Disclaimer: We do not own any of the Sailor Moon characters. All we own is the plot/storyline.
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Yue Moon: Thank you all for the 200+ reviews! Me and sakura-chan can't believe it O_O So this chappy is dedicated to all you reviewers ^_^ It's quite short, yes, but I didn't want to rush along and ruin things. Gomen gomen ^^;
You know, for the longest time I've been waiting for a smart individual to point out that "what kind of friends wouldn't plan a birthday party for their other friend".
AnYwHo! For those who were complaining about the story hardly including the other senshi, well, don't worry about it. They're in here.
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Reviews-
Ahknee/Kitteen: Thanx for the long review! I loved it!!! So you like the Angel/Devil moments eh? Well we'll see about putting more of those in.
happygolucky111: This chapter is for you ^_~ Most all the scouts are included.
kyuupiddo-sama!: *sniffles* Thanx so much for the long review and everything else! And yes, Seiya did get jipped in SMStars. You're going on my "Favorite Reviewers" list. Hoping to see more reviews from you ^_^!
Nikki Kou: Everyone seems to like the chibi moments ^.^ I'm really glad! And I loved the long review, thanx bunches! Good luck on your stories ^^
Jam: Aaaaaawwww now I feel bad about taking the break ;_; Hopefully I'll be off it very soon. Thanx for your reviews and all ^^
soul 141: You're the first Mamoru/Usagi fan here who hasn't made an exception to reading this Seiya/Usagi fanfic. *Shrugs* Oh well, I guess you ARE "wasting your time".
joyce: Thanxies ^.^
Angelbirdy: Yes everyone damns the cell phones ^^; ahehehe. Well I'm glad you like the story. Keep the reviews coming!
Jelli Roll: *nods furiously* yup...so true...Mamoru IS an ass...
Midnight Scribbler: YAY! Thanx for L-O-V-I-N-G it ^_^!!! You're awesome...Thanx bunches for your reviews and being patient with me!
Moon Dreamer: Teehee thanx!
serenity's rose: I know I'D LOVE to get a necklace like that from Seiya...By the way thanx for the long review! It was greatly appreciated ^_~ *drifts off into Dream Land*
Sakura-Blossom: Ahehehe...you know the funny thing is, in our Forgotten story, someone was complaining how Syaoran and Sakura kissed too much. But in this story, people are wondering when they ARE going to kiss...well anywho ^^; thanx for the review
Ginny-Star: Aaaawwww thanx so much! *Takes the bag full of fluff* Sorry but I couldn't use them in this chappy, but don't worry. I've got a whole bunch of fluff planned for future chappies. And I'm sorry this chappy is really short and to me it seems there is no point to it O_o but I was stuck for the longest time wondering how to start the next chappy and then all of a sudden it came to me so I had to type it quickly...The next part of the chapter will be out soon I hope. thanx for being patient ^_~
pink panther: Hey ^_^ Well no we aren't Korean but sometimes we wish we were ^_~ Thanx for the review ^.^ By the way, cute name ^^
Trunks Goddess: Thank you...I really appreciate the comment. Hoping to see more reviews from you ^^!
lil-popcorngurl: *laughs* Okie ^^! Thanx for your review ANTI-Seiya-as-more-than-a-friend fan ^.^
Ellen: Well, when the key is put into the 3D heart, the letters connect and spell out L-O-V-E. Get it now? Thanx for the review ^_~
Elizabeth: Thanx! It's meant to be some-what suspenseful ^_^
Alex: *laughs* I think that's the shortest review I've ever gotten. Thanx none-the-less ^_^
neo: You know what, you're quite right. I was wondering why I was rushing them too. I was just waiting for someone to say something about it. I'll try and slow them down a bit ^_^ Keep up the constructive criticism.
Lil-PrincessK: Hey thanx *laughs about the fish* I'm glad the chapter made your day.
Midnight-Starr: Thanx for understanding and all. I hope you're not mad about this chapter being so tiny and useless and hardly even a chapter. I'm trying to get back on track ^_^ Thanx again
Serena Tsunami: Thanx ^^! *Is happy*
moon-neko-princess: YAY! People seem to be writing long reviews ^_^ *Is extremely happy now* Keep them up people! They make my day ^_~
reene24: Yup...Seiya is a whole lot cuter. *Floats into Seiya-Land* ~ Yue Moon
*rolls her eyes* She's doing it again ~ Sakura
Rinoa Leonhart: Gomen, I didn't know you wanted me to inform you of my updates. We just never really talk about any of the stories. And about the vase part, well, it hit Mamoru's foot before crashing to the floor. Then when it hit the floor it crashed into a million pieces. She had bought him that vase as a house-warming gift cause he had just bought that house.
Lena: Thank you *huggles*
RavenChickMoon: Err... ^^;; thanx
Moon Mistress: ^^! YAY! You liked it *huggles MM and Sojin*
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Summary- Mamoru travels to America to go to college there. But before he leaves he proposes to Usagi. He promises he'll be back in a year...she promises she'll wait for him. What happens? Mamoru does return, as promised...but he also brought something back. She's clinging to his arm...
By The Way- Like I mentioned before...there are no powers...
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Key:
" " Talking (do I even have to tell you?)
~ Thinking
# Flashback
* Onomatopoeia
| Translation
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BETRAYED
Chapter 12 (Part 1)
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"At the beach?! My god Usagi," exclaimed Rei. "What if someone saw you? Or worse! A reporter! You'd be all over the news so fast that by the next day every Seiya fan would hate you!"
"It's not like we DID anything," blushed Usagi.
"Oh sure. When he answered his cell-phone he seemed quite bummed out and very disappointed. It couldn't have been over nothing," winked Minako.
"What?!?! You mean you're the one who called?! Aawww Mina-chaaaaaan," Usagi pouted, playing with a strand of her hair.
"You mean he didn't tell you?"
"I didn't ask...Did you have to?"
"Well yes. We haven't seen you since your birthday! We couldn't even get a hold of you to trick you into coming to the surprise par--"
"MINAKO!" Interrupted Makoto, giving her a certain look that said 'no need to bring that up'.
"What? You mean...You mean to tell me you guys fixed a surprise birthday party on my behalf but couldn't get a hold of me?! Oh god...I feel so bad," whispered Usagi, close to tears.
Minako put down her chicken-wrap and looked up at the golden-haired girl across her.
"Don't feel bad. It's alright...It was more like a private party so we didn't really invite anyone. We were the only ones there so it wasn't too bad. I mean sure, we were bummed out beyond belief--"
"MINAKO!" Growled Makoto yet again.
"I'm really sorry guys," mumbled Usagi, looking down at her lap. "I...I didn't know...And you guys did all that for me. You all probably think I'm an ungrateful, selfish, stupid, clumsy, idio--"
"Oh come on! No one thinks of you like that. If you want, after we finish shopping we can all head back to my apartment. I haven't taken the decorations down yet and no one touched the cake since there was no birthday-girl to cut the first slice, so why not just go ahead and do everything today?" Offered Makoto, draining her chocolate shake.
"Hey that's great!" Smiled Ami, wiping her mouth with a napkin. "Then we can give you the gifts we got you!"
"So it's settled! We finish shopping and head over to Makoto's," repeated Rei, popping a fry in her mouth.
"Sounds good to me," smiled Usagi, cheering up.
"Say, Makoto, Ami. Why didn't you guys get anything to eat? All you have are shakes," asked Minako, taking a bite of her chicken-wrap.
"I don't think you wanna know. Maybe I'll tell you after you're all finished eating your food," explained the brunette, eyeing the fast food with a hint of disgust.
"Actually, I really like fast food. So I don't think I wanna know," said the super star, straightening her sunglasses and making sure her hair hadn't fallen out of the cap. "You know this disguise thing is REALLY getting on my nerves."
"So get a wig."
The 5 girls turned to face...
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Yue Moon: Yes...another cliffhanger. It's not that big of a deal really...I hope you will all still review despite the fact that it's so extremely short. I'll try and collect my wits soon so I can get off this break and continue with the stories. Oh, and don't forget to check out Ambushed. There's only one chapter as of yet, but I'll hopefully add more later on. Thanx for being patient with me. You won't regret it ^_~
NOTE: If you want us to e-mail you as soon as we update, e-mail us at makoto_hotaru@hotmail.com and include the name of the story you want to be informed of. REMEMBER! You have to EMAIL us. Not state in your review that you want us to tell you when it's updated. Thanx. Ja ^_~
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Yue Moon: Thank you all for the 200+ reviews! Me and sakura-chan can't believe it O_O So this chappy is dedicated to all you reviewers ^_^ It's quite short, yes, but I didn't want to rush along and ruin things. Gomen gomen ^^;
You know, for the longest time I've been waiting for a smart individual to point out that "what kind of friends wouldn't plan a birthday party for their other friend".
AnYwHo! For those who were complaining about the story hardly including the other senshi, well, don't worry about it. They're in here.
________________________________________________________________________
Reviews-
Ahknee/Kitteen: Thanx for the long review! I loved it!!! So you like the Angel/Devil moments eh? Well we'll see about putting more of those in.
happygolucky111: This chapter is for you ^_~ Most all the scouts are included.
kyuupiddo-sama!: *sniffles* Thanx so much for the long review and everything else! And yes, Seiya did get jipped in SMStars. You're going on my "Favorite Reviewers" list. Hoping to see more reviews from you ^_^!
Nikki Kou: Everyone seems to like the chibi moments ^.^ I'm really glad! And I loved the long review, thanx bunches! Good luck on your stories ^^
Jam: Aaaaaawwww now I feel bad about taking the break ;_; Hopefully I'll be off it very soon. Thanx for your reviews and all ^^
soul 141: You're the first Mamoru/Usagi fan here who hasn't made an exception to reading this Seiya/Usagi fanfic. *Shrugs* Oh well, I guess you ARE "wasting your time".
joyce: Thanxies ^.^
Angelbirdy: Yes everyone damns the cell phones ^^; ahehehe. Well I'm glad you like the story. Keep the reviews coming!
Jelli Roll: *nods furiously* yup...so true...Mamoru IS an ass...
Midnight Scribbler: YAY! Thanx for L-O-V-I-N-G it ^_^!!! You're awesome...Thanx bunches for your reviews and being patient with me!
Moon Dreamer: Teehee thanx!
serenity's rose: I know I'D LOVE to get a necklace like that from Seiya...By the way thanx for the long review! It was greatly appreciated ^_~ *drifts off into Dream Land*
Sakura-Blossom: Ahehehe...you know the funny thing is, in our Forgotten story, someone was complaining how Syaoran and Sakura kissed too much. But in this story, people are wondering when they ARE going to kiss...well anywho ^^; thanx for the review
Ginny-Star: Aaaawwww thanx so much! *Takes the bag full of fluff* Sorry but I couldn't use them in this chappy, but don't worry. I've got a whole bunch of fluff planned for future chappies. And I'm sorry this chappy is really short and to me it seems there is no point to it O_o but I was stuck for the longest time wondering how to start the next chappy and then all of a sudden it came to me so I had to type it quickly...The next part of the chapter will be out soon I hope. thanx for being patient ^_~
pink panther: Hey ^_^ Well no we aren't Korean but sometimes we wish we were ^_~ Thanx for the review ^.^ By the way, cute name ^^
Trunks Goddess: Thank you...I really appreciate the comment. Hoping to see more reviews from you ^^!
lil-popcorngurl: *laughs* Okie ^^! Thanx for your review ANTI-Seiya-as-more-than-a-friend fan ^.^
Ellen: Well, when the key is put into the 3D heart, the letters connect and spell out L-O-V-E. Get it now? Thanx for the review ^_~
Elizabeth: Thanx! It's meant to be some-what suspenseful ^_^
Alex: *laughs* I think that's the shortest review I've ever gotten. Thanx none-the-less ^_^
neo: You know what, you're quite right. I was wondering why I was rushing them too. I was just waiting for someone to say something about it. I'll try and slow them down a bit ^_^ Keep up the constructive criticism.
Lil-PrincessK: Hey thanx *laughs about the fish* I'm glad the chapter made your day.
Midnight-Starr: Thanx for understanding and all. I hope you're not mad about this chapter being so tiny and useless and hardly even a chapter. I'm trying to get back on track ^_^ Thanx again
Serena Tsunami: Thanx ^^! *Is happy*
moon-neko-princess: YAY! People seem to be writing long reviews ^_^ *Is extremely happy now* Keep them up people! They make my day ^_~
reene24: Yup...Seiya is a whole lot cuter. *Floats into Seiya-Land* ~ Yue Moon
*rolls her eyes* She's doing it again ~ Sakura
Rinoa Leonhart: Gomen, I didn't know you wanted me to inform you of my updates. We just never really talk about any of the stories. And about the vase part, well, it hit Mamoru's foot before crashing to the floor. Then when it hit the floor it crashed into a million pieces. She had bought him that vase as a house-warming gift cause he had just bought that house.
Lena: Thank you *huggles*
RavenChickMoon: Err... ^^;; thanx
Moon Mistress: ^^! YAY! You liked it *huggles MM and Sojin*
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Summary- Mamoru travels to America to go to college there. But before he leaves he proposes to Usagi. He promises he'll be back in a year...she promises she'll wait for him. What happens? Mamoru does return, as promised...but he also brought something back. She's clinging to his arm...
By The Way- Like I mentioned before...there are no powers...
________
Key:
" " Talking (do I even have to tell you?)
~ Thinking
# Flashback
* Onomatopoeia
| Translation
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BETRAYED
Chapter 12 (Part 1)
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"At the beach?! My god Usagi," exclaimed Rei. "What if someone saw you? Or worse! A reporter! You'd be all over the news so fast that by the next day every Seiya fan would hate you!"
"It's not like we DID anything," blushed Usagi.
"Oh sure. When he answered his cell-phone he seemed quite bummed out and very disappointed. It couldn't have been over nothing," winked Minako.
"What?!?! You mean you're the one who called?! Aawww Mina-chaaaaaan," Usagi pouted, playing with a strand of her hair.
"You mean he didn't tell you?"
"I didn't ask...Did you have to?"
"Well yes. We haven't seen you since your birthday! We couldn't even get a hold of you to trick you into coming to the surprise par--"
"MINAKO!" Interrupted Makoto, giving her a certain look that said 'no need to bring that up'.
"What? You mean...You mean to tell me you guys fixed a surprise birthday party on my behalf but couldn't get a hold of me?! Oh god...I feel so bad," whispered Usagi, close to tears.
Minako put down her chicken-wrap and looked up at the golden-haired girl across her.
"Don't feel bad. It's alright...It was more like a private party so we didn't really invite anyone. We were the only ones there so it wasn't too bad. I mean sure, we were bummed out beyond belief--"
"MINAKO!" Growled Makoto yet again.
"I'm really sorry guys," mumbled Usagi, looking down at her lap. "I...I didn't know...And you guys did all that for me. You all probably think I'm an ungrateful, selfish, stupid, clumsy, idio--"
"Oh come on! No one thinks of you like that. If you want, after we finish shopping we can all head back to my apartment. I haven't taken the decorations down yet and no one touched the cake since there was no birthday-girl to cut the first slice, so why not just go ahead and do everything today?" Offered Makoto, draining her chocolate shake.
"Hey that's great!" Smiled Ami, wiping her mouth with a napkin. "Then we can give you the gifts we got you!"
"So it's settled! We finish shopping and head over to Makoto's," repeated Rei, popping a fry in her mouth.
"Sounds good to me," smiled Usagi, cheering up.
"Say, Makoto, Ami. Why didn't you guys get anything to eat? All you have are shakes," asked Minako, taking a bite of her chicken-wrap.
"I don't think you wanna know. Maybe I'll tell you after you're all finished eating your food," explained the brunette, eyeing the fast food with a hint of disgust.
"Actually, I really like fast food. So I don't think I wanna know," said the super star, straightening her sunglasses and making sure her hair hadn't fallen out of the cap. "You know this disguise thing is REALLY getting on my nerves."
"So get a wig."
The 5 girls turned to face...
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Yue Moon: Yes...another cliffhanger. It's not that big of a deal really...I hope you will all still review despite the fact that it's so extremely short. I'll try and collect my wits soon so I can get off this break and continue with the stories. Oh, and don't forget to check out Ambushed. There's only one chapter as of yet, but I'll hopefully add more later on. Thanx for being patient with me. You won't regret it ^_~
NOTE: If you want us to e-mail you as soon as we update, e-mail us at makoto_hotaru@hotmail.com and include the name of the story you want to be informed of. REMEMBER! You have to EMAIL us. Not state in your review that you want us to tell you when it's updated. Thanx. Ja ^_~
