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Yue Moon: First attempt at a Sailor Moon fanfic. It was written by both me and Sakura-chan (aka one of my best friends). We know this chapter is a bit short, but we'll try to write longer ones. There's just so much to do!
Summary- Mamoru travels to America to go to college there. But before he leaves he proposes to Usagi. He promises he'll be back in a year...she promises she'll wait for him. What happens? Mamoru does return, as promised...but he also brought something back. She's clinging to his arm...
By The Way- Like I mentioned before...there are no powers...So I had to alter some of the real anime scenes...Those who have watched Season 5 know what I mean.
Key:
" " Talking (do I even have to tell you?)
~ Thinking
# Flashback
= Dreaming
* Onamatopeia
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BETRAYED
Chapter 2
#Flashback#
"I'm really sorry...about...what just happened. I don't know why he did this to you..."
"It's...it's okay...it's not your fault...you don't have to apologise...I...I just don't wanna think about it right now...to-tomorrows my birthday and I was really looking forward to it...but now...I just...I want to..." Usagi starts to cry again.
"Ssshhhh...It's okay...You don't need him...He doesn't deserve you...Now enough about that...so tomorrow...you'll be turning 17...right?"
Usagi sniffed. "H-hai...17..."
"Well...How about I take you out to lunch, then a concert...Think of it as a birthday gift. How about it?"
Usagi looked up and smiled. "Sure...Why not?" ~No use in dwelling on what just happened...I mean I deeply loved Mamoru but he just hurt me beyond belief...I can't believe this has happened...No! I don't wanna think about it anymore. It hurts too much...hurts...too much."
"Okay. Well I guess I'll pick you up at 12...Now are you gonna be alright...Is your mom going to come and pick you up or do you need a ride home?"
"No it's okay. My mom and dad are on vacation and I have the car...I'll just...go home right now I guess..."
"Are you sure? Cause it's no problem. I can call for a limo to drop you off if you want...And I'll have someone bring the car home."
Usagi smiled up at the handsome guy infront of her, trying to hold back her tears. ~Mamo-chan wouldn't have been so persistant...He would have just agreed with me...even if he knew that it wasn't what I really wanted...He changed alot ever since the first time he went to America. Now he comes back with...a...girl...Am I not good enough?~
#End Flashback#
Usagi's eyes widened as she remembered the words 'Am I not good enough'...
#Flashback#
Usagi had gone up to the school roof to clear her thoughts...She didn't notice the two thugs following her until one of them said something.
"Come on! Give us what we want and we'll never bother you again!"
"No!! Go away. Leave me alone!" Screamed Usagi as she tried to make a dash for the other door leading back down into the building. One of the thugs grabbed a hold of her, pulling her back.
~Oh god I wish Mamo-chan was here ;_; ~
"HEY! What do you think you're doing to her?! Let go of her now!"
It was Seiya. He rushed toward the two guys and punched them both in the stomach.
"How many times do I have to tell you two to leave her alone!" He spat, stepping over them and heading towards Usagi, who was now on her knees, tears pouring.
"Daijoubu?" He asked, looking down at her.
"Mamoru would have done that for me...if he were here...I thought I could come up here to try and forget about him being gone...Everytime I look at Rei-chan or Ami-chan, they give me this sympathetic look. They're constantly reminding me of him being gone...so I thought I could get away from it all by coming here...but when I heard you scream 'What are you doing to her'... for a minute there I thought it was Mamo-chan...like he had come back...for me...to watch over me...to protect me...but then it wasn't him..." Usagi starts crying harder. "I miss him so much...I want him to come back...Mamo-chan!"
Seiya looked hurt...
"Am I not good enough?"
#End Flashback#
A tear escaped from Usagi's eye as she lay in bed, trying desperately to fall asleep... ~So this is how he must have felt...He had just rescued me from those nasty guys and I never thanked him...he had helped me a number of times before that as well...But all I could talk or think about was Mamo-chan...And even though I probably hurt Seiya so many times, he still helped me up when I was practically beat down by the one I loved...by the one I thought loved me back...~
"I'm sorry I ever hurt him...Seiya...Gomen nasai," she whispered into the dark, more tears flowing. "Gomen nasai..."
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Yue Moon: Well that's chapter 2! Let us know what you all think by submitting a review (how else?) ^.^ And Thanx a bunch to all who have already done so! Dunno when we'll be putting up chapter 3...I guess the more reviews the sooner it'll be up...reviews are somewhat of an inspiration.....AnYwHo! Thanx again and keep those reviews coming!
Remember: The more reviews, the faster the next chapter is put up...Arigatou!!!
Yue Moon: First attempt at a Sailor Moon fanfic. It was written by both me and Sakura-chan (aka one of my best friends). We know this chapter is a bit short, but we'll try to write longer ones. There's just so much to do!
Summary- Mamoru travels to America to go to college there. But before he leaves he proposes to Usagi. He promises he'll be back in a year...she promises she'll wait for him. What happens? Mamoru does return, as promised...but he also brought something back. She's clinging to his arm...
By The Way- Like I mentioned before...there are no powers...So I had to alter some of the real anime scenes...Those who have watched Season 5 know what I mean.
Key:
" " Talking (do I even have to tell you?)
~ Thinking
# Flashback
= Dreaming
* Onamatopeia
___________________________________________
BETRAYED
Chapter 2
#Flashback#
"I'm really sorry...about...what just happened. I don't know why he did this to you..."
"It's...it's okay...it's not your fault...you don't have to apologise...I...I just don't wanna think about it right now...to-tomorrows my birthday and I was really looking forward to it...but now...I just...I want to..." Usagi starts to cry again.
"Ssshhhh...It's okay...You don't need him...He doesn't deserve you...Now enough about that...so tomorrow...you'll be turning 17...right?"
Usagi sniffed. "H-hai...17..."
"Well...How about I take you out to lunch, then a concert...Think of it as a birthday gift. How about it?"
Usagi looked up and smiled. "Sure...Why not?" ~No use in dwelling on what just happened...I mean I deeply loved Mamoru but he just hurt me beyond belief...I can't believe this has happened...No! I don't wanna think about it anymore. It hurts too much...hurts...too much."
"Okay. Well I guess I'll pick you up at 12...Now are you gonna be alright...Is your mom going to come and pick you up or do you need a ride home?"
"No it's okay. My mom and dad are on vacation and I have the car...I'll just...go home right now I guess..."
"Are you sure? Cause it's no problem. I can call for a limo to drop you off if you want...And I'll have someone bring the car home."
Usagi smiled up at the handsome guy infront of her, trying to hold back her tears. ~Mamo-chan wouldn't have been so persistant...He would have just agreed with me...even if he knew that it wasn't what I really wanted...He changed alot ever since the first time he went to America. Now he comes back with...a...girl...Am I not good enough?~
#End Flashback#
Usagi's eyes widened as she remembered the words 'Am I not good enough'...
#Flashback#
Usagi had gone up to the school roof to clear her thoughts...She didn't notice the two thugs following her until one of them said something.
"Come on! Give us what we want and we'll never bother you again!"
"No!! Go away. Leave me alone!" Screamed Usagi as she tried to make a dash for the other door leading back down into the building. One of the thugs grabbed a hold of her, pulling her back.
~Oh god I wish Mamo-chan was here ;_; ~
"HEY! What do you think you're doing to her?! Let go of her now!"
It was Seiya. He rushed toward the two guys and punched them both in the stomach.
"How many times do I have to tell you two to leave her alone!" He spat, stepping over them and heading towards Usagi, who was now on her knees, tears pouring.
"Daijoubu?" He asked, looking down at her.
"Mamoru would have done that for me...if he were here...I thought I could come up here to try and forget about him being gone...Everytime I look at Rei-chan or Ami-chan, they give me this sympathetic look. They're constantly reminding me of him being gone...so I thought I could get away from it all by coming here...but when I heard you scream 'What are you doing to her'... for a minute there I thought it was Mamo-chan...like he had come back...for me...to watch over me...to protect me...but then it wasn't him..." Usagi starts crying harder. "I miss him so much...I want him to come back...Mamo-chan!"
Seiya looked hurt...
"Am I not good enough?"
#End Flashback#
A tear escaped from Usagi's eye as she lay in bed, trying desperately to fall asleep... ~So this is how he must have felt...He had just rescued me from those nasty guys and I never thanked him...he had helped me a number of times before that as well...But all I could talk or think about was Mamo-chan...And even though I probably hurt Seiya so many times, he still helped me up when I was practically beat down by the one I loved...by the one I thought loved me back...~
"I'm sorry I ever hurt him...Seiya...Gomen nasai," she whispered into the dark, more tears flowing. "Gomen nasai..."
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Yue Moon: Well that's chapter 2! Let us know what you all think by submitting a review (how else?) ^.^ And Thanx a bunch to all who have already done so! Dunno when we'll be putting up chapter 3...I guess the more reviews the sooner it'll be up...reviews are somewhat of an inspiration.....AnYwHo! Thanx again and keep those reviews coming!
Remember: The more reviews, the faster the next chapter is put up...Arigatou!!!
