For those of you who want to know who exactly I based Jak on, I have no real answer. I guess I based her somewere between Allenby and Shirley. Jak is like a bad girl gone good. She has no trouble with the guys, because of her beauty, but keeps it cool in difficult situations. And the bloodwrath has absolutly nothing, I repeat NOTHING to do with the Berzerker System. Some one flamed me saying I was making a clone of Allenby, and im trying not to, but all my brilliant ideas seem to come out being that of Allenby, and I dont mean it to. I had this great idea for the story, but I cant explain it. Darn it...

Rain and Domon arnt done yet either... dont get yer panties in a bunch buddy.

Ok, shall we try this again? Im glad I got that review, it helped me to relize that Jak is a lot like Allenby, Ill try to stear clear this chapter.

Oh, yea, I dont own g gundam, duh.

~Clash of the Twin Beauties~

"Storm, you cant do this to me, please, dont leave," Jak cried out.

"Sorry honey, I cant help it," the man replied.

"Why does this world have to be so stupid, why does God do things like this to me?" Jak said through a tear-stained face.

"Im so sorry, you know I have to go," Storm said keeping it togeather.

Just then, BOOM cikcik BOOM. Storm fell. And Jak went to catch him, "Oh God no!" But they kept falling, Jak holding Storms lifeless body as they fell.

"AHHHH!" Jak jumped up with a start. Why? Why do I keep seeing this dream, I havent seen Storm in 5 years, since he left for Brazil, but why do I keep dreaming of him? She thought, more worried than before. She them relized, she didnt know where she was. She slowly got up, and stumbled out of the room, as if she was drunk.

She took a wrong turn and ended up in a bathroom. No, I want a drink, not a toilet, she thought.

She wandered down a set of stairs, and at the bottom, a glass was stting on the kitchen counter, calling her name. She rummeged around in the refrigerator and found some orange juice. As she poured the glass, a voice scared her.

"Where is Domon?" the voice demanded.

"What? I dont even know who you are, or where we are! How would I know where he is?" Jak said bitterly.

"Yea, like I am going to believe that, how can you be in someones house, and not know where you are?" the voice mocked. It was a womans voice, a voice tht had been through a lot latley.

"Oh, so thats where I am, could have fooled me, this would have been the last place I would have guessed.

"So, are you going to tell me where he is, or not?"

"Hes probably upstairs sleeping or something, I dunno." Jak said dumbly.

"Fine, good night." and with that, the figure went upstairs.

"That was weird, oh well, lets go back to bed, shall we Jak my darling?" she said, to herself.

She then walked back upstairs, into a room and plopped down on the bed that was in the corner. As she pulled the blankets over her cold body, she heard talking in the room over. "I hope hes ok, but since hes talking and not yellin and screamin, I guess its alright. Well, we'll see in the morning."

And with that, she fell asleep.

*~*~*~*~*~*

YAWNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN

Jak woke up with the sun shining in through the blinds. "Whew, I had a really weird dream last night, I was in Domons house and this person came in, hold on, where am I? AHHHH! It wasnt a dream! I am in Domons house!!"

She ran around like a chicken with its head cut off. She bolted down the stairs, and saw a strange woman in the kitchen making breakfast.

"You must be Jak, Domon told me all about you, we talked for hours." the brunette said.

"Who are you, and how did you get in, and why am I here? AHHH! Im going crazy!" Jak squeled pitifully.

"Hahaha, Im Rain, Im sure youve heard about me, and I kinda snuck in a open window, I am very sorry I was rude last night, but I really needed to see Domon." Rain said with a smile.

"Oh, ok" Jak said confused.

"Hey Jak, you feeling better?" Domon mumbled as he came down the stairs. "Yea, I guess, would you explain why you guys are so...togeather now? Im really lost, between the whole bar thing and yea, Im really lost." Jak wondered.

"Oh, let me explain," Rain said, "I came to the Gundam Fight to see if I could find Domon, I ran out on him a few months back, and when I came back to appoligize, he was gone, I have been crushed since then. But I was still mad at him, espically leaving without me. When I saw him at the bar, I wasnt having the best day, I had been working there for a few weeks because I knew there was a party for the fighters, so I thought he may come, but the timing was off, without thinking, I yelled at him, and then he was gone, again, before I could apoligize. But seeing him dancing with you pushed me up and over, I thought he was really over me, so I found Chibodee and asked where Domon was, and he told me, so I came over to ask him some questions, I never thought it would upset you," Rain finished he story.

"Yea, so we talked allnight, and got everything straightened out." Domon smiled.

"Oh, ok," Jak said as she causally glanced at the stove clock. "HOLY SHIT? IS THAT THE TIME? MY MATCH IS IN A HOUR!! AHHHHH!!!"

That sent the whole house in a frenzy. Jak bolted up the stairs and relized the only thing she had to wear was her jumpsuit. "SHIIIIIIIIIIT!"

As she pried herself into it, she brushed her teeth and threw her hair into a pony tail. She grabbed a waffle on the way out the door. "Bye you guys, see you at the match!" She yelled over her shoulder, with the waffle half in her mouth.

She ran down the road to where she thought the hanger was. But tshe had taken a wrong turn, and was completly lost, so she just kept runnning. After 15 minutes of being lost, she ran up to a car and asked where the match was, they looked at her funny and said, "You dont know where it is?"

"No, Im from out of town, please hurry. I need to know now!" Jak pleaded.

"Ok, ok, keep your pants on girly. Take this road for three blocks, then turn right, the road goes for about a mile, its at the end."

"AHHH! I dont have that much time, can you drive me there? Please? If your not in a hurry to do anything?"

"I guess not, hop in." he replied. "You act like you are in the match! Hehehe, Yea, a pretty lady like you."

"Yea, a pretty lady like me, in a fight, he ha he," she did a fake laugh as they aproached the match area," Ok, I know where I am now, I need you to go left on this street."

"Ok, whatever." "Thank you so much, now right again," She urged, trying to get him to move faster. "Ok, stop right here. Thanks again!" she yelled as he drove off.

She let herself into the old building. As she walked in, she saw her crew was puttering aroung, waiting for her to show up.

"Sorry Im later, sorry, sorry, sorry!" she said quickly as she jumped into her gundam.

She clicked it on, and stripped out of her jumpsuit. Casting it aside, the MTS came on.

"Ow ow ow owowowowow, oooo," she grunted in pain as it coated over body. She broke her feet loose, and made sure it was working well. Satasfied that everything was ok, she told Larry, her head crew member, to open the big doors. "Thanks Larry!" and with that, she took off toward the rink.

Noble Gundam was already there, with crew member fixing the last of the problems. Allenby wandered around the base of the gundam , making sure they were doing it right. As Jak approached, the crew began to descend from the gundam. Allenby got up into her gundam, and waited for Jak to pick the spot where se wanted to start.

"Good luck Jak!" she called in her usual hyper way.

"You to Allenby," Jak said shakely, and very rushed.

Avoice came over the loud speakers," Todays match is Allenby Beardsly against Jakar Malanox! This is the first gundam match, so it will be a good one!" Cheers were headr from all around the arena. As the sheild was enabled, the voice one the speakers yelled, "READY!"

"GO!" Jak and Allenby replied.

They took off straight at each other, and came togeather with Allenby getting a misguided punch grazing her arm while Jak got a blow to the stomach, knocking all the wind out of her. As Jak sunk to the ground holding her stomach, Allenby looked at her in discust and said, "You wont get anywhere laying on the ground."

But she was silenced when a foot came out from behind and landed right in back of the knees and made her come crashing down. "What a dirty trick!" Allenby said, with a chuckle coming from behind the brilliant yellow eyes. "Yea, I know," Jak mumbled.

Then thy took off after each other again in a hail of kicks, punchs, and blocks. Jak came around with a wide kick that settled right in the neck. Allenby flew sideways with a crash, she whipped out her Ribbon. She struck out at Jak, giving off some powerful blows, but it seemed that Jak had a counter attack for every blow Allenby gave. So, Allenby began to get mad, and flew at Jak more powerfully each time, landing more blows each time, and making it harder for Jak to counter attack. By now, all Jak had on her side was defense, Allenby had pushed herself to rage, and had all of the offense. Blow after blow hit Jak across the arms as she got weaker and weaker. Her arms were sore from blocking, and her legs were stinging from the random kicks that nailed her often. She knew something had to happen, or Allenby would win by exusting her.

So, Jak took off into the sky, up near the barrier, she stopped. "Where are you going?" Allenby yelled demonically. She took off and began pelting Jak with her Vulcan guns. Jak felt hopeless. She saw the Noble gundam coming closer and closer, and wanted to give up, but something inside said, no, you will get the last laugh. Jak then dodged Allenby right in time, and Allenby crashed into the barrier, because of her shear speed, she couldnt stop. Pushing herself off, she growled, "Quit running, I thought you were so good? If you were so good, why are you so exusted? Why do you suck so much? Why not just give up? Im going to beat you anyways!"

The last two sentences triggered something deep inside Jak. Allenby looked in curosity as Jak curled into a ball and just hovered in the air. "What are you doing? CRYING? DONT TELL ME YOUR CRYING! WHAT A PANSY!" Allenby laughed outloud.

"Far from it, " Jak said rather calmly. She looked up over her knees, and Allenby saw what she was doing. Jak stood up as tall as she could, and stared into Allenbys eyes. They were a deep, blood red color, and tinted with the stain of death. "You did this to yourself Allenby," she said again, almost evily, " Now you will see why I am called the Death Maiden."

She threw her shoulders back and arched her back for a few seconds, then stood back up. The her gundam literally began to change. The legs seemed to get bigger than they already were, but if you had a top view, you would relize that they were opening. Big black holes made their way into the thighs. Jak reached down into each of the gaps, and pulled out a different gun out of each of them.

"This is my friend, the railgun," she said as she held up the smaller of the two. It was white, and had an unusualy large bullet opening. "It takes a minute to charge, but its worth the wait, its super heating plasma. And this one," as he held up the larger of the two, which was grey, and had a quad armorment sticking out of the barrel, "is a heat seeker, I dont use this one much, sometimes it backfires." She said as she strapped the heatseeker across her back with the rifles.

Allenby was stunned, but went after her. Jak just stood there. Just as Allenby threw a punch at her head, Jak caught her around the wrist, and threw her at the ground. Allenby hit with a crash and a big poof of dust. Jak did a dive straight into the dust, and a few seconds later, Allenby was thrown into the air, where she suddenly ws shot in the leg. "Shit! I missed, doesnt that bite," Jak snickered as the dust cleared. She was standing in the center of a large crater holding a rifle with one hand at Allenby. She took off and went straight into the air after Allenby, but she was ready.

BLAM, Allenby kicked Jak in the stomach and made her fly back down with yet another cloud of dust. "Im not done yet Jak," she said quitly.

"Can I quote you?" Jak asked.

A big glow began to form in the dust. It was a brilliant blue color, and then with a strange sound, like a CACHINK, it began to fly up toward Allenby as she said, "Yea, you can quote m..."

The blue orb hit the Noble Gundams leg and exploded.

"Later," Jak whispered as she put the railgun back into its 'holster'.

The Noble Gundam streaked down from the cloud of smoke and hit the ground, rendering Allenby unconsious, from both the pain, and the landing. When the dust cleared, the Noble Gundam lay to the left side of the ring on its side, missing its left leg from the thigh down, and some of the right leg.

"What an amazing fight!" came over the loud speaker, "And Jakar Malanox wins the first battle by a knockout!"

"Lower the barrier," Jak said demandingly, yet calmly. And with that, the barrier was lowered, and Jak took off into the sky. As she disappered into the clouds, she said, still under the control of the Bloodwrath , "I am going to have no problem beating everyone here."
Wow, what a long chapter! Ok, review! And I hope this makes everyone happy, I tryed to get away from making Jak like Allenby, and I got Rain and Domon back togeather! Kinda wierdly, but there back togeather anyways!