Summary: This is about sum1 in a coma bcuz of Syaoran and Syaoran blames himself and feels completely guilt-ridden. He tries to commit suicide to join her but she somehow gets a message through to him. **revised a bit**
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A/N: This is my first time using this thing so dont flame me i welcome criticism but only that. Oh and at the time i didnt feel like writing names down so the 'girl' or 'love' refers to sum1 (the coma girl guess who it is) and syaoran is 'darling' the 'lover' or the male in the story. this is a short story and i do have a fanfic that may come about in the summer but i dunno i gotta test the reader's reactions here. i hope you enjoy and review so i know how many enjoy this!!!
Chapter One: Goodbye
The never-ceasing beep of the heart monitor was the only sound heard accompanying the presence of silent sobs. A lover gazed at the cool face of his young beloved. She was trapped and a prisoner to her own mind. Being in a coma was his own doing and being that as it was, it was exactly what made this even harder to bear. Being a lone survivor while his lover had become just a shell of the former being it was.
Slowly he reached for her hand, her calm breathing had become a slightly ragged, one which was worrying him so. He wondered if there would come a day when she would fall out of the darkness that she was enclosed in and return to him, revealing the swirling orbs of gentle flames he adored so much.
He whispered sweet nothings to her in the day. In the presence of others, but when they were all gone he spilled his regret, remorse, his sorrow and guilt he had contained in his heart since that day, longing to hear her melodic voice to break the silence he in return had received. Never had he expected a response.
"I'm sorry, love... it is I who has put you through this moment of solitude, and for this I know you shall not forgive me for stealing your time of happiness as it should be. But even if I could change this, if I could take your pain and solitude and make it mine, I would still be the instigator of this wrongdoing. And for that I beg of you for your forgiveness. Until your eyes glow like the hidden embers forgotten in the fire's ashes, and until you are truly happy, I cannot accept your forgiveness. I do hope someday to repent for my wrong-doing." He gave a heavy sigh and started again.
"Love if you were to awaken would you wash away my shame and guilt with your eyes or would you look down upon this unworthy one and never wish to taint your lovely orbs with the sight of this wretched one again? How I long to know, but how long must I wait? Your face, your skin shines with ethereal glow in the moonlight but unhealthily so."
"How can I offer any happiness to you now that I have done what I have done? This is perhaps my last twilight with you; tomorrow I'll be gone, forever resting beneath the soil, waiting with open arms for you. And then, I wish for you to awaken and live the life you deserve with another who rightfully deserves you, with another worthy of you."
"My, how time flies, it is almost the time to depart, but instead I shall bid my farewells early today. Goodbye love, join me if you wish but not too soon." The lover rose gracefully and swiftly made his way to the door.
"Darling," he froze and turned around….
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