The story will be told in the present tense. The story also will be told in first and third person point of view.
I decided to rewrite the first three chapters because they sucked before.
Prologue
"Daddy daddy please tell us one of your adventures again."
"Sure sons. Which one do you want to hear this time?" said Cloud.
"We want to hear about the one with Claude!!!"
"Okay here it goes."
It was five years after the death of Sephiroth. Midgar was almost rebuilt, but it was a hard job and not many people where there to help. Tifa and I decided to clean up the mess left by Diamond Weapen. I was searching around the rubble when I saw someone on the ground half-dead. He was a barely breathing and was bleading from many different wounds. I quickly brought him back to my house so he could be healed. After about three days he woke up. We soon found out that he didn't know anything about himself except that his name was Claude. He had a very bad case of amnesia, so we tried to help him get his memory back. We tried and tried but nothing seemed to jog his memory, so I let him stay with Tifa and I until he got his memory back.
Shinra was pretty much wiped out. But there were rummors of it coming back. We heard that the Turks were working hard to get Shinra back. At first they were out of a job, but after doing some jobs here and there they got enough money to try to get shinra back. They seem to have accomplished there goal if the rummors were true. Who knows where they got the people to join after hearing what happened to Shinra five years ago. Even Rude quit after Shinra was destroyed. The Turks quickly found a new canidate to fill Rude's spot. I don't know anything about him except that he is a very good swordsman. I have a feeling I would see the Turks again before my adventure was over.
Barret returned to Midgar to help rebuild the town with Marlene. He wanted to start a new life away from the hectick life he was living before. He tried to make sure that Shinra was not rebuilt. After three years of chasing the Turks around, the Turks decided to leave Midgar to start Shinra. Barret did not follow because he had a life in Midgar now. He always held the memories of his past adventure close. After the Turks left he didn't have much to do. He was getting bored, so when the Turks returned he went after them with a renewed spirit. He even asked Claude, Tifa, and I to join but we pollitely declined. Even with his renewed spirit it still wasn't enough to stop Shinra from being rebuilt. Barret and Marlene enjoyed the time together. Marlene was already a teenager and already training with Tifa in her free time. Marlene wants to be like Tifa when she grows up.
RedXIII returned to Cosmo Canyon. Everything he knew about his father changed during his quest. He took over the research that Bungenheim was doing. He could never forget all the things Bungenheim did for him. One of the things that RedXIII was trying to do with his research was figure out where Bungenheim went. He never could find out what happened to Bungenheim, his research got him really close but then he hit a wall and never could find a way around it. He never gave up but he started to lose hope. He got so carried away with his research that sometimes he locked himself in the observatory. But researching wasn't the only thing that he did. He also trained just in case something ever happened.
Cait Sith returned to Gold Saucer to continue his fortune telling career. He immediatly quit Shinra. The person who controlled Cait Sith went out to find the members of the team. He found Cloud, Tifa, and Barret at Midgar. He found RedXIII at his labratory. He could never find Vincent, he went to the Nibleheim mansion but Vincent was not there. He didn't know where to look after that. When he tried to find Yuffie, she was in a deep training period so he waited a while but she still didn't show so he decided to come back later which he never did. When he went to find Cid, Cid just launced into space. He didn't want to wait because he didn't know how long he would have to wait. He decided to go and work at Gold Saucer with Cait Sith.
Yuffie returned to Wutai. She continued to gather materia to protect her people, but after one year materia started to dissapear. At first she thought nothing of it because it was only minor materia that she "thought" she misplaced. Later though some of the more powerful materia started to dissapear, so she thought someone was stealing her materia. She thought that until a materia in her hand dissapeared while she was looking at it. When all the materia dissapeared she decided to go into silent meditation. After about two months of meditation she decided that she could protect her people without the materia. She started to train almost non-stop for a year. When she was done she knew she could protect her people. She continued training so she could protect her people when danger came.
Vincent learned a lot from his journey. He decided to find a new place to rest. He found himself a cave near crater waiting for the day he would be woken again. He knows something is going to happen so that he would have to fight again. He will wait for that day to come.
Cid and his assistant ended up getting married. They worked together to build a new rocket. Cid wanted to back into space, this time with his wife, to explore and see what is out there. After three long years of work he finally built the rocket and it was prepared enough so he could go into space. Three months later he and his wife were in space. He was up there for five months and when he came back he opened his own space program so other people could see what space is like. He went into space two more times during that one year. He plans to go again soon also.
This was during the five years after the death of Sephiroth. During the five years many things happened. The most important was that materia dissapeared. We thought everything was perfect untill one day while me and Claude were out training.........
To be continued.
I decided to rewrite the first three chapters because they sucked before.
Prologue
"Daddy daddy please tell us one of your adventures again."
"Sure sons. Which one do you want to hear this time?" said Cloud.
"We want to hear about the one with Claude!!!"
"Okay here it goes."
It was five years after the death of Sephiroth. Midgar was almost rebuilt, but it was a hard job and not many people where there to help. Tifa and I decided to clean up the mess left by Diamond Weapen. I was searching around the rubble when I saw someone on the ground half-dead. He was a barely breathing and was bleading from many different wounds. I quickly brought him back to my house so he could be healed. After about three days he woke up. We soon found out that he didn't know anything about himself except that his name was Claude. He had a very bad case of amnesia, so we tried to help him get his memory back. We tried and tried but nothing seemed to jog his memory, so I let him stay with Tifa and I until he got his memory back.
Shinra was pretty much wiped out. But there were rummors of it coming back. We heard that the Turks were working hard to get Shinra back. At first they were out of a job, but after doing some jobs here and there they got enough money to try to get shinra back. They seem to have accomplished there goal if the rummors were true. Who knows where they got the people to join after hearing what happened to Shinra five years ago. Even Rude quit after Shinra was destroyed. The Turks quickly found a new canidate to fill Rude's spot. I don't know anything about him except that he is a very good swordsman. I have a feeling I would see the Turks again before my adventure was over.
Barret returned to Midgar to help rebuild the town with Marlene. He wanted to start a new life away from the hectick life he was living before. He tried to make sure that Shinra was not rebuilt. After three years of chasing the Turks around, the Turks decided to leave Midgar to start Shinra. Barret did not follow because he had a life in Midgar now. He always held the memories of his past adventure close. After the Turks left he didn't have much to do. He was getting bored, so when the Turks returned he went after them with a renewed spirit. He even asked Claude, Tifa, and I to join but we pollitely declined. Even with his renewed spirit it still wasn't enough to stop Shinra from being rebuilt. Barret and Marlene enjoyed the time together. Marlene was already a teenager and already training with Tifa in her free time. Marlene wants to be like Tifa when she grows up.
RedXIII returned to Cosmo Canyon. Everything he knew about his father changed during his quest. He took over the research that Bungenheim was doing. He could never forget all the things Bungenheim did for him. One of the things that RedXIII was trying to do with his research was figure out where Bungenheim went. He never could find out what happened to Bungenheim, his research got him really close but then he hit a wall and never could find a way around it. He never gave up but he started to lose hope. He got so carried away with his research that sometimes he locked himself in the observatory. But researching wasn't the only thing that he did. He also trained just in case something ever happened.
Cait Sith returned to Gold Saucer to continue his fortune telling career. He immediatly quit Shinra. The person who controlled Cait Sith went out to find the members of the team. He found Cloud, Tifa, and Barret at Midgar. He found RedXIII at his labratory. He could never find Vincent, he went to the Nibleheim mansion but Vincent was not there. He didn't know where to look after that. When he tried to find Yuffie, she was in a deep training period so he waited a while but she still didn't show so he decided to come back later which he never did. When he went to find Cid, Cid just launced into space. He didn't want to wait because he didn't know how long he would have to wait. He decided to go and work at Gold Saucer with Cait Sith.
Yuffie returned to Wutai. She continued to gather materia to protect her people, but after one year materia started to dissapear. At first she thought nothing of it because it was only minor materia that she "thought" she misplaced. Later though some of the more powerful materia started to dissapear, so she thought someone was stealing her materia. She thought that until a materia in her hand dissapeared while she was looking at it. When all the materia dissapeared she decided to go into silent meditation. After about two months of meditation she decided that she could protect her people without the materia. She started to train almost non-stop for a year. When she was done she knew she could protect her people. She continued training so she could protect her people when danger came.
Vincent learned a lot from his journey. He decided to find a new place to rest. He found himself a cave near crater waiting for the day he would be woken again. He knows something is going to happen so that he would have to fight again. He will wait for that day to come.
Cid and his assistant ended up getting married. They worked together to build a new rocket. Cid wanted to back into space, this time with his wife, to explore and see what is out there. After three long years of work he finally built the rocket and it was prepared enough so he could go into space. Three months later he and his wife were in space. He was up there for five months and when he came back he opened his own space program so other people could see what space is like. He went into space two more times during that one year. He plans to go again soon also.
This was during the five years after the death of Sephiroth. During the five years many things happened. The most important was that materia dissapeared. We thought everything was perfect untill one day while me and Claude were out training.........
To be continued.
