writing them! (That it is, that I am, there it was! Huh?)
~Ayumi=I'm SOO GLAD YOU'RE ENJOYING THIS! ARIGATOU!!!!! (Enthusiasim deserves enthusiasm) And I'm going to finish reading your story right now! (You'll have the reviews already by the time you read THIS lol.)
~mutsumi=I liked your review. But one part confused me a bit. But yes, all the chapters are in Kaoru's PoV. Thanks for reading and liking!
Well that's all for now! Maybe if I get more reviews I can thank more peeps! (Yes even if you've reviewed b4...I just didn't want to thank people more then once on this particular one. Ja ne!)
Oh well it was enough encouragment to continue. And since this is the fifth chapter I'll put up a thanks at the end of the chapter for my own sheer enjoyment. lol. And maybe yours too. I just love it when people thank me in their stories. For some odd reason. (Ya Ayumi especially! Yers was the best!)
But this story isn't finished yet lol I just elt like thanking people today. I'm odd.
Anyway, this chapter is pretty important in dealing where the story is going.
Oh, and if you haven't heard the song "Damaged" by "Plummet", YOU MUST LISTEN TO IT.
Oh, and since I haven't said this for awhile (and since she may have forgotten), this story is for "Midori Natari Himura". If you've read the A/N of the first chapter, you know why.
Well now you may read...*motions toward the story*
Chapter 5
The wind picked up and the echos grew louder. All six of us stood.
As we stared out into nothing, soon the wind crashed into the ground,
and there were five groups of white light in front of us. In no particular shape
either. They were just...there.
Kenshin growled. "You're past, aren't you? I remember you talking to me in my dreams."
The middle white shape made a gesture that we distinguished as a nod.
"Yes we are. And now that you know what your past was...you're future shall
be almost the same."
It was like someone took the world, inverted the colors, and froze it. Because that's certainly what everyone else felt like. We all stared, and my heart felt like a coat of ice has just oozed over it.
Finally I got the courage to speak. "You mean that question I asked to Kenshin last night...the one about living over again with our feelings already realized..."
They all responded as if one being. "It's completely true. You're a very smart girl."
Now it was Sanosuke's turn to speak up. "And what about Yahiko? Why isn't he here?"
They all laughed. "Yahiko. Yes, his soul was too stubborn. We couldn't have gotten him here again if all the powers in the universe were combined!"
I sighed.
"But everything else is the same," they responded.
Megumi wasn't going to take this. "You mean we're going to sit around and let you take over us?!?!"
"That WAS our plan."
Sano growled and balled his fist into his hand. "Well RE-THINK IT!"
They made another gesture that was extremely similar to shaking their heads...they were telling us no. No to our own lives! Now THIS was beginning to piss me off.
"No, let ME SAY NO!" I yelled out while joining my arm with Kenshin's.
"He left me long ago, I won't let him leave me again!"
Kenshin blinked and nodded. "She's right! We won't agree with you!"
Misao began to growl at them and starting shouting protests.
Even Aoshi was beginning to argue.
Obviously they were getting fed up with us and made this incredibly horrifying wail that shut us all up.
Little red slits appeared near the top of their shapes. We had also made them angry.
Their echoing voices turned angry as they said, "Fine. Don't obey us. But now you must run from us. And we WILL catch up with you!"
And they disappeared, their words leaving a chill on my spine.
A/N: Yeah yeah, sorry for the shortness but I can't write anymore right now. I'm tired and I think I should leave you in suspense. And in anger because of short chapter-ness.
Well, I think I'd like to remind you to REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!!!
(Since you seem to keep forgetting that....)
And gomen for my terrible attitude, but I'm tired and crabby and listening to a depressing song. (NOT "Damaged" though.) Well here's where I get cheerful! It's thank-you time!
~lizzie=My you are enthusiastic! Thanks for being my first reviewer and for sticking with this story! Hopefully you'll do so until the end.
~Midori Natari Himura=ARIGATOU for reviewing! *smiles* And you've KEPT reviewing too! I'm sure you've gotten many dedications before, but thanks for reading this. I hope you're actually enjoying it.
~omochi=Thanks for reviewing the first chapter. I haven't seen any more from you for awhile but thanks anyway.
~lil azn mystikal girl=I'm glad you liked this story! I hope I'm doing good enough for you're entertainment! And keep writing yer own stories!
~amakasu toko=heheh. I really liked your review. I'm hoping for more someday. I like enthusiastic ones can you tell?
~JML (may I call you that?)=At first I didn't think you liked this story...but you're review for chapter four was encouraging! (Hey it led me to writing this incredibly short...thing. Dunno if you can call it a chapter.)
~animeluverthatiam=I improved in length on the fourth chapter! But not this one. This could be called a "story rotation block thing". Iira? That sounded dumb. ^^;; Well glad you're enjoying it I hope you keep doing so!
~DiaBLo=Is that a good "promising" or a bad "promising"? I'm hoping it's good because you told me to "Keep writing!" too....ah well ARIGATOU!
~Microphone="When I was a teenage hose!" HONESTLY, how do you come up with that?! It's hilarious! Anyway, thank you SOOOO much for your reviews! They are incredibly original (that they are lol), and fun to read. Keep writing them! (That it is, that I am, there it was! Huh?)
~Ayumi=I'm SOO GLAD YOU'RE ENJOYING THIS! ARIGATOU!!!!! (Enthusiasim deserves enthusiasm) And I'm going to finish reading your story right now! (You'll have the reviews already by the time you read THIS lol.)
~mutsumi=I liked your review. But one part confused me a bit. But yes, all the chapters are in Kaoru's PoV. Thanks for reading and liking!
Well that's all for now! Maybe if I get more reviews I can thank more peeps! (Yes even if you've reviewed b4...I just didn't want to thank people more then once on this particular one. Ja ne!)
