My first a/n! [ a/n: ok, this is my first attempt at a fic, so flame all
you want cuz I know it sucks! well. the setting is at Lily's house and a
week away from her seventh year, this will be a L/J fic. so enjoy my bad
writing :P (btw, I'm assuming everyone knows about Hogwarts and etc. )]
"dialogue" 'thinking actions'
Unwanted By: me
[Disclaimer: Come on, do you really think I created Harry Potter and all his fictional friends? If you do, then I think you need medical attention. Plot, Jennifer, and Ariana are mine mine mine!]
Lily Evans.
The name every girl was jealous of.
Lily Evans.
The girl with a body that every Witch Weekly model would kill for.
Lily Evans
The girl with her gorgeous emerald eyes that every boy would want to look into.
Lily Evans.
The name every boy wanted to date.
Lily Evans.
Little "miss perfect".
Lily Evans.
The girl who made Head Girl this year and was prefect last year.
"Lily!" "Lily! Get your fat arse down here! Mum says you have to leave soon!"
A petite looking girl came running down the elegant staircase in her small, yet large enough manor. Out from the door came a bobbing high ponytail of deep, flaming red hair. Tiny tendrils of stray hair curled ever-so-slightly at the base of her neck.
"I'm coming Petunia!" said a seventeen-year-old Lily Evans. 'Bitch' Lily thought. She wondered how she was ever stuck with a pompous and snotty sister like Petunia. With green emerald eyes deep enough to drown a person in thought, Lily headed out to her muggle car with her mother to Diagon Alley to purchase her school supplies.
Since the Leaky Cauldron was about forty miles from her home, she propped her arm against the window awhile, deep in thought, of all the fun and adventurous things she could do in her final and best year at Hogwarts. Soon after their departure, the swirling scenery outside the window caused Lily to fall into a deep slumber.
"Honey, wake up. We're here."
Lily awoke to the sweet and gentle voice of her mother. Slowly getting out of the car, Lily went inside the Leaky Cauldron to the doorway to Diagon Alley. She took her wand out and tapped on the various bricks and a small opening formed.
She and her mother passed by Honeydukes and decided they would meet here in a few hours. Lily was to meet her two best friends from school.
"Oh my God! Lily! Over here!"
A brunette haired girl with chocolate brown eyes waved to Lily from a corner table the Three Broomsticks. She had on a white blouse with muggle jeans and wore a jean jacket. Her hair was also tied up in a high ponytail because of the warm weather.
"It's been too long Lily! I haven't seen you all summer! And you even promised to owl me!" said Lily's best friend, Ariana Johnson.
"Sorry, Ari, I just didn't have as much time as I thought!" said Lily. "So how long have you been waiting here?"
"Oh, just about half hour, I'm still waiting for Jen."
Just then, a beautiful young girl of seventeen waved to Ariana and Lily from the door of the Three Broomsticks. Like Lily, she was about 5' 4" and had light blue eyes to match her blonde hair with light brown highlights making her hair look dirty blonde. She had on a blue muggle sleeveless shirt with a jean skirt and black sandals to complete her look. Her makeup was done perfectly, (like always) and her stunning well manicured nails painted a lovely shade of pale blue.
Lily, Jennifer and Ariana were all considered to be in the "popular" group at Hogwarts. But the three of them were the closest among their other friends. You could say they belong to the "slut and bitches group" but they technically weren't "those" kind of people.
"Guess what!" Lily exclaimed.
"OK, I give up. Tell us! You know we hate those 'guess what' games." Jen said, while rolling her eyes annoyingly.
"I'm Head Girl!" "Are you serious? Congrats!" said Ariana. "Hmm. I wonder who's Head Boy."
"I dunno yet. Probably Malfoy. He's good at every subject. It's getting damn near impossible to beat him in every class!" exclaimed Jennifer. She muttered to herself, "bloody git."
"Well, we just have to find out like everyone else," said Lily. "Let's get some butterbeer while we catch up!"
After about forty-five minutes or so and two tankards of butterbeer later, they decided to look for their school supplies and Madame Malkin's Robes for all Occasions was their first stop. Just as they we're heading out, out came a dark figure, tumbling from the Three Broomsticks' fireplace and knocked over Lily. Lily came down harshly with a scream while her friends tried to get the attacker off.
Just when Lily was about to swear at the person for not watching where he was going, she looked up so her emerald eyes met dark brown ones.
[ a/n: ok, done with prologue/chapter 1. ehh. it was ok, but I'll see how many bad reviews I get to see if I would continue. I'm very pessimistic, I'm hoping for the worst. LoL :P any suggestions are welcome and if you want my AIM sn or email addy, just ask for it when you review. Well buhbye for now! *crosses fingers* ]
"dialogue" 'thinking actions'
Unwanted By: me
[Disclaimer: Come on, do you really think I created Harry Potter and all his fictional friends? If you do, then I think you need medical attention. Plot, Jennifer, and Ariana are mine mine mine!]
Lily Evans.
The name every girl was jealous of.
Lily Evans.
The girl with a body that every Witch Weekly model would kill for.
Lily Evans
The girl with her gorgeous emerald eyes that every boy would want to look into.
Lily Evans.
The name every boy wanted to date.
Lily Evans.
Little "miss perfect".
Lily Evans.
The girl who made Head Girl this year and was prefect last year.
"Lily!" "Lily! Get your fat arse down here! Mum says you have to leave soon!"
A petite looking girl came running down the elegant staircase in her small, yet large enough manor. Out from the door came a bobbing high ponytail of deep, flaming red hair. Tiny tendrils of stray hair curled ever-so-slightly at the base of her neck.
"I'm coming Petunia!" said a seventeen-year-old Lily Evans. 'Bitch' Lily thought. She wondered how she was ever stuck with a pompous and snotty sister like Petunia. With green emerald eyes deep enough to drown a person in thought, Lily headed out to her muggle car with her mother to Diagon Alley to purchase her school supplies.
Since the Leaky Cauldron was about forty miles from her home, she propped her arm against the window awhile, deep in thought, of all the fun and adventurous things she could do in her final and best year at Hogwarts. Soon after their departure, the swirling scenery outside the window caused Lily to fall into a deep slumber.
"Honey, wake up. We're here."
Lily awoke to the sweet and gentle voice of her mother. Slowly getting out of the car, Lily went inside the Leaky Cauldron to the doorway to Diagon Alley. She took her wand out and tapped on the various bricks and a small opening formed.
She and her mother passed by Honeydukes and decided they would meet here in a few hours. Lily was to meet her two best friends from school.
"Oh my God! Lily! Over here!"
A brunette haired girl with chocolate brown eyes waved to Lily from a corner table the Three Broomsticks. She had on a white blouse with muggle jeans and wore a jean jacket. Her hair was also tied up in a high ponytail because of the warm weather.
"It's been too long Lily! I haven't seen you all summer! And you even promised to owl me!" said Lily's best friend, Ariana Johnson.
"Sorry, Ari, I just didn't have as much time as I thought!" said Lily. "So how long have you been waiting here?"
"Oh, just about half hour, I'm still waiting for Jen."
Just then, a beautiful young girl of seventeen waved to Ariana and Lily from the door of the Three Broomsticks. Like Lily, she was about 5' 4" and had light blue eyes to match her blonde hair with light brown highlights making her hair look dirty blonde. She had on a blue muggle sleeveless shirt with a jean skirt and black sandals to complete her look. Her makeup was done perfectly, (like always) and her stunning well manicured nails painted a lovely shade of pale blue.
Lily, Jennifer and Ariana were all considered to be in the "popular" group at Hogwarts. But the three of them were the closest among their other friends. You could say they belong to the "slut and bitches group" but they technically weren't "those" kind of people.
"Guess what!" Lily exclaimed.
"OK, I give up. Tell us! You know we hate those 'guess what' games." Jen said, while rolling her eyes annoyingly.
"I'm Head Girl!" "Are you serious? Congrats!" said Ariana. "Hmm. I wonder who's Head Boy."
"I dunno yet. Probably Malfoy. He's good at every subject. It's getting damn near impossible to beat him in every class!" exclaimed Jennifer. She muttered to herself, "bloody git."
"Well, we just have to find out like everyone else," said Lily. "Let's get some butterbeer while we catch up!"
After about forty-five minutes or so and two tankards of butterbeer later, they decided to look for their school supplies and Madame Malkin's Robes for all Occasions was their first stop. Just as they we're heading out, out came a dark figure, tumbling from the Three Broomsticks' fireplace and knocked over Lily. Lily came down harshly with a scream while her friends tried to get the attacker off.
Just when Lily was about to swear at the person for not watching where he was going, she looked up so her emerald eyes met dark brown ones.
[ a/n: ok, done with prologue/chapter 1. ehh. it was ok, but I'll see how many bad reviews I get to see if I would continue. I'm very pessimistic, I'm hoping for the worst. LoL :P any suggestions are welcome and if you want my AIM sn or email addy, just ask for it when you review. Well buhbye for now! *crosses fingers* ]
