ok, well, here we are, the next chapter, I hope you all like the story so
far, make sure to review, so I know what Im doing wrong!!
Disclaimer: Do I really need to tell you I dont own a cartoon?
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"Hey, Jakar! Wait up!" yelled Chibodee.
"Please, call me Jak, I hate the name Jakar." the woman replied.
"Oh, ok, listen, I was wondering, do you want to come out with me and the rest of the Alliance tonight? We are going to this rave dance club, they are having a Gundam party thing, and asked us to come." He inquired.
"Sure! I love dancing! This will be loads of fun!" she yelled, nearly falling down with excitement.
"Ok, do you want me to pick you up?"
"That would be very nice of you."
"Ok, Ill be there around 7. Later!"
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Holy shit, what am I gonna wear? Oh my God!! Oh my God!! She thought as she walked into her house, she had about 2 hours to get ready. The shower came first, and then the hair. She put it up in a messy bun and ran out of the bathroom to figure out what she was going to wear. Jak found her jump suit in the back of the closet and thought, I havent worn this forever! Since I first met Domon, but I was still racing on top of fighting back then! She pried herself into the skin tight leather, then put on her racing boots, which made her a few inches taller.
She went in the bathroom and put on some makeup and her favorite diamond earings. Ok, she thought, a few minutes until he shows up, just then DING DONG the door bell rang, Holy moly, hes early, at least Im all done.
She wandered down the hall, and opened the door. Chibodee stood there. "Hey, hope im not...to...early...Holy shit, I mean, erm, 'scuse me."
"Its ok, Domon did the same thing when we met, now shall he get along? Cant leave te dance floor waiting!"
"Yes ma'am!"
They clambered into Chibodees trademark groundcruiser and Jak sat herself between George and Domon.
"I dont think we have been properly introduced, my name is..." George started.
"George de Sand, of the de Sand family out of Neo-France with the Gundam Rose, my name is Jakar Malanox, but call me Jak. Thats what everyone else calls me." she finished his sentence with a sweet and inocent voice.
George was taken aback, and didnt know what to say, but Chibodee halped him out,"Ok, Dance Club, pretty ladies, here we come!"
They drove in utter silence until they pulled into the parking lot. Then, Jak went all hyper.
"Oh boy, oh boy, Im ready, lets go and dance the night away! Weeee!" she began to jump up and down right in the middle of the parking lot. She ran up to the front doors and the teller asked her for 10 bucks."What? Im a gundam fghter! And you are still telling me I have to pay to get into a celebration for the fighters?"
"Im sorry ma'am, you can procede." He was given a look by Domon that ment, dont even ask.
Inside there was loud music, and an over abundance of people. Jak promptley went to work bumpin and grindin with the first hott guy she saw. "Damn, she can dance," Chibodee said in awe."I get the next dance!" he yelled to all his friends.
Just then, a slow song came on, and Jak was confused, she was hyper, and slow music isnt good when your hyper. She just went and sat down at the table with the rest of the Alliance. "Hmph, I dont like slow songs." she said. Great. Chibodee thought.
Suddenly Domon got up and said, "Jak, you dont have to dance slow for a slow song, so, what about it?" I must get over Rain before I see her again! He thought.
"Oh, ok! Lets dance! But not slow!" she squeled.
She took Domons hand and led him away, as Domon caught Chibodees face, he saw the traditional, that was my job look on his face.
Domon started to dance with Jak, and relized she was a really good dancer, so he went along with it. Just then, a woman bumper into Jak. "Oh my gosh, Im sorry." CLASH! The waiteress had dropped her tray, and was staring at Domon. "I told you, I never wanted to see you again, and look at you, you show up with this, this whore? I ment what I said, I never wanted to see you again." the words just oozed from her mouth as she ran away, tears streaming from her face.
"Rain! Wait, come back! Please, Rain." Domons scar ridden face shone with tears as he tried to call to her. He looked at Jak, then ran towards the door. "Domon, wait, I will come with you!" Jak called out to him.
He ran down the street with Jak on his heels. "Just leave me alone! Just go away!" he screamed at her. He ran into the park and threw himself on a bench, tears streaming down his face. Jak sat down next to him, and tried to be comforting, "Its ok, cry, let it all out."
Domon started into this long story about how he was going to marry Rain, but they got into an argument about...something...he couldnt remember. But it had resulted in his anger getting the better of him, and he had hit her. She told him she never wanted to see him again, and left him standing in the middle of his living room, furious at himself. But he had suffered with it for months, and was club hopping a lot, to see if he could find someone to take his mind off of Rain.
"Thats why I was so looking forward to the gundam fight! I can be myself, and think of only one thing, fighting, there would be no time for her. But that was shattered tonite." he said, the tears had seemed to run themself dry.
Jak gave him a big hug, not what he was expecting, and told him, "Its ok, you have many great friends, they will take care of you. Like Pumba says, Aconamatada. The past is the pasr. If she wants to leave you, you will have to except the fact she is gone." Her words were soothing to him. "Ok, Aconamatada." Then he looked at Jak, and sshe quickley looked away. "Is there something your are hiding? From me? From the world?"
"Yes, there is, but I really dont want to talk about it."
"I know you want to, you can tell me? What is bothering you?" he asked peacefully.
"Its just the match against Allenby tomorrow. I am worried."
"About the Berzerker System?"
"No, about what will happen, what the outcome will be, if she uses the Berzerker system, Im afraid of what I will do to her."
"What do you mean, what you will do to her?" he asked with curosity.
"Its hard to explain, but I will try. Its almost like your super mode, before you perfected it and completed your training. Only I loose my mind. Its why I am called the Death Maiden. But htis thing, this curse, its clouds my vision, I loose control of my thoughts, all I see is the "enemy" all I want to do is destroy them. Its called the Bloodwrath. My gundam has the twin rifles on its back, but it also has secret guns, and not just guns, one is a railgun, and the other is like a heatseeker missle launcher. They come out only in the Bloodwrath, I cant control how I use them.I hate it, it is a curse on me. Forged in the heat of battle, I am taken over. Then, once the battle is done, I leave the enemy, fly far away, when I wake up, I have no idea where I am, or what happened. No one can stop me, I will destroy anything and everyhting when in the Bloodwrath. Not even the strongest man alive." tears were streaming down her face now, she was terrified of not only the match tomorrow, but of the Bloodwrath.
"Its ok, come here," Domon said soothingly. He cradeled her like a baby, until the tears had stopped, and she was asleep.
"You have had a hard life Jak, I hope it gets better, but until then, you need some rest." and with that, he carried her to his house. He took the tight jumpsuit off of her to give her some breathing room, and pulled the covers over her.
"Good night." he said as he pulled the door shut. And with that, he wandered down the hall, and fell asleep on the couch.
Tomorrows gonna be a big day. He sighed.
weeeee! Hope u liked it, and I lied the last chapter, the next chapter will be the Allenby/Jak fight. But dont worry, no one dies... I dont think. What do u think? Give me a review!!
Laterz~~~Vicky
Disclaimer: Do I really need to tell you I dont own a cartoon?
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"Hey, Jakar! Wait up!" yelled Chibodee.
"Please, call me Jak, I hate the name Jakar." the woman replied.
"Oh, ok, listen, I was wondering, do you want to come out with me and the rest of the Alliance tonight? We are going to this rave dance club, they are having a Gundam party thing, and asked us to come." He inquired.
"Sure! I love dancing! This will be loads of fun!" she yelled, nearly falling down with excitement.
"Ok, do you want me to pick you up?"
"That would be very nice of you."
"Ok, Ill be there around 7. Later!"
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Holy shit, what am I gonna wear? Oh my God!! Oh my God!! She thought as she walked into her house, she had about 2 hours to get ready. The shower came first, and then the hair. She put it up in a messy bun and ran out of the bathroom to figure out what she was going to wear. Jak found her jump suit in the back of the closet and thought, I havent worn this forever! Since I first met Domon, but I was still racing on top of fighting back then! She pried herself into the skin tight leather, then put on her racing boots, which made her a few inches taller.
She went in the bathroom and put on some makeup and her favorite diamond earings. Ok, she thought, a few minutes until he shows up, just then DING DONG the door bell rang, Holy moly, hes early, at least Im all done.
She wandered down the hall, and opened the door. Chibodee stood there. "Hey, hope im not...to...early...Holy shit, I mean, erm, 'scuse me."
"Its ok, Domon did the same thing when we met, now shall he get along? Cant leave te dance floor waiting!"
"Yes ma'am!"
They clambered into Chibodees trademark groundcruiser and Jak sat herself between George and Domon.
"I dont think we have been properly introduced, my name is..." George started.
"George de Sand, of the de Sand family out of Neo-France with the Gundam Rose, my name is Jakar Malanox, but call me Jak. Thats what everyone else calls me." she finished his sentence with a sweet and inocent voice.
George was taken aback, and didnt know what to say, but Chibodee halped him out,"Ok, Dance Club, pretty ladies, here we come!"
They drove in utter silence until they pulled into the parking lot. Then, Jak went all hyper.
"Oh boy, oh boy, Im ready, lets go and dance the night away! Weeee!" she began to jump up and down right in the middle of the parking lot. She ran up to the front doors and the teller asked her for 10 bucks."What? Im a gundam fghter! And you are still telling me I have to pay to get into a celebration for the fighters?"
"Im sorry ma'am, you can procede." He was given a look by Domon that ment, dont even ask.
Inside there was loud music, and an over abundance of people. Jak promptley went to work bumpin and grindin with the first hott guy she saw. "Damn, she can dance," Chibodee said in awe."I get the next dance!" he yelled to all his friends.
Just then, a slow song came on, and Jak was confused, she was hyper, and slow music isnt good when your hyper. She just went and sat down at the table with the rest of the Alliance. "Hmph, I dont like slow songs." she said. Great. Chibodee thought.
Suddenly Domon got up and said, "Jak, you dont have to dance slow for a slow song, so, what about it?" I must get over Rain before I see her again! He thought.
"Oh, ok! Lets dance! But not slow!" she squeled.
She took Domons hand and led him away, as Domon caught Chibodees face, he saw the traditional, that was my job look on his face.
Domon started to dance with Jak, and relized she was a really good dancer, so he went along with it. Just then, a woman bumper into Jak. "Oh my gosh, Im sorry." CLASH! The waiteress had dropped her tray, and was staring at Domon. "I told you, I never wanted to see you again, and look at you, you show up with this, this whore? I ment what I said, I never wanted to see you again." the words just oozed from her mouth as she ran away, tears streaming from her face.
"Rain! Wait, come back! Please, Rain." Domons scar ridden face shone with tears as he tried to call to her. He looked at Jak, then ran towards the door. "Domon, wait, I will come with you!" Jak called out to him.
He ran down the street with Jak on his heels. "Just leave me alone! Just go away!" he screamed at her. He ran into the park and threw himself on a bench, tears streaming down his face. Jak sat down next to him, and tried to be comforting, "Its ok, cry, let it all out."
Domon started into this long story about how he was going to marry Rain, but they got into an argument about...something...he couldnt remember. But it had resulted in his anger getting the better of him, and he had hit her. She told him she never wanted to see him again, and left him standing in the middle of his living room, furious at himself. But he had suffered with it for months, and was club hopping a lot, to see if he could find someone to take his mind off of Rain.
"Thats why I was so looking forward to the gundam fight! I can be myself, and think of only one thing, fighting, there would be no time for her. But that was shattered tonite." he said, the tears had seemed to run themself dry.
Jak gave him a big hug, not what he was expecting, and told him, "Its ok, you have many great friends, they will take care of you. Like Pumba says, Aconamatada. The past is the pasr. If she wants to leave you, you will have to except the fact she is gone." Her words were soothing to him. "Ok, Aconamatada." Then he looked at Jak, and sshe quickley looked away. "Is there something your are hiding? From me? From the world?"
"Yes, there is, but I really dont want to talk about it."
"I know you want to, you can tell me? What is bothering you?" he asked peacefully.
"Its just the match against Allenby tomorrow. I am worried."
"About the Berzerker System?"
"No, about what will happen, what the outcome will be, if she uses the Berzerker system, Im afraid of what I will do to her."
"What do you mean, what you will do to her?" he asked with curosity.
"Its hard to explain, but I will try. Its almost like your super mode, before you perfected it and completed your training. Only I loose my mind. Its why I am called the Death Maiden. But htis thing, this curse, its clouds my vision, I loose control of my thoughts, all I see is the "enemy" all I want to do is destroy them. Its called the Bloodwrath. My gundam has the twin rifles on its back, but it also has secret guns, and not just guns, one is a railgun, and the other is like a heatseeker missle launcher. They come out only in the Bloodwrath, I cant control how I use them.I hate it, it is a curse on me. Forged in the heat of battle, I am taken over. Then, once the battle is done, I leave the enemy, fly far away, when I wake up, I have no idea where I am, or what happened. No one can stop me, I will destroy anything and everyhting when in the Bloodwrath. Not even the strongest man alive." tears were streaming down her face now, she was terrified of not only the match tomorrow, but of the Bloodwrath.
"Its ok, come here," Domon said soothingly. He cradeled her like a baby, until the tears had stopped, and she was asleep.
"You have had a hard life Jak, I hope it gets better, but until then, you need some rest." and with that, he carried her to his house. He took the tight jumpsuit off of her to give her some breathing room, and pulled the covers over her.
"Good night." he said as he pulled the door shut. And with that, he wandered down the hall, and fell asleep on the couch.
Tomorrows gonna be a big day. He sighed.
weeeee! Hope u liked it, and I lied the last chapter, the next chapter will be the Allenby/Jak fight. But dont worry, no one dies... I dont think. What do u think? Give me a review!!
Laterz~~~Vicky
