Review!
I decided to make a little review that way peoples question's would be
answered.
Question: Why are long names band? Answer: The spirits of their world simply like to make short names so their identities won't be revealed. Have they something to hide? Maybe ^^
Question: Tell me, what's with Helios PLEASE! Answer: During the 3rd year when he hadn't returned, the chief priest decided since Small Lady wasn't growing up, they would make him marry someone worthy. So.That is were Fiona comes in to play. The priest was sent to Fiona, were he was forced to marry her. Fiona made him fall in love with her, using the power of the cryoke, crystal. It made him fall deeply in tune with her. It can't be broken unless a powerful crystal, (Silver Imperium, would have to be 100x stronger than it already is.) which so far in the story they don't have. BUT, I can tell you how to get it. ^_~
How do we get the crystal? Answer: There are 107 regions in Lunatia known. You must get some of the crystal in every single region; bring it to the central region. (Crystal realms to be exact. THAT is were the spirit's rest.) Doing so will take lot's of courage and new skills to be learned (No more Sailor Scout outfits!). Might even take a whole year for Small Lady. Only time will tell ^_~
Why did Helios call her little one? He's under a spell, he he. I'm making it painful, but truly so what? He shouldn't call her maiden all the time. Even though it is the spell, little one is pretty thoughtful, really.
Why do you separate paragraphs so oddly? Answer: I try to separate one giant thing from another. Two huge things should not be in the same paragraph if they saw two huge things.
If not a Sailor Scout, what will Small Lady become? Answer: A Crystal Captor. Sort of like sakura but different in a way. I'll tell more later in the story. As for now. Here is Chapter 8 Part 1:
Chapter 8: Helios, Fiona
"But I'm a princess." WHAT?" The old man fell to his knees. "Princess, where are you from?" He seemed very loyal. "I'm the daughter of Neo Queen Serenity, and King Endymion." "WHAT!?!?" Comet dropped her picnic basket. "Earth doesn't exist anymore!" "It was blown up, it's long gone!" Comet looked confused. "WHAT?" Small Lady turned back at Comet. "It's true, the Spirits blew it up." "All the people were dead." "They gave them a proper burial." Comet pointed out. "NO!" Small Lady fell to her knees. "Just like that?" "WHY?" She burst into tears. "I should have.stayed." "WHY IS MY LIFE RUINED?"
A familiar man came up. "Because. WE, the dark moon destroyed it." Helios was standing right in front of her. "So we meet again, little one."
Small Lady couldn't even think. The last time they met was very chilling; it made her cry just to think about it. "You know this guy or something?" Comet looked at Small Lady with curious eyes. "He's your BOYFRIEND an't he?" Comet gave Small Lady a little push, only to get punched in the face by her. "No, I am already married." Helios reassured. He snapped his fingers, and the purple-headed girl from before appeared.
"To my beautiful wife Fiona." He gave Fiona a short kiss. Fiona spoke, "I'll be the one to kill you." She raised her finger again, and Small Lady froze. Comet's weapon appeared in her hand. Don't touch her, you twit." Comet was very protective. "Comet, I thought I said no weapons, except for healing!" The dad walked up to Comet. Just when she put down her weapon, Fiona made a new flame attack not seen before. "RAY DISHES!" Circle-like dishes of flaming fire roared towards Comet. Small Lady jumped in front of her, and took a hit from every Ray Dish there was. (There were 10)
"Small you idiot!" "Why did you do that?" Comet knew that she shouldn't have done such a thing to herself. "You have done so much for me." "I just wanted to make it up somehow." Small Lady looked like her mother right then. With her gentle eyes. "I don't think I've done enough yet." Small Lady said as she smiled." Comet then raised her staff, making it appear from her heart. "My staff comes from my heart, when it knows it needs to protect. Yet at the same time destroy." "I take this as my deed done, as I shall banish you, from these grounds." "Come, and attack me." "Or I shall have the honor for you!" Comet said the last to sentences very sharply. Not to take lightly at all. Fiona moved. One inch. "Lunar Balance!!!" Everything stopped, and a beam hit Fiona.
"Foolish." Fiona snickered. She smacked the beam away. It was going to collide against Comet. But.Small Lady stood again, and took the hit. "Small!" "Stop it!!" You're leaking in blood." Comet was nearly crying over her. "Bring her into the shrine, Comet." "I'll take these guys out." The old man shouted, "Blue Beard, Banisher!" A giant blue beard swept at them, and they disappeared again. "A hologram." Comet's father said. He moved into the shrine, so he could reveal the secret.
Question: Why are long names band? Answer: The spirits of their world simply like to make short names so their identities won't be revealed. Have they something to hide? Maybe ^^
Question: Tell me, what's with Helios PLEASE! Answer: During the 3rd year when he hadn't returned, the chief priest decided since Small Lady wasn't growing up, they would make him marry someone worthy. So.That is were Fiona comes in to play. The priest was sent to Fiona, were he was forced to marry her. Fiona made him fall in love with her, using the power of the cryoke, crystal. It made him fall deeply in tune with her. It can't be broken unless a powerful crystal, (Silver Imperium, would have to be 100x stronger than it already is.) which so far in the story they don't have. BUT, I can tell you how to get it. ^_~
How do we get the crystal? Answer: There are 107 regions in Lunatia known. You must get some of the crystal in every single region; bring it to the central region. (Crystal realms to be exact. THAT is were the spirit's rest.) Doing so will take lot's of courage and new skills to be learned (No more Sailor Scout outfits!). Might even take a whole year for Small Lady. Only time will tell ^_~
Why did Helios call her little one? He's under a spell, he he. I'm making it painful, but truly so what? He shouldn't call her maiden all the time. Even though it is the spell, little one is pretty thoughtful, really.
Why do you separate paragraphs so oddly? Answer: I try to separate one giant thing from another. Two huge things should not be in the same paragraph if they saw two huge things.
If not a Sailor Scout, what will Small Lady become? Answer: A Crystal Captor. Sort of like sakura but different in a way. I'll tell more later in the story. As for now. Here is Chapter 8 Part 1:
Chapter 8: Helios, Fiona
"But I'm a princess." WHAT?" The old man fell to his knees. "Princess, where are you from?" He seemed very loyal. "I'm the daughter of Neo Queen Serenity, and King Endymion." "WHAT!?!?" Comet dropped her picnic basket. "Earth doesn't exist anymore!" "It was blown up, it's long gone!" Comet looked confused. "WHAT?" Small Lady turned back at Comet. "It's true, the Spirits blew it up." "All the people were dead." "They gave them a proper burial." Comet pointed out. "NO!" Small Lady fell to her knees. "Just like that?" "WHY?" She burst into tears. "I should have.stayed." "WHY IS MY LIFE RUINED?"
A familiar man came up. "Because. WE, the dark moon destroyed it." Helios was standing right in front of her. "So we meet again, little one."
Small Lady couldn't even think. The last time they met was very chilling; it made her cry just to think about it. "You know this guy or something?" Comet looked at Small Lady with curious eyes. "He's your BOYFRIEND an't he?" Comet gave Small Lady a little push, only to get punched in the face by her. "No, I am already married." Helios reassured. He snapped his fingers, and the purple-headed girl from before appeared.
"To my beautiful wife Fiona." He gave Fiona a short kiss. Fiona spoke, "I'll be the one to kill you." She raised her finger again, and Small Lady froze. Comet's weapon appeared in her hand. Don't touch her, you twit." Comet was very protective. "Comet, I thought I said no weapons, except for healing!" The dad walked up to Comet. Just when she put down her weapon, Fiona made a new flame attack not seen before. "RAY DISHES!" Circle-like dishes of flaming fire roared towards Comet. Small Lady jumped in front of her, and took a hit from every Ray Dish there was. (There were 10)
"Small you idiot!" "Why did you do that?" Comet knew that she shouldn't have done such a thing to herself. "You have done so much for me." "I just wanted to make it up somehow." Small Lady looked like her mother right then. With her gentle eyes. "I don't think I've done enough yet." Small Lady said as she smiled." Comet then raised her staff, making it appear from her heart. "My staff comes from my heart, when it knows it needs to protect. Yet at the same time destroy." "I take this as my deed done, as I shall banish you, from these grounds." "Come, and attack me." "Or I shall have the honor for you!" Comet said the last to sentences very sharply. Not to take lightly at all. Fiona moved. One inch. "Lunar Balance!!!" Everything stopped, and a beam hit Fiona.
"Foolish." Fiona snickered. She smacked the beam away. It was going to collide against Comet. But.Small Lady stood again, and took the hit. "Small!" "Stop it!!" You're leaking in blood." Comet was nearly crying over her. "Bring her into the shrine, Comet." "I'll take these guys out." The old man shouted, "Blue Beard, Banisher!" A giant blue beard swept at them, and they disappeared again. "A hologram." Comet's father said. He moved into the shrine, so he could reveal the secret.
