Thanks for the reviews! I will definitely be writing more to this story.
~thekiit * Thanks for the review! I like Sess/Kagome fics too, but lets wait and see what everyone else wants first. ~Twilight * Thanks for the review! Like I said above, I will definitely be
writing more for this story. ~cassandra * Thanks for the review and the enthusiasm! ~landKfan * Thanks for the review! I'm getting started on it right now. ~????????????? * Thanks for the review! Glad I got you interested.
Disclaimer: (I borrowed this from another author cause I thought it was cute. Hope you don't mind)
Roses are red, Violets are blue, Me no own, So you no sue
Type Onward! _________________________
On a dark night in Sengoku Judai, a band of youki settled in to wait for the chance to snatch the four chosen children so they could claim their reward. Lords Inutaisho, Kunanu, Sekial, and Jombusu had asked, or ordered depending on how you look at it, for the band of skilled mercenaries to capture a chosen group of children. These children, Kagome, Kikyo, Sango and Miroku, would be used in an experiment to change humans into youki. Mistress Onigoma (not very original, but oh well) would use her ancient powers to change the humans into youki. (I'm just repeating the summary. blah blah blah I don't know if I told you this but Miroku would be raised with all girls / Sango with all boys / Kikyo - who is nothing like the normal kikyo, but a nice caring sister - with mixed kids / and Kagome alone.) [an: I'm too lazy to write out the whole kidnapping]
When Kagome woke up, she was tied up and her head hurt really bad. She struggled against her bonds and saw her friends and sister all in a similar state. She couldn't get free and she could sense that there were youki all around. By now, her wrists and ankles were chafing and her friends were just starting to wake up. She started to cry, wondering why this was happening to her.(don't forget, she's only about five)
When the youki came over, they hoisted Kagome and the others up over their shoulders like sacks of feathers. They traveled for the rest of the night and the next day. That evening they stopped in a clearing where a great number of youki were assembled. Four of them who were dressed in costly silks and had an air of arrogance and command around them.
An inu youki with long silver-white hair and golden eyes came over to Kagome. He picked her up, and whispered into her ear, obviously trying to be comforting. "Don't worry, we won't hurt you." it said to her. That was all Kagome could remember before a deep darkness came upon her. __Inutaisho's POV________
He saw how scared all of the children looked. He wasn't really cruel, but he did want to participate in this 'experiment'. He walked over to one of the children, and picked her up. She was a small girl, probably only about five. She had longish black hair and cloudy blue eyes. He started whispering in her ear, trying to comfort her. He said "Don't worry, we won't hurt you." Then he placed two fingers on her forehead and made her sink into a deep slumber. Some of the youki were looking at him strangely, but the other lords had done the same thing, or at least something similar. He and the others placed the children in front of Mistress Onigoma. __Back To Author's POV________
Mistress Oniguma's hands began to glow with an eerie green light as a shrill whistling sound filled the air. When everyone looked down, the children were there, but they weren't. Where they used to be, four children who were youki and looked similar to the humans who had lain there moments before. Kagome now had blue hair, dog ears, and pink-slitted eyes. Kikyo also had blue hair, glowing red eyes and a tail. Miroku had red hair, purple eyes and a kazaana (did I spell that right?). Sango had lime green hair with a black pony tail, darker green eyes, and could transform into a fire cat. (If you want pictures, send a review with your E-mail address) As the youki lords bid each other a final farewell, they picked up the children and left. ________________________
So? Wad ya think? Good? Bad? Please review some more!
I'm open to ideas for my current stories and for new stories!
~thekiit * Thanks for the review! I like Sess/Kagome fics too, but lets wait and see what everyone else wants first. ~Twilight * Thanks for the review! Like I said above, I will definitely be
writing more for this story. ~cassandra * Thanks for the review and the enthusiasm! ~landKfan * Thanks for the review! I'm getting started on it right now. ~????????????? * Thanks for the review! Glad I got you interested.
Disclaimer: (I borrowed this from another author cause I thought it was cute. Hope you don't mind)
Roses are red, Violets are blue, Me no own, So you no sue
Type Onward! _________________________
On a dark night in Sengoku Judai, a band of youki settled in to wait for the chance to snatch the four chosen children so they could claim their reward. Lords Inutaisho, Kunanu, Sekial, and Jombusu had asked, or ordered depending on how you look at it, for the band of skilled mercenaries to capture a chosen group of children. These children, Kagome, Kikyo, Sango and Miroku, would be used in an experiment to change humans into youki. Mistress Onigoma (not very original, but oh well) would use her ancient powers to change the humans into youki. (I'm just repeating the summary. blah blah blah I don't know if I told you this but Miroku would be raised with all girls / Sango with all boys / Kikyo - who is nothing like the normal kikyo, but a nice caring sister - with mixed kids / and Kagome alone.) [an: I'm too lazy to write out the whole kidnapping]
When Kagome woke up, she was tied up and her head hurt really bad. She struggled against her bonds and saw her friends and sister all in a similar state. She couldn't get free and she could sense that there were youki all around. By now, her wrists and ankles were chafing and her friends were just starting to wake up. She started to cry, wondering why this was happening to her.(don't forget, she's only about five)
When the youki came over, they hoisted Kagome and the others up over their shoulders like sacks of feathers. They traveled for the rest of the night and the next day. That evening they stopped in a clearing where a great number of youki were assembled. Four of them who were dressed in costly silks and had an air of arrogance and command around them.
An inu youki with long silver-white hair and golden eyes came over to Kagome. He picked her up, and whispered into her ear, obviously trying to be comforting. "Don't worry, we won't hurt you." it said to her. That was all Kagome could remember before a deep darkness came upon her. __Inutaisho's POV________
He saw how scared all of the children looked. He wasn't really cruel, but he did want to participate in this 'experiment'. He walked over to one of the children, and picked her up. She was a small girl, probably only about five. She had longish black hair and cloudy blue eyes. He started whispering in her ear, trying to comfort her. He said "Don't worry, we won't hurt you." Then he placed two fingers on her forehead and made her sink into a deep slumber. Some of the youki were looking at him strangely, but the other lords had done the same thing, or at least something similar. He and the others placed the children in front of Mistress Onigoma. __Back To Author's POV________
Mistress Oniguma's hands began to glow with an eerie green light as a shrill whistling sound filled the air. When everyone looked down, the children were there, but they weren't. Where they used to be, four children who were youki and looked similar to the humans who had lain there moments before. Kagome now had blue hair, dog ears, and pink-slitted eyes. Kikyo also had blue hair, glowing red eyes and a tail. Miroku had red hair, purple eyes and a kazaana (did I spell that right?). Sango had lime green hair with a black pony tail, darker green eyes, and could transform into a fire cat. (If you want pictures, send a review with your E-mail address) As the youki lords bid each other a final farewell, they picked up the children and left. ________________________
So? Wad ya think? Good? Bad? Please review some more!
I'm open to ideas for my current stories and for new stories!
