Revelations
Summary: Ray/Kai!! Taking place after Ray's fight in the World Championships. PLEASE R+R!!!
WARNING: This is m/m slash, so if it's not your cup of tea, I have issued the warning.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I can't truthfully say I own Beyblades, but it doesn't stop my imagination!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*REVELATIONS: Chapter3*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Dammit!" Kai roared. "Kenny, I can't see a thing!"
"Neither can I! They're surrounded by the ice!" The smaller boy replied, near hysterics.
Nearby, Max was muttering words under his breath that would make his mother die of shock, should she ever hear them.
Inside the dome of ice, Tyson was struggling in the final battle against Tala, the Biovolt team's leader, and from what the spectators could see, Tyson didn't appear to have the upper hand. What came through on the big screen wasn't exactly comforting either.
And Ray.
Ray was worse off than Tyson, Kai reckoned. Ray was lying in a bed in some strange hospital by himself, or possibly Mariah was there, and Kai -knew- that Ray couldn't stand the pink-haired wench.
And suddenly, a yell, a collection of voices, rose from the crowd. Kai couldn't tell one voice from another, but they all seemed to be saying something referring to Tyson and Tala.
The Biovolt bitbeast had filled the big screen, and was all that anyone could see. No one could see into that prison of ice, and there was certainly no way anyone could do anything about it. The ice would go when the battle died- whoever the victor.
Kai felt sick as the raging bitbeast surged across the screen. It was obviously on the attack, and from a tinny-sounding yell that could only be Tyson's, he felt that Tala wasn't one to play by the rules, or fair play. Tyson's echo died off as a blue streak cut across the screen, and from what Kai and the others could make out, it was Dragoon.
Shit! The two bitbeasts clashed together, attacks bouncing around the cage of ice, and yet, Tala didn't move. A spear of ice hurtled at terrifying speeds past his head, ruffling his flame-bright hair, and he did not flinch.
A horrible feeling welled up in Kai's gut as Tala seemingly whispered something, and then a flare of light from his bitbeast, fuelled by cunning and rage. Tyson saw what was coming, and paled, all pretense of bravado lost.
A swirl of light, and two bodies clashing, filled Kai's sight and sound.
~*~~*~ Well, there's chapter 3. And look, it was longer! Like it, didn't like it? Any suggestions or room for improvement?
Lol, and thanks to all of you who left such encouraging reviews- you make it all worth writing! Chp. 4 is already on the way. (
Summary: Ray/Kai!! Taking place after Ray's fight in the World Championships. PLEASE R+R!!!
WARNING: This is m/m slash, so if it's not your cup of tea, I have issued the warning.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I can't truthfully say I own Beyblades, but it doesn't stop my imagination!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*REVELATIONS: Chapter3*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
"Dammit!" Kai roared. "Kenny, I can't see a thing!"
"Neither can I! They're surrounded by the ice!" The smaller boy replied, near hysterics.
Nearby, Max was muttering words under his breath that would make his mother die of shock, should she ever hear them.
Inside the dome of ice, Tyson was struggling in the final battle against Tala, the Biovolt team's leader, and from what the spectators could see, Tyson didn't appear to have the upper hand. What came through on the big screen wasn't exactly comforting either.
And Ray.
Ray was worse off than Tyson, Kai reckoned. Ray was lying in a bed in some strange hospital by himself, or possibly Mariah was there, and Kai -knew- that Ray couldn't stand the pink-haired wench.
And suddenly, a yell, a collection of voices, rose from the crowd. Kai couldn't tell one voice from another, but they all seemed to be saying something referring to Tyson and Tala.
The Biovolt bitbeast had filled the big screen, and was all that anyone could see. No one could see into that prison of ice, and there was certainly no way anyone could do anything about it. The ice would go when the battle died- whoever the victor.
Kai felt sick as the raging bitbeast surged across the screen. It was obviously on the attack, and from a tinny-sounding yell that could only be Tyson's, he felt that Tala wasn't one to play by the rules, or fair play. Tyson's echo died off as a blue streak cut across the screen, and from what Kai and the others could make out, it was Dragoon.
Shit! The two bitbeasts clashed together, attacks bouncing around the cage of ice, and yet, Tala didn't move. A spear of ice hurtled at terrifying speeds past his head, ruffling his flame-bright hair, and he did not flinch.
A horrible feeling welled up in Kai's gut as Tala seemingly whispered something, and then a flare of light from his bitbeast, fuelled by cunning and rage. Tyson saw what was coming, and paled, all pretense of bravado lost.
A swirl of light, and two bodies clashing, filled Kai's sight and sound.
~*~~*~ Well, there's chapter 3. And look, it was longer! Like it, didn't like it? Any suggestions or room for improvement?
Lol, and thanks to all of you who left such encouraging reviews- you make it all worth writing! Chp. 4 is already on the way. (
